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Post by anicentwhiteliter on Feb 4, 2006 21:00:07 GMT -5
Hello, this is the first fan fic that i have put on a website. Hope u enjoy and reply *Summery- This takes place durning season 8, Billie has found her sister and left the manor. A couple of faces will appear in the story that we haven't seen for a while. A window shuts in the appartment next store, a baby wailes out as though the window was next to him. A girl,katie, walks up the stairs as the sun bounces off of her and on to the wall. She heads down the Hallway that is covered in spider webs and rodents, she stops and faces a door that is labled 211. She slowly opens the door and enters, a man, shad, stands in the middle of the room and glars out the window. She closes the door and looks at the man, she makes a fake cough as she stands there. Shad contunes to stand there and acts like he didn't hear anything. She walks toward him slowly as though not wanting to wake a sleeping baby. As she walks closer shad tells her that she is late, katie stops then stumbles and tells him that she is sorry but she had to go home and get it. Shad replies that he told her to be here on time. Shad turns around and tells her they have to stop these people before they hurt any more witches. katie nods and asks him what do they do now. shad walks closer to her and tells her that she needs to meet him near the department store then she can use it to stop them. Katie replies how will he get her there, he tells her to tap into there desire. . He tells her thanks for helping and tells her she needs to go and get ready, she smiles at him then turns and leaves. He watches her leave then turns and looks out the window. A voice comes from the shadows, it asks shad if he is sure that his plan will work. Shad conforms that and tells her he will use the potion to stop them once in for all. the voice tells him that it better then it disspears, shad turns around and shimmers out. Piper gets out of her car and walks toward a building, piper moves her hair out of her face as she walks beside the buiding into the alley way. Se walks in a little bit then stops and looks around. Shad emerges from the shadows and heads toward piper. He asks her if she is ready for who is killing those witches, piper replies yes and walks closer. Shad smiles and tells her that he did it, he shoots a fireball at her but piper gesters and it blows up. He tosses another one but again piper blows it up, Piper tells him enough games. Shad smiles and looks behind him, katie emerges from the side walk and slowly walks behind piper. he tells her he is not even done playing, piper smirks and tells him he is now. Piper gesters and right before he explodes katie drops the potion, a ripple appears and time is reset. Time stops right at when piper exploded the 2nd fireball, Shad smiles and looks around. His plan was coming together, time was reset. He waves his hand and piper goes flying backward, he walks closer and forms a fire ball. He smiles and tells her she will get killed this time, Piper gives him a look and asks him what he means. Shad tells her she will never know, he forms a fire ball and tosses it toward her. As he does he is flown side ways. He watches his fireball as it turns around and flies toward him, it barly misses him as he looks toward piper. Piper doesn't have that power, someone must be helping her, he looks around and sees noone. he glances at piper then shimmers out. Piper gets up and dust her self off, she looks around for just a hint of some one or something that could of helped her. Piper glances around and sees nothing, she turns around and leaves. Orbs materlize as she leaves to form Chris. He watches as piper turns the corner out of sight, all he can say is "That was close" before he orbs out Hope You enjoy!!! Please reply with comments/suggestions. thanks! ;D
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Post by hollypop on Feb 5, 2006 21:42:47 GMT -5
very interesting and very detailed... I'd love to find out what happens next!
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Post by anicentwhiteliter on Feb 7, 2006 10:27:01 GMT -5
thanks, for the review! To tell u the trouth i have written more but i am editing it as we speak. I will hopefully up date either this week or this weekend!
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Post by anicentwhiteliter on Feb 8, 2006 11:39:57 GMT -5
ok, here is another part of the story. Hope You enjoy!
Piper walks into the Manor, she takes off her coat and hangs it. She puts her keys in the holder then shoutes for her sisters, Piper walked forward only to almost run into Phoebe who was coming from the living room. Phoebe looks at piper and asks what is wrong, Piper informs her on the demon. Piper contunes to tell her that when she went to go vanquish him she got a weird feeling like she did it already. Phoebe asks how that is possible and Piper replies she really doesn't know but she is going to find out. Piper walks past her sister and walks up the stairs toward the attic. Phoebe watches her go up stairs and starts to worry, Shad and katie shimmer in behind phoebe. Katie walks and hides behind a wall as shad stands behind her, He shoots a fireball beside her. The fireball hits the ground and sends phoebe flying, Poebe moves and looks up to see him standing there. He tells her hello and shoots another fireball toward her, Phoebe levatates and moves just in time for the fireball to go behind her and hit the wall. Phoebe stands there in stance ready for anything, Phoebe sees knife on the table. Phoebe reaches for them and tosses them at him. Katie seeing it drops the potion, the same ripple comes and time was reset. Phoebe is on the ground again just like before she saved herself. Shad grinns and moves closer, he tells phoebe she wan't lucky this time. He waves his hands and Phoebe goes flying out the window. Shad walks toward her and stares at her body. Piper hearing the blast ran down stairs and sees the demon over Phoebe, He turns and smiles at piper. He shoots a fireball at her then shimmers out. Piper gesters and it explodes, she runs down and crosses over toward her body. Piper weaps as she sits near her sister, she moans for phoebe to not give up. Orbs come beside piper, piper looks up and sees chris standing there. He smiles and starts to heal Phoebe, piper stares at him and can only say Chris
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Post by amorgan14 on Feb 10, 2006 16:24:58 GMT -5
im new here and im loving it
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Post by hollypop on Feb 11, 2006 19:38:53 GMT -5
You know, with the way that you're writing this it reminds me off sitting by the campfire and having a story told to me - I really like your style. The story is pretty good too *hints for another update soon*
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Post by anicentwhiteliter on Feb 14, 2006 0:47:55 GMT -5
ok, thanks for the reviews! Time Troubles contines now....
