~YingYang~

[sweet8]

*Chapter 1:
The cold night air sent chills, up and down Phoebe
Halliwell's spine. She started to shiver. Then; a pair
of big yet strong arms, wrapped themselves around
her. She smiled. Someone began to, kiss her neck.
"Cole; that tickles!" she exclaimed, as she giggled.
She and Cole started to sway; as they gazed up at
the full moon. Phoebe closed her eyes.
Then; she heard a female voice, chanting: "Charmed
forever; as they shall always be. Send the Charmed
Ones, to save me. So mote it be!" Phoebe was sorta
confused. "Hey; what's wrong?" Cole asked, as he
turned Phoebe around~to face him. "Didn't you hear
that?" she responded.
He looked, somewhat baffled. "Hear what?" he said.
"That voice." Phoebe replied, as she slowly turned
toward the window and sighed.

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Meanwhile, across town; another demon attack
is occurring~as the full moon is high, in the night
sky. A demon has 2 teenagers, cornered. "Please;
leave us alone!" the girl cried out, as she dodged
an energy ball.
"I don't think, begging is gonna help." the boy said,
through his teeth. The girl rolled her eyes, as the
boy waved his arm and the demon flew into a brick
wall. "Come on, Ethan." the girl replied, as she then
grabbed the boy's hand and orbed him and herself
out. The demon slowly got up and punched the wall,
in frustration. "Damn it!" he yelled, as he smoked out.
Then; everything was quiet.

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Back at the Manor; everyone except Phoebe was
fast asleep. She has too much on her mind, to be
even thinking about sleep. "Am I going insane?"
she asked herself~softly. As she headed down
the stairs; she heard the same voice, chanting
again. She looked around her; but there was
no one in the room, except her.
Then; she felt a hand, on her shoulder~making
her jump. She quickly turned, to see Paige. She
sighed, in relief. "Whoa, a little jumpy; Pheebs?"
Paige said. "I guess, you could say that. Uh; did
you hear a voice, just now?" Phoebe asked, as
she leaned against the railing. Paige nodded her
head, yes. "Really? I thought, I was going crazy
or something." Phoebe added.
Then, suddenly; someone tapped Paige~on the
shoulder. She turned to see Piper's smiling face.
"Piper! You just scared me, half to death!" she
exclaimed, as she grabbed her chest. "Whoa;
calm down, Paige." Piper said, as she rolled her
eyes. Then; they all heard a male and a female
voice, chanting. They glanced all around them.
Again; there was no one. Wierd.

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"Did you hear it, Piper?" Phoebe asked. Piper shook
her head. Then; a swirl of blue and white orbs came
down and two teens materialized~in front of them.
"The Charmed Ones." the girl said.
"At last, we meet." the boy added, as he smiled. The
sisters looked extremely confused yet worried. Their
eyes widened. Piper backed up, onto the landing: as
Paige grabbed the railing. There was a brief silence.
"Don't worry; we are not here, to harm you." the boy
reassured them.
"We are not worried, you just surprised us. That's all."
Phoebe answered. The girl smiled. "Who are you and
what are you doing here?" Piper asked. "Well; I am
Ethan and this is my sister, Bridget. As you can tell;
we are twins." the boy replied.
"Twin half-witches/half-whitelighters; to be exact."
Bridget added. "That's a new one." Paige muttered.
"We need your help." Ethan said. "Who doesn't?"
Phoebe commented, trying to be funny. Paige just
rolled her eyes and elbowed Phoebe, in the side.
"Well, this~might jog your memory." Bridget said.
She and Ethan recited an incantation. Wait a sec,
Piper thought.
Phoebe's jaw dropped, as she replied: "That was
you." Bridget nodded her head. "It was about time,
that spell finally worked." Ethan answered, with a
nice smile~as he linked arms with his sister.

[leorules]

sounds great!!

[sweet8]

Thanks, leorules! Here's the next part:

*Chapter 2:
"Okay." Paige said to herself; as she and Piper
headed up the stairs, to the Book of Shadows.
Phoebe glanced at her 2 charming sisters and
then, back at Bridget and Ethan. "So; hungry?"
she suggested. The twins nodded their heads,
yes. "Starving." Bridget mumbled, as they went
into the kitchen.
Meanwhile, on their way up-to their attic; Piper
and Paige were stopped by Cole and Leo, who
seemed to have finally realized that their lovers
were no longer~by their side.
"What's going on?" Leo asked. "Come with us &
we'll fill you in. Cole, if you're looking for Phoebe;
she is downstairs~with our new innocents." Piper
replied; as she headed up the stairs~with Paige,
not far behind. Leo soon followed, while Cole took
the liberty of shimmering out.
Meanwhile, in the kitchen; Bridget was eating some
fruit, while Ethan was eating an apple. Phoebe was
leaning against the kitchen counter; enjoying a cup
of hot coffee. As Cole shimmered in; Bridget gasped,
almost choking on a grape. "Demon!" she yelled, as
Ethan waved his arm and Cole flew into the nearest
wall. Phoebe, quickly set down her coffee cup and ran
to Cole's side.

