Post by charmedphoebe on Jan 8, 2007 14:15:29 GMT -5
Author's Note: This first chapter there are some things that I have taken from the episode "All Hell Breaks Loose" But lot of it was my own words. There are also some things that I add of my own that hadn't been in that episode, and I think you will know that that is when you have finish reading this first chapter.
Altering Changes (Prologue)
Phoebe had gone into the underworld to save Cole, while she was trying to do this. Up above Piper and Prue had been expose. Some how a reporter and her camera man had saw the Halliwell sisters vanquishing Shax and gotten it on tape. They had then put it on air so the world could see. Piper and Prue sent Leo to the underworld to tell Phoebe that they had been expose and to get Cole to asked the Source to get Tempus to reverse time.
Cole goes to the source and asked him. The Source offers a deal, that he would get Tempus to reset time if Phoebe stays here in the underworld. Cole tell the Source that Phoebe would never agree to that. The Source tells him she wouldn't do it even to save her own sister.
Meanwhile Piper had gotten shot, and dies at the hospital where Prue had taken her to. Back in the underworld Cole tell Phoebe about the deal. Phoebe tells him why would the Source think that she would accept an offer like that? Cole tells her because it's the only way to bring one of her sisters back to life. Phoebe doesn't believe this and gets Leo to go up the and check. Leo does and finds out that what the Source said was true, Leo then orbs to Phoebe with tears in his eyes.
“Piper.” Phoebe said going over to Leo and hugs him tightly. They pull apart a few seconds later.
“You don't have to do this.” Leo said knowing that Phoebe was going to agree to the deal the Source has given her.
“Yes I do.” Phoebe says to Leo. She then turns to Cole. “So, will resetting time affect us down here?” Phoebe asked him.
“No.” Cole replies.
“Good. I only have one condition…” She tells him. “you must warn Prue and Piper before the demonic hit man attacks. Otherwise they're dead anyway.” Phoebe continued to say.
“I will…but…if anything goes wrong and I can't go…” Cole says, turning to look at Leo. “you take Phoebe and orb out of here.” He continued.
“I will.”
And with Leo saying that Cole shimmers out.
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Cole shimmers to where the Source is at. Cole goes and kneels down in front of the Source. “So… has the witch agreed to the deal?” The Source asked him.
“Yes.”
“The deal is set. Time will be reset.”
By the Source saying this, Cole stands up, bows and walks away. A guard then walks in and kneels in front of the Source. “Once I have reset time, detain him. And then kill his witch. That way I won't have to worry about Belthazor anymore. Or the Charmed Ones.” The Source tells him.
The guard then get up and walks away.
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At the hospital, Prue has covered Piper over with a blanket. A SWAT member outside has a gun pointed at the room.
“It shall be done.” The source voice is heard. There is a crack of thunder heard.
The SWAT member fires his gun and the bullet goes straight through the wall, heading for Prue. It stops in mid-air and reverses. The whole day resets and Prue and Piper are back in the manor before Shax attacks.
“What the hell are you talking about? First you tell me my life's in danger, then you abduct me from my work, now you're talking about demons and witches. Who the hell are you people?”
“Look, I know that this all sounds incredible, but it doesn't make it any less true. Alright, you're a healer, you do good, now either you have saved to many lives or you're about to save a life that they don't what you to save.” Prue tells Dr. Griffiths.
“They?” Said Dr. Griffiths.
“Yeah, demons, Uh, more specifically, Shax. He was the Source's assassin.”
“Hold it, I get it. This is a practical joke, right? Do you have hidden camera here? My second wife put you up to this? Ah, it's just like her.” He laughs.
“O…o…okay, Dr Griffiths, listen to me, this is anything but…” She stops.
“What?” Piper asked.
“I don't know, I just felt a chill. Phoebe?” Prue calls out. Prue doesn't receive a answer. “Phoebe, are you there?” Prue calls out again as a tornado of wind twists through the front door. “Phoebe, where are you?” Prue yells out as the tornado knocks her and Piper to the floor. A clap of thunder is heard, the tornado calms down and Shax appears.
“Dear god.” Dr. Griffiths says.
“No!” Prue yells. She gets up off the floor and pushes Dr. Griffiths out of the way. Shax throws and energy ball at Prue and she literally crashes straight through a wall.
Piper gets up and Shax throws an energy ball at Piper, sending her crashing through a wall. Shax turns to Dr. Griffiths.
“What are you?” Dr. Griffiths said.
