When a Loved One Returns

[Chelsea]

Everybody, this is my first fan fic, so forgive me if it well...suxs. I am just writing it as I go, so bare with me.
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Chapter 1Beep, beep beep. Phoebe Halliwell awoke with start from her alarm clock. She tucked her long brown hair behind her ears, and sat up. Why do I keep having these dreams thought Phoebe. She remembered glimpes of her dreams, she had been in bed with Coop, her cupid who was sent down to help her find true love. The elders thought they owed Phoebe since magic ruined her love life. Phoebe didn't want Coopo though, or did she? She shook the feeling off and got up to get her shower.
"Good morning Pheebs!!" Piper Halliwell, the eldest of the Charmed Ones, said. The Charmed Ones were the most powerful good witches there are, they had a duty. To help innocents in need. They had become charmed when Phoebe had discovered a book of witchcraft in their attic 8 years ago. The Book Of Shadows.
"Morining." Yawned Phoebe. Suddenly there was bright white lights in front of Piper, when the white lights dissapered there stood Paige Mathews, the youngest of the charmed ones. She was their half sister, Phoebe and Piper had met her after the death of their oldest sister Prue. They had never even known that she had existed.
"DEMON!" yelled Paige. "Duck! NOW! 54321!"
Piper and Phoebe ducked. When a demon suddenly shimmered into the kitchen holding an energy ball. Paige held her hand out toward the demon and suddenly yelled "energy ball!" The energy ball dissappeard in a swirl of bright white lights, and reappeard in Paige's hand, she threw it to the demon which yelled when flames circled him and swallowed him up. Piper and Phoebe stood back up. "What the heck was that?" Phoebe said still in shock about what happened so quickly.
"Piper. Do you know where Wyatt is?" Paige said suddenly.
"He's up in his room of course." Piper replied.
Suddenly Paige dissappeard in white lights and came back in two minutes.
"He's not any where in this house." Paige said seriously.
"What?" Piper said. "Wyatt! Come here." No answer not even a speck of white light.
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Hope you guys like it so far! I will be putting chapter 2 up soon!
Post me bunches of comments on it!

[charminggrl]

I like it it's pretty good and post some more soon i want to know what happend to Wyatt

[Chelsea]

Thank you guys for your comments!Time to write more!
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"WYATT!" screamed Piper once again.
"Pipe...."Paige had been trying to talk to her sister for the last couple minutes but she kept getting cut off by Piper.
"WYATT!" Piper screamed, her voice getting hoarse.
All three sisters were walking around the house, Paige knew it was pointless, but Piper insisted on looking for him.
"PIPER!" yelled Paige right before Piper was about to yell again.
"What!?" asked Piper, she was worried about her son, and Paige was acting like it was no big deal.
"This moring when I was in my room, a demon shimmered into my room, holding an energy ball. I was about to grab the knife I always keep in my bedside drawer when he said I wouldn't do that if I were you unless you don't want to see your precious baby again. So I orbed downstairs and you know what happened from there." Paige said finally glad she got a chance to talk.
"And you vanquished him!" Piper said. "When he knew where Wyatt was!"
"Nope." replied Paige.
Suddenly the same demon Paige 'vanquished' shimmered in front of the sisters.
"Lazerous demon."Paige said quickly.
"Where is my son?" Piper said picking up Chris out of his crib.
"I can't have the power of three as a threat for this plan." The lazerous demo replied in a gruff voice.
Piper put Chris back in his crib, and took a step forward.
"What do you mean?" asked Piper.
"This is what I mean." The demon replied.
Suddenly a sharp knife appeard in the demon's hand, and before Piper got a chance to back up, she felt the knife plunge into her stomach. She felt a sharp pain, and fell to the ground.
"PIPER!" screamed Paige and Phoebe at once, they knelt down by their sister. The demon just laughed as he shimmered out.
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Hope you all like it! Even though I know you all don't like that Piper got stabbed, but still! Leave me more comments!

