Post by psychicwitch on Mar 20, 2006 1:38:35 GMT -5
This is my first fan fic, please be gentle but still review. It would still be appreachated.
{Market}
Coop is standing on the sidewalk looking out on to the shoppers, he sees a particular couple and watches them as they join hands and walks down the road. as coop he was never aloud to fall in love, it was and is forbidden. He continues to look out on them,even though he has the power to help people find love he couldn't find it himself. He pulls himself together, he wasn't there to find love. He was there to help phoebe not give up on love, with the rememberance of what he came here to do he takes one more look at the market place and walks off.
{Underworld}
A hooded demon walks out of the shadow and walks toward a table that has a crystal ball on it. He waves his hand and the crystal ball glows, a young woman who has streeks of grey in her hair appears on the ball. He smiles then turns and walks over to a table, he grabs some viles and a knife and turns back over toward the crystal. He sees her turn and walk up the steps and into a building. He then crosses back over toward the crystal and swipes his hand over it again, clearing the image. He turns then fires out.
{Office Building}
The girl we saw from the crystal, Sami, enters the office with a breafcase in her hand. She crosses over toward her desk and puts her breafcase on the floor and sits in her chair. She starts to do paperwork, but as soon as she tries a voice comes out of no were. Sami looks up and sees a demon standing before her, she gets up quickly and sticks her palm out. she asks him what he wants and he tells her, he wants the ring. she replies that he will never have it, he doesn't take that for a answer and tosses a fire ball toward her. Sami with her palm still out shoots a bolt of lighting toward him, it hits him and he goes flying back ward. He gets up and stars at her, he tells her that it is no use he will get it. He gives her a glare then fires out, knowing that she was luckly and barley escaped she gets up and runs out of the office.
Please review....Tell me if it sucked or not. thanks
{Market}
Coop is standing on the sidewalk looking out on to the shoppers, he sees a particular couple and watches them as they join hands and walks down the road. as coop he was never aloud to fall in love, it was and is forbidden. He continues to look out on them,even though he has the power to help people find love he couldn't find it himself. He pulls himself together, he wasn't there to find love. He was there to help phoebe not give up on love, with the rememberance of what he came here to do he takes one more look at the market place and walks off.
{Underworld}
A hooded demon walks out of the shadow and walks toward a table that has a crystal ball on it. He waves his hand and the crystal ball glows, a young woman who has streeks of grey in her hair appears on the ball. He smiles then turns and walks over to a table, he grabs some viles and a knife and turns back over toward the crystal. He sees her turn and walk up the steps and into a building. He then crosses back over toward the crystal and swipes his hand over it again, clearing the image. He turns then fires out.
{Office Building}
The girl we saw from the crystal, Sami, enters the office with a breafcase in her hand. She crosses over toward her desk and puts her breafcase on the floor and sits in her chair. She starts to do paperwork, but as soon as she tries a voice comes out of no were. Sami looks up and sees a demon standing before her, she gets up quickly and sticks her palm out. she asks him what he wants and he tells her, he wants the ring. she replies that he will never have it, he doesn't take that for a answer and tosses a fire ball toward her. Sami with her palm still out shoots a bolt of lighting toward him, it hits him and he goes flying back ward. He gets up and stars at her, he tells her that it is no use he will get it. He gives her a glare then fires out, knowing that she was luckly and barley escaped she gets up and runs out of the office.
Please review....Tell me if it sucked or not. thanks
