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Post by ultimatecharmedfan on Oct 14, 2007 12:14:47 GMT -5
Okay, I was thinking one day, and I thought I could write season nine all by myself, but then I thought, what if people dont like it? So, I'm just gonna tell you. I thought it would be great if YOU helped me. Yes YOU! I have written the first episode and will post it as soon as possible and once you read it, you will get a chance to vote on what happens next and a competition where I will send you something nice if you win. So, please get involved, I will be so happy! Thank you, Josh x x x
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Post by ultimatecharmedfan on Oct 14, 2007 12:15:53 GMT -5
Charmed Season Nine Season Premiere “Americas Next Top Witch” By Josh Nicholas
Ext. Manor. Daylight. Int. Manor. Conservatory. Piper, Paige and Phoebe are sitting around the table which is filled with exotic food and drink. Then, leo comes into the room, with Wyatt and Chris in a pushchair.
Piper: Oh hey honey! Did the boys enjoy their walk?
Leo: Yeah. Wyatt got a little angry when we had to leave the playground but when we got to the ice cream parlor he was fine. What’s going on here?
Piper: Oh, well, Phoebe, Paige and I all thought we would chill out on the last day of summer and make exotic foods and drinks. Wanna join us?
Paige: Yeah. Leo, you can have my seat. I gotta go now before Henry gets home. We kinda have a date tonight. (To Piper and Phoebe) See you soon girls!
Paige walks up to her nephews and kisses them, then she orbs out. Leo takes Paige’s seat and slips some Pineapple in his mouth.
Phoebe: So, this might be the last day of summer but in case you guys haven’t noticed, this also marks the third week of us being demon lite.
Piper: Bite your tongue sis! Knowing our luck, there is probably some group of demons plotting our deaths right now.
Phoebe: I wouldn’t be so sure.
Int. Cave. Three female demons dressed in leather are stood before about twenty other demons. The female demons, Xenia, Kraal and Melda are planning something with the rest of them.
Xenia: As you all may know, the Charmed Ones are still alive after the final battle. Now, we have found a way to destroy them.
Melda: You are all contestants in a new little game of ours. And no, this is no Witch Wars. This is totally different. We plan to kill the Charmed Ones ourselves, but you guys will be our distraction.
Demon #1: What do ya’ mean by distraction sugah’ lips?
Kraal: She means you unworthy lot will act as innocents to trick the Charmed Ones.
Demon #2: Yeah, well. Who’s your boss.
Another Demon, Barbas, shimmers in.
Barbas: I am!
(Opening Credits)
Ext. Manor. Int. Kitchen. Piper and Leo are in the kitchen cleaning up plates and cups when Paige orbs in.
Paige: Sorry to intrude, I have news.
Piper: Hit me!
Paige: Okay, well, you know those people across the street who accidentally received yours and Phoebe’s powers two years ago thanks to Zankou, well, they sold their story to the paper. I have it right here.
Paige puts the paper on the table and the headline reads ‘Halliwell Sister Passed Magical Tricks Onto Innocent Neighbors”
Piper: What!? This is beyond ridiculous, this is insane! I thought they promised....
Paige: Never mind the damn promise, what happens if we get exposed.
Leo: Don’t worry. Keep calm, there’s gotta be a way out of this.
Piper: This is like, one of my greatest fears. This is how we lost Prue. Through Exposition.
Leo: Hang on! Its one of your greatest fears?
Piper: Of course it is Leo, what, do you think I’m a liar?
Leo: No, its just, its Friday the Thirteenth today!
Paige: Barbas?
Piper: No! But we....
Paige: Vanquished him? Didn’t you also vanquish the source? He came back last year remember?
Piper: This can’t be happening! I mean, not now!
Paige: Okay Piper, don’t worry, I’m all over it! I can solve this mayhem before it gets out of hand. Relax.
Piper: But tonight, you have......
Paige: My date can wait! Besides, if Barbas is involved, by the end of the night I’ll probably end up divorced. Leo, can I talk to you a minute.