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Bridget and Ethan looked at each other. "Did we do
something wrong?" Bridget asked, as she frowned.
Phoebe helped Cole, stand up~as she replied: "Not
really; but this is my boyfriend, Cole." Bridget's jaw
dropped. "I am so...." Ethan began to say; but Cole
cut him off. "There's no need to apologize, it was an
accident." he said, as he held out his hand. Ethan
shook it, with confidence.
"Well; it is nice to meet you, Cole. I'm Ethan and
this is my twin sister; Bridget." Ethan replied, as
he let go of Cole's hand.
"Or you can just call me, Bee." Bridget said, as she
smiled. Then; the others orbed in. "Is everybody
okay?" Piper asked. She spotted the somewhat
dented wall and sighed.

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"We're fine, Piper." Phoebe answered, as she nodded her
head~slightly. "What happened?" Leo asked, as he took
a step forward. "Oh! Nothing really; except Ethan sorta
sent Cole flying, into the wall." Phoebe explained, as she
pointed to the dented wall.
"I said, I was sorry." Ethan muttered, under his breath.
Bridget rolled her ocean-blue eyes~as she elbowed him,
in the side. "Ow." he whispered.
Bridget smiled. Just you wait, sis: he thought to himself.
Bring it on; Bridget thought to herself, as if she was sorta
reading his mind. Must be some sort of twin telepathy or
something. "So; guys! Do you remember at all, what the
demon looked like?" Paige asked. "Um; he was somewhat
covered with tattoos and...." Ethan started to say, but he
suddenly stopped.
His and Bridget's jaws dropped. "Go on." Piper said, trying
to encourage him~to continue. "Something...like that!" Bee
exclaimed, as she pointed at something~behind them. They
heard a low growl. They turned around to find a demon, in
the doorway. His green, snake-like eyes glinted: as they
glanced around the room.
His eyes landed on...Bridget. She gasped. He, then conjured
an energy ball and smiled(an evil smile). As he prepared to
throw it, at Bridget; she suddenly fainted. Ethan caught her;
before her head hit, the floor.
Without hesitation; Piper threw up her hands and froze the
demon, with his energy ball~still in his hand. "Cool." Ethan
said, as Leo came over and lifted Bee~into his arms. Piper
wrapped her arm, around Ethan's shoulders. He rested his
head, on her shoulder and smiled.

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Piper smiled, as well. Cole shook his head, as
he mumbled: "Uh-oh. This is not good. Not at
all." Overhearing his mumbling; Paige rolled
her eyes, as she asked: "What do you mean,
'this is not good'?" There was a brief silence.
"Well, he is the Aboriginie demon(pointing to
the frozen demon)and supposedly; he is the
master of torture." Cole replied.
"Torture?" Phoebe said. "Uh, guys! I think we
better move this conversation...somewhere
else." Paige suggested. Without a word; Leo
orbed out, taking the unconscious Bridget....
with him. Paige grabbed Phoebe's hand and
Piper grabbed Phoebe's other hand, with her
arm~still wrapped around Ethan's shoulders.
They orbed out, while Cole shimmered.

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*Chapter 3:
The demon unfroze and looked around.
He growled, as he smoked out. In the
attic; Paige was skimming through the
Book of Shadows, as Ethan was slowly
pacing around the room.
Bridget woke up(finally)and is hovering
over Paige's shoulder; while everyone
else was sitting on the sofa. "Ok, why
are you looking in the book~when we
already know what we're up against?"
Ethan asked, sounding sorta impatient.
"Bro, don't get your boxers in a bunch!
Paige and I are(actually)looking for a
vanquishing spell." Bridget replied, as
she glared at him.
He rolled his eyes. Piper snickered. So
did Phoebe and Leo. Cole smiled, as he
leaned in and kissed Phoebe. Paige and
Bee(both)rolled their eyes. At the same
time. "Ah! Here, he is." Paige said. Piper
and Leo sat up.
"The Aboriginie demon: also known as,
'the master of torture.' Even though, he
may be covered with scars and tattoos;
he stalks upon his vistims...in his human
form." Bridget read, from the book. She
took a step, backward.
"He is the only demon, who can throw
paralyzing energy balls. They render his
victims~powerless, temporarily." Paige
added. Phoebe rolled her eyes, as she
said(with a hint of sarcasm): "Great."
There was a brief silence.

