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Post by hydrokinisis on Oct 15, 2005 19:20:21 GMT -5
Teaser:
*It's night!!! Phoebe and Piper are in the attic, Phoebe picks up a vase!!!*
Phoebe:"You ready!!!"
Piper:"Yes!!!"
Phoebe:"Are you sure?"
Piper:"Just drop it!!!"
*Phoebe drops the vase on the floor, it breaks!!! Then Piper opens her hands!!! Suddenly, the vase unbreaks and reverses back into Phoebe's hands!!!*
Phoebe:"Wow, I think you got it down!!!"
Piper:"Well, thanks for helping me practice!!!"
Phoebe:"Yes, again you have a new cool power and I'm stuck with throwaway ones!!!"
Piper:"That's not true, I would love to have your levitating power!!!"
Phoebe:"Really?"
Piper:"Heck no, I can blow up stuff!!!"
Phoebe:"Uh, your so mean!!!"
*Phoebe takes a piece a paper and throws it at Piper!!! Piper freezes it!!!*
Piper:"I can freeze stuff, too!!!"
*Piper giggles, and Phoebe giggles with her!!! Cuts to a building, then cuts to inside, 2 business men are discussing something!!!*
Phil:"I told you, Tom, I'm not selling you that property!!!"
Tom:"But it would be such a good investment for you!!!"
Phil:"Do really think I would give it up that easy, I am making good profit at that factory!! Why would I let an amatuer like you have it!!!"
Tom:"Your making a big mistake!!!"
Phil:"No you did, by dragging here for this foolish meeting!!! Good day to you!!!"
*Tom walks out the room fustrated!!! Phil gets his things, then leaves!!! Cuts to Phil outside in the parking lot, he enters his car!!! He then hears something, but ignores it and starts the car!!! Then a demonic-looking bug crawls out the back seat, then another and another!!! They have green eyes, four long legs, antenas, and little claws on their legs!!! Then one of them bits Phil's hand, he shouts, then looks to see the strange lokking bugs!!! Then more of them crawl all over the windows, and more come out of the car's back seat!!! Phil screams!!!*
Phil:"HELP....SOMEBODY....HELPPPPPP!!!"
*The windows crack opens, and all the bugs crawl on to Phil........eating him alive as the car sakes!!!*
Opening Credits with Billie and Dex!!!
Act 1:
*Cuts to the manor, thens goes inside to see Piper workingout to a fitness video!!!*
Fitness instructer:"Now kick your legs, and lift them up!!!"
*Piper kicks her legs up!!!*
Fitness Instructer:"Now move your arms!!!"
*Piper moves her arms up and down!!!! Phoebe and Paige enter the room and watch!!!*
Fitness Intructor:"Now turn, and jump!!!"
*Piper turns and is embarssed to see Paige and Phoebe!!*
Piper:"What are you guys doing here!!!"
Phoebe:"Apparantly watching your tae-boing!!!"
Piper:"It's not Tae-Bo....!!!"
Paige:"It is a workout video!!!"
Piper:"Yes!!!"
Phoebe:"Since when do you do work-out videos!!!"
Piper:"Since I've realized I've been gaining a little weight and I wanted to shed a few bounds!!! By the way don't you have work and don't you have whitelighter.....stuff!!!"
Phoebe:"I'm heading there now!!!"
Paige:"And I do have to check up on a charge in New York!!! Which it should be the afternoon there, so gotta go!!!"
*Paige orbs out!!!"
Phoebe:"Gotta go, too!!!"
*Phoebe walks out the door!!! Piper looks arounds, then turns the video back on!!! Cuts to Magic School, Billie is walking down the hall, and Leo comes out a room!!!*
Leo:"Hey....Billie!!!"
Billie:"What's up Leo!?"
Leo:"Well, Ms. Morgan is sick today, and she can't teach her class!!!"
Billie:"That's to bad, who's gonna fill in!!!"
Leo:"Uh, well that's why I need you!!!"
Billie:"Huh?"
*Cuts to Billie and Leo in front of a classroom!!!*
Billie:"LEO....are you crazy? You want me to substitute!!!"
Leo:"No of the other teachers can, their too busy!!!"
Billie:"Well, I can't do it!!!"
Leo:"Yes, you can....I'll promise I'll make it up to you but for now!!! You must teach!!!"
