Season 8 finale - rewrite.

[MrCharmed]

I decided to write this as i felt this needed to happen in the last episodes of charmed. This continues on from: Episode 21 Kill Billie Vol2. , just as both pairs of sisters are under the same roof inside the manor - both possessed by the Hollow.

Both sisters stood within the centre of the manor, each of them staring down one another knowing this would be the final battle – none of them knowing if this would be the end of them all.

Christy: Well, well – looks who’s here.
Paige: Well this is our home.
Christy: Was your home…
Piper: Will be again once we end this once and for all.
Billie: I see you don’t have potions, that maybe your downfall.
Phoebe: We won’t need them.

With that both sets of sisters raise there hands in the direction of one another and let out the power of the hollow – both beams of power from each of the sisters head towards one another and collides over the sofa in the centre of the halliwell manor. With that the sofa ignites, followed closely by explosions are around the manor caused by the power escaping from the hollow. All of a sudden an explosion occurs; it blows the charmed ones across the conservatory and out of the windows - throwing Billie and Christy across the room and into the stairs. With that the explosion fills the whole house and within a few seconds the manor explodes – smoke and debris fill the air.

As the smoke began to settle, fallen pieces of the manor began to move and within a few seconds Piper emerged – bruised and bloody. She was disorientated and began to get her footing, she turned and cast her eye over the devastation that lay before her – the manor, her home she’d lived in all her life, gone. Her focused quickly shifted to thoughts of her sisters.

Piper: Phoebe, Paige… are you alright?

Piper moved through the debris, moving broken and charred furniture to search for her sisters continually shouting for her sisters. Then something caught her eye, an arm showing through a large pile of debris – she recognised it, the tattoo, her sisters’ tattoo – Phoebes tattoo. She quickly moved over to the arm and began to move the debris off Phoebe, as she revealed more and more of her lifeless body Piper realised she wasn’t breathing.

Piper: Phoebe, come on girl – wake up.

She grabbed Phoebes head and cradled it in her arms, checking for a pulse she found none – tears streamed down her face as she faced her reality – Phoebe was dead. She began to hear noises coming from the debris; she quickly lay Phoebes head down and began moving towards the sounds.

Piper: Paige, are you okay?

She cried out as she got even closer, she saw movement and quickly moved in towards it. She began to tear away the debris off the moving body under the rubble, after a few seconds the face was revealed…

Piper: Billie?
Billie: Piper…
Rage consumed her as she jumped on top of Billie and began to pummel her with her already bloodied fists, Billie crying out after every hit.

Piper: How could you! After all we did for you…

All of a sudden Piper flew back off Billie and into some rubble; dazed she began to gather her footing and stood up. She looked over in Billie’s direction – who still laid motionless in the debris. She wondered if it was Billie who did it, just as the thought crossed her mind she raised up hands in the direction of Billie… before she had a chance to blow up Billie a light manifested itself in front of Billie – it was bright, and slowly began to form a figure. At first the light blinded Piper, but she began to look in the direction of the light, a thought of Leo crossed her mind as the identity of the figure became apparent – she looked on, shocked…

Piper: Prue…?
Prue: Hello Piper…

To be continued...

[Chelsea]

OMG! soo good! rite more soon!

[MrCharmed]

The next installment of the series 8 finale.

Season 8, episode 22.
Alls halliwell, that ends halliwell.

Halliwell Manor: Int.Ext.

Piper smiled in Prues direction, and then within seconds she collapsed to the floor clutching her head in her hands – tears falling onto her bloodied palms. The aurora surrounding Prue quickly faded as she began to move quickly in Pipers direction, stepping over the devastation that lay before her feet – caused by the battle between the charmed ones and Billie and Christy. Within seconds she was crouched by Pipers side, her arms reaching out for her sister.

Prue: Piper, its going to be alright.

Piper raised her head meeting Prues hand, her tired eyes looking into Prues – a tear rolled down her cheek.

Piper: How is it going to be alright! Paige and Phoebe are dead, the manors destroyed and there’s no sign of Leo – I’ve lost everything that was important in my life all for the greater good.
Prue: I know how you feel, I’ve been there and I’m here now.
Piper: But how, how is this possible – and why now?
Prue: This was the only time I could, it’s all too complicated to explain – but its not over, it’s far from it… but we need to hurry.

Prue wiped Pipers tears from her cheeks, kissed her sister on her forehead and quickly raised to her feet. Piper followed Prues eyes up, until her head was raised to Prues upright figure.

Piper: Hurry where? And why?
Prue: We have a chance to fix this, but only one – and we need to be quick otherwise we’ll miss the opportunity.

