Post by thekiwicharmed on Jan 5, 2006 4:17:25 GMT -5
So I was going through all of my school stuff. Old speeches, old reports (which arent flattering) and by god I found this story I spent hours and hours on writing when I was 12 and in my last year of primary school. (this is while season 3 was airing).
The haunted House
In a giant masion high up on a hiltip, very far away lives a ghost. The ghost had lived in the old, dusty, ghastly place for centuries. The house was black on the outside and there were gargoyle statues on either end of the house on an altar. Inside the house lay mouldy and crusty paint all over the floor. The air was dreadful you could hardly breathe. There was a kitchen with a broken table, chairs and tons of long, thick, sharp knives and a painting of "Sir Von Helm". The ghost that lives there.
The picture of a man that has short, black hair, an eye patch on his left eye and a scar from his right eye down to his hairy chin. The stairs were old and very dusty. They looked like they hadn't been used in hundreds of years. Some stairs were broken. At the end of the stairway is a door with a photo of a little girl and a man with short black hair. It was said on a full moon at midnight the girl lay dead on the floor inside the old photo.
On the night of a full moon three witches decided to unlock the mystery. The witches were good not evil ones. The first one had long black hair and wore jeans. She is about twenty eight. The second had long brown hair and a skinny face. She is twenty six. The youngest was very sexy. She had long blonde hair and she is twenty four.
It was eleven fourty five and the sisters crept up the stairs. The ghost heard them and he was mad. He slithered into the kitchen and took out one of the knives. He crept silently up to the top of the stairs. "Ragaah" it shouted, "Take this!" then threw the knife at them.
"Whooo!" screamed one of the witches as the knife just missed her. The knife soared and gave a bang as it hit the nearby wall. The knife moved on it's own and pointed at the blonde. The witch was terrified and ducked. The knife turned back and meant to hit them when vooom, the brown haired witch froze the knife at that moment. The ghost was boiling with rage. The witches noticed him. "Take this!" he screamed and with the pointing of their fingers they controlled the knife. It soared through the air and hit the ghost. "Ghosts can't die!" he said.
"Oh yes they can!" Screamed the blonde as she started chanting:
Good or evil
Demonic or mortal
Alive or dead
Or inbetween
Kill this evil that is mean
The power of three
Using this spell
Drive this evil
Back to hell!
The ghost screamed and vanished. It was almost twelve midnight and when it was the photo flashed! "Uh what is it doing?" screamed one of the witches. A ray of light came out "AHHH" The witches disappeared into the Photo. There in their place, standing on the floor of the house was a man with short black hair, an eye patch and a little girl lying dead on the floor.
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Okay I got no idea what the point of the story was, and I had not seen any of season 1 or 2 prior to writing this so I didn't see the episode where Prue got stuck in the painting. That idea was original!
Discuss, lol!
The haunted House
In a giant masion high up on a hiltip, very far away lives a ghost. The ghost had lived in the old, dusty, ghastly place for centuries. The house was black on the outside and there were gargoyle statues on either end of the house on an altar. Inside the house lay mouldy and crusty paint all over the floor. The air was dreadful you could hardly breathe. There was a kitchen with a broken table, chairs and tons of long, thick, sharp knives and a painting of "Sir Von Helm". The ghost that lives there.
The picture of a man that has short, black hair, an eye patch on his left eye and a scar from his right eye down to his hairy chin. The stairs were old and very dusty. They looked like they hadn't been used in hundreds of years. Some stairs were broken. At the end of the stairway is a door with a photo of a little girl and a man with short black hair. It was said on a full moon at midnight the girl lay dead on the floor inside the old photo.
On the night of a full moon three witches decided to unlock the mystery. The witches were good not evil ones. The first one had long black hair and wore jeans. She is about twenty eight. The second had long brown hair and a skinny face. She is twenty six. The youngest was very sexy. She had long blonde hair and she is twenty four.
It was eleven fourty five and the sisters crept up the stairs. The ghost heard them and he was mad. He slithered into the kitchen and took out one of the knives. He crept silently up to the top of the stairs. "Ragaah" it shouted, "Take this!" then threw the knife at them.
"Whooo!" screamed one of the witches as the knife just missed her. The knife soared and gave a bang as it hit the nearby wall. The knife moved on it's own and pointed at the blonde. The witch was terrified and ducked. The knife turned back and meant to hit them when vooom, the brown haired witch froze the knife at that moment. The ghost was boiling with rage. The witches noticed him. "Take this!" he screamed and with the pointing of their fingers they controlled the knife. It soared through the air and hit the ghost. "Ghosts can't die!" he said.
"Oh yes they can!" Screamed the blonde as she started chanting:
Good or evil
Demonic or mortal
Alive or dead
Or inbetween
Kill this evil that is mean
The power of three
Using this spell
Drive this evil
Back to hell!
The ghost screamed and vanished. It was almost twelve midnight and when it was the photo flashed! "Uh what is it doing?" screamed one of the witches. A ray of light came out "AHHH" The witches disappeared into the Photo. There in their place, standing on the floor of the house was a man with short black hair, an eye patch and a little girl lying dead on the floor.
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Okay I got no idea what the point of the story was, and I had not seen any of season 1 or 2 prior to writing this so I didn't see the episode where Prue got stuck in the painting. That idea was original!
Discuss, lol!
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