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Post by Master of Demon Slayer on Mar 22, 2005 22:50:54 GMT -5
This follows the account of the Haliwell sisters and their lives, particularly Paige and Kyle's. Sure, their relationship is on and off, but they've got bigger things to worry about. I mean bigger things. BIG THINGS! BIG BAD THINGS!
[glow=red,2,300]Chapter One: Commitments: The Lessons![/glow]
Poor Piper. She feels like desperate housewife Susan Mayer. Single working mother whose husband was taken away by the Elders. With the new neighbor moving next door, stress continued to build on her shoulders. Luckily, her sons Chris and Wyatt are not little monsters running amok.
Two middle aged couples just moved in the house across the street. They are Mr. George Hughs and Mrs. Gladys Hughs. Now, word on the street has it that Mrs. Hughs in a nosy neighbor. Piper feared that Mrs. Hugh would spy and tell the whole world about the Haliwells are witches. That is she is invitedthe new neighbors over, to show them that the Haliwells are normal as normal as can be.
Phoebe (single mother) and Paige (give-take relationship) were helping Piper dusted and cleaned the house the mortal way, top to bottom. With the kids at school and no demons to worry about, there was absolutely nothin to stress over.
"That's not demon in the pot is it?" Phoebe asked Piper in a joking way.
"Ha-ha, very funny! Outta my way!" Piper shouted.
Phoebe noticed the paleness in Piper's face. "Piper, do you need help? You look... pale."
"What? I just want this to look very special," said Piper, forcing a smile. "I don't want Mrs. Hughs to suspect us of being witches. I’m gonna bust those Elders!”<br> “Ah… still not down with that Elder thing, huh?” Phoebe pointed it out.
“Hell no, Phoebe!” Piper slammed her pot on the stove. “I can’t believe that they just snatch him right out of my hands and turn him into an Elder again. When I see them again, I will blow them UP!”<br> The kitchen trembled violently. “Uh… Piper?”<br> “Don’t ‘Uh Piper’ me, sister!” Piper waved her wooden sthingy violently. “They took my husband away last year and I haven’t heard from him since! If push comes to shove, Chris will hate his father, Wyatt becomes a psycho, and Earth will turn into living hell thanks to those ELDERS!!!”<br> BOOM!! Her rage blew the stove out of the kitchen into the backyard.
“Whoops! Gotta watch that temper of mine,” Piper said as though she didn’t get mad.
Paige rushed in to see what happened. “Oh, lemme guess. Leo, huh? How are we going to look normal if we can’t act normal?”<br> “Ahh, don’t worry about that,” said Piper. “I’ll call Kyle. KYLE!”<br> “Oh, in that case, I’ll go off to my room and pick out a normal dress,” Piage replied as soon as Piper called out to their Whitelighter. She orbed to her room.
“Hey! Use the chair for a change!” Piper shouted. “What’s with her?” She put the parsley on the sauce and stirred it.
“Kyle told her he loved her and took it back,” Phoebe replied.
“That guy is an idiot!” Piper scolded. “Luckily, Paige is not a 40 year single nanny. Otherwise, he’ll be in over his head. I mean, look at me and Leo. We worked out fine until those nosy, sons of—”
“Piper, don’t think ‘E’ word.” Phoebe gave her breathing notions. “Think… Mrs. Hughs.”<br> “Oh, get a breath mint!” Piper growled.
Phoebe trapped her breath and sniffed at it. She agreed with Piper and went to the cabinets to search for a breath mint.
“Where is he? KYLE!” She shrieked like a banshee. “KYLE!!!”<br> Kyle orbed in the kitchen. “Louder, Piper, I don’t think they heard you in Uruguay! Sup Phoebe?”<br> “Right back at ya,” Phoebe replied after she found an old, stale mint.
“What’s happening?” Kyle asked Piper.
“Stove,” Piper replied as she violently chopped her vegetables.
“What—Oh! I reminded you to control your temper,” Kyle said.
Piper gave him a violent glare. “Don’t tell me what to control! Please, fix it!”<br> Kyle orbed and fixed the stove in no time. Piper politely thanked Kyle and placed her cake batter in the oven.
“How’s Paige?” Kyle asked.
“Oh, you know, the usual,” Piper explained. “You told her you love her and when they made you… you know, you took it back. You can’t make a commitment and she doesn’t want to see you face until you can!”<br> “I did this so she won’t wait for something she can’t have,” Kyle replied.
Piper shook her head, “You know, learn from Leo. He broke the rules, married me, and had two kids with me. Don’t you want to get marry before you die? Oh, you’re already dead. Still, Paige will age and die. You are her soul mate. Soul mates don’t follow rules.”<br> She turned her back on him and washed the dishes. Kyle sighed and lingered. [glow=red,2,300]TEXT[/glow]
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Post by Master of Demon Slayer on Mar 24, 2005 18:29:39 GMT -5
Ever wonder if there is a nosy neighbor? If you remember bewitched the show, Gladys Kravitz is the most nosy neighbor and everyone thinks she's crazy! Well she should feel that way when no one listens to her. Same thing with Mrs. Hughes....
Chapter Two: The Woes of Mrs. Hughes… Sort Of.
Piper was right about Mrs. Hughes.
A busybody was the right word to describe Mrs. Hughes. She used to live in Milwaukee with her husband George. She “often” spied on her neighbors, lurking from window to window. Of course, what can ever happen in the suburbs of Milwaukee? After their son graduated Grad School and moved to New York, George and Gladys sold the house and came to San Francisco’s suburbs. Little did they know that their neighbors across the streets were “magical” human beings.
“Aren’t the Haliwells nice to invite us to their house as a welcoming party?” Mrs. Hughes said to her husband. The red headed was short and plump with a big mouth. I mean big!
“Yeah, they seem to be nice people,” observed Mr. Hughes. “And don’t you go off sneaking around their house once we are there. You almost got in trouble remember?”<br> “But, what if-”<br> “No what ifs Gladys!” He scolded her. “No snooping! Promise?”<br> “All right, all right,” she opened the curtains to let the afternoon sun shine in. She then saw black smoke that followed by an explosion. “George! George! There’s a fire at the Haliwell house!”<br> “What fire?” George saw nothing black in the sky. “Where?”<br> He arrived to late when the smoke suddenly disappeared.
“At the Haliwell house!” Gladys snapped.
“I told you not to spy!” George warned her again. “Stop spying!”<br> “But—”
George shushed her up. “That’s enough! None of this! Do not do it! Do you want our new neighbors to hate us?”<br> “No,” Gladys said as though she wanted to be respected as the neighbor’s watch patrol. “I promise not to snoop, George.”<br> “Good,” he said exasperatedly. “Where’s my tie?”<br> “In the laundry room, drying on the hanger,” Gladys replied.
As soon as he reached the laundry room, Gladys saw two lights dropping through the Haliwells’ roof.
“GEORGE!!!!” Gladys shrieked in horror.
George quickly ran up the stairs and asked her if she was seeing things again.
“No! This time, I really saw two things!” she babbled. “Two lights just dropped…”
George picked up a bottle of medical fluid from the medicine cabinet and forced her to drink half the bottle.
Poor Mrs. Hughes. When will her husband ever see that his wife is telling the truth?
