sweet8
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Post by sweet8 on Jul 1, 2006 12:20:12 GMT -5
*Chloe smiled, enjoying Dante's pain and misery. He looked up, at her and glared. As she was about to shoot fire(out of her hands) once more; he conjured and threw the biggest fireball, you have ever seen...at Chloe. She gasped. She was almost frozen, in fear. All that she could possibly do was: throw up her hands and stop the fireball, in mid-air. *"Bringer of pain and death, may you burn in hell. Go now; as you take your last breath!" Chloe chanted, out loud. He yelled, as he burst into flames and became ashes. Chloe smiled, as she looked down...upon the others. They all smiled back, at her. By the look in her eyes; Nick knew what she was going to do. She seemed, not able to hold the fireball any longer.
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truelycharmedfan
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Post by truelycharmedfan on Jul 2, 2006 11:53:43 GMT -5
this is gdddddddddddddd well done whn i cn bless again ill bless u 4 ur talent
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sweet8
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Post by sweet8 on Jul 5, 2006 10:56:17 GMT -5
That's good to hear; truelycharmedfan. Here's the last part:
*"Chloe; don't do it." he said. Even though she was about 5 feet, above him~she could still hear what he was saying. "It's my time, Nick." she replied, as tears began to form in her eyes. She slowly brought her hands~to her sides. The fireball hit her, with massive force. She flew into the nearest wall and started...to fall. Nick did catch her, but ended up~falling to his knees. *Tears were flowing. "Chloe, no. Come back to me." he answered, as he stroked Chloe's cheek. Her eyes, fluttered open. Piper then, tapped Leo~on the shoulder. "Don't just stand there, heal her." she said. As Leo took a step forward, Chloe held up her hand and responded: "Don't bother." Piper's eyes widened. *"Why?" Paige asked. "Chloe; we are not just gonna sit back and watch you die." Cole added, trying to fight back tears. "I did all, that I wanted to do. I got to meet; the infamous Charmed Ones." Chloe answered. Phoebe smiled. "I love you all, very much. I will be with you: always and in spirit." she whispered, as she brushed her hand~against Nick's cheek. *Her eyes closed and as she took her last breath; her hand fell~ from Nick's face to concrete. Everyone just, couldn't hold it in any longer. They all, began to cry. Just like Chloe's premonition. The next day; they gave Chloe~an unforgettable funeral. They only knew her~for a short time and yet...she touched their hearts, just the same. Even Cole's. Afterward; they thought it would be a great idea, to bury her...in a special place. *A place where they visit her~anytime they wanted. Where she won't be alone; next to another person who holds a special place, in their hearts. Next to.....Prue.
~(*The End*)~
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truelycharmedfan
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Post by truelycharmedfan on Jul 5, 2006 12:24:13 GMT -5
aww that was sooooooo gd well done u ganna do another???
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Post by Clare on Oct 14, 2006 14:09:56 GMT -5
Sorry it took me like 3 months to reply but omg i just re-read the whole fanfic and it is so awesome! and its a great twist at the end loved it so much! gonna bless you now
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