[Luna]

That sounds like a wonderful story. I like how the action starts out at the beginning of the story. It makes the story interesting and catches the readers eye.

[sweet8]

Thanks for your comment; xxxpiperroxxxx! Here's the next part:

"Is there a vanquishing spell or potion,
of some sort?" Piper asked, as she got
up~from the sofa. As Paige closed the
Book of Shadows; she answered: "Not
that I see." Good thing, I dodged those
energy balls; Bridget thought. "What is
going through that head of yours, sis?"
Ethan asked, as he stared at her and
smiled. She smiled, back.
"You don't want to know." Bridget said.
Then, out of the blue; music started to
play. Everyone looked a little confused,
as they looked around. Except Bridget.
She smiled, as she pulled something red
and shiny...out of her pocket. It was her
cellphone. "Oh, no. Not your boyfriend;
again." Ethan whined, as he crossed his
arms~across his chest.

[piperminime]

Sounds great I love how you have twins as the innocents cause you don't see that a lot

[sweet8]

Thanks, piperminime! Here's the next part:

"What's going on?" Leo asked Ethan, as he
stood up~beside Piper. "Her boyfriend Caleb
is calling her; again." Ethan explained, as he
rolled his ocean-blue eyes.
Bridget began to giggle and smile, a lot. Her
twin brother bit his lip & turned toward the
others. Phoebe could sense the tension, in
the room. " Let's change the subject, shall
we?" she suggested.
"Ok; back to the demon, at hand. What are
we gonna do?" Paige replied. "It's easy. We
save the innocents, by vanquishing demon.
Like we, always do." Piper answered. Paige
looked down, at the floor; as she muttered:
"I meant that, as a rhetorical."
There was another brief silence, except for
Bridget's giggling. "One question: why's the
demon after you, anyway?" Phoebe asked.
"I'm not sure. Bee & I thought, he was done
(messing with us)when he..." Ethan began
to explain, but he couldn't bring himself~to
finish the sentence.
Tears started to form; as he ran his fingers
through his spiky yet dirty-blonde hair and
sighed. "Uh-oh, sore spot." Piper muttered,
through clenched teeth.
Phoebe bit her lip, knowing what Piper was
muttering; made sense. What can she say?
Curiousity killed the cat, you know. "When
he, what?" Paige asked, as she wrapped
her arm~around his shoulders. He looked
into Paige's hazel eyes.
"When he, tortured and killed me and Bee's
mother." Ethan finally said, as he wiped the
tears~from his eyes. "I am so sorry for you
and your sister's loss." Piper responded. He
smiled, as he whispered: "Thanks." Phoebe
came up(to Ethan's other side)and wrapped
her arm, around his shoulders.
"We lost our mother; too." she said, as she
smiled at him. He turned his gaze from Paige,
to Phoebe. "Really?" he replied. She nodded
her head, yes. Piper smiled, as she came up
and gave Ethan...a hug.
Leo(meanwhile)was sorta keeping a close
eye, on Bridget~as she headed down the
hall and down the stairs. Still giggling and
smiling. As for Cole; he sorta fell asleep,on
the sofa.

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*Chapter 4:
After a while; Bridget got off her phone
(only because her battery had run out).
She went back to the attic, to find the
Charmed Ones~consoling Ethan. Her
smile fell(quickly). She put her phone,
back into her pocket and crossed her
arms~across her chest.
"Bridget." Phoebe said, as she looked
up. Everyone else soon turned around.
"You told them, didn't you?" Bee asked,
as she turned and stormed out of the
room. Ethan ran after her.
"Bee, wait!" he yelled, as he grabbed
her arm. She tried to wiggle out of his
grip, but he(only)tightened it. "Let me
go, Ethan." Bridget growled, without
turning her head.
"Not until you tell me." he replied, as
he loosened his grip~but only a little.
"Tell you what?" Bridget asked. "You
know what, Bee. Please tell me; what
is the matter?" he answered, sounding
concerned. "When mom died; what did
we promise, to each other?" she said,
as she turned around.
He could tell that, she was holding back
tears. "To never speak of how she died,
just to remember the good times. Why?"
Ethan replied. "You didn't keep it. You
told the Charmed Ones." she answered.
He let go of her arm.

