Power Play!!!

[swiftwind]

I liked the beginning of this story that I've decided to to share it with other fans. I'll post the rest in a week aor so. Hope u like it enjoy. Paige's new power my or may not be in another story, but I don't think so. If it is sorry didn't mean to rip it off. The story is about paige gaining a new power, or an extention of her TK/ORBING power.

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Exter. Manor-Day.
We open with a shot of the manor. The camera closes in, and eventually goes through the front window.

Inter. Manor-Day, Living room.
As the camera makes it's way up the stairs leading to the attic we hear

sounds of a fight.

Inter. Manor-Attic, cont.
We enter the attic and find Piper knocked out near the BOS, and Phoebe

fighting a demon, with scaly-green skin and red eyes. The demon lunges

at Phoebe, but she avoid it by flipping over him. The demon crashes head

first into an antique bookcase. It appears that demon is knocked out,

Phoebe heads to her older sister.


Phoebe:
Piper, wake up. I need your help!

Phoebe slaps her sister in a attempt to wake her.

Phoebe:(cont)
Piper come on! Wake up!

Phoebe hears a noise and looks up. The demon is gone.

Phoebe:
Circle 'round, circle 'round.
I create a shield from below the ground!

The earth shakes knocking down the demon. We hear rumbling beneath the

floor, and without warning stone walls rise shielding the sisters.

Inter. Manor-inside the walls of rock.

Phoebe:
Paige!

Paige orbs in.

Paige:
What the hell?

Phoebe:
No time to explain! Call for the book of shadows.

Paige:
Okay. "Book of shadows!"

We hear a faint thud, but no BOS.

Paige:
Did you use magick to create this(she says pointing to the walls).

Phoebe:
No nuts!

Paige:
Excuse me!

Phoebe:
Sorry. It's just were trapped in hear, and you can't orb the book to

you...

Paige:
Stop talking. I...think were running out of air.

Phoebe:
Right.

Phoebe uses her empathic power to transmit her idea through her emotions.

At first Paige is over whelmed by her sisters' emotions, but understands

what her sister is trying to to say. Paige orbs out.

Inter. Manor-Attic
The attic is deserted. A cold breeze is coming in from the broken window.

It's freezing. Paige decides not to waist anymore time, she runs to the

book thrown on the floor. Before she can get her hands on the book she's

thrown across the attic. The demon lunges toward Paige. On instinct Paige

holds up her hands. Orbs shoot out from her hands and hold the demon in

mid-air. Paige quickly recovers and understands. She yells "Piper,

Phoebe!!" Piper and orb out into the attic, (Piper is now fully awake).

Paige:
Get the book!

Piper gets up and gets the book. She opens it and finds the spell they

need.

Piper:
Found it.

At these words Paige uses her new power to throw the demon at the wall.
She gets up and joins her sisters'. They join hands and start chanting:

All:
Demon from the deep blue sea,
We rip out your eyes and your spleen.

The demon screams as it's eyes and spleen are torn out, then fire

consumes the body; and all is left are ashes.

END OF TEASER.


I love the beginning of this story and decided to ask everyones opinion about it.

[EvergreenMountaineer]

Sounds good to me. I liked it!! Sounds interesting! thanks for bringing that one!

[swiftwind]

HERE'S THE SECOND ACT OF THE STORY. IT'S SHORT, BUT I THINK IT'S GOOD. HOPE U ENJOY IT. PLEASE LEAVE YOUR THOUGHTS, I WANT TO BE WRITER AND WOULD APPRECIATE ANY FEED BACK, GOOD OR BAD. I'M BARLEY LEARNING HOW TO WRITE . SO I KNOW THIS IS NOT GOOD ENOUGH TO GET ME A JOB, BUT I NEED START SOMEWHERE.


Act1
Inter. Manor-living room.
Phoebe and Paige are sitting on the couch a little bruised; but doing alright.


Phoebe:
Are you okay?

Paige:
I'm just a little shocked, that's all.

Phoebe:
I thought you'd be thrilled.

Paige:
I...

BUT BEFORE SHE COULD ANSWER THEY HEAR A SCREAM COMING FROM THE KITCHEN.

WE CUT TO PIPER AND A WARLOCK FIGHTING IN THE KITCHEN. PIPER TRIES TO FREEZE HIM, NOTHING. THE WARLOCK RAISES HIS HANDS AND BLINDS PIPER. SHE SCREAMS. THE WARLOCK PULLS OUT HIS ATHAME AND IS READY TO STRIKE. BAM! HE'S SENT FLYING, CRASHING INTO THE TABLE. PHOEBE GRABS THE ATHAME AND VANQUISHES THE WARLOCK. PHOEBE HELPS HER SISTER UP.

Phoebe:
You alright?

Piper:
He blinded me.

Phoebe:
Don't worry sweetie, Paige'll heal you. Paige?

PAIGE IS GONE. PHOEBE HELPS HER SISTER INTO THE LIVING ROOM.

Inter. Manor-living room.

Phoebe:
Wait here. I'm gonna look for Paige.

PIPER IS LEFT ALONE ONCE AGAIN. PHOEBE HEADS UPSTAIS TO LOOK FOR HER YOUNGER SISTER.

Inter. Manor-upstairs hallway.

Phoebe:
Paige, are you up here?

PHOEBE FOLLOWS HER SISTER'S VOICE. SHE SEARCHES PAIGE'S ROOM, BUT NOTHING.