Leo: Sure!
Leo and Paige exit the room and sit down in the dining room.
Leo: What’s up!?
Paige: What’s up? Don’t think I don’t know Leo. You knew about this! I know you did!
Leo: What?!
Paige: Last night. I came back to get something from the attic and I couldn’t help but hear the conversation you had in the passageway with an elder.
Leo: You weren’t meant to.....
Paige: Well, I did. What did he tell you Leo! We need to know.
Leo: He told me Barbas has something. Something that can bring you down. You see, Barbas has hired three assassin Demons, Xenia, Kraal, and Melda, three ex-witches who want to kill present witches. He wants them to kill you while he prays on your fears. They also have a small handful of Demons as a distraction.
Paige: Okay, so, I’ll go look in the Book Of Shadows for those three demons while you try to help Piper to relax.
Then, Phoebe walks through the front door, looking very distressed.
Phoebe: Okay, I was chased right out of work by a mob of reporters! Apparently, those Shmucks across the street sold their story of what happened to the papers! Can you believe it! We have to go into hiding again. Oh god!
Paige: Calm down. My guess, its an illusion set by Barbas!
Phoebe: Barbas? Wait, I thought......
Leo: Paige will explain it to you in the attic, I have a wife to console.
Phoebe: Okay Paige, talk.
Paige grabs onto Phoebe and they both orb up to the attic.
(Commercial Break)
Int. Cave. Xenia, Melda and Kraal are all stood over a spell book which looks like the Book Of Shadows. Xenia: Okay, so, the Grimoire here, tells us that the only way to project fears via potion is to collect.......
Melda: Wait! We don’t need to project fear! That’s Barbas’s job!
Kraal: No! I get it! If we can replicate the power of Barbas, then there will be double Fear Effect! This is amazing!
Xenia: Alright. Get three demons ready. The plan is about to take place.
Ext. Halliwell Manor. Night. Int. Attic. Paige is hovered over the Book Of Shadows while Phoebe is pacing back and forth in front of her.
Paige: When are you gonna stop doing that?
Phoebe: When I’m over it!
Paige: Over what?
Phoebe: I’m trying to remove all fear from my mind!
Paige: Well could you hurry up before I give you something to fear?
Phoebe: Okay, listen Paige, just find those assassin women would you?
Paige: I am! I seem to be the only one working my butt off here!
Phoebe: Well, if it makes you happy, I will go downstairs and get potions just incase.
Then before Phoebe can leave, three male demons enter the room, with fireballs ready in their hands.
Paige: Phoebe get outta here!
Phoebe: And leave you on your own? No chance sis!
The demons throw their fireballs at the sisters. Phoebe and Paige dive behind the chair and the blasts hit the wall.
Phoebe: What are we gonna do?
Paige: Grab my hand!
Phoebe: What?
Paige: Just do it!
Phoebe grabs hold of Paige’s hand and they both orb out.
Demon: They escaped! Damn it! Follow them!
Int. Cave. Phoebe and Paige orb in and hide behind a rock.
Phoebe: Paige! What the hell are we doing here?
Paige: Look, just stay here! Trust me!
The demons shimmer in and Paige steps out from behind the rock. The demons summon Fireballs.
Paige: Hey! Put those balls away! Okay, scrap that! Just, listen. I’m not gonna’ vanquish you. Yet. Just, take me to Xenia, Kraal and Melda!
Demon: What are you talking about?
Paige: Don’t act dumb! I know who you are. Your just a distraction. Besides, if your not, then why did you attack me and my sister.
Demon: Alright you got us! You want to see our masters. Follow us!
The demons shimmer out. Then Phoebe comes out from behind the rock.
Phoebe: Okay, are you out of your mind. There’s only two of us! How can we take them all.
Paige: They’re not gonna hurt us. They’re working with Barbas and he wants nothing more than our fear right?
Phoebe: Yeah, well he’s a got a feast cos’ I am not exactly level headed right about now!