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"It is not my fault, that the sisters wanted
to know! Haven't you forgotten about dad?
He's still alive, isn't he?" Ethan replied, as
she glanced behind him.
Leo was still, keeping a watchful eye. She
took a deep breath, as she glared at her
twin brother. "He is dead, to me. It's that
simple." Bridget snapped, as she turned
and walked down the stairs. Ethan just
stood there, as Leo came up and placed
a hand~on his shoulder.
"She'll get over it. Hopefully." Ethan said,
as he sighed. Leo smiled. Together; they
went back to the attic.
Meanwhile, in the Underworld; the demon
was pacing around his lair. "So close!" he
exclaimed, as he slammed his fist~on the
table(out of frustration). He took a deep
breath, as something fell...onto the floor.
He picked it up. It was a picture frame w/
a black-and-white photo, inside.
He smiled, as he traced the outline of the
girl's cheek. Her eyes stared into his. "Oh;
my sweet bumble Bee." he said to himself,
as he kissed the photo and put it back~on
the table. Uh-oh.

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Back in the Halliwell Manor; Cole finally
woke up, as Leo and Ethan walked in.
Noticing that Bridget wasn't with them;
Piper asked: "Where's Bridget?" Ethan
looked up at her, as he heaved a little
sigh. Brown eyes are locked in a stare,
with ocean-blue.
"Downstairs." he answered. Piper did
not say a word, as her eyes widened.
She began to pace. Sensing that she's
worried about Bridget, Cole shimmered
out. Without a moment to lose.
Meanwhile, in the living room; Bridget
was pacing....when Cole shimmered in.
She grabbed her chest, as she gasped.
"Don't do that! I do not need another
trip, to the hospital!" she snapped, as
she glared at him.
Cole threw up his hands, in defense.
"Sorry; I came down here, to keep an
eye on you." he replied. Bridget rolled
her eyes. "Why do you care? You're a
demon." she said, bitterly. "I am half-
demon." Cole answered. "Whatever."
she mumbled, as she plopped herself
down~onto the couch.
He sat down, beside her. She moved
away, from him. There was a silence,
in the room.

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Meanwhile, in the attic; Piper was looking
through the Book of Shadows. "Come on,
Piper; there is not a vanquishing potion or
spell~in there." Paige said.
Without even looking up at her sister; she
held up her finger, cutting Paige off. Piper
continued, to flip the pages. Paige looked
at Leo and shrugged. Leo placed a hand,
on Piper's shoulder. She ignored him. He
opened his mouth to speak, but his wife
covered it~using her free hand.
She turned her head and glared at Leo.
"Don't, Leo." Piper said, as she removed
her hand....from his mouth. His hand(on
her shoulder)fell to his side, as she went
back to the book.

[vanillabliss]

[glow=violet,2,300]This is good I guess, but could you mybe space your sentences out? there all jumbled togather and it makes it harder to read. But other than that, awesome![/glow]

[sweet8]

Okay, interesting comment; Sweet&Spicy.
Here's the next part:

*Chapter 5:
Meanwhile, in the living room; Cole and Bee
still sat there(on the couch)~in silence. They
exchanged glances, now and then.
"I heard about your mom. I'm sorry, for your
loss." he said, as he turned toward Bridget.
"I don't want your sympathy!" she snapped,
as she glared at him. Cole moved closer and
Bridget moved away. "Is your dad, alive?" he
asked. "He's dead, to me.'' Bee said, as she
heaved a sigh.
"What do you mean?" Cole asked. "Do you
always ask, these many questions?" Bridget
replied, as she turned toward him. "What can
I say? Curiosity killed the cat." he said, as he
smiled. To his surprise; she managed to smile
back, at him. Can we say, kodak moment? But,
the moment soon passed.
She looked away for a short time, and then she
looked back at Cole. "My dad. He really wanted
to save my mom, but he never tried. He had the
nerve, to just walk away~while she was dying!"
Bridget exclaimed, as she tried her best~to hold
back her tears. Cole moved closer to her & this
time, she didn't move away.
He wrapped his arm, around her waist and Bee
rested her head~on his shoulder. "I seemed to
be the only one, who actually tried to save my
mom." she continued. "What about Ethan?" he
asked Bridget.
She looked up, at him. "My brother was studying
abroad, in France." Bee responded, as she rested
her head~back on his shoulder. He smiled. Then;
they both heard footsteps. Cole turned his head,
to see: Phoebe, Paige, and Ethan~heading down
the stairs. Bridget smiled at her brother.