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Post by Master of Demon Slayer on Mar 24, 2005 22:24:11 GMT -5
Chapter 2 is a homage to Mrs. Kravitz of Bewitched, one of the nosiest neighbors next to Desperate Housewives' Mrs. Huber, who was murdered thanks to her nosiness. Will Mrs. Hughes suffer the same fate?
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Post by Master of Demon Slayer on Mar 25, 2005 9:50:26 GMT -5
Chapter 3: Little Black Book
Odin and Sandra 'dropped in to see why Kyle did notrespond to their calls. It is a shame they dropped in at the wrong place, wrong time. Here's Piper. Angry Piper. Darth Piper!
“What the hell are you doing here!” she snapped at them harshly.
“Where’s Kyle?” Odin asked her, ignoring her anger.
“Making up with Paige as I told him to,” Piper replied through gritted teeth. “Get out of my house and go back to your ruining everything for the Greater Good. You took my husband away. You are not taking my sister’s boyfriend away!”<br> “All we want is to talk to him,” Sandra told Piper nicely. “It is very important.”<br> “Oh, well, I’m this close to blowing up all the Elders!” Piper roared. “Get out!!”<br> The house trembled as though an earthquake just hit it.
“Did Mt. St. Helen blow its cap?” Kyle wondered after he orbed in the living room. “Oh, its you guys. Hey, Piper, I took your advice. It worked.”<br> “Good, not tell these guys to get the hell out of my house,” Piper said.
“You guys heard her,” said Kyle.
Odin was adamant. “All right. Fine. I still need to tell you something, in private.”<br> “Whatever you have to say, you can say it to my future sister-in-law,” Kyle replied.
“What!” The Elders and Piper exclaimed.
“You popped the question?!” Piper squealed excitingly. “And she accepted it too! Perfect!”<br> “No! Whitelighters and Elders can never marry or fall in love with humans!” Odin yelled.
“Odin, maybe we should—” Sandra spoke.
“I can’t believe you are siding with them!” Odin interrupted her. “Kyle, you will regret this! Come, we leave!”<br> “No, I’ll think I will stay here,” Kyle replied. “My place is with my family. This is my family.”<br> “We understand,” Sandra replied downheartedly.
“Well, I don’t!” Odin shouted. “I’m sure many of us will side against you!”<br> He orbed out, leaving Sandra to break the news.
“That went well,” Piper replied.
“Kyle, Piper, there is a threat,” she said to the both of them. “We tracked numerous demons coming out of their hiding places. They’re coming for you and you sisters. I suggest you be on your guard.”<br> “I guess we’re back on the job again,” Piper said.
Sandra reluctantly shook her head. “I’m sorry. Kyle, I hope everything works out with you and Paige. See you at the Hidden Warf.”<br> She orbed out and returned with the other Elders.
“Hidden Warf?” Piper repeated.
“I have no idea,” Kyle replied, confused. Was that a hint?
Suddenly, a cry for help echoed in Kyle’s ears. It was close by.
“They calling for you?” Piper asked.
“No, a kid,” Kyle said, baffled.
“Does this kid know you?” she asked.
“I don’t know. I better check this out,” said Kyle. “I’ll be back.”<br> He orbed out. Piper suddenly felt weak and tired for the moment. She sat down on the couch and rested her head.
Kyle ended up in a dark cave near the ocean. He remembered this place before. The pirates tried to steal the chalice and drink the water of the fountain youth. In front of him was a figure cloaked in dark robes and hood.
“Help me, Kyle…” the figure spoke in a girl’s voice. It changed to young man’s voice. “Are you alone, Mr. Brody?”<br> “Who are you?” Kyle demanded, weary of the stranger.
“I am an ally of the Charmed Ones,” said the stranger. “I hold the knowledge of the demon attacks. Those that are hunting the sisters.”<br> “Did the Elders—”
“I am an Elder, true,” said the stranger. “But I have no affiliates with them at all. Neither am I demon. With Leo gone missing and you as the weakest of the Elders, the Charmed Ones are quite vulnerable.”<br> “How do you about Leo?” Kyle asked.
“The Elders have big mouths,” said the stranger.
Kyle stared at the stranger and studied his face. The stranger looked young, probably 16 years old.
“What is your name?” Kyle asked.
“Oroachi, the Yamato Dragon,” the stranger replied. He took out a little black book and orbed it into Kyle’s hands. Kyle glossed in it. “Fifty demons. Fifty vanquishing potions. None of them appeared in the Book of Shadows. As you can see, the demons are ordered by their time of appearance. The first three will attack tonight. They can’t enter the Haliwell’s house because it is protected. They will attack wandering innocents until the Charmed ones appear.”<br> “Thanks, but…” Suddenly, something about the Dragon was so familiar. It was as though he met the boy before. “Have I seen you somewhere before?”<br> “Golden Lightning shall flash in the sky when the sisters are in dire need,” he replied and ignored Kyle’s question. He took one step backward and disappeared in the darkness. “Present my book to the sisters. Tell him a friend is aiding them.”<br> “Wait!” Kyle yelled out to him. “Where are you… Ah, forget it.”<br> He orbed back home.
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Post by Master of Demon Slayer on Mar 25, 2005 18:34:21 GMT -5
So, tell me what you guys think so far. Be subtle and honest.
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Post by CanadianHalliwell on Mar 25, 2005 21:09:09 GMT -5
This is absolutely amazing. Good work. (I feel like a teacher) I like your story since it is a bit different. And I like different!
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Post by Master of Demon Slayer on Mar 25, 2005 22:13:31 GMT -5
Thanks CanadianHalliwell very much x 3. I'm glad you like it. More is on the way.
Who is the villian? You'll see. Oh yes.... You will all see.
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Post by Master of Demon Slayer on Mar 25, 2005 22:46:13 GMT -5
Chapter Four: The Man with White Hair...
A dark man. An evil man. He was bent on ruling earth. He commanded a great legion of powerful demons. They awaited his orders on the abandoned island of Alcatraz...
Gorz, the commander, walked beside the cloaked man. The stranger had a raspy voice and pale, wrinkly skin.
"Take two of your men," commanded the dark stranger. "You know that you can't enter the Charmed One's home, for it is protected by Good Magic and God. But their compassion for the innocents will be their undoing."
"What of the vanquishing potions my lord?" asked Gorz the tall reptile like demon. "Surely, those will destroy us."
"Worry not," said the leader. "I made sure the little black book is in safe hands with my apprentice. He won't betray me. I have him on my leash."
"Yes sire," said Gorz obidiently. "What shall we do?"
"The sisters are welcoming their neighbors tonight," said the stranger. "Once those innocents leave their house, attack them. That will flush out the Sisters."
"What about their Whitelighter, my master?" Gorz asked worriedly.
The stranger laughed mockingly. "He is the weakest of the Elders. You and the others have been trained well. Move against the sisters first. Leave the youngest one alive and their Whitelighter alive. I have great uses for them."
"Yes, my master," Gorz bowed respectfully. He disappeared into the darkness.
He let down his hood to show an ailing face with long white hair. "The Charmed Ones will be vanquished. I have foreseen it. When they are wiped out, I will be King of Earth. My apprentice and I shall rule it. Nothing can stop us. Nothing can stop the Source of Evil."
