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Post by ~:*Destiny*:~ on Feb 23, 2008 13:30:48 GMT -5
This is a story about Prue coming back from the dead. It's PG-13! Hope you like it there most probably will be 10 to 12 chapters! Enjoy!
Chapter 1
Paige walking down the stairs with laundry sees a sad Piper. "Oh no here we go again", says Paige.
"Piper it's not your fault that what happened with Prue.....", says Paige. " Paige, your right that was 2 years ago I am pregnant now I can't be depressed. So voila! New me!", exclaims Piper. "I see that", says Phoebe.
" Hey!', says Piper. "Well I got to go to work!", exclaims both Paige and Phoebe.
"bye", Piper yells. Piper goes up into the attic takes the Book of Shadows and searches through it to find a page of resurrection.
"I got it!", says Piper. Piper takes out a book of black magic that Paige kept for the joy of reading. Piper makes a potion and spills the potion on the book.
Piper yells and chants,"Bring back the original power of three, bring back my sister Prue, to bring back life to you."
Then all of a sudden.
Prue exclaims," Piper did you use my shampoo again?!"
Piper whispers,"Prue?" Phoebe says, "yeah well who else?" "It's just me and you and Prue here oh and Leo and Cole and the baby in your belly!"
"Where's Paige?", exclaims Piper. "Who?!", yells Phoebe.
"Yeah who are you talking about now about my shampoo again?"
TO BE CONTINUED........ CHAPTER 2 COMING SOON!.....
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christycluvsp3
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Post by christycluvsp3 on Feb 24, 2008 15:18:42 GMT -5
Wow... Can't wait to read more... Love it!
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Post by ~:*Destiny*:~ on Feb 24, 2008 15:35:25 GMT -5
Chapter 2
Piper says," You guys dont remember Paige?" Phoebe says," No!"
Prue exclaims," What are you talking about?" Piper says, " Your dead!" Prue throws shampoo down. " I am not dead!!" Piper exclaims, " And phoebe how come your not at work?" Prue says," Are you ok?" "Phoebe dosen't have a job yet she just got out of colege." Piper says,"That means I'm not pregant!' Piper cries. Phoebe hugs her. Prue exclaims," What! Are you talking about!?" Piper, "OK?" Piper runs to the attic, flips threw the book, and is mumbling,"Where's the spell!" Phoebe says "OK now I am confused!"
Then a demon comes and hits Phoebe. Phoebe levaites and kicks him. Prue stabs him. Prue," KABOOM HIM!" Piper kabooms him. Piper says," Here it is!" Piper reads Now take me back where time had stopped to help me now dear god i'm stuck!
Then it brings piper to a unlit room.
Phoebe,"Shhh!" "There's a monster!"
Then Piper gets punched in the face! Then she wakes up in her bed then Leo is choking her. Then she wakes up to find Prue on the ground. Piper,"Prue!?"
TO BE CONTINUED IN CHAPTER 3!!!
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Post by ~B@MeLiSsA30@B~ on Feb 29, 2008 15:42:49 GMT -5
That is very intense. By the way Miss_New_Orleans, I wrote my first story ever. It's called,"Where is Piper." You told me to let you know when I write one. Your story so far is really good. I'm looking forward on reading more.
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Post by ~:*Destiny*:~ on Mar 2, 2008 19:14:22 GMT -5
Chapter 3
Piper: Prue!? Prue: (choking) Where am I? Piper: home! Prue: home? --------------------------------------------------------------------- Paige: hello are you an innocent? Prue: No I am Prue who are you? Paige: your Prue? Prue: yeah Paige: I am Paige your sister Prue: PIPER!!! Piper: yes? Prue: who is this? Piper: our sister -------------------------------------------------------------------------
Phoebe: jason! Jason: yes Phoebe Phoebe: I have got to go home emergency Jason: how bad Phoebe; ugh....... my dog died Jason: really? Phoebe: ugh huh jason: (kisses her) sure but finish that column tonight all right? Phoebe: all right -------------------------------------------------------------------------------
In Driveway
Cole; (punches Phoebe) I'm back! shimmers her to the underworld.
TO BE CONTINUED IN CHAPteR 4
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Post by ~B@MeLiSsA30@B~ on Mar 3, 2008 2:21:51 GMT -5
Are you serious. Cole took Phoebe. I wanna know what happens.
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Post by Astral Echo on Mar 3, 2008 16:27:08 GMT -5
Is anyone else seriously confused? Or is just me, this all seems a little rushed, it's moving a little too quickly. Try and slow things down a little, I liked the idea (as unoriginal as it is hehe) but the whole thing needs a little reworking.
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Post by ~:*Destiny*:~ on Mar 9, 2008 13:24:17 GMT -5
(thanks to all who reads and comments! ;D)
Ch. 4
Setting Cole's Apartment.
Phoebe: Get off of me! I thought I vanquished you! Cole: My love will be with you forever! Phoebe: I vanquished you our love is not forever! Cole: yes it is or I will haunt you forever! Cole kisses Phoebe. Cole: I love you! Phoebe: I hate you! Phoebe hits him. Phoebe: now how do you get out of here? ----------------------------------------------------------------------------- Piper: That's what happened when you died! Prue: oh my God! Cole turned Phoebe into Queen of the Underworld! Are you sure he's gone? Paige: We're sure we're sure! Prue hugs Paige. Prue: Sorry for not knowing who you were earlier! Paige: oh it's ok! -------------------------------------------------------------------------------
TO BE CONTINUED IN CHAPTER 5!