*Leo pushes Billie into the class!!! The kids stop and look at Billie......Billie is in shock!!!*
Billie:"Uhhhhh....hello, I'm Ms......, well I'm just Billie!!!"
*Class continues to look at her weird!!! Cuts to Phoebe at her job!!! She is busy writing, when Elise comes in!!!*
Phoebe:"Elise....I'm just got this article done, and I'm working on the next 2 right now!!!"
*Phoebe hands Elise the article!!!*
Elise:"Good work, Phoebe....you've been really wroking your tail off here!!!"
Phoebe:"Well, I've just never enjoyed working so much than I do now!!!"
Elise:"Huh, I wish all the other columnists would say that....your not kidding are you?"
Phoebe:"No....really, I mean after working for 5 years, everything with my family, especially my wedding coming up, I'm really just enjoying what I'm doing here even more!!!"
Elise:"That's good, Phoebe.....might even get you some benefits in the future!!!"
*Elise walks out, and closes the door than Phoebe looks puzzled!!!*
Phoebe:"Elise...what do mean by that!!!"
*Phoebe heads to the door, than Paige orbs right in front of her!!!*
Phoebe:"Ohhh...Paige, what you doing, orbbing at my job again!!!"
Paige:"Sorry, but this is important!!"
Phoebe:"Why.......... what happened?"
Paige:"I came from the elders they just told me about an attack that happened yesterday!!!"
Phoebe:"What attack!!!"
Paige:"I'll tell you on the way!!!"
*Paige grabs Phoebe and they orb out!!! Cuts to the parking lot where there are police stands around the car where the Phil died!!!*
Phoebe:"God, this looks horrible....what did the elders say exactly!!!"
Paige:"Well, I was with my charge in New York when they called me and told me a businness man in San Fransico was violently attacked by a demonic force!!!"
Phoebe:"That's it?"
Paige:"Pretty much!!!"
Phoebe:"Man, those elders are real these days helpful!!!"
*The girls look under car and see blood!!!*
Phoebe:"Well, what ever it was......it sure did leave a mess!!!"
Paige:"We should check his office!!!"
*As the girls orb out, a demonic bug comes out of the car!!! Cuts to the girls at the office!!!*
Paige:"We should probably look for something suspicious!!! Try touching something to get a premontion!!!"
Phoebe:"Like always!!!"
*Paige looks at the draws, and Phoebe checks that cabinets!! Then looks under the table and carpet!!!*
Paige:"Find anything?"
Phoebe:"No!!"
*Phoebe then goes to a wall and takes a picture off the wall to reveal a safe!!!*
Phoebe:"What about in here!!!"
Paige:"Safe door!!!"
*Paige waves her hand, and the safe door orbs off and away!!! They both look inside the safe, then over at the other end of the room, the demonic bug crawls up the wall and watches the girls!!!*
Phoebe:"There's nothing in here, Paige!!"
Paige:"I don't undertsand!!!"
Phoebe:"Yeah, well I don't understand you taking me out of work for a wild goose chase!!!"
Paige:"Hey, I'm just the messenger here, if you want to blame anyone blame the elders!!!"
Phoebe:"Well, whatever happened, we'll have to find out later, now tkae me back to work!!"
*The demonic bug than jumps on to Paige's back as the girls orb out!!!*
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Post by hydrokinisis on Oct 18, 2005 22:53:43 GMT -5
Act 2:
*Cuts to Billie in class at Magic School!!!*
Billie:"Okay, open your books to page 25!!!"
*A kid interepts, his using his powers on another student!!!*
Rob:"Owwwwwhhhh!!!"
*Billie turns to the boy!!!*
Billie:"Hey!!!"
*She goes to the back!!!*
Billie:"What did you do?"
Rick:"Nothing!!!"
Billie:"Yeah, right!!! I just saw you using your powers on him!!! What's your name!!!"
Rick:"Rick!!!"
Billie:"Well, Rick, either you stop picking on your classmate or you'll be in detetion!!!"
Rick:"Ohhh....I'm sooo scared!!!"
Billie:"Yeah, well you better be!!!"
*Billie, turns around nerviously to the front!! Cuts to Paige and Piper at the manor in the kitchen!!! Piper is feeding Chris and Wyatt is palying!!!*
Paige:"I'm telling you, Piper, it doesn't make sense!!! Me and Phoebe didn't find anything at the office or the parking lot!!"
Piper:"Did Phoebe try getting a premonition?"