"Lord Lin!" cried a lesser demon. He was dog face demon with four arms.
Quickly, Lin the ailing man flipped his hood over his head and hid his face.
"What is it, Ila?"
Ila bowed and said, "The Avatars know what you are doing. They are coming for you."
"Impossible!" Lin rejected his meesenger's claim. "My lair is hidden. No one knows my plans."
"They are sending Gideon," Ila added.
"Ha, revive the renagade Elder?" Lin scoffed. "Turned him into an Avatar too I suppose? Foolish brothers of mine. They believe humans can live in Utopia."
Ila also said, "They are allying with the Elders. I believe they are trying to find the Chosen One."
"The Chosen One, you say Ila?" Lin halted, feeling a small ounce of fear. "Have they found the Orphan of Light?"
"I believe not, my lord," said Ila.
"I remember the prophecy," Lin said to himself.
"The Greatest Forces shall come from a time afar. The battle of the two in hell shall the battle ensue. The Orphan of Light shall appear to claim the powers of the Dragon and the Phoenix."
"Leave," said Lin.
Ila iced out, leaving the spot he stood upon froze in ice.
Lin walked about and then he stared at the moon from one of the cells. "No one can stop me. I will succeed. They will all suffer at the hands of the White Hair Avatar!"
He cackled a diabolical and raspy laugh as he looked upon the Golden Gate Bridge...
"Magic School..." Lin said to himself. "I see..."
So, the master shows his face... He spoke of the Chosen One. Who do you guys think he is? You find out at the end of this story.
Secondly, little "Dragon Boy" has a lot of surprises... I mean a lot! Who do you think Dragon is?
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Post by Master of Demon Slayer on Mar 26, 2005 0:12:25 GMT -5
Chapter Five: Attack of the Demons! (no Clones)
Mrs. Hughes brought her famous apple pie. Mr. Hughes rang the doorbell and Phoebe welcomed them in. As soon as they entered the house, Kyle orbed in behind Paige and kissed her neck. Mrs Hughes was shocked to see Paige with a man when clearly he was not there a second ago.
“Ahh!!!” cried Mrs. Hughes.
“What, what is it?” George questioned the stunned Gladys.
Piper stood at the dining room paralyzed as did Phoebe, Paige and Kyle.
“That… that man!” she sputtered, shaking nervously. “He- he- p-p-p popped in! A second ago, he was there!”<br> Paige whispered indistinctly to Kyle, “Ex-nay on the orbi-tay.”<br> “Gotcha,” Kyle understood.
“I’m sorry,” George apologized. “My wife is just excited to meet you. Right, Gladys.”<br> He touched her and Gladys screamed abruptly. “Huh? What? Oh, uh… yeah. I was just nervous and excited. Very bad combination.” She looked about the house to check for more strange things.
“Just don’t stand there,” said Piper. “Come on, the party’s in here!”<br> The all stepped into the dining room and sat down at the table. The kids politely greeted Mr. and Mrs. Hughes. The new neighbors just loved them. Piper suddenly felt weak. Her vision blurred for the moment. Everything then came back into focus. She put on the happiest smile and joined them. She explained to them that her husband was not present because of his service duties.
“Oh, you mean he’s in the army?” Gladys asked.
“Yeah, he’s a doctor,” Phoebe added. “We don’t even need to go to see a regular doctor.”<br> “Oh… interesting,” Gladys stared at Phoebe strangely.
“It’s a joke,” Phoebe added.
“Oh, sorry, I’m just too nervous,” Gladys remained suspicious. She then glanced at the kids. “Oh, you and Chris must be so sad that your father is so far away. Don’t worry. He’ll be back before you know it!”<br> Piper smiled. She began to like Mrs. Hughes.
“He’s not gone,” said Wyatt.
“He was kidnapped,” Chris added along.
“Yeah, three guys in robes ganged up on Uncle Leo and orbed away!” Melinda also added.
Piper and Phoebe gave their children an angry glare. Mr. Hughes found the kids so imaginative.
“That’s good, Piper and Phoebe!” he laughed joyously. “Imaginative children will succeed in their future.”<br> “Yeah, that is if we let them!” Phoebe spoke through her gritted teeth.
Mrs. Hughes found them even more suspicious. “Does Melinda have a father?”<br> “Gladys!” George retorted.
“Eh… it’s okay,” replied Phoebe. “Father married me, got me pregnant, left us, ran off with his secretary, and went to Mexico. I thought he hated that country. He can’t speak Spanish!”<br> “Oh, that’s too bad,” said Gladys as she served everyone her pie. “That man is missing out the good things. How about you, Paige? Are you and Kyle…” (Gives him a strange look briefly) …“hatching a relationship?”<br> “We’re engaged!” Paige replied happily. She and Kyle shared a brief kiss.
“I asked her today,” said Kyle.
“Mavel Tov, darlings!” Mrs. Hughes squealed happily.
“When are the two of you getting married?” George asked.
“You know, we haven’t thought about that yet,” Kyle replied. “We waiting for Leo to come home. What do you think?”<br> “Oh, I think we should wait too,” said Paige. “Probably after we also find a place.”<br> “Another place, Paige?” Kyle repeated.
“I am so ready to start a family of our own,” said Paige. “Aren’t you?”<br> Kyle was not. Not now, especially with the demons coming to attack them. She should have understood that it was the wrong time to even think of getting married. The sisters already have the little black book. They made all the potions. That doesn’t mean that they are out of danger.
“Yeah,” Kyle said skeptically. “I’m definitely ready.”<br> “Good,” said Paige, unaware of her fiancé’s skeptic behavior.
“That is nice,” said Mrs. Hughes. “We have a son also. Jason lives in New York with his own family. It has been a while since I heard from him and our little granddaughter.”<br> “Gladys, you just heard from them three hours ago,” George reminded her.
“So… I’m his mother,” said Gladys. “It is my duty to worry about my son!”<br> “Suit yourself, Gladys,” said George, avoiding confrontation.
Phoebe later put their children to be very early. That even made Mrs. Hughes twice as paranoid. When they sat down, they chatted the night away until the clock struck 11.
“It’s time to go, Gladys,” said George.
“Aw, but George!” Gladys groaned child-like. “I wanna stay longer!”<br> “The Haliwells gonna need their sleep,” George reminded his wife. “Come on. We can more house warming. Next time, Piper, my house. We’ll have a barbeque! All right? Don’t worry. We’ll let ourselves out! Take care now!”<br> “Bye, Piper, Phoebe, Paige and Kyle!” Gladys bided them a warm farewell. “Sleep well. We had so much fun.” She shut the door behind them. A second later, George yelled at her.
“Bye!” Piper tried to remain cheerful, but the exhaustion began to show on her face. She was half-glad that they left. “God, I thought they’d never leave!”<br> “You okay Piper?” Phoebe put her hand on Piper’s forehead. Piper knocked her hand out of her way. “Gee, you’re acting so aggressive!”<br> “I don’t feel so good, guys!” she admitted. “I gotta rest. I see you all in the morning.”<br> Suddenly, a scream roused them all. They cleared the blinds to see three giant demons attacking the Hugheses.
“Not tonight!” Phoebe exclaimed.
Piper swung the door opened just right after Gladys fainted on the unconscious George.