Prue lowered her hand in Pipers direction and held it there, Piper reached and placed her hand in Prues – Prue slowly pulled Piper to her feet. Within seconds Piper was stood face to face with Prue, her sister who had died 5 years ago – the sister she thought she’d never see again. She quickly wrapped her arms around Prue and hugged her tight; she wanted to make sure it was real…

Prue: Ouch, okay Piper… I get your glad to see me but loosen the grip.
Piper: I’m so sorry, it’s been so long and I’ve got so much to tell you but I don’t know where to begin or even how!
Prue: I know, but first we need to begin by fixing this problem.

Suddenly noises came from the debris that littered the entire area, Piper and Prue broke there embrace as they looked over to the body moving on the floor – it was Billie, she was conscious and getting to her feet.

Billie: *cough* what… but… Christy! Christy where are you!
Piper: She’s dead – like Paige and Phoebe.

With that Piper raised her hands in the direction of Billie and gestured her hands, Billie managed to jump as the floor below her was ignited by an explosion meant for her. Billie began to run towards the road, Piper raise her hands again but was quickly held by Prue – Billie managed to get out of ran as Prue held Piper. Piper broke free and stared into Prues eyes…

Piper: How could you! I could have killed her…
Pure: No piper, have you forgotten what being charmed is all about?
Piper: But she killed our sisters! She’s a murderer!
Prue: Piper, our job is to protect the innocent not punish the guilty.

A tear began to form in the corner of Pipers eyes as Prue looked on, Piper realized Prue was right – maybe that’s where this all went wrong.

Prue: Now we must go, we need to get to work.
Piper: Go where… how can we fix this – its over, two of the power of three are dead… laying amongst the debris of the house we grew up in. How can we fix this!

Prue grabbed Pipers hands and stared into her eyes.

Prue: Trust me.

With that a light enveloped them, the light rose to the sky and disappeared.

To be continued...

Going to do it scene by scene, that way the ideas i have can be developed to give the reader the best reading experience - its going back to old school charmed!

[elenarae]

Wonderful ;D


Please more!!!

[maskedwitch]

yes, this is great. Hope billie is ok, anyway...please continue!

[prue]

this is better than great- this is fantastic! an ending i could really live with... i do hope that you continue! SOON!!!!!!

[MrCharmed]

The next part of the season finale; i questioned myself about involving Billie in this but i feel its needed in this way to wrap up everything.

Magic School: Int.

Billie enters the main hall pressing at her side moving as fast as she can, quickly placing herself heavily on a couch – releasing her hand from her side she slowly raises her shirt to reveal a deep wound.

Billie: Ouch, that’s not good.

Tears fall from her eyes as the emotions of loosing her sister and the pain of her wounds coincide inside her, her eyes begin to glow and with that the wound slowly starts to disappear – and the skin heals. The glow disappears and Billie realizes her powers did that, she quickly gets to her feet and begins searching through the books laid out on the table. Moving the pages she realizes a smell within the magic school, one that was no there before she left for the fight – she follows the smell down the hall and into the room previously occupied by the spirit form of the triad. She notices the ashes on the floor and realizes something isn’t right.

Billie: That’s not good, Dumain!

There’s no answer, she quickly leaves the room and heads back into the main hall – before she can reach the table a white light materializes in front of her… its Piper and Prue.

Billie: You!
Piper: You!
Billie: And who? Looking at Prue.

Quickly Billie gestures to Piper and she flies back into the direction of the couch, all of a sudden Piper stops in place… hovering above the ground only feet from the couch. Billie stands shocked as she realizes her intentions were stopped by Prue.

Prue: Now, now ladies – no time for grudges. You’re going to find you need one another if you’re going to fix this.

Prue looks at both the females, currently held in position by her magic.

Piper: Erm, could you get me down now?
Prue: Only if you agree to get along.
Piper: Fine, I won’t blow her up.

Piper gives Billie a sarcastic look as she falls to the floor, hard.

Piper: Ouch!
Billie: Like you could.
Prue: Lets leave the back biting for a later date; right now we really need to save yours and our sisters.
Billie: Wait… did you say our?
Prue: Erm, yeah… oh wait – hi I’m Prue, I was dead now I’m alive. Now can we get on with the problem at hand?

Looking shocked, Billie slowly replies.

Billie: Sure…

Piper slowly gets to her feet and begins to move back towards Prue.

Piper: And what exactly is it we have to do to fix this problem.
Prue: We need to work together, infuse our powers – if order to reverse time.
Piper: Hold up, reverse time? – And how are we going to manage that. I mean the power of three is dead… thanks to some crazy witches.
Billie: Hey we weren’t the ones abusing magic, manipulating others to help us gain normal lives.
Prue: Okay can it! This won’t get us anywhere. We need to write a spell, one that will infuse our powers and place our powers into one body.
Billie: I’m on it, I guess.