Paige: Look, drink this potion. We’ll be fearless for fifteen minutes. That’ll be enough time to grab us some information.
Paige hands Phoebe a potion and they both drink from it.
Phoebe: Okay, follow the demons.
Phoebe grabs hold of Paige and they both orb out.
(Commercial Break)
Ext. Halliwell Manor. Int. Kitchen. Piper and Leo are still cleaning up.
Piper: Okay, they’ve been up there an awful long time. And I told you I heard banging. Leo: Look, they can take care of themselves. You don’t need the extra stress.
Piper: Oh for gods sake Leo! I’m a powerful witch not a charity case now come on!
Int. Attic. Piper and Leo walk in to see no-one there. Piper walks over to the wall and sees the marks from the fireballs.
Piper: Oh god Leo! What do we do!? Where have they gone!
Leo: We’ll find them Piper I swear.
Piper: COOP!
All of a sudden, Coop appears out of nowhere and sees the distress on Piper’s face.
Coop: Piper is everything okay? Where’s Phoebe?
Piper: Yeah, well, we don’t know. Her and Paige came up here to investigate something in the book and the next thing I knew, poof, they’re gone!
Coop: Okay, I think I’ll be able to track her. Hold on!
Piper: Leo, look after the kids. I’ll be back. I promise.
Int. Cave. Paige and Phoebe orb into the cave where the three male demons are waiting for them.
Demon: Took your time witch!
Paige: Watch your mouth! Your messing with the Charmed One’s here!
Demon: Is that a threat?
Paige: Do you want it to be?
Phoebe: Okay, we’re not here to fight. Yet! We’re here to see your masters. Including Barbas.
Demon: O-n’ Ga’re’ Miin-Kassa-laa
Xenia, Kraal and Melda along with Barbas appear in the room.
Barbas: Well Well Well, if it aint the precious Charmed Ones. And it’s the same two that vanquished me the last time too. Where is Piper, I haven’t seen her in a while. She wasn’t there to witness my last vanquishing if I’m correct!
Paige: Look, Barbas! We’re here to find out what the hell it is you want this time!
Barbas: What I always want! But, this time, I’ve taken things to the next level. Once I get you three out of my way, I plan to move on to mortals, and not Witches this time.
Phoebe: What!? Why?
Barbas: What can I say, I am sick of Demons hiding from the world. This time, we’re all rising to the surface and theirs nothing you can do that will stop us!
Paige: Wanna bet! Your powerless Barbas!
Barbas: How could you possibly know that!
Phoebe: Try us! There’s not a fear you can read!
Then, Piper and Coop appear next to Phoebe and Paige. When Piper sees her sisters she joins them.
Piper: What the hell are you doing here?
Phoebe: Paige’s idea!
Piper: What!?
Paige: Okay, scold me later fight them now!
Coop: Phoebe! Are you all right?
Barbas: Your greatest fear is losing her am I right?
Coop: What?
Phoebe: Coop, I don’t love you!
Piper: Phoebe what are you doing?
Phoebe: (Whispers to Piper) Look, if I tell him its over then he has nothing to fear right? Besides, its not like I mean it.
Paige: Girls? Finished Chinese whispers now?
Piper: Yeah! You heard her Coop! Get out of here!
Barbas: Oh no! Don’t leave yet! We haven’t finished with you yet! We still wanna play a game!
Ext. Manor. Int. Hallway. Leo is putting Wyatt and Chris to sleep when a knock comes at the door. When Leo answers it, he finds Billie at the door.
Billie: Leo! Are the sisters in? I seen the papers? I just thought........
Leo: No Billie, they’re fighting for their lives again!
Billie: Can I come in, I really need to talk to you!
Leo: It better be quick Billie!
Leo invites her in and they both sit down on the Sofa.
Leo: Talk!
Billie: Okay, well, some people in the press know I was all friendly with the girls and whatever, so the staked out my dorm room and found all these books on witchcraft. Now they think we’re all evil! Even you Leo!