“Hey! No one touches my neighbors!” cried Piper. She tried to blow one of them up, but it was failure.
One of them approached Piper and asked her, “Are you Paige Haliwell?”<br> “No, that’s my sister, mister!” Piper yelled and pointed at Paige who stood with Kyle and Phoebe.
“I am Gorz,” said the demon as he unsheathed his curved broadsword. “I am here for Kyle and Paige.”<br> “I know you’re not working with the Elders,” Piper tried to blow them up again.
It failed.
“Foolish witches,” taunted Gorz. “We are not typical demons you faced for the last ten years. We are quite… stronger than Zankou. The Charmed Ones will die and we will not fail.”<br> “Not this time!” Kyle threw two vials at the other two demons. They exploded in huge balls of flame.
Gorz leapt out of the way. Kyle threw the potion, but he froze it in midair and threw it way into the bushes. It didn’t break luckily. “Do you think your antics can stop the Source of Evil?”<br> Phoebe somersaulted, flipped and doubled kicked the demon. He quickly grabbed her legs and threw her aside. Paige quickly orbed her out of harms way.
“Uh… sword!” She orbed it and stabbed the demon directly in the heart. Kyle tried to find the missing potion.
The demon pulled out his sword, licked his blood and laughed. “Foolish witches. We demons do not die from that. Only potion means. I’m afraid your potion is lost. Prepare to die!”<br> He raised his sword and aimed at Phoebe first. She levitated him and turned him upside down. Piper gesture and blew him far way. He landed and destroyed Piper’s jeep.
“Aw crap!” Piper cried out. “I hope my insurance can cover this.”<br> Gorz rose again. “You will all die!”<br> He charged. Kyle found the potion. The demon opened his mouth and fired a powerful blast. They dodged and it struck the house harmlessly. Suddenly, a stream of golden lightning circled and trapped Gorz in an unbreakable bind. He was lifted up and he squirmed to break free. Kyle tossed the vial at Gorz and he shattered like glass. The lightning retracted to the hands of Dragon Boy, Oroachi. He quickly turned away before the sisters could figure out who did it. Kyle saw him walking in the darkness. He tripped over sidewalk ledge and almost fumbled. He groaned frustratingly and finally orbed away.
“Well, looks like the demons are toasted,” Piper replied.
“Yep!” Paige replied. “But looks like those demons are very different from the ones we vanquished before.”<br> “There will be more of them,” said Phoebe. “Piper, you go rest. Paige, Kyle and I will take care of the Hughes.”<br> Kyle suddenly felt another urge of familiarity of the Oroachi. Who was that kid...?
Away from Alcatraz, Lin puntured the walls with his fingers twice as he released his anger.
"My apprentice!" Lin roared. "I should've have know! That ungrateful little brat! I should have killed him long ago!"
He made a snake gesture with his hand and struck through the contrete wall.
"He will pay!" Lin said to himself. "That brat will pay dearly for his foolish meddling. Ila!"
Ila appeared at his command.
"Spies!" Lin replied. "I want to know where my apprentice hides. Send your spies and find him!"
Ila bowed and iced out.
"Ahh!!!" He drew a cloud-guard sword and sliced a broken wall. It nicely fell diagonally on to the gournd with a bang. "He will pay. No one betrays the White Hair Avatar! No one!"
He conjured an Avatar potion and looked at it for while. He smiled. He opened the cork and drank the fluid. He dropped the vial and it shattered. He closed his eyes as shadow surrounded him and his eyes glowed dangerously red. His white hair leviated and extened. The strands struck through the walls and one of the demons. That demon was quickly reduced to liquid.
"No one will stop me!!!" Lin yelled.
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Post by Master of Demon Slayer on Mar 26, 2005 0:19:31 GMT -5
Lin is very bad. He gets even more worse....
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Post by Master of Demon Slayer on Mar 26, 2005 12:59:18 GMT -5
Chapter Six: Leo's Rescue
Over the next three months, the Charmed Ones defeated all but one demon, all thanks to Dragon Boy’s little black book. Scythe had yet to appear. He was encountered but he overcame sisters easily. The potion misfired and he escaped. It was not until he attacked the Golden Gate Bridge and Magic School. He threatened to kill one of the students if the sisters did not surrender themselves to him.
“Give up, Charmed Sisters,” he ordered as he prepared to break the student’s neck. “Unless you are wiling to sacrifice this innocent.”<br> “What choice do we have?” asked Paige.
The Elders too were powerless against Scythe the Demon Dragon.
“Give yourselves to my master,” Scythe replied. “It is the only way to save this innocent.”<br> One of the Elders attempted to save the student. It proved futile. Scythe extended his claws, trapped the Elder, and devoured him.
“That is disgusting!” Piper remarked without remorse.
“Fool, I feed on Whitelighters!” Scythe replied. “And Elders too. Will you now take my Master’s offer?”<br> “Not a chance in hell!” Appeared Dragon Boy in a dark cloak. Everything froze except Kyle.
“You!” Kyle exclaimed.
Oroachi the Dragon Boy made no reply. He walked to the demon and snatched the student from the demon’s claws. He transported the boy away from harm and gave Kyle another vial of vanquishing potion.
“I took the liberty to enhance the potion’s powers, Mr. Brody,” said Oroachi. “It should vanquish Scythe.”<br> Dragon Boy orbed away and time resumed.
“What! Where is my innocent?!” cried Scythe.
“Yeah, where is he?” Phoebe asked.
“Over here,” the student called from behind a table.
The Elders attacked the demon with powerful surges of lightning. Scythe, though unaffected, was trapped. Kyle threw the vial at the demon and vanquished him. The last of the demon was finally gone.
“It’s over,” said Piper.
“Yeah, all I want is long cat nap!” Paige added.
“I fear it is not over,” Odin replied. “Kyle.”<br> “What is it?” he asked.
Odin eyed Kyle with suspicion. “Where did you get that little black book?”<br> “I got it from Oroachi,” said Kyle.
“Oh? The Yamato God?” Odin snickered. “Tell me the truth.”<br> “Why does it matter?” Phoebe made rebuttal.
“The Avatars are allying with us,” Sandra replied.
Piper just couldn’t hold it in. “What?! Those bastards who believe that there is no Good or Evil?”<br> “Yes,” Odin replied. “They have very valuable information. The greatest threat is that one of their own has turned against them and became the Force of Evil. It also said that he kept a little black book of demons, like the one you four encountered.”<br> “Are you trying to say that Dragon Kid is the threat?” asked Paige. “It doesn’t make sense. I mean, if he is helping us to defeat the demons…”
“To gain your trust,” said Odin. “I believe this Dragon Boy is trying to turn you three against the good. He sent demons to kill you. In return, he gave his little black book to vanquish his pawns. It is so simple. Dragon Boy is the threat. Kyle, he comes to you to give you information. I want you to call us there and we will bring him in for questioning.”<br> “Why do I have the feeling that you are not going to interrogate him?” said Kyle.
“I’m one the Elders’ side on this one, Kyle,” said Phoebe. Piper also agreed.
“Well, I don’t,” said Paige. “I think the Avatars got their sources wrong.”<br> “I won’t betray him,” said Kyle. “I gave him my word as a friend.”<br> “So be it, Kyle,” Odin reached out and lightning struck him.
