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Post by Fiji221 on Sept 3, 2006 21:02:02 GMT -5
What this fan fic is I'm sure that I'm not the only person who was left with questions about what happened between the episodes All Hell Breaks Loose and Charmed Again. Well I'm about to tell you.... ______________________________________________________ Piper and Prue Halliwell lay unconcious on the floor of the Halliwell manor. They were covered in shards of broken and splintered wood, due to the fact that they had just been blown through the wall by the demonic assasin, Shax. No one was there to save them. Leo, their whitelighter and Piper's husband was stuck in the underworld, with no chance of sensing their injuries. The two sisters were left alone in the house, only to slowly die. ********** Meanwhile in the underworld, Cole Turner walked back into the small, dark cavern. He approached Leo and Phoebe. "It's done, time has been reversed" he announced without emotion. Phoebe stared at him with teary eyes, "And Piper? She's alive again? Will they remember it?" at this moment, she did not care about her demonic fate, only the safety of her sisters. Cole nodded, "She is alive. And no, they will not remember any of this, only we will." he moved closer to Phoebe, "I'm sorry you have to go through this. I wish there was a way to change how this had to happen" he was reffering to how the Source had made a deal that he would agree to turn back time, so that the sisters witchy identies would have never been discovered and Piper would not have been killed. But in return Phoebe would have to stay in the underworld. She shook her head solemly. She didn't want to think about what she had to do next. She looked up at Leo, whose eyes were still slightly red, then back to Cole. "Can I at least go back to make sure everything is ok? Can I at least see my sisters and tell them what is going on before I am doomed to an eternity in he11?" she asked bitterly. Cole thought for a moment, figuring that it wouldn't hurt. "I guess so. But do it quickly, and make sure you come back. Or the Source will not be happy." Phoebe nodded and looked at Leo. He grabbed her hand and orbed her back home. When they arrived they were absolutely shocked. Piper, Prue and Dr. Griffis were all in in the house. unconcious and bleeding. Three people, near death, and only one whitelighter. Leo quickly ran to Piper and Prue, forgetting completely about Dr. Griffis. "Prue!? Piper!?" Phoebe ran over to her sisters and dropped to her knees. She felt a pulse on each of them, it was extremely faint. She looked over to Leo with a very demanding look her eyes flooding with tears. "Leo, hurry! They don't have much time!" she yelled in urgancy. Leo's heart began to race. He placed one glowing hand over each of the sisters, but it was not powerful enough. Leo had to make a decision. He took a deep breath, and pulled his hand which was healing Prue, and placed it over his wife. "Leo, what are you doing!?" Phoebe cried out. Leo did not answer, he continued his concentration and in moments, Piper looked as though nothing had happened to her, although she stayed unconcious, probably suffering from something hitting her on the head. He turned his attention to Prue, putting all of his energy into it. After several minutes, he gave up. There was no hope. She was dead. Phoebe turned to him, her eyes filled to the brim with tears. "Why...why did you stop?" she asked furiously, already knowing the answer. Leo just shook his head in disbelief, "I'm sorry Phoebe. She's.....she's gone." Comments! |
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Post by Stormythomas on Sept 3, 2006 23:45:53 GMT -5
-claps- WONDERFUL!! I loves it  You do plan to continue right?!?! |
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Post by charmedfan4evr on Sept 4, 2006 0:29:01 GMT -5
That was so good! It actually made me a little teary : ( . Well done!