Paige:"Yeah, but she didn't!!!"
Piper:"Well, that's weird!!!"
Paige:"I need to find out more info about this murder!!!"
Piper:"On the news today, they said the guy was literally eatin' alive!!!"
Paige:"I'll be back!!!"
Piper:"Were you going?"
Paige:"To do more investigating!!!"
*Paige leaves the kitchen, then the demonic bug crawls out of a corner and watches Piper as she cooks, then crawls away!!! Cuts to the Police station, Paige enters!!!*
Officer:"Paige!!!"
Paige:"Jerry!!!"
*They hug!!!*
Officer:"What are you doing here, I mean we weren't expecting you come back here ever since you left!!!"
Paige:"Yeah, I know, but this is kind of an emergency, I need your help!!!"
Officer:"What kind of help to you need!!!"
Paige:"Do you know about that business guy who got murdered today!!!"
Officer:"Yeah!!!"
Paige:"Well, would you mind telling me about it!!!"
Officer:"Well, his name was Phillipe Garyson, CEO of Ground acres!!! The man was very wealthy but was very genious!!! On the night of his death, his busniess partner, Tom Roberts wanted to buy one of Phillipe's factory, but Phillipe refused because Tom was too new to the business!!
Paige:"So how did he die?"
Officier:"Phillipe's death is strange, it seemed like he was eaten alive!!!"
Paige:"By what?"
Officer:"Well, after his biopsy, the doctor revealed bite marks that seem to be from some type of insect or bug!!! But they can't find the origin of the insect that it is!!!"
Paige:"Hmmmm....did anyone question Tom?"
Officer:"Yes, but he swears he left before the attack!!! But he did seem pretty suspicious!!!"
Paige:"Then, why wasn't he suspect?"
Officer:"After, we found out that Phillipe's death wasn't by a person, we dropped that aligation!!!"
*Paige then gives a look of concern and confusion!!! Then cuts to Billie back at magic school!!!*
Billie:"Okay, why don't I take this time to get to know you guys and your powers!!!"
*Billie points to one kid!!!*
Angela:"My name is Angela, and I have the power of hydrokinesis!!!"
*Angela waves her hand and creates a stream on her desk!!!*
Billie:"That's really cool!!!"
*Billie points to the next student!!!*
Carol:"My name is Carol, and I have the power of telepathy!!!"
Billie:"Really......doesn't that mean you can read minds?"
Carol:"Yeah!!!"
Billie:"So...what am I thinking!!!"
Carol:"Your thinking....why did come to magic school today and get stuck subsituting these little.....
Billie:"OKAY...thanks for that!!!"
*Carol sits down, then Rick laughs!!!*
Billie:"Have something to say again.........whatever your name is, again!!!"
Rick:"It's Rick....and I just think it's sad!!!"
Billie:"What?"
Rick:"Well, you obviously, don't want to be here!!!"
Billie:"Yeah, but I'm still the...authority figure here.....so....*Billie sticks out her tongue!!!*
Rick:"Your not the boss of me!!!"
Billie:"And your not as tough as you think!!!"
Rick:"And you are!!!"
Billie:"Try me!!"
Rick:"I could leave this classroom and you won't do a thing!!!"
Billie:"Go ahead!!!"
*Rick jumps in the air and levitates!!*
Rick:"Later!!!"
*Rick then flies to the door, but Billie waves her hand , sends Rick across the room to the floor!!!*
Billie:"Try again!!!"
*Rick gets up angerily and flies striaght at Billie!!! Billie catches him in mid air, then flips him over to the ground!!! The class gasps and Billie looks down at Rick!!! Leo then comes in quickly!!!*
Leo:"Is everything alright in here?"
Billie:"Oh, everythings fine Leo, Now won't you get back in your sit, Rick!!!"
*Billie smriks, and Rick is annoyed!!! Cuts to Paige at the business offices of Phil's corporation!!! She walks around then knocks on a door!!!*
Tom:"Come in!!!"
*Paige comes in!!!*
Paige:"Hello, um are Tom Roberts?"
Tom:"Yes.....who are you?"
Paige:"I'm Paige Mathews!!!"
Tom:"Are with the police!!!"
Paige:"No...I mean I was..."
Tom:"I have busy matters to attend to so can you make this quick!!!"
Paige:"The night Phil was mudered, you 2 had an arguement!!!"
Tom:"Yes, he would sell me one of his factorys, which would have been a good investment!!!"