Kyle fell over. Paige and her sisters rushed to him. Kyle looked at himself. He felt different.
“What did you do?” Kyle demanded.
“Your powers are tweaked.” Odin informed. “Every time you orb, every time you use powers, I will know where you are.”<br> Odin and the others orbed out. Sandra gave a wink. Another but weaker jolt socked Kyle. “Orb.” Then she orbed out.
“What did she mean by that?” Piper asked weakly.
“She’s been giving me clues all this time,” said Kyle.
Piper suddenly fainted.
“Piper! Piper!” Paige cried out. “Kyle, she’s ill.”<br> Phoebe felt her forehead. She felt no abnormal warmth but she felt pain and suffering. Leo… his face appeared through all her pain.
“I think her heart is breaking,” said Phoebe. “We gotta take her home.”<br> “I better see Oroachi,” said Kyle. “I think he has a cure for her.”<br> “You still trust him?” Phoebe asked suspiciously.
“It took you guys a long time to trust me, remember,” said Kyle.
“But the Elders will detect you,” said Paige.
“But thanks to Sandra, I can only orb without getting caught,” said Kyle.
“Nice to know,” said Phoebe. “Come one, Paige. Let’s get Piper home. Kyle… do whatever you need to do.”<br> Paige orbed Piper and Phoebe home. Kyle orbed out of magic school to search for Dragon Boy.
Oroachi was meditating but he was very aware of his surroundings. When Kyle appeared behind him, he said, “Welcome once again, Elder Brody. I sense one of the Charmed Ones is in trouble.”<br> “How did you know?” Kyle demanded.
“For many years, I practiced thousands of arts,” said Oroachi. “I mastered each technique. My chi flows like energy and I can use that stream to bring me information. Everyone radiates energy. They flow everywhere. When you learn to listen and feel, you can feel it too. I sense now you want met to do a favor.”<br> “Yes, it’s for Piper,” said Kyle.
“Piper!” Oroachi exclaimed. “She is ill, heartbroken.”<br> “Do you have empathy too?” Kyle asked.
“She hasn’t much time,” said Oroachi. “I have to find Leo.”<br> “I think I know where he is,” said Kyle.
“Why didn’t you go to him?” Oroachi demanded.
“The Elders suspect me,” Kyle replied. “I can’t do anything except orb.”<br> “Tell me where,” said Oroachi.
“Don’t you have a cure?” Kyle demanded.
“What do I look like, Dr. Orachi Medicine Man?” the boy mocked. “I’m an Elder. I can heal wounds but I cannot stop heartbreaks. Ican prevent them. Kyle, you have to tell me where Leo is!”<br> “What happens if they…”
Oroachi the said, “They cannot stop me at all. I am not just your typical Elder. Now, if you want to save you family, you have to tell me.”<br> “Hidden Warf,” Kyle replied.
Oroachi nodded. “I know where. Go home.”<br> He orbed out and Kyle orbed home.
A secret room was hidden on Fisherman’s Warf where the sea lions sunbathed. It was a small building with a single hallway that led to the end of a well-guarded chamber. Oroachi saw two Elder Guards. The entrance was also the exit. Once he entered the chamber, there would be no way to orb out. He smiled venomously as he amrched calmly towards the guards.
“Hold there kid!” One to the guards yelled.
Orachi continued to walk as a fearless warrior.
The Elders blasted stunning surges of lightning. Oroachi telekinetically gestured and deflected them back at the guards. They fell and lay there stunned.
Oroachi entered the chamber. Leo sat in the center of the cage, meditating.
“Leo, it is time,” said Oroachi.
“Who are you?” asked Leo.
“Piper is dying, I fear,” said Oroachi. “You need to go to her.”<br> “Who’s Piper?” asked Leo.
“I did not foresee this,” Oroachi said fearfully.
“Kid, behind you!” Leo shouted.
Oroachi turned to see 8 Elders (no Sandra or Kyle) blocking the only means of escape.
“Stand down!” shouted Odin valiantly. “You will come with us, Avatar!”<br> Oroachi was shocked but unshaken. How did they know?
“You must be Leo’s kidnappers,” said Oroachi in a deep voice. “You buried his memories and hid them in his mind. How twisted you all are! You are no better than my master.”<br> “Stand down and surrender,” Odin warned again.
“No,” said Oroachi. “I will take Leo back. No one will stop me from doing so.”<br> “Then you’ve been warned.” Odin and the others fired fatal lightning bolts. Oroachi eyes glowed gold. He caught the combined lightning bolts and absorbed them.
“Powerful you all are,” Oroachi taunted. “Still, your powers combined cannot stop me.”<br> He raised one hand and fired a single bolt of golden lightning that divided into eight streams. They grabbed the Elders and lifted them off the ground. He slammed them down and knocked them all unconscious. He turned to the cage and attempted to tamper with the lock with his skeleton key.
“Sorry kid,” said Leo. “The only way to open it is with a spell incantation.”<br> Oroachi ignored his comments. He performed several quick moves and struck the lock with five fingers. He ripped off the lock and freed Leo.
“Let’s get outta here,” Oroachi said.
“What about them?” Leo asked.
“They’ll be fine,” said Oroachi. As soon as they left the chamber, both the Dragon Boy and Leo orbed to his hidden cave.
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Post by Master of Demon Slayer on Mar 26, 2005 21:22:05 GMT -5
***Warning***
Oroachi's identity is revealed in...
Chapter Seven: Conspiracy Unveiled
“Where are we?” Leo wondered aloud.
Oroachi ordered Leo to sit on the ground crossed legged. Then, he answered, “This is where I reside, Leo. I stay here to meditate and sharpen my martial arts. Now, be still. I will restore your memories and make you human once again.”<br> “Why do I have the feeling that there is a price to pay for this?” Leo said suspiciously.
“Of course there is a price to pay,” said Oroachi. “I am the one who is going to pay it. After this long process, I will become weak and vulnerable to death. Now, I want you to clear your mind. Think of nothing. Feel nothing. Seek nothing. Be still and at peace.”<br> Leo closed his eyes and quietly sat still. Oroachi chanted softly the incantation. He lifted his finger as though he were holding a gun. His finger touched Leo’s temple and golden energy was transferred to Leo and white orbs radiated. Oroachi saw many memories of Leo’s. So much were bad and hurting. But there were good memories also. Leo fell in love with Piper the first time, married her, and had a son together. There was Chris, the future one who came back in time to save Wyatt and his family. Then, there was the first time he never felt so alive. He became mortal. He was able to do what most fathers can do. He was so happy…<br> Suddenly, a spark interrupted Leo. He opened his eyes and looked at Oroachi. Then, he asked him, “How old are you?”<br> “537 years old,” Oroachi replied. “How are you so far?”<br> “Well, I seem to know who I am,” said Leo. “Thank you.”<br> “There is no need to thank me,” said Oroachi.
Leo felt pain and suffering. It was not his. It was Oroachi’s. Leo saw countless memories of his. Most of them were… deaths. None were happy or good.
“You must have suffered so long,” said Leo.
“I am not surprised that you saw my memories,” said Oroachi. “Ignore them. They are private. I prefer not to revisit them anymore.”<br> Oroachi began to sweat violently as smoke escaped from his hair.