Billie moves past Prue and Piper towards the table and takes a seat, slowly finding a pencil and paper she begins looking through the books and writing upon the paper.

Piper: Are you sure about this Prue, how can we trust her – she tried and succeeded in killing two thirds of the charmed ones.
Prue: You seem to have forgotten how powerful the desire to be reunited with a loved one can be, it transcends good or evil – it is a power in itself.

Piper looks into her eyes and realizes what she means, the feelings of loosing Prue come flooding back – mixed with the feelings of loosing Leo again, and also her sisters. She realizes this need to be done if she ever wants to see her sisters again, or Leo.

Billie: Okay I’m done, what now.

Billie places the pencil down on the table and raises the paper in the air; she slowly begins moving back towards the charmed ones.

Prue: Okay we need to sit in a circle, hand in hand – Wait, we need an athame.

Within saying them words an athame from the bookshelf behind them moves quickly across the room and into the palm of Prues hand.

Prue: Okay now we need to cut, one on each palm – so our blood connects us.

Prue slowly cuts her palms and passes the knife onto Piper, who does the same and begrudgingly passes it onto Billie – when she done she places the athame onto the floor behind her.

Billie: Now how exactly is this going to work?
Prue: We need to focus on what we want to do, which is reserve time – I am hoping your projection power will be strong enough to make it happen.
Piper: Okay, but what do we do when it’s reversed?
Prue: Since we can’t break the circle, I will use my astral projection to try and change what has happen – or what is going to happen… Are you ready?
Billie: As ready as I’ll ever be.
Piper: Let’s do this.

With that Prue grabs hold of both Piper and Billie’s hands, reluctantly Piper places her hand within Billie’s and the circle is complete. Reading from the paper that lay in the middle of the circle they begin to recite the spell.

All that was, can be again
Change the past, reverse the pain
All that was lost, will be again
To the past, to make a change

A light begins to surround the girls; encircling them as around them time begins to reverse - everything reverses, back to before Pipers actions, the ones that made Christy’s plan to turn Billie against them succeed… moments before Piper attacked Christy.

To be continued...

Hope your enjoying it, it may get a little longer than an actual episode would - but thats only because there so much that needs to happen for it to be resolved.

[MrCharmed]

Next installment: enjoy.

Piper, Billie and Pure – all locked in a powerful embraced to try and change the future… a future in which none of their sisters exist. The light that surrounds them begins to fade slightly revealing a vast space of nothingness around them – like their floating on nothing. Piper opens her eyes, shortly followed by Billie – Prues eyes remain closed.

Piper: Is it done?
Billie: I guess so.

Prue opens her eyes and looks on at both Piper and Billie.

Prue: Yes, don’t break the circle – we need to keep it stable otherwise we can’t change what’s happened.
Piper: What now – there’s nothing here.
Prue: We can’t be in a time, after we change what needs changing our memories of this act and the way in which we change what occurred will be forgotten – and ourselves erased.
Billie: Wait so we won’t exist…
Prue: You will, in the future you helped to alter.
Piper: But then that means, you won’t be a part of it…

Piper looks into Prues eyes, a tear begins to fall.

Prue: I will always be a part of your life Piper, no matter what happens – you know that. It can never be how it was, things change – sometimes for the worse, and sometimes for the better… this is one of those situations where both the worse and the better intertwine to create something much greater – a future.

As she speaks a tear begins to fall down Prues cheek, she looks into Pipers eyes and smiles.

Billie: I know this is an emotional moment, a reunion or whatever – but can we do what we need to do – this place is really freaking me out.

Piper turns and gives Billie a dirty look, but Prue brings the focus back to the matter at hand.

Prue: She’s right; we need to do this – before we become weakened.
Billie: How exactly will this work; you’ll go back to a time even though they think your dead.
Prue: Yes, this is the only way it can work.
Piper: Give them a chance to take it all in Prue, its going to be a big shock for them and they will need sometime.
Prue: I will try, but we don’t have a lot of time. Okay I’m going to astral project, don’t whatever you do break the circle otherwise this will fail and the future you will go back to will be what neither of you really want.

With that Prue closed her eyes and her heads falls slightly into her lap, she reappears in the Halliwell Manor – in the attic, the day of the incident that caused the fight to become imminent. She moves across to the book and places her hand on the cover, tracing her finger over the triquetra on the cover - memories of what she once was and what she once had come back to her and a tear rolls down her cheek. She’s brought back to reality by noises of footsteps on the stairs and talking, she braces herself for the moment – the moment her sisters see her.

Stairs Manor:

Piper: I don’t approve of the way you’re handling this.

