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Post by charmedforevr24 on Jan 6, 2006 11:11:43 GMT -5
Hey First of off let me tell you that i didn't write this story. I found my friend did, i told him to put it on here but he wouldn't. I convinced him it was a good story, so he gave me his permission to post it. This story is about prue returning. I won't spoil it for u so u just have to read it and find out.
Prue Comes Home
Piper Halliwell comes up to a door and opens it, she walks in side and sits down on the bed. She looks beside her bed and sees a picture of Piper,Phoebe, and Prue sitting down on a bench in the park. Piper looked at the photo, this was taken 5 months before Prue was killed. Piper missed prue so much, she didn't know if she could get on with out her. Piper did get on with out her though, the same day she died she meet paige and the power of 3 was reborn. Piper did love paige don't get me wrong but she still did miss prue. Piper looked up and saw the beautiful day, piper couldn't just sit here and moan. Piper gets up and walks out, she pauses and looks at the photo again. She slowly walks out and closes the door behind her.
A demon shimmers in to a sematary, he walks up to a grave and stops. A nother demon comes in and walks up toward the other demon,"we are ready..aren't we?" the demon asked the other. the other demon nodded and dropped a potion at the grave," Witch of charmed born, we call u now from hell. Return from the dead!" the ground shakes and both a body and a spirit appear."Who are u?" Prue's spirit askes. "OH...Your master of course." he tells her. He reaches in his pocket and grabs a potion. he drops is at the feet of the spirit, the spirit glows and goes in to the body. He takes a glowing ball and puts it in her. Her eyes turn red and she bows," Yes, master." she saids. the demon turns to the other and saids excelent. "come with me...We are going to revenge your death" he told her. the demon grabed her hand and shimmered out.
How do u like it so far? Please review if u want my friend to post more.
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Post by prue on Jan 6, 2006 13:01:34 GMT -5
Sounds quite interesting.... did your friend write anymore? if so, please do post it! and tell him/her that this is good!
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Post by whiteworlock258 on Jan 6, 2006 14:27:40 GMT -5
Yeah, my friend wrote some more, but he is editing it right now. I will either post the rest of it tonight or on Mon. He thanks u for the review!
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Post by prue on Jan 7, 2006 20:03:17 GMT -5
you are welcome!
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Post by charmedforevr24 on Jan 9, 2006 11:04:37 GMT -5
ok, my friend has finished editing it. Here's Prue comes home...Part2!
Phoebe gets up from her chair, she goes to the island pores herself some coffee and sits back down. Phoebe slowly drinks her coffee as she stars out the window, Prue and Phoebe had a fight here once. Prue was 11 and Phoebe was 6, Prue thought she took her bear but phoebe didn't. They fought hours on it, Prue walked off and didn't speak to phoebe for a couple of days. 3 Days later Prue found it and told phoebe sorry for it. Phoebe smiled at the remeberence of prue telling her sorry and then playing out side a min later. Phoebe turned around as foot steps sounded behind her, Piper walks in to the room and sits next to her. Phoebe turns to piper, "Are u doing ok?" she asked. Piper shook her head and looked at phoebe. Phoebe put her hands on pipers and gave her a loving look, Phoebe knew what was wrong before she even asked.It has been 3 1/2 years today since prue was killed, Both Phoebe and piper missed her very much. Phoebe looking at Piper tells her it's ok and if she needs anyone to talk to then she is here for her. Piper smiles and nodds at Phoebe,"Thanks, Pheebs." Piper replies. Paige comes through the door and sees her sisters sitting down, "Hey, what's up?" She asks them. Piper takes her hands from under phoebe gets up and tells her nothing."I have to go to P3, i will see u guys later." she tells them as she leaves the kitchen. Phoebe gets up to and puts her cup in the sink. "I'm sorry to but i am late...." Phoebe tells her. Paige gives her a look and asks her what she is late for. Phoebe tells her bye and leaves before she can answer. Paige stands there with a worred face, wondering what she missed.