[♥.·:*¨Kat¨*:·.♥]

Very good so far write more please

[charminggrl]

yes this is good continue soon

[Chelsea]

"Hurry!" cried Phoebe. Phoebe and Paige were carrying their older sister down the steps towards the living room.
"I'm going as fast as I can! " Paige replied, trying to walk faster. The girls got to the living room and layed Piper down on the sofa.
"Good-bye." whispered Piper.
"No, no! It's going to be okay sweetie! We will figure this out, you just hold on tight." Phoebe replied. Paige nodded in return.
Suddenly there was a knock at the door. Phoebe looked at Paige, and Paige looked at Phoebe.
"Demon?" asked Paige.
"Since when do demons use the front door?" replied Phoebe walking cautiously towards the door. Suddenly the front door burt open. Phoebe gasped, but stopped when she saw who it was. Daryll Morris. Daryll was their friend, he was a cop, but he new about the whole magical community stuff existing, the girls had told him after his partner Andy Tredeu was killed at their home by a demon, he had been trying to save Prue, but it had cost him his life.
"Daryll!" exclaimed Phoebe and Paige.
"Long time no see!" Paige said nervously.
"Yah, it has been a while, I had to come down here for some paperwork and everything, so I decided to stop by and see how you all were!" Daryll said.
Suddenly Paige, Phoebe, and Daryll heard a soft whimper coming from Piper. Paige orbed over to Piper, Piper had blood all over her, and her hands were shaking.
Phoebe and Daryll ran into the living room.
"PIPER!" Daryll exclaimed shocked, and saddened.
"Piper, come on, hang on now, don't give up, remember Leo's frozen, and Wyatt's kidnapped. You have to stay strong, so we can get them back." Paige said sitting down next to Piper.

[♥.·:*¨Kat¨*:·.♥]

really good work.

[hollypop]

another update would be great... this is pretty good

[charminggrl]

ya don't leave us hanging now

[vanillabliss]

lol yeah, it is cute but I have a siggestion. its all crammed togather. If you double space your lines, it will be easier to read

[sweet8]

*Nice! Please post some more.....

[Chelsea]

Thanks for your comments everyone!
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Suddenly there was a bright light and Leo appeared in front of Paige.

"Leo! How? Why?"stuttered Paige.

"Well, the angel of destiny told me there was an emergency at home, and she thought I

would be ready to come home, she said something about Billie killing Christy..." Leo replied

clearly confused.

"So, what's the emergency?" asked Leo.

Phoebe and Paige moved away, so Leo could see the couch.

"Piper!" Leo gasped.

"Daryll, maybe you should leave."Paige said, moving him towards the door.

"But, you have to get Piper to the hospital!"replied Daryll.

"No, we don't." Paige said orbing Daryll into his police car using her orbing telekinisis.

She heard the car pull out of the driveway and heard it go down the street.

"We have to get an elder down here." Leo said.

Suddenly there was bright white lights dancing in front of Leo, when they reappered, an old

man in a white robe with a gold line going down it stood there.

"We are unable to heal Piper." he said.

[xhalliwellx]

Very good i like the plot but maybe can you make it more into Piper like how she is it seems like some of them were not worried as if Paige's powers could heal her whenever but yeah i love it though cant wait for Chapter 4

[RP Muse]

This is good so far can't wait to read more

[Chelsea]

"What do you mean unable to heal Piper?" spat Phoebe anger coarsing through her body.
Dumb elders, they could never help with anything, and they are the so-called good doers in this world, yah right thought Phoebe.
"Why not?" asked Paige. "If you don't heal Piper and she dies, the power of three will be broken, and The Charmed One's will no longer exist."
"She's right." replied Leo.
Leo's trying to act brave thought Phoebe, but she could tell in his eyes he was worried.
"I'm sorry." replied the elder as he orbed away.
"Wyatt." whispered Phoebe.
"Huh?" asked Paige.
"If we get him back he can heal Piper!" Phoebe said.
"What do you mean? Isn't he here?" asked Leo.
"No, he was kidnapped, by a demon." replied Phoebe.
"What!?" Leo said in shock.
"She doesn't have that much time." Paige said looking at Piper. Piper was breathing shallower and shallower with every breath she took, there was no way they could find Wyatt fast enough to
heal Piper.
"Your right." replied Phoebe.
Paige and Phoebe looked at Piper to check on her, when they saw her chest wasn't moving.
"Piper?" Phoebe said. She suddenly felt very sick. No she thought. She can't be.....dead.

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Please leave me comments good or bad!

[*Prueforever*]

this is amazing plz write more loved the last chapter plz dont let Piper die!

[XxP3HalliwellxX]

Wow...awsome, please continue. I like the plot, please continue it's really good.