Leo: Calm down Billie! I’m sure you’ve read about Barbas right?
Billie: Yeah! That fear demon...... Oh! I get it! This is one of his tricks right?
Leo: Right! And as we speak, the girls are down there saving the world right now! Everything is going to be back to normal.
As he says that, a bright purple light takes Leo away!
Billie: Leo! Oh god!
Ext. Police Department. Int. Henry’s office.
Henry: (On Phone) Look, I understand why you feel that way miss Jones but I cant.......
The bright light takes henry too leaving the phone dangling.
Int. Cave. Piper, Phoebe, Paige, Leo, Coop and Henry are all now in the cave looking at the demons.
Xenia: Now we have them right where we want them! Welcome to hell dome!
Piper: What exactly are you talking about?
Barbas: As you have already noticed, all your lovers are here too. There’s a catch!
Paige: (Under Breath) There always is!
Barbas: Piper, Phoebe and Paige, will fight against Xenia, Melda and Kraal while their companions watch. If the Charmed Ones win, they get their lovers, but if they lose, well, lets just say, they wont be going back!
Phoebe: That’s sick!
Barbas: That’s life in the underworld!
Xenia: Let the battle commence!
The two sets of fighters engage in battle. Piper blows Xenia back against the wall, and jumps on her, pounding her with her anger. Paige orbs a rock onto Melda’s head, knocking her out and Phoebe begins to kick Kraal in the face. But all of a sudden the girls are thrown back by Barbas.
Phoebe: Hey! That’s cheating!
Barbas: You Charmed Ones weren’t destined to win! My girls were! But, if destiny wants to play funny with me, I can play funny back!
Barbas grabs Henry and shimmers out, leaving Piper, Paige, Phoebe, Coop and Leo alone.
Paige: Henry! NO!
Piper: Paige! Come on! We have to go! We’ll get Henry back I promise.
Paige falls onto the floor, crying her eyes out.
Phoebe: Something tells me Barbas wants to play a game with us. And getting Henry back isn’t going to be easy.
Phoebe walks up to Xenia and begins to state something to her, while strangling her.
Phoebe: Let it be known! The Charmed Ones are back, and if any demon wants to live, then they better stay away from Barbas!
Xenia: I will say nothing you filthy Witch!
Phoebe grabs Xenia’s knife out of the holster, and stabs the demon through the heart, making her erupt into flames.
Coop: Phoebe......
Phoebe: Coop, leave it! We have other things to take care of! Come on, lets go home!
Ext. Halliwell Manor. Int. Attic. Billie is sitting with Wyatt and Chris when the rest of them all orb back in!
Phoebe: Billie! What are you doing here?
Billie: I came to talk, then Leo disappeared so I looked after Wyatt and Chris!
Piper: Get out of my house!
Leo: Piper! She came to apologize!
Piper: For what! Killing my sisters!
Billie: You have yours back! Mine is still dead!
Piper: Boo hoo!
Phoebe: Piper......
Piper: No! Don’t you Piper me! She has caused us so much trouble. Now get out of here. We have bigger fish to fry.
Billie leaves the house leaving the sisters, Leo and Coop in the attic.
Piper: Paige, go to bed honey, we’ll look for a solution to get Henry back!
Paige: No! He’s my husband. I am not gonna stop till’ he’s back here with me!
Piper sighs and hugs her sister. Phoebe joins in and the camera then zooms out of the house.
(End Credits)
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Post by Marqelle on Jan 6, 2008 0:40:36 GMT -5
Oh my. that was really really good...I loved it! (so I blessed you) You did a very good job!
Okay, so I am only 14, and I have never done this before...but I made the nest episode if you don't mind....here it goes in the next post!
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Post by Marqelle on Jan 6, 2008 2:03:09 GMT -5
Season 9 - Episode 2 __________________________ Scene One: Underworld: Barbus is standing by Henry who is gagged and tied to a stake. There are lots of Demons around, filling the cave.