Phoebe is near a grave, she lays on her knees and drops a flower on the ground infront of it. "I miss u prue." Phoebe wispers, footsteps sound behind her as phoebe glances behind her. Phoebe sees prue standing there, she stands up then backs up. "Pr..ue?" she saids shocked. "Yes, it's me little sister." Prue saids." Why...How...?" Phoebe asks. Prue walks closer and smiles. "You'll find out sooner or later...Sis." Prue tells her. Prue waves her hand at phoebe and she flies backward. "You were always the weakest sister." Prue saids as she walks closer. phoebe craws back toward the wall, "I will hert u." phoebe tells her waringly, "You can't...U wouldn't." Prue tells her as she stops right in front of her. Prue reaches her hand out and a fire ball appears. "Bye, Pheebs". she told her. Phoebe squinted her eyes then said a spell. "Magic forces black and white, take this being a way from my site." phoebe saids, a tornado forms around prue then she dissapears. Phoebe for a couple of minuets sat there. " That must of been a weird dream, she wasn't really here." Phoebe gets up and walks to Prues grave. She sees a bracelet, phoebe bends down and picks it up. the bracelet saids "Prue" On it. This was the necklace prue got on her 15 birthday, she was barred with it. It was prue after all, phoebe looks around. " I have to go...she might come back." phoebe thinks as she turns and leaves, as phoebe leaves prue shimmers in. She looks near her grave, she sees nothing. Prue gives a mean look then shimmers out.
There it is Part 2. HOpe u guys like it, my friend has spent hours and days working on this one peace. Please if u want me/my friend to continue post reviews.
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Post by prue on Jan 9, 2006 20:05:21 GMT -5
Please tell your friend to keep going! This is pretty good.
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Post by billiesnumber1fan on Jan 10, 2006 17:30:42 GMT -5
Thanks, Prue! (LOL)
Hey guys, I just wanted to tell u that i am the one who wrote this story! It took me a while to join this group but i am here. I have made the next part of this story, here it is.
Prue comes Home....Part 3
Phoebe ran in to the manor, she slammed the door and walked toward the stairs. She looked around and didn't see anyone, "Piper?!" Phoebe screamed. Piper came down the stairs with her hands up slightly, "What?! Where's the demon?" Piper asked as she looked around the house. Phoebe walked piper's direction then stoped."what's the matter pheebs...u look like u have seen a gost." Piper asks. Phoebe looks at piper then gives her the bracelet that she found. Piper takes it and looks at it," Pheebs.... where did u get that?" piper askes. "Well today i went to Prue's grave, i sat there remembering her. I herd a person walk and stop behind me. I looked around and prue was standing there, She tossed me across the room. I backed up but prue came closer to me. She formed a energy ball and was about to vanquish me but i said a spell and she vanished." Phoebe told her. Piper closed her eyes, a tear ran down her face as she opened them and looked at her sister. "Your...Lying....She didn't come back. You are just messing with me, she didn't come back." Piper was telling Phoebe as she started to cry more. "Piper....Why would i lie about this?" she asked. Piper shook her head and replied to get a rise out of her. Phoebe tells her she wouldn't do that. "You should think next time before u mess with some one." Piper yells at her as she storms up the stairs. Phoebe watches her go up the stairs, "she wasn't lying....she wasn't." The front door slams open as prue walks in. "hello... Pheebs." she saids as she smiles. Prue waves her hand and Phoebe goes flying. Piper hears the noise and runs back down the stairs. she stops half way down the stairs and sees phoebe on the ground and prue standing above her. "Bye...Pheebs." she saids as she forms a energy ball. Piper freezes it before it leaves her hand. Piper runs down the stairs and crosses the room toward phoebe. Piper helps her up and they move toward the stairs. "you were right!?" Piper asks her shocked. "What are we going to do?" piper askes. "I don't know but we have to do something before she unfreezes." Phoebe replies. A beat later prue comes un frozen and knocks piper and phoebe across the room. Prue stands in the middle of both of them and smiles. " Bye, girls." She saids as she forms 2 energy balls, she tosses them toward the sistes. The energy balls glow and fly back toward prue. Prue waves her hand and the energy balls fly behind her. Prue looks around as Paige comes down the stairs. "Who are u.. witch?" Prue asks. Paige is shocked to see prue standing there. "Prue?!" she asks. "Oh....This must be Paige." Prue saids. She waves her arms and paige flies backward. "I'm going to kill u first." Prue told her as she moved her way. Phoebe watched as she formed a energy ball. Phoebe grabed piper's hand and chanted: Majic forces black and white, Take this demon out of our sight." As phoebe finishes the spell a tornado forms around prue. A beat later she dissapers. Phoebe helps piper up, phoebe goes over to paige and helps her to. "Was that really...Prue?" Paige asks. Phoebe nodds and tells her yes. Piper tells them that they need to go to the bos and find out a way to save Prue. they all head up the stairs.