Paige:"Why did you need it?"
Tom:"Because he didn't trust me because I was new to the business!!! I was his partner, I trust him like a friend!!! I ask him for one fave and he didn't even give me a chance!!! All the thigs I could do with that factory, the power....the success...a perfect home for my....!!!"
Paige:"For your what?"
Tom:"None of your business!!!"
*Tom tries to leave, but Paige stops him!!!*
Paige:"You seem pretty mad!!!"
Tom:"What!!!"
Paige:"Maybe even venegeful!!!"
Tom:"What you implying...that I had something to do with Phil's murder because the police already checked me!!!"
Paige:"I'm just saying...if you did have anything to do with his death...I have my eye on you!!!"
*Paige then leaves the room!! Tom has a look of anger in his eyes!!!*
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Post by hydrokinisis on Oct 20, 2005 23:01:38 GMT -5
Act 3:
*Cuts to the manor, then to Piper cleaning in the halls!! The demonic bug is crawl on the wall next to Piper, but she doesn't notice!! The bug crawls, crawls and crawls into the boys' room!!! Then, Chris starts to cry, Piper than stops cleaning and runs into the room!!!*
Piper:"Chris....honey what's wrong!!"
*She sees Chris crying at the scary toy bear!!!*
Piper:"It's okay, mommy gonna take the bear away!!!"
*Piper walks over and takes the bear away!!! The demonic bug is now on the ceiling and is watching Piper!!!
Piper:"You see all better!!!"
*Piper tickles Chris and he smiles, then Piper leaves the room again while the demonic bug looks at Chris!!! Piper goes into the hallway and continues to clean when Chris starts to cry again!!!*
Piper:"UUhhh...what now!!!"
*Piper enters the room again and is shocked to see a creepy-looking bug on the side of Chris' crib!!*
Piper:"OMG!!! Chris!!!"
*The demonic bug then jumps on Piper, Piper screams as she trys to get it off!!! Then she falls to the ground and the demonic bug disappears!!! Piper gets up, and then looks around the room to see when it went!!! Then behind her the demoonic bug crawls on the wall, it sees Piper and is about to attack!!! The demonic bug jumps off, Piper quickly turns around and blows the bug up into a mess!!! The blast splashes guts on her face, clothes and all over the walls to the ceiling!!!*
Piper:"Awwwhh....and I just cleaned this room!!!"
*Cuts to Phoebe at work!! She gets up, goes into Elise's office!!!*
Phoebe:"Article number 2, all done!!!"
Elise:"Boy, Phoebe...your on a role!!!"
Phoebe:"I know isn't it great!!!"
Elise:"It sure is!!!"
Phoebe:"You know...earlier you said my great work would give me benefits in the future...what did you mean!!!"
Elise:"I meant that....well, it's nothing really important to tell you right now!!!"
Phoebe:"Well, you wouldn't have mentioned it to me if it wasn't!!!"
Elise:"Alright!!!"
*Elise gets up and closes the door, then sits back down!!!*
Elise:"I am...about...to quit!!!"
Phoebe:"WHAT...
Elise:"Shhhh!!!"
Phoebe:"I mean....why?"
Elise:"Well, after my mysterious attack by those dogs, and then being in a hospital, I really began for the first time to look at my life!!! I getting too old for this job, Phoebe!!!
Phoebe:"Too old?"
Elise:"Well, I do look strikingly in my 30s....but you know what I mean, I've just gotten to stressed with all of it!!! And of the little life I still have left, I need to do something to relax me, give some meaning in my life!!!"
Phoebe:"Well, Elise, that's great in all but what does this have to do with me!!!
Elise:"Well.......
*Phoebe's cellphone rings and interupts what Elise is about to say!!! Phoebe picks up!!!*
Phoebe:"Hello......okay calm done Piper......a what!!! Okay, I'll be home soon!!!"
Elise:"Don't tell me, family emergency!!!"
Phoebe:"Yeah, but this is like the mother of all family emergencies!!!"
Elise:"Fine....Go ahead....I'll talk to you later!!!"
Phoebe:"Really?"
Elise:"Hey, I'm about to retire...why should I care!!!"
*Elise smirks at Phoebe and Phoebe then cracks a smile herself a little!!! Cuts to Piper at the manor, then Paige walks in!!!*
Paige:"You won't believe it!!!"
Piper:"Try me!!!"