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CharmBffy
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Post by CharmBffy on Mar 10, 2008 12:18:03 GMT -5
this is very good
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Post by ~:*Destiny*:~ on Mar 12, 2008 16:42:42 GMT -5
(thank you 4 your comments! ;D)
Ch. 5: Getting Out!
At Cole's apartment.
Phoebe: This stupid door won't let me get out! Cole wakes up. Cole: Phoebe you can never vanquish me! Our love is forever! Phoebe: NO COLE! Cole kisses Phoebe Phoebe: I am seeing some one else and I am NOT in love with you! Cole: yes you are damnit! -------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Setting Halliwell Manor.
Prue: awww and you had baby Wyatt! He's sooo cute! Wyatt coes. Prue kisses his nose. Prue: I love you Wyatt it's your Aunite Prue! Piper: He likes you! Prue: I love him! Paige: He's a cutie isn't he? Prue: yes he is!
Meanwhile............
Prue: I haven't seen Phoebe Piper: Your right Paige you said she would be coming home right away! Paige: I called her she said she'd be coming Piper: I'll call her. Piper dials Phoebe's cell phone number. -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------
At Cole's apartment..........
Phoebe's cell rings.
Cole: (punches her down) Your not answering that phone! Phoebe: yes I am! ( tries to pull Cole off of her) Cole: (kisses her) (says a spell) Phoebe: what the hell are you doing? Cole: you will love me and obey me! Phoebe: I love you master! Phoebe makes out with him. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------- TO BE CONITNUED IN CHAPTER 6: Obey and Love Me!
Comments and Reviews go under.
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Post by ~B@MeLiSsA30@B~ on Mar 12, 2008 17:05:52 GMT -5
Whoa. Phoebe is under a spell. What is gonna happen. What are sisters gonna do? Please, keep updating. ;D
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Post by ~:*Destiny*:~ on Mar 15, 2008 12:32:47 GMT -5
(thanks to all who read and replied! ;D) Chapter 6: Obey and Love Me! Setting Halliwell Manor. Piper: She hasn't answered! Prue: where was she last? Paige: at her work Piper: she's not there i called and the lady said she left hours ago! Prue: Cole! Prue astral projects to where Phoebe is. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Setting Cole's apartment. We can see Phoebe and Cole having sex. Prue: Phoebe! Phoebe stops having sex with Cole. Phoebe: what!? A little privacy here Prue! Cole: Prue!? Cole stops the spell Phoebe's in. Phoebe: what the hell!? You son of a......... Cole: Your sister Prue is alive! Phoebe: Prue! Phoebe puts a robe on and goes and hugs Prue. Prue: what was going on here? Phoebe: he put me under a love and obey spell! Prue: (moves the vase using her mind) and hits Cole. Phoebe: good one sis! they high-five. Cole's knocked out. Prue: Let's get out of here. They astral project out. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------- TO BE CONTINUED IN CHAPTER 7: The Power of 4! Please comment under here. Thanks!
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Post by ~B@MeLiSsA30@B~ on Mar 16, 2008 18:17:17 GMT -5
WOW!!!!!!! That's all I have to say. WOW!!!!
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Post by ~:*Destiny*:~ on Mar 19, 2008 20:31:10 GMT -5
(thanks to all who read and comment! ;D)
Chapter 7: The Power of 4!
Setting Halliwell Manor.
Phoebe: That's all that had happened! Prue: I can't believe Cole would do that! Phoebe: Oh I hear Leo! Leo appears. Leo: hey Piper! Piper kisses Leo. Paige: Ok.... Ok what are we gonna do about Cole? Prue: Let's let Phoebe decide Phoebe: well...... I'm in love with Jason yet again I still have feelings for Cole! Leo: I thought we killed him? Paige: We did! Piper: but.... he came back hunny! Leo: Oh! Piper: Yeah Phoebe: I think we should banish him 'till I think about it! Prue: that's a good idea hun! Phoebe: let's go! Leo: ok Piper: no hunny, you stay! Leo: but.... Piper: no Piper kisses him. -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Setting Cole's apartment.
Cole: Phoebe! Phoebe: Cole I'm in love with some one else I have decide that's why I'm gonna have to banish you again! Cole: why? Phoebe: (kisses him) It's for your own good Cole chokes. Cole: Witch's Kiss Potion? Phoebe: yeah! Phoebe, Prue, Piper, & Paige: The power of four will set us free!, The power of four will set us free!, The power of four will set us free!, The power of four will set us free! Cole dissappears into the Underworld. -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------
THE END OF THIS THREAD AND STORY STAY TUNED FOR THE SEQUEL THREAD CALLED THE POWER OF FOUR!
COMMENTS GO UNDER!
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Post by ~B@MeLiSsA30@B~ on Mar 19, 2008 20:43:32 GMT -5
Wow. That's really sad what happened to Cole. Though I can't wait to read The Power Of Four.
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Post by charmed1atw on Mar 19, 2008 21:13:10 GMT -5
I agree, everything seemed a little rushed. I do like the part where Prue and Paige are finally standing face to face. But Prue was a bit nicer than what she would have been. I meen her life was taken and another sister was in her place. Prue would not have been all hugs. I meen i really like the idea about Prue coming back. Thats what i had said before that it was to bad Charmed wasn't on anymore because they should have made Prue come back. Even if it where for a day. Seeing Paige and Prue together would have been great. But i do love story and i can't wait to read more. Good Job
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Post by ~B@MeLiSsA30@B~ on Mar 22, 2008 2:09:57 GMT -5
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Post by CharmBffy on Jun 16, 2008 12:04:19 GMT -5
this is really good
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