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Post by 1fanofcharmed on Nov 16, 2007 18:50:03 GMT -5
I hope everyone enjoy's it!
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Post by 1fanofcharmed on Nov 16, 2007 18:50:34 GMT -5
Chapter 1:
"Phoebe"! Piper Halliwell’s voice echoed through the rooms of the big Victorian home, otherwise known as the manor. When she didn't hear an answer, she started to mumble to herself. "Once again I have to carry the groceries in by myself. Just as Piper was unloading the last of the groceries she heard a slam coming from the front door. She assumed something was wrong, ever since she became a Charmed One, every time someone slammed the door the next thing they say- "We have a big problem," Phoebe Halliwell said as she walked into the kitchen. "Your right P3's bills are high again," Piper said sarcastically. Phoebe looked at Piper, "No, that’s not the problem, some owner decided to let their dog take a sh!t in our driveway"! "I think I should know, because I stepped in it," Piper said, pointing to her shoe. "Well, maybe-" "Phoebe, we were down that road before"! Piper reminded her. Oh yeah, thought Phoebe. Phoebe started to think back to when she went to the future, by the memory, it gave her the shivers. "Have you seen Paige"? Asked Phoebe. "No, I haven't seen her in while. Why'? Answered Piper. "No reason". Phoebe sat down and sighed, than put both of her palms on her chin. Piper sat down next to her. "Work"? she guessed. "Yeah". Phoebe sighed again, " The papers and the letters, and not to mention, the fluttered desk of mine". "I know what you mean, but I usually just get bills". Before Piper or Phoebe could speak again, there was a swirl of white lights, and Paige yelling, "Demon, incoming. 3, 2, 1, duck"! Than Paige dived to the ground, avoiding getting hit by an energy ball. When Prue died, Piper and Phoebe found their long-lost sister, Paige Matthews. Paige is also half witch-half white-lighter. Paige is currently unemployed because she wants to be a full time witch. "Paige"! Yelled Piper after blowing up the demon Paige brought in. "Where were you, and where did you get this demon"? Asked Piper, with a tense voice. "Sorry, he attacked me in a parking lot after my job interview", Paige said with a shrug. "Wait, you went to a job interview"? Asked Phoebe. Paige shrugged again. "Never mind". "Why didn't you vanquish him"? Asked Piper. "I did, but he tricked me and got away". Paige said. "Honestly, I don't know how he followed me here". "Well at least he is vanquished now". Piper said. "Well, I'm going to go see if I can find him in the Book of Shadows". Paige said as she headed for the stairs to the attic. Piper looked at Phoebe. "She really needs to get a job". Said Piper. Phoebe smiled a little bit, than took a sip of coffee, she had made before Paige brought in the demon. Piper walked over to the stairs. "Paige". Piper yelled up the stairs. "Yeah", Paige answered. "I have to go to work, I'll see you in a little bit". "Ok". Paige said. "Love you". "Love you too". Answered Piper. "Hey, I'm going to work too". "Ok, bye, my workaholics". Joked Paige. "Yeah, ok, lazy butt". Phoebe joked back.
This is not the end of Chapter one. I just wanted to show you what it is about.
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Post by pheebs13 on Nov 16, 2007 20:35:24 GMT -5
love it can't wait to read more!
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Post by pheebs13 on Nov 29, 2007 19:56:47 GMT -5
interesting!
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Post by 1fanofcharmed on Dec 14, 2007 16:23:28 GMT -5
I will add more to it tomorrow, I haven't had time!
