Post by Clare on Apr 8, 2006 10:06:51 GMT -5
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I just want to thank Soul of The Empath for giving me the inspiration to write this fanfic. It is my first ever fanfic so it wont be excellent but I will try to make it a good one!
Note: As I am english, if you don’t understand something I write then please ask me what I mean.
It might seem a little predictible to start but I will try to keep it exciting and new!
This episode takes place after 7.16 "The Seven Year Witch"
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THE NIGHTMARE THAT IS ETERNITY
FADE IN
TEASER
EXT. MANOR - STREET - NIGHT
Paige gets out of her car, shuts the door and walks up to the manor.
Cut to:
EXT. MANOR - NIGHT
The front door of the manor opens and we see Phoebe who is wearing all black.
Phoebe: Hey Paige, you're home early.
Paige (walking to front door): (confused) Am I? I thought I was late.
Paige looks at her watch and Phoebe walks away from the door into the sitting room. Paige follows.
Cut to:
INT. MANOR - SITTING ROOM - NIGHT
Paige (Looking around the room): So where's Piper?
Phoebe: Oh she's... around.
Paige: Oh, okay...
Phoebe looks at Paige and smiles.
Paige: What?
Phoebe: Nothing.
Paige: So where are the boys and Leo?
Phoebe: Oh... um... They're at Magic School...
Paige: Okay, bu...
There is a loud crash from the kitchen which startles Phoebe and Paige. They run to see what it was.
Cut to:
INT. MANOR - KITCHEN - NIGHT
Paige (Looking around kitchen): (Spooked) What was that?
Phoebe: I don't know. (shouting) Piper? Leo? (Back to Paige) Guess it wasn't them then.
Paige: (Confused) Guess not. Phoebe, what's wrong?
Phoebe: What do ya mean? I'm fine!
Paige: I don't think you are, you're all jumpy and I thought you said Leo was at Magic School?
Phoebe: I'm not jumpy and he is... (Changing subject) I'm just happy.
Paige just watches Phoebe for a second. A demon, wearing all black, shimmers in with his back to the sisters.
Paige: (Shouting) DEMON!
Phoebe: I can see.
Paige (Holding hand out): Knife!
Phoebe: No!
Phoebe pushes Paige to the floor.
Paige (Laid on floor): Ow! What the hell is wrong with you Phoebe?
The demon turns around and we see his face. Phoebe smiles.
Paige: Cole! But... how...
Phoebe then wraps her arms around him and kisses him.
Paige (Getting up of floor): Phoebe... What...
Piper and Leo orb in.
Paige (To Piper): I'm so glad you're here.
Piper: (Panicking) Why? What's happened?
Paige points towards Phoebe and Cole who are still kissing.
Piper: What? They are married!
Paige: (Confused) WHAT!
Leo: (Softly) Did you hit your head again Paige?
Paige: No! Leo!... (Softly) Piper...
Phoebe and Cole stop kissing and Cole uses his powers to shimmer Paige outside. Piper and Leo laugh.
Cut to:
EXT. MANOR - NIGHT
Paige lands on the ground with a thud.
Paige: What the hell just happened!
We then see a shot of Phoebe, Cole, Piper and Leo in the kitchen - all talking and laughing.
END OF TEASER - FADE OUT
OPENING CREDITS
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So there is the teaser i will have the 1st act up next weekend, hope you like what i have written so far.
Note: If you think I haven’t been watching the show or aren’t continuing the story correctly - I am - you just have to wait and see.
Please feel free to leave any comments!!
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I just want to thank Soul of The Empath for giving me the inspiration to write this fanfic. It is my first ever fanfic so it wont be excellent but I will try to make it a good one!
Note: As I am english, if you don’t understand something I write then please ask me what I mean.
It might seem a little predictible to start but I will try to keep it exciting and new!
This episode takes place after 7.16 "The Seven Year Witch"
----------------------------
THE NIGHTMARE THAT IS ETERNITY
FADE IN
TEASER
EXT. MANOR - STREET - NIGHT
Paige gets out of her car, shuts the door and walks up to the manor.
Cut to:
EXT. MANOR - NIGHT
The front door of the manor opens and we see Phoebe who is wearing all black.
Phoebe: Hey Paige, you're home early.
Paige (walking to front door): (confused) Am I? I thought I was late.
Paige looks at her watch and Phoebe walks away from the door into the sitting room. Paige follows.
Cut to:
INT. MANOR - SITTING ROOM - NIGHT
Paige (Looking around the room): So where's Piper?
Phoebe: Oh she's... around.
Paige: Oh, okay...
Phoebe looks at Paige and smiles.
Paige: What?
Phoebe: Nothing.
Paige: So where are the boys and Leo?
Phoebe: Oh... um... They're at Magic School...
Paige: Okay, bu...
There is a loud crash from the kitchen which startles Phoebe and Paige. They run to see what it was.
Cut to:
INT. MANOR - KITCHEN - NIGHT
Paige (Looking around kitchen): (Spooked) What was that?
Phoebe: I don't know. (shouting) Piper? Leo? (Back to Paige) Guess it wasn't them then.
Paige: (Confused) Guess not. Phoebe, what's wrong?
Phoebe: What do ya mean? I'm fine!
Paige: I don't think you are, you're all jumpy and I thought you said Leo was at Magic School?
Phoebe: I'm not jumpy and he is... (Changing subject) I'm just happy.
Paige just watches Phoebe for a second. A demon, wearing all black, shimmers in with his back to the sisters.
Paige: (Shouting) DEMON!
Phoebe: I can see.
Paige (Holding hand out): Knife!
Phoebe: No!
Phoebe pushes Paige to the floor.
Paige (Laid on floor): Ow! What the hell is wrong with you Phoebe?
The demon turns around and we see his face. Phoebe smiles.
Paige: Cole! But... how...
Phoebe then wraps her arms around him and kisses him.
Paige (Getting up of floor): Phoebe... What...
Piper and Leo orb in.
Paige (To Piper): I'm so glad you're here.
Piper: (Panicking) Why? What's happened?
Paige points towards Phoebe and Cole who are still kissing.
Piper: What? They are married!
Paige: (Confused) WHAT!
Leo: (Softly) Did you hit your head again Paige?
Paige: No! Leo!... (Softly) Piper...
Phoebe and Cole stop kissing and Cole uses his powers to shimmer Paige outside. Piper and Leo laugh.
Cut to:
EXT. MANOR - NIGHT
Paige lands on the ground with a thud.
Paige: What the hell just happened!
We then see a shot of Phoebe, Cole, Piper and Leo in the kitchen - all talking and laughing.
END OF TEASER - FADE OUT
OPENING CREDITS
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So there is the teaser i will have the 1st act up next weekend, hope you like what i have written so far.
Note: If you think I haven’t been watching the show or aren’t continuing the story correctly - I am - you just have to wait and see.
Please feel free to leave any comments!!
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