*Paige looks at Piper awkwardly!!!*
Paige:"Okay, did you have an accident!!!"
Piper:"Ohh, yes, a very messy, bug exploding accident!!!"
Paige:"What!!!"
Piper:"When Phoebe gets here, I'll tell you, so what happened with the investigating?"
Paige:"Well, I went to Roy, one of the other officers at the station and he gave me some interesting info!!!"
Piper:"Like what?"
Paige:"Well, he gave me suspect Tom Roberts, who was Phil's partner!!! They had this huge agrument about a deal that Phil didn't want to make and after it Phil was killed!!! I went to go question Tom at the office building and he seemed really off!!!"
Piper:"In what way?"
Paige:"Like the, "I just killed someone way, and I'm trying to hide it" way!!!"
Piper:"As usual!!!"
Paige:"Yeah, but even if Tom wanted to kill Tom, Roy already said that Phil was eaten alive!!!"
Piper:"Eaten alive...by what?"
Paige:"Some kind of insects.....or bugs!!!"
Piper:"Well then he was right!!!"
*Phoebe than comes in!!!*
Phoebe:"Okay, this better be a quick vanquish!!!"
*Cuts to the girls in the attic!!!*
Phoebe:"You were attacked by a bug.....that's what the emergency was!!"
Piper:"Not just any bug, it was a big creepy looking bug....and almost like demon bug or something!!!"
Phoebe:"A demon bug...right!!!"
Paige:"Hey....don't forget that Spider-woman demon that almost killed Piper and Chris!!!"
Piper:"Uhuh...see!!!"
Phoebe:"Okay, but maybe it was just a cockroach bigger than usual and Paige said that this Tom guy could have killed his partner!!!"
Paige:"Yeah, but Phil was killed by some kind of bugs, but I can't find how that could be connected to Tom!!
Piper:"His controlling them!!!"
Phoebe:"What!!!"
*Paige and Phoebe circle around the book!!! Piper reads...*
Piper:"Zersects, demonic parasites that trained to kill and destroy small nations!!! They travel in their colonies, eating everything in with their sharp little feet and claws!!! The zersects are not independent creatures and can only be controlled by a keeper, the being who summons them and uses them for it's wicked creation!!!"
Phoebe:"Great...like regular bugs aren't bad enough!!"
Paige:"So Tom did kill Phil and used the zersects to do it!!!"
Phoebe:"Does it say how we stop the zersects?"
Piper:"Well, it says if the one who summons them is vanquished, then it will kill them!!!"
Paige:"But we can't do that!!!"
Phoebe:"Why not?"
Paige:"Because Tom's human!!!"
Piper:"Are you sure?"
Phoebe:"Yeah, I mean how could a human have the power to summon demons!!!"
Paige:"Trust me, I been witch long enough to tell whose a demon or not, and his not!!!"
Piper:"Alright than....Phoebe, you start scrying for the zersects!!!"
Phoebe:"I'm going to need a piece or something of one of them you just killed!!!"
Piper:"Just go into the boys' room, there's plenty of it left!!!"
*Phoebes walks out, then cuts to a dark room, then Tom opens the door and goes inside!!! He puts his stuff down and walks to a nearby cabinet!!! There in it is a hood, he puts it on!!! Around the hood is an big red pandent, he touches it and the glows brightly!!!*
Tom:"Arise!!!"
*Suddenly out of all the darkness, all the zersects come out of every corner of the room!!! There are hundreds...no.....thousands of them and they are even ones on the ceiling!!! They all circle around Tom!!!*
Tom:"It's seems that we haven't covered oursleves enough!!! A witch is on to my plan, I didn't see that coming!!! But no matter....because on your next assignments your going to kill her and anything in her home, don't even leave a trace of blood!!! I want you to annihilate her!!!"
*All the zersects begin to make creepy bug noises!!!*
Tom:"What are all of you crawling around for.....GO!!!"
*Then all the zersects crawl back into the darkness, like they were never there and Tom is left with a look of anger!!!*
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Post by hydrokinisis on Oct 21, 2005 12:41:07 GMT -5
Act 4:
*Cuts to Billie at Magic School!!! She's outside the classroom and Leo walks by!!!*
Leo:"This kids told me you had a rough day!!!"
Billie:"Yeah....but I managed!!!"
Leo:"And that they we'll never act up in class!!!"
Billie:"Wow...I guess I really must have had a good first impression!!!"