Leo couldn’t ignore the memories. The more he knew about himself, the more he knew about Oroachi’s past. Wait… Leo saw Piper in Oroachi’s memory flash. She was aged. Phoebe… Paige… Kyle. There’s Chris, Wyatt and Melinda, all grown up. Suddenly, he saw through eyes of a fourteen year named Daniel. He called Kyle his father and Paige his mother. Daniel looked at the mirror as Paige fixed the boy’s collar. Wait, Daniel is… Leo opened his eyes to see the boy in the reflection. Oroachi is Daniel! “You’re…” Leo began to say.
Oroachi stopped him. He said weakly, “I am that Daniel you saw. I am Kyle and Paige’s son.”<br> “Daniel…” Leo began.
“Oroachi,” said the boy. “Daniel died that night when his mother and his aunts were killed. The next day, you were murdered by the White Hair Avatar. Daniel’s father took care of him alone. Melinda, Wyatt, and Chris helped out to ease their pain and their family’s. It was unfortunate. Kyle was later murdered by the White Hair Avatar. For the next three months, Daniel lived with his cousins. Melinda was unable to protect me and she was poisoned by the White Hair Avatar. Then Wyatt, the strongest of all fell. Chris and Daniel ran away and lived under new identities for only one month. The White Hair Avatar discovered us and killed Chris.
He then traveled alone until he met a stranger by the name of Zu. He became his mentor and master. For the last thirty years, Daniel trained and became his powerful apprentice. Daniel swore vengeance on his family’s death. Zu gave Daniel the Dragon Powers of Oroachi, the Yamato Dragon God. Daniel finally ceased to exist. He became Oroachi. I was Daniel. No more…”
“You came back to save us,” said Leo. “Wait, you’re over 500 years old? Why did you wait so long?”<br> “I discovered that my master was also the murderer,” said Oroachi.
The golden glow and white orbs disappeared entirely.
“It is done,” said Oroachi.
“Thanks, Daniel,” said Leo.
“That name no longer has any meaning to me,” said Oroachi. “I am the Yamato Dragon, Oroachi. I am the Guardian of the Good, not Daniel the weak. I came to the past to stop my master. I never came back to save my family. Their deaths were written in stone. Whatever I do, I cannot stop it. I am not God. The only thing I can do is save the future. At least, what is left in the future.”<br> “I don’t think so,” said Leo. “I think you are trying to save us also. If I know Kyle and Paige, they’d do anything to save the ones they love.”<br> “I am not them,” said Oroachi. “I put them in so many dangers and forced them to vanquish those demons. I could’ve killed them. I used them to save the future, Uncle. I will transport you home. You must not tell your family about what we talked about. I will recovery and I will hunt you down.”<br> “Daniel, I mean, Oroachi, when you are in the past, the future always changes,” said Leo. “You can change if you want.”<br> Oroachi pondered for a moment and reached an unsaid conclusion. Just as he was about to orb Leo home, a blast ripped from behind him. A dark hooded figure emerged from the debris and let down his hood. Oroachi immediately recognized him
“Master Lin,” said Oroachi.
“My foolish Apprentice,” said the white hair man. “You must be his uncle, Leo. I am Lin, the Guardian of the Evil and the notorious White Hair Avatar.”<br> “You must be the murderer,” said Leo. “I am proud of it.” He chuckled. “Now, Oroachi, come. There are matters I must deal with and you are the problems of the matters.”<br> “Forget it, Lin,” Oroachi refused straightforward. “I will not join you at all.”<br> “So be it, Guardian of the Good,” said Lin. He aimed and fired a lightning bolt at Leo.
Oroachi quickly pushed Leo away and took the hit instead. The weakened Dragon Boy urged Leo to run. Leo refused. “See, you still want to save your family.”<br>Oroachi finally nodded. “I guess I do.”<br> “You can’t save them,” said Lin. He charged another bolt of red lightning. “Only the chosen one can. The one who shall wield both the powers of the Phoenix and the Dragon. The one who shall wield our powers.”<br> “C’mon, let’s get outta here,” said Leo. “Together.”<br>Oroachi orbed Leo and himself out of the cave as soon as Lin fired his lightning bolt. Lin growled. He flashed out also and returned to his base.
Oroachi’s orbing was growing weaker and weaker. As soon as they materialized, Oroachi dropped on the floor. Leo carried and placed him on the couch.
“Thank you, Uncle Leo,” said Oroachi.
“For what?” he asked.
“Helping me realize that not all hope is lost.” Oroachi said. “I lived in the darkness too long and lost hope. I thought everything is destiny oriented. I thought I was destined to live my life and defend the world alone.”<br> “We all make our own destinies,” said Leo.
“I see that now,” said Dragon Boy. “By the way, my name is Daniel Brody Haliwell.”<br> “Leo Wyatt.”<br> They shook hands. Leo then said, “Go to sleep. You earned it.”<br> “Go to Aunt Piper,” said Daniel. “She needs you.”<br> Daniel closed his eyes and slept. Leo observed his nephew’s wound on his right arm. There were none. No blood, no wound…<br>
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Post by Master of Demon Slayer on Mar 27, 2005 15:22:55 GMT -5
Well, Oroachi is Daniel and the son of Kyle and Paige. I know, this is a lot like the Chris Six Season. I kinda like that going-back-in-time story. I just tweaked it a little bit. Daniel's real mission reamins a mmystery until the end.
Ohh, there is another secret he holds and it will shock his family and the Elders.
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Post by Master of Demon Slayer on Mar 27, 2005 15:26:00 GMT -5
Is this Daniel's end?
Chapter Eight: Daniel's Fate...
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Post by CanadianHalliwell on Mar 27, 2005 22:18:00 GMT -5
You are very good! I like your story very much!
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Post by Master of Demon Slayer on Mar 28, 2005 13:36:19 GMT -5
Chapter Eight: Daniel’s Fate
Leo called to Paige and Kyle. Phoebe and Paige responded only. Kyle was called to help Sandra take care of the injured Elders who were attacked by a powerful stranger. Paige saw Daniel sleeping on the couch.
“Who’s he?” she asked.
“Oroachi, the Yamato Dragon,” Leo replied as he ascended the stairs.
“That kid!” Phoebe exclaimed.
“He’s 537 years old,” said Leo as he disappeared from view.
“Wow!” Paige muttered impressively. “I want to his secrets.”<br> Phoebe walked to him and the two sisters watched over Daniel.
“He’s the one who helped us?” Paige still couldn’t believe that this kid knew so much about those demons. “Hey, Phoebe, touch him. Can you get any premonitions?”<br> Phoebe did so. The visions threw her off and she ended on the floor. Paige helped her up.
“Oh my God!” Phoebe exclaimed.
“Did those visions shock you?” said Paige.
“Yeah, but I saw something else,” said Phoebe. “He’s your son.”<br> “What?” Paige thought she misinterpreted Phoebe.
“That little 537 year old kid is your son,” Phoebe said slowly. “Understand the words that are coming out of my mouth?”<br> “No way!” Paige cried excitedly. “Wait, who’s the father?”<br> “C’mon, look at his face,” Phoebe pointed it out. “Does he look like someone we all know?”<br> “Julian McMahon?” Paige replied. “Kerr Smith of Dawson’s Creek?”<br> “No, your fiancé,” Phoebe said exasperatedly.