Henry: (Covered in blood and sweat, yells for help as best as he can with the gag in his mouth)
The Demons are laughing at his pathetic attempts.
Barbus: What are you yelling for, nobody is going to come for you...
Demon #1: Barbus, they could show up anytime, when are we going to start?!
Other demons around him utter sounds of agreement.
Barbus: Don't you think I know that, you idiot...THE GAME HAS BEGUN!
At this he gives an evil laugh and flips a sand timer over.
(Theme song) ___________________________________________
Next Scene: The Charmed Ones are in the living room of the manner. The book lies open on the table. Piper looks defeated, Phoebe is comforting Paige who is crying over Henry. Kids are at magic school.
Leo orbs in
Piper blows him up
Leo:(after regenerating) What was that for?!
Piper: Sorry, im just a little bit jumpy, scratch that, im pissed off!
Leo: Well I have some news, I went looking for barbus an------
Piper: You did what?!
Phoebe: Leo you could've been killed, what were you thinking?!
Leo:I can take care of myself okay, now would you here what I have to say.
The girls look at eachother then back at Leo, Piper sits down.
Leo: I found him, in the underworld with Henry.
Paige looks up at him with fear and hope in her eyes
Leo: Don't worry, he's alive, but not for long. He's playing a game with us, Henry is tied up on a stake and there is a sand timer below him, when the hour glass runs out of sand, they will set him on fire....unless you gi----
Paige: (finishes his sentence) Give him our powers right? That's what they all want, and then he will kill us anyway, so what's the point?...Henry is going to die and it's all my fault!
Phoebe: Paige hunny, none of this is our faults...we are going to get him back and it's going to be fine.
Piper: oh yeah, and just how do we do that.
Phoebe: I have a plan. (commercial break) _________________________________________________
Next Scene: Billy is at her apartment crying. She is gathering all of her books on magic and her wigs and equipment up in a bag...She's done with Magic, it has done nothing but ruin her life.
Billy looks at her wig and suit and her thoughts go to her sister and The Charmed Ones. _______________________________________________
Next Scene: Back at the Manner Phoebe sits on the couch looking up at Piper. Paige is in the kitchen looking at the book in peace.
Piper: ABSOLUTLEY NOT!
Phoebe: Piper, I understand, but it's the only way.
Piper: How can you say that after what I went through, and what you went through!
Phoebe: I know what she did was wrong, but you have to move on from that, she learned from her mistake and I trust her, and you should too, she's done more than prove herself trustworthy...Piper, listen to me, Henry's life is at stake here...(in a sarcastic sort of voice) litterally...are you willing to lose him because you can't let go of a grudge?
Piper: Alright, I'll do it...but it's for Henry only, afterwards don't expect us to be best friends or anything.
Phoebe: (In a childish voice) Yay! (hugs Piper)
They tell Paige their plan, she agrees...they get busy making potions.
They go to Billie's house and right when they are about to knock Billie comes out in a black wig with her black suit.
Phoebe: Billie?
Billie: Piper, Phoebe, Paige I wa----
Piper: Good, now that we're all aquainted, Billie, what the hell are you doing. You know what, never mind, I already know...and your not doing it!
Piper: let's talk (leads Billie back in the apartment)
The other girls follow.
(Commercial break)
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Next Scene: Barbus looks worried. The Demons are getting more and more impatient.
Demon: They aren't showing up, so far your plan isn't working!
Barbus: (Keeping up his fearless attitude, kills the demon.) Anyone else want to question my plan?
The demons are quiet and Barbus laughs. _______________________________________________
Next Scene: Piper sitting on the bed next to Billie..Phoebe and Paige sitting on chairs near by listening.
Billie: Piper I'm really sorry about what I did, I know it was wrong, and I wish you could forgive me for it, I didn't want to hurt you or them, I wasn't myself.
Piper: Yeah, I've heard this a thousand times, that's not why we are here. Barbus has Henry in the underworld and we have until a stupid sand timer runs out to give him our powers or else he dies. Phoebe has a plan that just might work, but we need your (hesitates)...help.