Katie peeks around the courner and sees a man and piper standing by phoebe, she knows if she is cought she will be destroyed. She slintely and quickly runs to the kitchen and heads out the door. She walks down the drive way and calls out for shad, nothing happens and she tries again. Shad shimmers in and grabs her, they shimmer out just as paige's car enters the drive way. Paige getts out and closes her door, she looks and sees Piper and a man over another body. She runs toward them, as she getts closer she id's the man as Chris. Paige stands there shocked to see him again and looks toward piper. Piper looks in her eyes and puts a finger toward her lips. Chris removes his hand and and helps Phoebe up, He leads her in the living room and helps her in a chair. Paige starts to speak but phoebe cuts her off, she looks at chris and asks what is on everybodys mind. She asks him what he is doing there. Chris looks at his Aunts then his mother, he sits down and tells them that the future was changing. Phoebe replies why that is such a bad thing, Chris turns toward her and tells her that it's not but it is changing in a bad way. Piper asks what does he mean, chris tells her that it is like one min a person dies then something happens and there a live again. He continues to tell them that Wyatt and I tracked it back toward this time and today is when it all begain. Paige asks if he thinks that the demon had a part of it, he repies he doesn't really know. Piper gets up and tells them that she is going to find out. she saids as she leaves the room, phoebe, paige and chris look at each other then follow.
Katie and Shad shimmer in, he tosses her down and then tells her that she almost exposed them. Katie replies that she got out before the noticed, shad tells her that is not the point. Katie asks if he knows who the guy was, shad walks toward her and asks what man. Katie tells him that once he left a man came and started to help the witch. Shad forms a energy ball and tosses it behind him, he screams that he was so close to killing them and then he came. Katie asks if they can do anything about the man, shad replies that only one thing can kill him. He smiles and then snaps his fingers, a darklighter shimmers in and looks at him. He demands to know why he was brought here, shad tells him to kill a white liter. He smiles and tells him that he is ready. Katie gives a wird look and asks shad what is a whiteliter, he replies that it is a garden for evil witches. the darklighter hearing this walks closer and starts to say that it is not correct but shad stops him. Shad tells her to make some more of the potion they are going to need it. Katie turns around and starts to make some, shad turns himself and the darklighter around and asks him if he is out of his mind. the darklighter replies why she he lying to her, shad tells him that she has a potion to rewind time. He continues to tell him that he is using her to kill the charmed ones, the darklighter tells him that it is suside to go against them. Shad tells him that he has almost killed 2 of the sisters with the help of her, and all he needs is his help and he could kill all of them. The darklighter thinks and tells him ok, they both go over toward katie as she bottles the potion. Shad asks if it is done and she replies yes, he goes over toward her and reples good. He takes her hand and they all shimmer out.
The sisters and chris walk in to the attic, piper heads straight for the book and flipes through it. As she does chris stands near her as phoebe sits on the couch and paige goes over toward the caldren. Piper looks though and sees nothing, she slams the book and screams. Chris tells her that it is his turn and he switches places with piper and starts to look through the book, as he does a arrow comes out of the air and goes through his chest. Chris falls on the floor as piper runs toward him, a nother arrow comes and hits paige. Phoebe turns around just in time to catch paige before she hit the ground. Shad shimers in and as he does he tosses katie on to the ground. Katie looks up at him but all he can do is mouth to be quite, he waves his hand and paige goes flying. He waves it again and chris goes flying, Piper looks up at him with anger in her face. SHe gets ready to gester but before she can he waves his hand and phoebe goes flying out the window. Piper watches as in slow motion she sees phoebe's body fly out the window and out of sight. Piper gesters but it misses, he smiles and shimmers out. Piper stands there numbed, she thinks to her self that couldn't of just happened. She runs over toward paige and holds her in her arms, tears run down pipers face as she holds her youngest sister. Paige opens her eyes and whispers piper, piper weaps and begs her to hold on. Paige tells her goodbye then closes her eyes and becomes limp, piper holds paige's body close then closes her eyes. Piper sits there and then quickly remembers phoebe, she lets go of paige's body and runs over toward the window. Piper looks down and sees phoebe's body with blood on her face and body. Piper moves from the window and stands there, she can't jut beleve that she just lost her 2 sisters. she gives a look then heads over toward the caldren, she looks at paige and then starts to make a potion.
HOPE YOU ENJOYED IT!!! PLEASE REPLY IF YOU WANT MORE!
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