“I know, I was just kidding,” Paige replied laughing. “Wow, I can’t believe it! Kyle and I are going to have a boy! We did have sex yet either. That means… he won’t be conceived! We gotta do something!”<br> “Correction, you and Kyle, not me,” said Phoebe.
“Hey there,” Piper walked down stairs. She was very livid. “Is that… who I think it is?”<br> “Yep, he’s my son!” Paige said excitedly.
“No, I meant Dragon Boy,” Piper was taken by surprised. “Why didn’t you tell me, Leo? I have the right to know about my sister’s business.”<br> “I didn’t tell Paige or Phoebe,” said Leo.
The two of them looked at Phoebe. The middle sister said, “Guilty! I wanted to see who he is. I touched his arm, saw like a gazillion things, shocked me, and learned that Daniel is Paige and Kyle’s son.”<br> “You didn’t tell me that Daniel is his name!” Paige slapped Phoebe. Her sister winced.
“Does Kyle know yet?” Piper asked.
“No, and I don’t think he should,” said Paige.
“Why not? He is… his son too,” said Leo.
“You see, we didn’t do the, you know…” Paige gestured. “You know, the… As Frank would’ve put it, the wee-wacky-whoo-hoo.”<br> “Oh… I see,” said Piper. “Well, I’m going to cook dinner and anyone who wants to help me, please do.”<br> Leo followed and grabbed her rear end. Piper giggled sensually. Phoebe found it disturbing. Paige wanted that.
“So, wanna help me watch over my son?” asked Paige.
They sat down and read magazines while they waited for him to wake up. Kyle orbed in. Paige quickly orbed sleeping Daniel onto Piper’s bed just before he materialized. Kyle did not take notice. He only worried about Leo’s safety.
“Oh, he’s back,” said Phoebe.
“He’s back? Good! What about Dragon Boy?” Kyle asked.
“Oh he’s around, not here, though,” said Phoebe. She was near nervous wreck.
“You know, I’m kinda worried,” said Kyle. “He gave back Leo’s his memories…”
“Turned him mortal, and orbed him home,” Phoebe finished.
“I gotta check on him,” Kyle replied.
“No!” both the sisters shouted.
“Uh… he was just here,” said Paige. “He said that he rather be…uh… alone for a while. Said something about a demon coming to attack us.”<br> “I gotta check on him anyways,” said Kyle. He was about to orb when Paige interrupted him.
“No, wait,” Paige stopped him.
“That kid is like a family to me,” said Kyle. “If something happens to him, I won’t forgive myself.”<br> “Ooh, he got you there,” Phoebe added.
Paige sighed and said calmly, “Oroa—, whatever his name is, is actually Daniel.”<br> “You know it’s funny,” Kyle chuckled. “I was thinking that when we are ready for a baby, I will name the kid Daniel. What a coincidence. Oroachi’s real name is Daniel?”<br> “Yeah, coincidence,” Paige laughed nervously. “Did you know he’s 537 years old?”<br> “I didn’t know that,” said Kyle. “What does this have to do with his safety?”<br> “Daniel is our son,” Paige said quickly.
“You mean we’re going to have a son,” said Kyle.
Phoebe burst out laughing. “Oh, my God, for an Elder, you are so—”
“What’s going on?” Kyle still had no clue.
“Hey, hey!” Piper shouted. “Dumb down the noise! I don’t want my future nephew have his sleep interrupted.”<br> “Future nephew—Wait! What is going on here?” Kyle demanded.
“Hey, where is he?” Piper asked. “Where’s Daniel? I saw him on the couch! Where is he?”<br> “Daniel?” Kyle repeated. “You mean Oroachi.”<br> “No, Daniel, your future son, my future nephew!” Piper replied hotly. “Geez, get with the program, man!”
She hurried back to the kitchen to cook or so we think…<br> “Our future son?” Kyle still didn’t have a clue.
“That kid you always meet… That is our son!” Paige repeated slowly.
“Why didn’t he tell us?” Kyle asked.
“I don’t know, right time or fear of changing the future?”<br> “No, it is not that,” Daniel orbed behind the couch. “I do not fear changing the future.”<br> “Son,” said Kyle.
“I came back stop my master, Lin the White Hair Avatar,” said Daniel. “I also came back to save my family. I wanted to tell you but I was afraid. I wanted to meet the family I never really have.
“For years, I lived alone. Nightmares after nightmares, I dreamt of my parents. It felt so right and warm. Everyday, when I wake up, I was all alone. No one beside me. No one. My nightmares occurred for the past 524 years. Well, actually, I stayed in Heaven for the majority of… 365 days which equals to 365 years… but with that aside, so I’m not sure that really counts…”
Paige ignored his blabbing and hugged him tightly.
“Mom. I’ve forgotten how this felt,” said Daniel as he embraced his mother. “I missed Mom’s hugs.”<br> Phoebe just couldn’t hold it. She dashed to her nephew and embraced Paige and Daniel.
“Aunt Phoebe, I remember your hugs too,” said Daniel. “I too forgotten them. Now I remember.”<br> “Kyle, aren’t you going to…” Phoebe gestured.
Kyle quickly crouched on his knees and embraced tightly.
“Papa, the last time you hugged me was when you were murdered,” said Daniel. “You protected me. You gave your life to save me. You saved me…”
“Daniel, why didn’t you tell me?” Kyle asked.
“I was afraid that if I do wake up, I’d lose you,” said Daniel. He had no tears but Kyle saw pain in his eyes.
Kyle embraced him again. “Hey, you’ll be okay… Hold on. Did you live for 537 years?”<br> “If I tell you, you will keel over,” said Daniel. “Seriously.”<br> Suddenly a chime echoed in Kyle’s head. He ignored it.
“The Elders are calling you,” said Daniel.
“No, I want to be with you,” said Kyle.
“You better go. I’ll be fine…” Daniel assured. “Trust me on this.”<br> Kyle orbed away.
“So, are you going to tell us about your longevity?” asked Phoebe.
Back at Magic School, Kyle met the Elders. Odin explained what was going on.
“Well, we know who it is now,” said Odin. “We are going to execute this creature.”<br> “What?!” Kyle exclaimed angrily. “He did nothing wrong!”<br> “Breaking in and entering private property,” said Odin. “Attempted murder on the Elders and kidnapping?! Plus, the Avatars told us that this boy creature is an apprentice of the White Hair Avatar.”<br> “Even if he is,” said Kyle, “he will never join him. He saved Leo from you!”<br> “On the contrary, we thought Leo was the Chosen One,” said Odin. “Do you remember the prophecy?”<br> “Yeah, the Chosen One who will protect the Haliwell Line,” said Kyle. “Wrong one?”<br> “Leo was not the chosen one,” said Odin. “The Master must’ve sent his apprentice to kidnap the Chosen One—”
“No!” Kyle cried. “That boy you accuse is my son!”<br> “This will really complicate things,” said Odin. “No matter. Bring him!”<br> “No! I will not let my son die,” said Kyle. Odin orbed in a guillotine. “It is written. The boy must die. We can do by force which will result in a lot of bloodshed.”<br> “I won’t let my son be executed,” said Kyle. “My family and I will fight you!”<br> “On the contrary…” Odin gestured and pointed behind Kyle.