“The end.” Shax replied. He throws an energy ball at Dr. Griffiths and he crashes through a window. Shax looks around. He looks at Prue and Piper unconscious on the floor. Pleased with what he's done, Shax turns back into the wind and flies out of the front door. The glass on the door smashes as it slams shut.
Altering Changes (Prologue)
Phoebe had gone into the underworld to save Cole, while she was trying to do this. Up above Piper and Prue had been expose. Some how a reporter and her camera man had saw the Halliwell sisters vanquishing Shax and gotten it on tape. They had then put it on air so the world could see. Piper and Prue sent Leo to the underworld to tell Phoebe that they had been expose and to get Cole to asked the Source to get Tempus to reverse time.
Cole goes to the source and asked him. The Source offers a deal, that he would get Tempus to reset time if Phoebe stays here in the underworld. Cole tell the Source that Phoebe would never agree to that. The Source tells him she wouldn't do it even to save her own sister.
Meanwhile Piper had gotten shot, and dies at the hospital where Prue had taken her to. Back in the underworld Cole tell Phoebe about the deal. Phoebe tells him why would the Source think that she would accept an offer like that? Cole tells her because it's the only way to bring one of her sisters back to life. Phoebe doesn't believe this and gets Leo to go up the and check. Leo does and finds out that what the Source said was true, Leo then orbs to Phoebe with tears in his eyes.
“Piper.” Phoebe said going over to Leo and hugs him tightly. They pull apart a few seconds later.
“You don't have to do this.” Leo said knowing that Phoebe was going to agree to the deal the Source has given her.
“Yes I do.” Phoebe says to Leo. She then turns to Cole. “So, will resetting time affect us down here?” Phoebe asked him.
“No.” Cole replies.
“Good. I only have one condition…” She tells him. “you must warn Prue and Piper before the demonic hit man attacks. Otherwise they're dead anyway.” Phoebe continued to say.
“I will…but…if anything goes wrong and I can't go…” Cole says, turning to look at Leo. “you take Phoebe and orb out of here.” He continued.
“I will.”
And with Leo saying that Cole shimmers out.
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Cole shimmers to where the Source is at. Cole goes and kneels down in front of the Source. “So… has the witch agreed to the deal?” The Source asked him.
“Yes.”
“The deal is set. Time will be reset.”
By the Source saying this, Cole stands up, bows and walks away. A guard then walks in and kneels in front of the Source. “Once I have reset time, detain him. And then kill his witch. That way I won't have to worry about Belthazor anymore. Or the Charmed Ones.” The Source tells him.
The guard then get up and walks away.
----------
At the hospital, Prue has covered Piper over with a blanket. A SWAT member outside has a gun pointed at the room.
“It shall be done.” The source voice is heard. There is a crack of thunder heard.
The SWAT member fires his gun and the bullet goes straight through the wall, heading for Prue. It stops in mid-air and reverses. The whole day resets and Prue and Piper are back in the manor before Shax attacks.
“What the hell are you talking about? First you tell me my life's in danger, then you abduct me from my work, now you're talking about demons and witches. Who the hell are you people?”
“Look, I know that this all sounds incredible, but it doesn't make it any less true. Alright, you're a healer, you do good, now either you have saved to many lives or you're about to save a life that they don't what you to save.” Prue tells Dr. Griffiths.
“They?” Said Dr. Griffiths.
“Yeah, demons, Uh, more specifically, Shax. He was the Source's assassin.”
“Hold it, I get it. This is a practical joke, right? Do you have hidden camera here? My second wife put you up to this? Ah, it's just like her.” He laughs.
“O…o…okay, Dr Griffiths, listen to me, this is anything but…” She stops.
“What?” Piper asked.
“I don't know, I just felt a chill. Phoebe?” Prue calls out. Prue doesn't receive a answer. “Phoebe, are you there?” Prue calls out again as a tornado of wind twists through the front door. “Phoebe, where are you?” Prue yells out as the tornado knocks her and Piper to the floor. A clap of thunder is heard, the tornado calms down and Shax appears.
“Dear god.” Dr. Griffiths says.
“No!” Prue yells. She gets up off the floor and pushes Dr. Griffiths out of the way. Shax throws and energy ball at Prue and she literally crashes straight through a wall.
Piper gets up and Shax throws an energy ball at Piper, sending her crashing through a wall. Shax turns to Dr. Griffiths.
“What are you?” Dr. Griffiths said.
“The end.” Shax replied. He throws an energy ball at Dr. Griffiths and he crashes through a window. Shax looks around. He looks at Prue and Piper unconscious on the floor. Pleased with what he's done, Shax turns back into the wind and flies out of the front door. The glass on the door smashes as it slams shut.