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Post by 1fanofcharmed on May 4, 2008 18:49:41 GMT -5
"Hey you listen here, these bills came just came in the mail. There is no way they are due tomorrow, in fact it's impossible"! Piper shouted into the phone." "You better figure something out, because now I can't check you off my list, and I just added you to another one"! Piper slammed the phone to its receiver and brushed her hair out of her face, than started looking around. "Where's my list"?! Piper looked down at her feet and saw something stuck to her foot. "Oh, that’s where I left it". Than she plucked the paper from the bottom of her shoe, and scanned it. I have to go grocery shopping again, I don't even know what we need, and I just went shopping, thought Piper. Piper picked up the phone, and started dialing Phoebe's work number. "Phoebe, it's you sister on line 4". "Thanks". Answered Phoebe. Phoebe looked at her desk, and grunted, than she looked at the phone, and grunted even louder. "Hello". "Hi Pheebs, do you need anything from the grocery store"? Asked Piper. Phoebe thought for a moment. "Not that I know of, but Paige said we need more milk, coffee, and an extra par of plates-" "Why an extra pair of plates", Piper interrupted. "No clue, but Paige would know. Bye". Phoebe said quickly, and then cut the line so she wouldn't have to say anything further. Piper looked into the phone. "There better not be anything broken".
Piper was outside of the manor, struggling to get the door unlocked. When she finally got inside she started calling out for help. "Paige. I need help with the groceries. Paige! Paige where are you." After many times yelling Paige’s name Piper abandoned the groceries to go look for her. "Paige where are you". Shouted Piper. When Piper saw no sign of Paige she called Phoebe at work again. "Phoebe it's your sister Piper again, on line 3." "Thank you." "Yeah, what’s up". Phoebe said while shuffling with some papers". "What’s up to you too"? Answered Piper. There was a long pause. "Anyway, I can't find Paige anywhere". Piper said after a long sigh. "Is her car there"? Asked Phoebe. "Yeah, and every time I call for her, she doesn't answer, it's like she can't here my calls." Phoebe put down the papers in her hand. "Did you try her cell?” Asked Phoebe. "Uh huh." Answered Piper. "Ok, don't panic." Phoebe said. "Well I'm starting too." Answered Piper. "Ok, don't panic much, because I'm on my way home." Phoebe said while getting up out of her chair. "Ok, see you in a bit." Piper said as she cut the line. Than Piper looked around, and tried to calm herself down a bit as best as she could, because for all she knows Paige could be out enjoying herself, and avoiding coming home.
This is the end of Chapter 1.
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Post by 1fanofcharmed on May 4, 2008 18:51:00 GMT -5
What happened, thought Paige. She looked around, to an unfamililer place. Where am I. Paige put her hand to her head, because it hurt badly. She tried to stand up, but couldn't. So she just lifted herself up enough to sit. Than Paige felt the ground she was sitting on. Sand? Paige picked up a handful. This is no ordanary sand. That's for sure. Than Paige let the sand loose, and tried to figure out how she got here. Paige thought deep for an anwser. That the last I remember is...looking in the Book of Shadows... Fighting demons...a big whole... Paige let her mind loose, and looked around, than said aloud. "Then waking up here".
Back at the manor, Piper was walking around the attic in circles with the Book of Shadows in her hand, open. Flipping page, after page, but she couldn't find a thing, not even a single hint or clue. Phoebe just got out of her car, than slammed the door shut. Than plowed up the stairs, and barged in the house. Lucky for her the door was unlocked.