Billie: Of course, whatever you need, what's the plan?
___________________________________________________ Next Scene: There's a commotion around the corner from the demons.
A demon rushes through the crowd to Barbus
Demon:(out of breath) The Charmed ones are here, just over there(point to another near by cave) they are killing lots of us fast, quick, stop them.
Barbus smiles, his plan is working, he was to lure The Charmed Ones there, then, if they didn't give up there powers, kill them, and if they did, kill them...he rushes toward noise, along with all the demons...all but 1
The demon that stayed behind rushes toward Henry and starts to untie him, he freaks out and tries to kick it away.
(She reveals herself as Billie): Don't worry, we're gunna get you outa here fast!
When she almost has him, all the demons, with Barbus leading come back furiated. (Commercial Break) _______________________________________________
Barbus: Did you really think you could fool me little witch? Did you think I wouldn't find out you weren't a demon...do you think you can defeat me all by yourself?
Billie (finding her voice): No, then again, I'm not by myself am I?
Three demons step around Barbus and put crystals around him, then they reveal themselves as the charmed ones.
Barbus tries to run but is thrown backwards by the crystal cage's force.
All 4 of the girls pull water balloons out of their purses, the demons think this is a joke...but when they start throwing them their laughter quickly changes to shrieks of pain as the realize they are full of potion...
Only a few minutes later all the demons are dead. The Charmed ones hold hands and start to chant: The power of three will set us free, the power of three will set us free...over and over.
All of a sudden Barbus starts yelling in pain and then with a firey explosion leaves nothing but a pile of dust.
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Next scene: Piper, Phoebe, and Paige are at P3 sipping drinks.
Paige is cuddling with Henry then they go dance. Pheobe sees Billie come over and quickly jumps up and says: Wow, look at the time, I have to get home and get to bed.
Piper starts to protest but Phoebe is already gone.
Billie asks to talk and Piper agrees.
Piper: Billie I am sorry about the way I have been treating you, I shouldn't have held that against you, I know you didn't mean to hurt them or me, and you don't deserve to be treated the way I have been treating you. I am willing to put it behind me if you are....
Billie: Well, I don't know about that, I'll have to think on it. (she slowly smiles then wraps Piper in a hug)
Piper laughs and Leo comes over
Leo: Am I interupting?
Piper: No we were just talking...
Leo: Wanna Dance?
Piper: Sure, are you going to be okay by yourself over here?
Just then a guy comes over and kisses Billie.
Billie: Who says I'm by myself.
They all laugh and both couples go dance.
Fade Out End Credits
(Hope that wasn't too bad.)
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Post by woogyinthehouse on Jan 6, 2008 16:56:27 GMT -5
wow!! Both of those we so amazing!! Will there be an update soon, for me ;D ;D
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Post by craftsbypinky on Jan 6, 2008 17:08:57 GMT -5
What! Becomes of Paige? "I'd!" like to see more lines and scene's for Paige.
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Post by Marqelle on Jan 9, 2008 21:08:42 GMT -5
I want to do another one, but I am not good at coming up with problems they have to solve, I am better at doing one after someone else does....someone give it a shot.
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Post by ivabulgaria on Feb 2, 2008 15:48:51 GMT -5
Very nice!Good job!This is really really great!I love it!
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Post by vlindseyof2012 on Feb 16, 2008 17:35:39 GMT -5
Hi I just found this sight for Charmed Lovers and i am one of those bigtime i am 15 amd i have seasons 1-7 on dvd i am wiatin on the last season. On the topic of a season nine i think thaey should make it because they could use white nad chris and there other kids!!! Wat do ya'll think!!!
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Post by christycluvsp3 on Feb 24, 2008 15:16:46 GMT -5
Both of those stories were awesome! Please say they'll be more
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Post by ~B@MeLiSsA30@B~ on Mar 3, 2008 2:18:24 GMT -5
It was good. Please finish.
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