Kyle turned to see the sisters, Leo, the children and Daniel in chains.
“We already caught them.”<br> “No!” Kyle ran to them and tried to take off their shackles. “Let them go!”<br> “Whoa, a guillotine,” said Daniel. “I feel sorry for the bum who has to go through this. Your head still blinks for a few seconds after it goes off.”<br> “You are that bum, Dragon Boy,” said Odin.
“Ooh, I’m the one!” Daniel said excitedly.
“Are you sure he’s your son?” asked Piper with concern. “He seems too happy with… this.”<br> “Daniel, they’re going to kill you,” said Paige.
“Really? I’ve been living for 537 years,” Daniel said, shrugging. “I think they’re giving me something I really need.”<br> “Don’t talk like that,” Kyle interrupted. “I can’t let you go through this.”<br> “It is too late, Brody,” said Odin.
The Elders pulled Kyle aside and released Daniel. The sisters, Kyle, and the others struggled harshly. Daniel obediently followed the Elder’s orders. They locked his head in place.
“Any last words?” asked Odin.
“Yeah, could you like release it now?” Daniel replied anxiously. “I ain’t got all day. I have a date with King Yama of the Underworld.”<br> “That can be arranged.”
Odin gestured at the rope.
“NO!” Daniel’s family cried out in horror.
It broke and the blade ran slid down fast.
Kyle broke free, but he was too late. The blade sliced Daniel’s head off from the base where the body meets the neck. His head rolled to Kyle’s feet as lifeless eyes stared into his eyes… Kyle was lost at words as with the family.
To be continued...
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Post by Master of Demon Slayer on Mar 28, 2005 18:42:09 GMT -5
Hey, thanks again canadianhaliwell! It is near done, Chapter Nine of course.
Preview: Master Lin lost all his legion thanks to his apprentice Daniel. He will ressurect three powerful demons, the ones the Sisters fought and vanquished before...
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Post by Master of Demon Slayer on Mar 29, 2005 1:02:20 GMT -5
Chapter Nine: The Prophecy…<br> Kyle picked up his son’s head. Paige fell on her knees and mourned for her son’s loss. Phoebe and Piper buried their faces on Leo’s shoulder. Kyle looked at his son’s head and saw the eyes blinking. Last minute twitching, Kyle thought. He closed his eyes and sobbed quietly to himself.
“Yo, Elder! That was so cool!” Daniel’s voice yelled out excitedly.
Kyle stopped and looked up at his son’s head. It was not twitching. It was moving.
“Hey there Dad!” Kyle saw the head’s lips moving and words coming from them. “The Elders have gotta update their execution techniques. This is totally whacked!”<br> “Daniel?” Kyle was partially relieved but slightly shocked. “What’s going on? You didn’t tell me something.”<br> “Wait a minute all right?” Daniel’s head said calmly. “Yo! Body! Come here! I’m in Dad’s hands right now. Dad or Aunt Phoebe! A little help here?”<br> Phoebe and Piper looked up to see Daniel’s head talking. Phoebe covered her daughter’s eyes and Piper to her boys. Paige looked up and fainted at sight. Leo chuckled and said, “Monkey King.”<br> “Impossible!” Odin cried out. “How is this possible?”<br> Daniel laughed at him. “I’ll explain when my body and I are united. Aunt Phoebe, can you levitate my head.”<br> Phoebe was in shock.
“Fine, I’ll just do this myself.” Daniel said hotly. “I’ll be a little disfigured.”<br> Both head and body orbed and fused together. When he materialized, he was fixed figure again. “Is there a scar around my neck?”<br> The Elders and his family were speechless.
“Oh, you guys no longer need those,” said Daniel. He gestured and orbed off the shackles. “Now, the Elders.”<br> “Now, Daniel, let’s be reasonable,” Odin backed off along with the other Elders
“Aw, you guys afraid of a little Avatar?” Daniel taunted them.
“You’re an Avatar?” Odin quickly orbed a vial of Anti-Avatar Potion, threw it on the floor, and the explosion unleashed a terrible gas.
Daniel just sniffed it in but he didn’t die. He lived…<br> “Did you think that potion will kill me or my master?” Daniel demanded. “I am the Guardian of Good. Only the Guardian of Evil can stop me. The potion makes me stronger!”<br> Daniel glowed with white-blue aura but his eyes illuminated golden light. “I hold so much power, even you Elders and the Avatars combined can’t stop me. Yet, I hold back my rage. Why? I am a better person than you, Elders.”<br> The glow died out. “I am here to protect my family and find the Chosen One who will forever protect the Haliwell line. Either you’re with us or against us. It is your choice.”<br> Daniel walked away from them. The Elders dared not to strike back. Daniel and Kyle embraced each other.
“I thought I lost you,” Kyle said tearfully. “Don’t ever do this to me again.”<br> “I won’t, Papa,” Daniel promised. “I just want to scare the hell out of everyone. Sorry that I got a little carried away.”<br> “Let’s go home,” said Paige. “The both of you. You little rascal you!”<br> “Hold!” Odin cried out. “What do you know of the Chosen One?”<br> “You don’t know?” Daniel mocked him.
“The Forces of Good and Evil shall pass through the Gates of Time…<br>“Demons shall strike, Angels shall defend…<br>“Three shall rise from their graves and play the weakness of the Witches…<br>“The Battle of Good and Evil shall ensue between the Guardians two…<br>“The Orphan of Light will appear in the end…<br>“To gather the powers of the Phoenix and the Dragon…”
“That is all I know, Old Man,” said Daniel. “The Orphan of Light shall appear after the battle.”<br> The long line of the Haliwell family orbed home, all but Kyle and Daniel.
“What happens in the end?” Kyle asked worriedly. “I mean the battle. Who will survive?”<br> “Duh, the Good!” Daniel replied as though it were obvious. “The Orphan will appear to take the dead guy and my powers. So, I will be a normal Whitelighter-Witch-Avatar. Then… I will return to the future, untied once again.”<br> “Good!” Kyle said in relief. “I thought both of you will die.”<br> Both son and father orbed home. It seemed Daniel was happy when he spent time with his mother and father. The only problem was this: He changed so much in the past, it affected the future. Why didn’t he gain new memories? Daniel was conflicted. He knew that this would happen.
The Elders read the prophecy again. It was true. The boy said every word correctly. Except, he left out one major factor… There are deaths… involved…<br>
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Post by Master of Demon Slayer on Mar 29, 2005 1:06:29 GMT -5
Daniel has a unique ability. Very unique.
Daniel went to heaven and stole Celestial Peaches, and Gobbled down ten thousand Heavenly Pearls. Each Peach can give a person 5000 years of life. Each pearl contains 1,000,000 years. By eating child's fruit, he gain another 10,000 year. Of course for immortals, it would be regular fruit. Daniel can't be killed unless it is by another Guardian.
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Post by Master of Demon Slayer on Mar 29, 2005 1:39:40 GMT -5
After I am done with this, I will do a short Kung Fu Hustle spoof. Kyle's geeky son thinks he is the worst Whitelighter-With around. Even his cousins find him a burden when they go on a demon hunt. The geeky son will soon show them that looks are not what they seem! He will meet a Landlord and his wife who know lethal techniques.
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