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Post by barmyoncharmed on Sept 4, 2006 5:35:33 GMT -5
That is great, can we have some more soon  |
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Post by Fiji221 on Sept 4, 2006 6:43:00 GMT -5
Phoebe took a step back and reached out for the table for support. "What...what do you mean gone!?" she demanded at him. Tears began streaming down her face. Leo looked at her with pained eyes, tears forming in his as well. Phoebe shook her head, not wanting to believe it. She turned her attention to Piper, who Leo was trying to wake up. Finally she stirred an looked around. "Hey, what's goin...oh my god! PRUE!?" she noticed her sister lying next to her. Her eyes grew wide and shot over to look at her husband then to Phoebe. Both just stared at her, not sure what to say. Piper began to go into hysterical crying, realizing that her sister was dead. Phoebe quickly ran over to her and pulled her into a hug, her tears getting more violent. "What....how....how did this happen?!" Piper asked through her tears. She didn't even bother asking again. ********** Later that night Phoebe sat alone in her bedroom, silentyl crying. "Phoebe...what's wrong?" she heard a voice ask. She turned to see Cole standing beside her bed. She wanted to kill him right now. He had said he would warn Piper and Prue about Shax, obviously he had lied to her. "You slimy little b@$tard!" she shreiked at him, her tears now turning to rage. Cole looked at her confused as he took a few steps back. He was about to ask her what she was talking about but she continued, "You said you would warn them! Remember? I asked you to warn Piper and Prue about Shax, you didn't did you!? And now because you 'forgot' or 'you didn't feel like it' my sister is dead! Yes, that's right Cole, Prue is dead!" she took in a deep breath and shook her head as the tears began to flow again. Dead?he thought to himself. "Look Phoebe, I'm really sorry. I tried to, but... the Source...." Phoebe cut him off mid sentance "Don't you dare try to take the blame off of you!" now she broke down and the hot tears began to stream down her face once more. Cole walked slowly towards her and embraced her. She didn't resist and the two of them sat together. "Look Phoebe, I hate to put more pressure on you" Cole finally said, releasing her "But um, we can't forget the little deal we made with the Source" Phoebe nodded slowly and solemly. How could she forget. "I at least need to say good bye to Piper and Leo. Tomorrow morning. Is that ok? I promise I will be there tomorrow morning. And if I'm not you can drag me there kicking and screaming" she said looking towards the floor. This was definately not a decision she was proud of, but she kept to her word, always, and she wasn't about to change that now. ********** Piper was lying on her bed, holding a pillow to her. It was now stained with tears and signs of running makeup. There was a soft rap at the door and Leo walked in. "Piper" he breathed. That one word was enough to make her start crying again, but Leo began to stroke her hair as he laid down next to her. "What happened Leo?" she choked out. He didn't answer her. Leo thought that the truth might be a little much for her. To find out that because she had died, time was turned back and Prue died instead, he knew that she would start to blame herself for it somehow. "Look, honey. The truth of it might be a little much right now. So I just want you to stay here, relax, sleep..." he suggested trying to get her to calm down. He realized it was no use as she shot up from the bed and stared at him with angry eyes. "Relax!? You want me to relax? Leo, my sister is dead and you are telling me to, relax!?" she turned to her vanity and swiped her hand across it, causing several small trinkets and bottles to crash to the floor and break. She placed her hands on it's surface, her shoulders begninning to shake. Leo walked over to her and placed his hands on his shoulder as her lead her back to the bed and sat her down. "It'll be ok, I promise" he said soothingly, not sure if he was telling the truth or not. He couldn't come to make the sisters realize quite yet that now without Prue... the Power of Three was gone. More to come soon! |
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Post by charmedfan4evr on Sept 4, 2006 11:50:15 GMT -5
I love it! The whole "relax" thing was so Piper! Great job, I can't wait for more.
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Post by piperminime on Sept 4, 2006 11:57:42 GMT -5
Its awesome!
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Post by Xenith on Sept 4, 2006 11:59:28 GMT -5
Good job, and I agree that you really got Piper in that last scene.
Though I do have a small nit. Leo couldn't save Dr. Griffiths either.
From Charmed Again Pt1:
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Post by barmyoncharmed on Sept 4, 2006 12:00:32 GMT -5
Aww this is good, update soon.
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Post by vanillabliss on Sept 4, 2006 12:36:14 GMT -5
yeah really! ;D
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Post by jenna on Sept 4, 2006 15:07:00 GMT -5
this is really good. please keep it going.
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Post by Fiji221 on Sept 5, 2006 6:24:51 GMT -5
Good job, and I agree that you really got Piper in that last scene. Though I do have a small nit. Leo couldn't save Dr. Griffiths either. From Charmed Again Pt1: Yeah, I remembered that awhile after I posted.... I'll add more after school |
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Post by Fiji221 on Sept 8, 2006 18:24:57 GMT -5
Sorry, I kinda lied, I know I said I would post more a few days ago, but things got kinda hectic, so here it goes! Enjoy and post comments!
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Piper stood, staring at the wall which she and Prue had been flung through by Shax. She was a complete mess, she was sleep deprived, her hair was a mess and she could barely talk to anyone. Piper heard soft feet coming down the stairs and saw out of the corner of her eye, Phoebe step next to her.
"I still can't believe she's really gone... I mean, I half expect her to walk down the stairs yelling at me for some unknown reason" Piper said softly. Her voice was choked and small. Phoebe stayed silent for a moment, then placed a hand on her sister's shoulder,
"I just thank god I didn't loose you too." she said, her voice only slightly stronger than her sister's. Phoebe had been dealing fairly well, or at least as well as she could. She tried hard to keep herself together, especially when she was around Piper.