Leo:"I guess so, you know I was worried about you being substitute at first, but you really did a nice job!!!"
Billie:"Yay, I guess I did!!!"
Leo:"Maybe you could do it full time!!!"
Billie:"Whow, buddy...I didn't say that!!!"
Leo:"I'm just saying....just think about it!!!"
*Leo walks off, and Billie gives a look of faith, then looks into the room!!! Rick is levitating, and he is writing "I am not tough" on the broad!!!*
Rick:"Can I go home yet!!!"
Billie:"What number are you on?"
Rick:"I lost count after 300 or 400!!!"
Billie:"Well, 200 more than, unless you want to try and leave the classroom again!!!"
Rick:"Ahhhhhhh!!!"
*Billie gives a little smirk!!! Cuts to the manor at night, Phoebe is busy scrying and Paige and Piper are in the kitchen!!!*
Piper:"Well, if Tom is mortal, than how are we going to him and his little bug friends!!!"
Paige:"I don't know......I think I might have to call in a favor!!!"
Piper:"Huh?"
Paige:"I'll be right back!!"
*Paige walks out, then Piper hears something outisde!!! Cuts to Phoebe scrying, then the cystal stops at the manor!!! Phoebe gives a shocked and worried look!!! Cuts to Piper still hearing something outside, then Paige comes!!!*
Paige:"Okay, everything...is..all set!!! Piper, what's wrong?"
*Then another creepy noise comes from outside and Paige hears it!!!*
Piper:"THAT!!!"
*Phoebe than comes in the kitchen!!!*
Phoebe:"I just finished scrying for the zersects and it stop on the manor!!!"
Paige:"Well, that can't be possible, because that would mine their here!!!"
Piper:"Uhhhhhh....they are here!!!"
*The girls then see them all over the kitchen windows, and they break through the glass!!! Then they start coming from the kitchen's back door!!! The girls all scream and run out the ktchen, they run to the front but then the are more of them that crack through the front door windows!!!*
Piper:"UPSTAIRS, UPSTAIRS...GO, GO, GO!!!"
*The girls run quickly upstairs with all the zersects combing at the stairs and following the girls uptairs!!! They girls continue to run, but Piper stops at the boys room!!!*
Piper:"I have to save the boys, go to the attic!!!"
*Phoebe and Paige then run up to the attic, while Piper wakes up Wyatt!!!*
Piper:"Wyatt, go and take you brother to grandpa's house, okay....hurry!!!"
*Wyatt then orbs to Chris and they orb away!!!*
Phoebe:"Piper...come on!!!"
*Piper than runs like the wind out the boys' room with the zersects quickly crawling behind her!!! Piper runs up the stairs then trips, with the zersects about to crawl all over her!!! Piper screams, but Phoebe quickly picks her up before they can get her!!! They both enter the attic and close the door behind them!! The girls then lock the door, baracate it with the furniture!!! All the zersects crowd on the door, trying to force themselves in!!! On the otherside the girls lean against the door to stop them from coming in!!!*
Phoebe:"So...what do we do now!!!"
Piper:"I don't know!!!"
Paige:"We can orb to magic school and find something to stop them there!!!"
Piper:"No, we can't just leave them in the house, they'll tear it apart!!!"
Phoebe:"Well, then will just vanquish them one by one then!!!"
Paige:"Are you kidding, there are over million of those things out there, we'll die trying to kill them all!!!"
Phoebe:"Well, I don't see you with any bug spray or trap!!!"
Piper:"Trap......that's it!!!"
*Paige and Phoebe look confused, then cuts to the zersects outside steal trying to come in!!! Then suddenly the attic door opens and all the zersects rush into the attic, all off then crawl on the ceiling and the tables!!! Then all off them are in the attic, and Paige is outside the door now!!!*
Paige:"Crystals......Circle!!!"
*Paige orbs 5 crystals into each corner of the attic, and it creates a huge magical trap that traps all of the zersects in the attic!!! Paige then walks downstairs to meet Piper and Phoebe!!!*
Piper:"Did it work?"
Paige:"Yeah...they're all trapped in the attic!!!"
Phoebe:"But, we can't just keep them in there!!!"
Piper:"But we can't vanquish all of them!!!"
Paige:"But we can....dump them somewhere they never can escape....ever!!!"
Piper:"And what place is that!!!"