Phoebe:
Paige?

Paige:
Out here! On the roof.

Exter. Manor-Roof
PHOEBE HEADS FO AN OPEN WINDOW, AND PEERS OUT TO FIND PAIGE SITTING ON CORSS-LEGGED AND LOOKING MISERABLE. PHOEBE CAREFULLY STEPS OUT ON THE LEDGE AND SITS NEXT TO HER SISTER.

Pheobe:
Honey, what's wrong?

Paige:
My new power....When I use it Iget this feeling...

Phoebe:
What kind of feeling?

Paige:
I feel power.

Phoebe:
I'm guessing not the good kind of power.

Paige:
It conumes me. I feel this power that's been...Dormant; that's been trying to force it's way out. I don't think I can control.

PAIGE'S EYES BEGIN TO WATER. PHOEBE EMBRACES HER SISTER; PAIGE BEGINS TO SOB.

Paige:
What if I hurt someone?

Phoebe:
Don't think like that.

WE CUT TO PIPER
INTER. MANOR-LIVING ROOM.
PIPER STILL SITTING ON THE COUCH BEGINS TO WORRY. SHE GETS UP AND HEADS FOR THE STAIRS.

INTER. MANOR-FOYER.
AS SOON AS PIPER PUT A FOOT ON THE FIRST STEP, SHE'S SENT FLYING INTO THE INTO THE LIVING-ROOM.

INTER. MANOR-LIVING ROOM.
A TALL, FELINE-LOOKING DEMON WALKS CAMLY IN PIPER'S DIRECTION. IT STOPS INFRONT OF HER; HER EYES GLOW EMERALD GREEN. PIPER BLASTS THE DEMON AND SENDS HER CRASHING INTO THE PARLOR-ROOM.

Piper:
Today's not been my day at all. Phoebe, Paige, get down here!!!

Vanita:
Shut up, witch! My master wants you!

VANITA CROUCHES DOWN AND TURNS INTO A PANTHER, SHE ROARS, SENDING A SONIC WAVE DESTROYING FUNITURE IN IT'S PATH. THE SONIC WAVE KNOCKS PIPER DOWN. VANITA RUNS TO HER AND PUTS A PAW ON PIPER'S BODY. PAIGE AND PHOEBE ENTER JUST IN TIME TO SEE VANITA AND PIPER DISSAPEAR IN SWIRL OF PURPLE LIGHT.

END OF ACT ONE.

[swiftwind]

ACT TWO

INTER. MANOR-ATTIC
PHOEBE AND PAIGE ARE LOOKING THROUGH THE BOOK. THE ATTIC IS STILL DESHEAVLED, THE MAGICAL ROCKS THAT PROTECTED PIPER AND PHOEBE ARE STILL ERECT.

Paige:
There's nothing in the book. It's useless!

Phoebe:
You need to calm down...

Paige:
Calm down, CALM DOWN!

PHOEBE SLAPS HER SISTER. PAIGE COMPLETELY SHOCKED, SITS DOWN AND LOOKS APPREHENSIVLEY AT HER SISTER.

Paige:
I'm good. I'm alright....don't hit me.

Phoebe:
I'm sorry I had to do it, but I need you calm; and able to think straight.

Paige:
I am now.

Phoebe:
That was not a "normal" demon.

Paige:
Normal?

Phoebe:
You know what I mean. I could sense...good. It felt forced, it didn't want to hurt Piper, or us for that matter.

Paige:
But then why kidnap her?

Phoebe:
I don't know. I could sense it's heartach; and regret. It doesn't want to hurt...anybody.

Paige:
Are you saying that it was a good demon.

Phoebe:
Well... would that be...I mean there's no such thing. Right?

Paige:
I don't think so. Unless..it was half demon half mortal.

Phoebe:
It has a soul? Well that wouldn't be new. Then we could maybe talk to it?

Paige:
Talk to it? Talk to it. Okay you've lost it...Completely!

Phoebe:
Maybe it doesn't like killing people?

Paige:
Okay. We have a demon who isn't in the book, has a soul, and wants peace on earth and hopes to bring all races together. Come on! It's a demon, it's evil.

Phoebe:
What about that demon child we helped a few years ago? Remember?
He's father was tricked into mating with a Manticore and they had the little boy...


Paige:
That was diffrent. He was a baby. He was clay ready to be molded.

Phoebe:
Do you have any better ideas?

Paige:
Yeah.

PAIGE TAKES HER SISTERS HAND AND ORBS OUT. WE CUT TO..."UP THERE". PAIGE ORBS INTO THE MIDDLE A GREAT; ANCIENT-LOOKING TEMPLE, HELD ATOP OF OMNIOUS-LOOKING CLOUDS.

Phoebe:
Okay...Where the hell are we?

Founder:
You are not allowed up here!

Phoebe:
Up here? You mean, this is...

Founder:
Kaeartos. Sanctuary.

Paige:
Right, we knew that.

Founder:
Whay have you come?

Paige:
We need help with a demon...

WITHOUT WARNING THE FOUNDER HOLDS HIS HANDS OVER THEIR HEADS AND READS THEIR THOGHTS.

Paige:
Okay...Ow. Did you have to do that?

Founder:
Yes.

THE FOUNDER WALKS AWAY, AND HEADS DOWNA CORRIDOR.
End of act3

[phoebe11]

interesting loved it so far!

[maccaswell]

This story is awesome. Keep going!