MORE TO COME EITHER LATER TONIGHT OR TOMMORROW!
PLEASE REPLY IF U WANT ME TO CONTUNE.
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Post by bickharm25 on Jan 11, 2006 12:19:14 GMT -5
Please cont. I like this story!
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Post by *Prueforever* on Jan 12, 2006 14:25:27 GMT -5
Of course we want u to continue this story is amazing your really talented.
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Post by prue on Jan 18, 2006 19:18:05 GMT -5
liking it! keep it coming!
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Post by billiesnumber1fan on Jan 21, 2006 1:08:32 GMT -5
Sorry to keep u wating, I have been busy with school and work and i have written/found some more stories. Thanks, goes out to prueforever, prue, and bickharmed25 for those wonderful reviews. This is the next part of the story! Hope u Enjoy!
Prue Comes Home Part 4
The sisters walk into the attic and head toward the bos, piper opens the book and tries to look through it. Paige sits down in the chair as phoebe moves beside Piper. Piper closes the book and saids aloud that she doesn't even know what she is looking for. Piper is holding Prue's bracelet, paige notices it and asks what it is. Phoebe stummers and tells her it once belonged to prue. Paige goes over to Piper and asks if she can see it. Piper hands her the bracelet and paige holds it in her hands. Paige stars at the bracelet, she couldn't beleve that this was the only thing they had to keep memories of prue. Paige handed it to phoebe, as phoebe tuched it she was pulled into a priminition. It was a grave yard, 2 demons shimmer in and stand at the foot of a grave. One demon saids a spell, a body and a gost appears. The demon saids another spell and the sole and body emerge. The other demon then pulls out a dark ball and tosses it into the body, Prue's eyes turn red and she bows. Prue grabs the demons hands and they all shimmer out. As she is pulled out of the priminition she glances at Prue's bracelet. Piper asks what she saw, Phoebe tells her and piper's eyes widen. Piper goes over to the book and starts to look, Phoebe asks what she is looking for. Piper tells her that maybe if they find the demons from the priminition they can vanquish them and prue will return back to normal. Phoebe adds that sometimes they think that but it doesn't happen that way. Piper replies that if they was to happen phoebe can make a spell to take it out, Phoebe nods and sits down and starts writing a spell. The books pages started to turn and a beat later stoped. Piper tells them that they have found the demon, his name is voral. He can reserect only witches, even though he has the power to bring them back to live he cant control them. Piper saids aloud. Paige saids then it should be a easy vanquish, she gets up and walks over to the bos. She writes the ingredence down and then goes over to the caldrin and starts to make the potion. Phoebe suddenly flies backward, prue appears on top of her. She reaches down and grabs her. Prue looks at paige and piper and tants them with catch us if u can. Prue smiles and shimmers out. Paige looks over toward piper with shock in her face. Piper stars at the place where they both stood. Piper looks over to paige, she tells her that she will write the spell and she needs to continue with the potion. Piper adds phoebe doesn't have a lot of time.