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Post by 1fanofcharmed on May 4, 2008 18:51:31 GMT -5
Than Phoebe threw her purse, and walked quickly over to the kitchen to see if Piper was there, nothing. Than Phoebe walked over to the next place she could possibly be. "Piper, are you up there"? Phoebe yelled from the stairs. "Yeah". Again Phoebe plowed her way up the stairs, and up to the attic. When she got there, she saw Piper walking around in circles reading the Book of Shadows. Phoebe raised an eyebrow, and just stared at Piper. Finally Phoebe blurted out, "What are you doing"? Piper stopped in her tracks, and looked up to find Phoebe looking at her like she was crazy. Than for no reason, Piper said, "huh"? Phoebe didn't move at all, but eased her look a bit. "Well-" "You looked at me like I was crazy". Piper interrupted. "Honey, you were walking in circles". Phoebe tried hard not to laugh. "Oh, that’s why I'm so dizzy". Joked Piper. "So, what are you looking for"? Asked Phoebe. "Uh. I don't know. Just, nothing that would help". Piper said, as she slammed the book shut, and sat down with a heavy sigh. "Do you think a demon attacked her"? Phoebe looked around the room, not even noticing Piper was talking to her. "Pheebs. Are you even listening to me"? Asked Piper. "No". "Well, you could of lied"! Said Piper rolling her eyes. "Piper". Phoebe said, while looking around at the attic". "What". Said Piper, catching Phoebe's gaze. "Look around". Phoebe told Piper. "Look around at what"? Phoebe rolled her eyes, than said very tensely. “The attic.” Piper started to look around, and saw things she didn't notice before. The attic was a disaster. There are scorch marks, five to be exact. Piper looked at Phoebe, than back to the attic room, and said, "You may be on to something".
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Post by ~B@MeLiSsA30@B~ on May 5, 2008 2:55:12 GMT -5
Awesome Job So Far
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Post by 1fanofcharmed on May 5, 2008 15:16:46 GMT -5
Thanx!
Paige had enough energy now, to think clearly. Paige came to the conclusion that she was in the underworld, because she constantly heard voices, creepy voices and noises. Plus the sand, and not to mention that creeps walk by every second, and its dark all the time. She couldn't be anywhere else!
I'll type more tomorrow! I have to go.
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Post by 1fanofcharmed on May 15, 2008 15:17:40 GMT -5
There wasn't that many things in the room, or cave. Just a couple chairs and a table would be about it. Paige groaned. "This is enough for me." Just as Paige tried to orb out, she had bounced back on the floor. "What the hell is going on?!" Yelled Paige. Alarmed Paige looked around to see if anybody heard her. "Your quite the loud one, aren't you." Came a voice from the other side of the room. Ignoring the comment, Paige asked, "Am I in a bubble?" "Yes. I had to stop that orbing power of yours some how, right." Said the voice. Paige turned around. Than she saw a tall lean shadow, but what she saw next made her gasp. "Glen!" Screamed Paige, horrified. "Yes Paige, glad to see you reconize me." "But, but it's immpossible, your mortal." "Not anymore Paige." Paige watched Glen tuck in his tie under his jacket. "Why?" Asked Paige. "Because, I was promised a life, a life of happiness and power, what more could I ask for!" Glen said, loudly. "Thats not who you are, your better than all of this, your human!" Screamed Paige. "NO! And I never will be again thanks to-" "Thanks to who? Me? No, no, you have it all wrong. I'm good, not evil!" Inturruped Paige. All of the sudden Paige heard laughter filling the cave. "Ha! You think he got influence from, you? You got it all wrong baby, he got it from me." Than another man came into veiw. He had blazzing green eyes, nice laid back brown hair, to Paige, a stricking reseblence to Cole Turner, Phoebe's former demon lover. "At the moment, yes, but I can't understand why." "Ha. Did you hear that Glen, "at the moment," come on." As expected, Glen joined Cole's twin for a minute of laughter. Braking their laughter, Paige asked, "So, who are you again?" "The name is Curt, I know you want to know why your buddy is here so here it goes-wait, I don't want to tell you that, do I? Didn't think so." He sure does babble a lot, thought Paige.
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Post by PAIGE IS THE BEST!!!! on May 20, 2008 2:37:00 GMT -5
they good did you type that all or copy it?
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Post by 1fanofcharmed on Jun 12, 2008 11:19:39 GMT -5
I typed it. And it took a while too. I just didn't want to over do one reply. I have two notebooks full of this story.
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Post by 1fanofcharmed on Nov 29, 2009 15:28:06 GMT -5
I totally revised the whole thing. so don't read this one...it stinks.
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