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Post by Cara Halliwell on Mar 14, 2008 18:14:32 GMT -5
This is my story i wrote. comment please!
Paige blinked. What time is it? she wondered. She looked over at the clock. 9:47 AM. She groaned and went down to the kitchen to get some coffee. Piper was sitting at the table with her own cup staring into space. "Mornin'" said Paige tiredly. Piper looked up. Her eyes had dark circles under them. "Hi. What's up?" she asked. "What's wrong? You look like you've been up all night," said Paige as she got her cup and sat down. "The latest demon. I swear, they are so.." Suddenly, they were flung into the air. "What the hell?" Piper shouted. They looked up and saw a demon right in front of them. Paige quickly orbed a knife into him. "RRRRAAAAAAAAAAGH!" it screamed. Then a puff of red smoke went everywhere. "That was easy," Paige said. "Too easy," Piper growled. "Leo! Get down here!" she shouted looking upwards. Leo appeared in front of them. "What's wrong? What happened?" "The latest demon. That's what happened," she said. Paige nodded. "But we vanquished him."
Part two coming soon!
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Post by ~:*Destiny*:~ on Mar 14, 2008 18:24:39 GMT -5
good! ;D This is good!
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Post by Cara Halliwell on Mar 14, 2008 18:33:00 GMT -5
Ok Part Two is heeerrreee!!!
"What happened?" Phoebe asked, running into the kitchen. "A demon," they said at the same time. "I was up all night researching," said Piper. "Oh,honey," said Phoebe sympethetically. "You go upstairs and rest," she said. "But..." Piper began. "We'll be fine. Now go," said Phoebe, rushing her out the door. "I'm gonna go," said Leo. "Just call if you need me," he said. Then he orbed out. "I'm gonna go check the B.O.S for information," said Paige. "What's that?" Piper asked, walking up the stairs with Phoebe. "Hello? Book Of Shadows? B.O.S?!" she walked up to the attic.
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Paige sighed. This is useless, she thought. She had flipped through the Book a thousand times and found nothing. All the times they looked, they always found something. But this time, the Book had failed. "How's it going?" Phoebe walked into the attic. "Zippo," said Paige, disappointed. "That's strange. The Book always has something..." Phoebe looked through it. Paige is right, she thought. "Leo! Leo!" Phoebe called, a hint of worry in her voice. Leo orbed down. "I have some information. The Elders said they think you didn't vanquish that demon. You hurt him," he said. "But who is it?" Phoebe asked impatiently. "Well, they think it could be Redblood, but they're not sure," he said. "That's not good enough!" Leo's face fell. "Leo, I'm sorry. Please forgive me. I'm really sorry," Phoebe said. "Who is Redblood?" asked Paige, changing the subject. "He kills Whitelighters. He was probably after you, Paige. You're half Whitelighter." Just then, they heard Piper scream...
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Post by ~B@MeLiSsA30@B~ on Mar 16, 2008 18:19:14 GMT -5
Oh no! WHy did Piper scream? Please update soon.  |
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Post by Cara Halliwell on Mar 16, 2008 19:53:46 GMT -5
Ok final part is heeeerrreeeeee!
Redblood was towering over Piper, energyball in hand."Energyball!" Paige called.It appeared in her hand,and she hurled it at the demon.But he was too quick. He shimmered out. Phoebe ran to Piper. "Are you ok?" she asked. "If by ok you mean absolutely terrified, then yes," Piper said, taking a deep breath. "Well, let's get started on a potion. Phoebe you write a spell," said Paige. Phoebe left the room. Piper and Paige went into the kitchen.
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"Pass me that container over there, will you?" Piper said. "Is this the last ingrediant?" Paige asked passing it to her. "Yup. Now we need that spell from Phoebe." Suddenly Phoebe walked in. "Got the potion?" "Check," Piper said. "Alright. Let's do this."
"Demon of blood
Demon of death
We summon thee," They chanted. "Get ready," Leo called. Redblood appeared, this time with an atheme. He hurled it at Leo. "Atheme!" Paige called. But Redblood pushed her out of the way. Suddenly, he stabbed Paige. Phoebe kicked Redblood to the ground with a roundhouse kick. She and Piper knelt beside Paige to say the spell.
"Demon of blood
Demon of hell
Our magic takes you with this spell!" They cried. Redblood's head reared back. Suddenly, he exploded. Paige lay on the ground. Leo bent over her and placed his hands over her wound. The wound glowed and disappeared. Paige sat up. "That was close," she said. "Too close," Piper said, helping her up.
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Piper smiled as she sat in her favorite place in the world: P3. It felt good to be there again. She handed Phoebe and Paige their drinks. "We kicked his butt!" Phoebe was saying to Paige. "It feels good to be here," she said looking around. "I'll say," said Paige. "If only Prue were here. She would have liked to see that." They were silent for a while. Then Paige said, "I think I'll go talk to that hottie over there and have some fun." She walked away. Piper looked at Phoebe and grinned.
The End
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Post by ~B@MeLiSsA30@B~ on Mar 21, 2008 12:58:24 GMT -5
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Post by Cara Halliwell on Mar 26, 2008 18:47:42 GMT -5
thank you! i am actually working on another one now, so i will post that when im done. it will be a little longer, but it will definately be good.
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Post by ~B@MeLiSsA30@B~ on Apr 4, 2008 0:42:33 GMT -5
Alright. No problem. I'll read it. ;D
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