Prue shimmers in with phoebe, she tosses her across the room, Prue slowly walks toward her. she tells phoebe that it is her falt that she died, if she wasn't with her evil boyfriend that she could have saved her. She contunes to walk toward her and saids that she is going to repay the favor. Prue forms a energy Ball and tosses it at phoebe, a light appears and phoebe dissapears. Prue looks and sees nobody, a voice sounds behind her. Prue turns around and sees her sisters standing there. Prue smiles and tells them that now she will revenge her death and kill her sisters in the process. She forms a energy ball and tosses it toward them, paige uses her power and orbs it back. Prue gets angry and starts to fire more energy balls. Paige and Piper both use there powers to stop them. Prue gets angrer and starts to chant: Evil forces hear my plea, send there soles..... but before she could finish paige pulled out a potion and trough it toward Prue. Prue gets nocked backward, paige tells piper to say the spell. That it migh be there only chance, piper takes out a peace of paper and starts to say the spell. Evil in this charmed one be, send it out and let it be no more. Prue screamed as a orb glowed and came out of her. It rises toward the sky and explodes, Prue falls on the ground. Piper rushes over toward her sister and helps her up. Prue looks at her sisters, She starts to tell her sorry but paige introubsts her and tells her that they demons that did this to her are still out there. Prue tells her sisters that she knows where the demons would be, as she join her sisters in a circle. Paige looks at prue for a couple of min then they orb out.
Voral and the other demon are standing in a cematory, the other demon asks where prue is. Voral tells him that she is dealing with her sisters, once she kills them he will kill her.Once they are all out of the way he will rule the underworld. The other demon tells him that he hops that helps. Voral starts to reply but is suddenly of fire, he screams as he is vanquished. The other demon looks around and sees the sisters standing there. He tries to shimmer out but piper freezes him. She walks over to him and tells him that any demon who messes with There family will die. Piper holds her hands up and blows him up, as he is vanquished Prue's body and soul seperate. Piper walks over toward prues soul, prue tells them that she has to return. She turns to phoebe and tells her that she doesn't blame her for her death, she faces piper and tells her that she will get on with her life with out her. Finally she turns to paige and smiles, Prue tells paige that she is glad she finally got to meet her. Paige smiles back at her, prue looks at her sisters then looks toward the sky. Her spirit glows and then dissapers. Piper wispers "by prue" as the light dissapears. Piper walks over toward her sisters, she saids lets go home. Paige nods then orbs out.
Piper is sitting down on the couch looking at a photo of prue. Paige walks in and sits next to her, piper glances over as she sits down. Piper turns toward her and tells her sorry, she should of told her about today. Paige tells her that's ok but next time just tell her, she can handle it. Piper smiles and gets up, Paige asks where is she going. Piper tells her to pay respect. Piper grabs her hand and pulls her off the couch.
The sisters are standing over a grave, phoebe sits down and looks at the grave. She pulls out a white flower and lays it down. A tear runs down her face, paige and piper put hands on her shoulder. We look up to see the grave is prue's grave, we cam up more and see it at over view. leaves move over, a dove comes from the sky and flyes over the tomb.
There it is, Finished!!!!! Hope u like it. Watch out for my season/series finale, coming soon! Thanks
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Post by CharmBffy on Jan 30, 2006 14:57:57 GMT -5
that is really great
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Post by truelycharmedfan on Feb 6, 2006 16:01:39 GMT -5
dat was exellant
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Post by *Prueforever* on Mar 20, 2006 16:41:51 GMT -5
That was amazing!!!
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Post by darkocean23 on Mar 22, 2006 14:55:20 GMT -5
That was really great, your friend needs to write more.
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