*Cuts to inside a volcano, then orbs appear with all the zersects!!! All of them begin to fall into the lava, which kills them all!!! Cuts back to the girls in manor!!!*
Piper:"You orbbed them into a volcano!!!"
Paige:"Yup, I don't think their be crawls out of there anytime soon!!!"
Phoebe:"Well, we got rid of the demons but what about Tom!!!"
Paige:"Leave him to me!!!"
Piper:"Are you sure?"
Phoebe:"Yeah, what if has some more of those things!!!"
Paige:"Well, if he did, I think they would be on there way back here, so you guys stay here!!!"
Phoebe:"Good luck!!!"
*Cuts to the dark room!!! Tom enters!!!*
Tom:"Hope you succeed in killing the witch!!!"
Paige:"You mine me!!!"
*Tom then turns around as he is shocked to see Paige alive!!!*
Tom:"That can't be!!! How could you have stopped them!!!"
Paige:"Well, your little babbies are flowing in a hot pool of lava right now!!!"
Tom:"Noooo!!!"
Paige:"Oh, yes....which brings me to my first question!!! How did you summon the zersects in the first place?"
Tom:"From an anonymous soucre, it was a package with a book of instructions!!! It told me how to summon them, and I did!!! But after, I summoned them, I got another letter from the smae annoymous person, telling me, if I didn't create a nest for them, that I would die!!! I wanted to use Phil's factory as a nest for my zersects to create a bigger nation of them, but Phil refused!!!"
Paige:"And you killed him for it!!!"
Tom:"Yes, that miserable old man, was a fool!!!"
Paige:"He was your friends, and you know it!!!"
Tom:"Really!!!"
Paige:"Yes, really...you didn't want to kill, did you Tom!!!"
Tom:"I!!!"
Paige:"Answer me!!!"
Tom:"I...DIDN'T, but he gave me no choice, I was his partner for 5 years, and he didn't even trust!!!"
Paige:"Because he knew that weren't ready to use his factory, and he was right!!!"
Tom:"No matter, his died!!!"
Paige:"And you know you regret killing him!!!"
Tom:"It's not like anyone know I did, The police already thinks it was just bugs that killed him!!!"
Paige:"Not anymore!!!"
*Tom then hears the police outside!!!*
Paige:"Hear that!!!"
Tom:"You set me up!!!"
Paige:"You have to go to where you belong Tom!!!"
*An officer outside speaks!!!*
Officer:"Come outside with your hands up!!!"
Paige:"You have to go Tom!!!"
Tom:"No I won't let them take me....I won't let THEM TAKE ME!!!"
*Tom runs, and knocks Paige down!!! He then jumps out the window to the ground, killing himself!!! The police surround him!!! Then Paige gets up and looks down to see Tom died!!! Her face is feeled with so much depression!!! Cuts to P3, A band is palying and the crowd is slow dancing!!! Paige is sitting in the corner and Piper and Phoebe come to her!!!*
Phoebe:"You okay honey!!!"
*Phoebe and Piper sit beside her!!!*
Paige:"Yeah......I just don't get!!! Why does it feel like I lost an innocent!!!"
Piper:"Because you did, I mean Tom had some bad motives and killed someone in the process, but that doesn't mean he should have died for it!!!"
Paige:"I just wished I could have saved him!!! I feel like let my self done as a witch and whitelighter!!"
Phoebe:"I know, but just cause we're the Charmed Ones doesn't mean we can save every life!!! We've learned that the hard way over the years!!!"
Paige:"I just wish I knew the demon that told him to summon those demons!!"
Piper:"Well if we ever run into him, we'll make sure he'll pay!!!"
Phoebe:"Yeah!!!"
*Piper and Phoebe hug her!!! Paige grins!!!*
Paige:"Yeah!!!"
*Cuts to the band playing, and the crowd dnacing!!*
*Goes Dark, Ending Credits!!!*
Wow, that took me long to finish, but I hoped to liked it and read my first 4 storys!!!
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Post by hollypop on Nov 17, 2005 14:30:07 GMT -5
Okay.. so I'm playing 'catch up' but why did this one have to have bugs in it?!? OMG..*shudders* okay, I'm kinda over my bug phobic panic thing.
Again, it read smoothly and the visuals were really good (a little too good- I swear I could draw a picture of those bugs). I just kept reading without realizing the time.. lol
Another good story, hydrokinesis, I'm just sorry I didn't read it sooner.
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