Paige pulls a face at Piper, over her comment on the way she’s avoiding Henry.

Piper: Anyway I think I have a lead…

Piper begins to walk up the rest of the stairs towards the attic, Paige follows with a bewildered look upon her face.

Piper: If the noxon demons killed Christy and Billie’s pare… ents.

Piper looks on in awe, Paige stops behind her also looking over at the book – where Prue is standing, her jaw drops.

Paige: Is that…
Prue: Yes it is Prue.

Pipers face drops, her sisters voice makes every hair on the back of her neck stand on end as tears begin to form in her eyes.

Piper: Oh my god, Prue is that really you?
Prue: In the flesh, so to speak.
Piper: But how, and why now?
Prue: Funny you should mention that, I’m here to help you with a problem you have.

Piper begins to move towards Prue, still in shock over the fact that her dead sister is standing in the attic with her – the same attic they used to battle demons in 5 years ago. Paige follows.

Paige: The demon problem…
Prue: No not that problem, although it does tie in with this – the Billie and Christy problem.

Piper gets up close to Prue and embraces her, holding her tight Prue brings her arms round and reciprocates Pipers actions.

Prue: Ouch, okay – need to breathe…
Piper: I’m sorry, it’s just you’re here and it’s been forever – so much has happened I don’t even know where to begin.

Piper breaks the embrace and moves back, Paige moves in and holds out her hand in a gesture towards Prue.

Paige: Hi I’m Paige; it’s an honor to meet you.
Prue: Likewise, but that’s not the way sisters greet each other.

Prue grabs Paige and embraces her in a hug, Paige reluctantly raises her arms and embraces Prue – still in shock over the fact that she finally gets to meet her.

Paige: Ouch, oxygen please.
Prue: Oh sorry, I’m doing a Piper – its just great meeting you, I’ve seen what you’ve accomplished alone and as the power of three and its amazing, you truly are one of my sisters.

With that a tear rolls down the cheek of Paige, as Prue moves back and over to the book of shadows.

Prue: Now back to the problem at hand, them demons you’re looking for…
Piper: The noxon demons?
Prue: Yea those ones
Paige: We just came up here to find them; we need to find out who sent them to kill Billie and Christy’s parents.
Prue: I can tell you who sent them, but it’s more complicated than that.

Piper and Paige look on as Prue begins to reveal who the power is behind the attack, and everything else that has occurred.

Prue: The triad…
Paige: But how, we vanquished them – well two out of three.
Piper: How could it be them, they don’t have the power
Prue: Actually they do, they never truly die – they are pure evil and at the moment are in spirit form ready to gain the power they need to become whole once again.
Paige: That doesn’t sound good…

Paige moves back and takes a seat on the couch behind her.

Prue: Your right it doesn’t, but there’s more.
Piper: And let me guess, it’s about the get even worse.
Prue: Depends at which way you look at it.

Nothingness:

Billie starts to become agitated by waiting for Prue, all their hands still in tight embraces keeping the circle flowing.

Billie: How long will this take.
Piper: However long it takes.
Billie: I just wish I knew what was going on…

With that a light appeared in the middle of the circle, it began to show images – the images slowly became clearer – it was Prue… with Piper and Paige in the Halliwell manor attic. Piper looks on in shock…

Piper: How is that possible…?
Billie: I don’t know, I guess my projection power is greater than I realized.

They watch the light in awe, able to see what was happening – they saw the sisters talking amongst themselves around the book of shadows.

To be continued...

Next part will invlove at more action and reaction...

[prue]

this is sooooo good, and much better than the finale we got. i do hope that you plan to incorporate chris and wyatt somehow. make it appealing for everyone. what you have so far though, is absolutely amazing! thank you, thank you, thank you so much for writing this.

[Esmeralda]

This is VERY good--so much better than the finale we got! If only Shannen had let them use Prue...!!! Please update soon, but PLEASE don't include Chris and Wyatt unless they fit your story--to just throw them in to make their fans happy isn't honoring their characters. It's the reason I won't ask you to include *my* favorite characters--Penny, Patty & Victor--unless THEY fit!

[prue]

point taken there es! i agree... only use them IF they fit in the story! but lots more prue is fine with me!!!

[MrCharmed]

Thanks for the comments, i will try and please everyone... although i wont be able to write the new few parts until later in the week due to exams in the next few days - then i'll be able to finish it off!

[elenarae]

Good Luck on your exams!

Story is great, looking forward to the next installment!

[prue]

good luck with your tests! looking forward to the next installment as well!

[Astral Echo]

Wow, amazing this really is, awesome. I want more soon!

[russell21]

Same here I prefer this one to the one we got.