Phoebe patted Piper's shoulder lovingly and headed to the kitchen, where she found Leo already up, dressed, and seemed to be waiting for her. He looked concerned, very concerned.
"What's the matter Leo?" although she figured it was about Prue or something, it never hurt to ask. Leo just looked at with sorrowful eyes,
"Phoebe... are you sure you want to do this?" he asked, talking about their little deal with the Source. Phoebe grimaced, hoping that it would all just melt away, but of course, it wouldn't. She laughed weakly
"Of course not... but I'm not going to give up on a promise I made. Whether I like it or not." she looked down at the floor. "I'd better go get dressed" Leo was about to stop her, but she strode quickly out of the kitchen and into her room upstairs. She stared at the open closet, pulling out all bright clothing. Just because she was going to the underworld did not mean she was going to wear all black. She quickly got dressed and went down the stairs again, carrying a peice of paper on which she had written a transportation spell to get her to where she was going. No way were Leo and Piper coming.
"I'd... um better go. I love you guys" she said, her voice steady and sure. She gave each of them a hug and held up the paper so she could read the spell, but Leo placed his hand on her arm to stop her.
"Wait a minute, you're not going down there alone. We're coming with you" he said sternly. But Phoebe just shook her head,
"No, I have to do this alone." she stared back down at the paper "Guided spirits hear my plea, take me to where I wish to be" winds roared around her, and she was quickly wisked away to her fate.
She arrived in the dark, damp cave of the underworld. Phoebe saw the Source, Cole and some other unknown demons.
"We've been waiting for you"
Im sorry that was kinda short, but I'm having a slight writers block... I'll write more as soon as I think of it, lol
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Post by XxP3HalliwellxX on Sept 14, 2006 7:51:20 GMT -5
Awsome!!! COntinue more please!  I love it. |
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Post by Astral Echo on Sept 17, 2006 6:20:42 GMT -5
Well done, it was really good and I am very impressed. More soon, please. |
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Post by Fiji221 on Sept 27, 2006 18:06:09 GMT -5
Wow, really sorry it's taken so long to update this! Thanks to all who replied! ______________________________________________________ Phoebe took in a deep breath and kept a straight face, not letting a single ounce of emotion show through. "Alright, I'm here. What do you want me to do now?" she asked impatiently. The Source laughed a cold laugh. "Actually Miss Halliwell, there's been a change of plans" he said. And with those words, demons began to shimmer all around her, trapping her, and forming fire balls in their hands. Cole's eyes widened, this wasn't how it was supposed to happen. They weren't supposed to kill her! "Goodbye Phoebe" the Source said evily as he too formed a fire ball and threw it at her. ********** "What if something happened to her? What if they do something to her?" Piper asked frantically. Phoebe had just left them and she was regretting letting her read that stupid spell. "We have to go down and get her. I am not going to let my baby sister rot in he11!" she excalimed as she continued to pace the kitchen floor. "Piper, this was Phoebe's choice and we have to trust that she made the right one" Leo said soothingly, trying to calm her down. No such luck. "Screw trust" was all she gave in reply. Leo sighed. "Look, Cole's down there. Do you honestly think he'd let anybody or anything hurt her?" he asked. "Yeah, I guess you're right" ********** "No!" Cole shouted as the fire was shot at Phoebe. He created an energy ball and shot it at the Source's fire ball. The two collided only a foot away from Phoebe, but because of Cole, the Source's attack never reached Phoebe. "Get out of here Phoebe!" Cole said quickly as the Source advanced on him. She quickly reciteted the spell that had brought her here and was gone. "Belthazor, you will pay for that!" I know, short... the next one will be longer, I promise. But for now...Comments! |
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Post by chrmd4life on Dec 14, 2006 22:46:26 GMT -5
It's good!!!
Where's the rest?
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Post by XxP3HalliwellxX on Oct 24, 2007 17:02:05 GMT -5
It's a great update and it is short. So when are ou going to update again??
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Post by charmedforever122 on Nov 13, 2008 12:06:03 GMT -5
I loved it , So emotinal though i want to cry  |
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Post by charmedforever122 on Nov 13, 2008 12:08:51 GMT -5
I loved it , So emotinal though i want to cry Prue and Piper Oprah makes you cry . |
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You do plan to continue right?!?!
I love it. 
