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Missing
Jun 21, 2005 20:54:02 GMT -5
Post by freddyengland on Jun 21, 2005 20:54:02 GMT -5
Okay i have a fanfic I'll post the first part now
if you guys like it post in here and i'll post the next part
i haven't finished it yet but it is nearly done
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Missing
Jun 21, 2005 20:55:10 GMT -5
Post by freddyengland on Jun 21, 2005 20:55:10 GMT -5
Part 1
okay this is my first fanfic i hope you all enjoy it:
Halliwell manor
Piper, Phoebe and Piage are in the attic, Paige is holding baby Chris while Phoebe holds Wyatt. Piper is stood at the Book Of Shadows flicking through it:
PHOEBE: "Piper? What are you doing?"
PIPER: "Just searching for a spell"
PAIGE: "Oh yeah? raises one eybrow What kind of spell?"
PIPER: "I'm trying to make a spell to summon a particualr spirit instead of a random spirit."
PHOEBE: "Well who are you trying to summon?"
Piper looks at Phoebe with sad eyes
PHOEBE: "Oh honey. I don't think that you can summon her. I mean we haven't been able to yet have we?"
PIPER: "That's why i'm working on the wording of the spell because I don't think the other attempts have been worded correctly. OKay let's try this:"
magic forces white to white reaching out through space and light i call this spirit i hope she's well bring back to me Prudence Halliwell
PIPER: "Well that didn't work"
PAIGE: "Maybe she's not ready to come back. I mean dying and all it may take a while for her to accept"
PHOEBE: "Yeah that's what i was thinking paige. Hey! maybe we hould ask Grams"
PIPER: "Yeah you guys are right I just though afer 3 years she'd be ready. Okay let's summon Grams"
hear these words hear the rhyme spirit from the other side come to me I summon thee cross now the Great Divide
GRAMS: "What's going on?"
PIPER: "I tried to summon Prue"
GRAMS: "Let me guess it didn't work and you summoned me because you are wondering how she is?"
PAIGE: "Wow she's good"
PIPER AND PHOEBE: "That's Grams"
PAIGE: "It really creeps me out when you two do that. Anyway how is she?"
GRAMS: "Prue? well she's...Prue's missing"
EVERYONE: "WHAT?!"
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DarkPhoenix
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Jun 21, 2005 23:03:15 GMT -5
Post by DarkPhoenix on Jun 21, 2005 23:03:15 GMT -5
It's pretty cool, i want to know where Prue is.
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Jun 22, 2005 1:57:42 GMT -5
Post by charmedforevr24 on Jun 22, 2005 1:57:42 GMT -5
yeah me to
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Missing
Jun 22, 2005 8:15:18 GMT -5
Post by freddyengland on Jun 22, 2005 8:15:18 GMT -5
Part 2
Halliwell Manor
PAIGE: that is too creepy did we have to all yell "what" at the same time
PHOEBE: you'll get used to it
PIPER: so grams how long has prue been Missing?
GRAMS: since you became pregnant with wyatt just after the angel of destiny visited you
PIPER: WHAT!? that was 2 years ago
PIPER, PHOEBE AND PAIGE: LEO!!!
Leo orbs in
LEO: what's the problem? talk about headache material. grams what are you doing here?
PIPER: forget about grams. leo why didn't you say prue was Missing?
LEO: what she is?
EVERYONE (GRAMS INCLUDED): YES!
PAIGE: there we go again
LEO: huh? nevermind. why didn't the elders tell me. i'll go see what i can find out
Leo orbs out
PIPER: this can't be happening. we have to find her
PHOEBE AND PAIGE: AGREED!
PAIGE: you know? i think i am actually getting used to the whole saying the same thing at the same time thing
PHOEBE: i'm gonna head to the paper to see what i can find out although i doubt it but i have to try
PIPER: thanks phoebe
PAGIE: i have a hunch too
PIPER: okay i'll stay here with the little ones and keep looking through the book
GRAMS: i'll help you look piper
up in elder land
LEO: PRISCILLA! can i ask you something? elder to elder
PRISCILLA: sure anything
LEO: why didn't you tell me that prue was Missing?
PRISCILLA: well erm i didn't want to worry you i thought we could handle it
LEO: well how long has she been gone:
PRISCILLA: since the angel of destiny visite the girls
LEO: WHAT! that's 2 years ago you should've told me the girls are family you should have said something!
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Jun 22, 2005 21:57:30 GMT -5
Post by charmedforevr24 on Jun 22, 2005 21:57:30 GMT -5
i want to know what happened to Prue! please continue
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Jun 22, 2005 22:10:29 GMT -5
Post by freddyengland on Jun 22, 2005 22:10:29 GMT -5
how far do you guys want to go?
I have about 14 parts complete and i am still writing the 15th
oh i'm supposed to be leaving lol
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Missing
Jun 22, 2005 22:11:22 GMT -5
Post by freddyengland on Jun 22, 2005 22:11:22 GMT -5
Part 3
up in elder land
PRISCILLA: i like how you just said said "they're family"
LEO: what? instead of My Family?
PRISCILLA: yeah!
LEO: well they are also your family Priscilla
PRISCILLA:: that's true after all i am a Halliwell
LEO! yes and you haven't seen how much the family has changed either have you i mean in person and all
PRISCILLA: that's true i died when patty was still a toddler. i never even got to know her while i was alive
LEO: we could really use your help at the manor
PRISCILLA: let's go
Halliwell manor
leo and priscilla orb in
PIPER: leo? who's this?
GRAMS: gasps Mum!
PIPER! mum? as in my great grams?
PRISCILLA: it's so nice to finally meet you piper. oh and wyatt and chris they're adorable
PIPER: thank you!
downstairs in the consertavory
paige stands at the table with the scrying tools out
PAIGE: let's see:
scrying secrets from time and space the future is what i wish from this rhyme find the one who i need right now show me where don't ask me how
the crystal drops on the map
PAIGE: got you! book of shadows!
up in the attic
piper, grams and priscilla are all looking through the book trying to find some answers about prue when the book orbs downsatirs
PIPER: HEY! leo go get the book from paige
leo who had his back turned didn't see the book orb
LEO: huh? what do you mean?
PIPER: the book just orbed right of the pedestal
LEO: okay paige is downstairs i go get it from her
back in the conservatory
LEO: paige what are you doing?
PAIGE: give me a sec i just need to find one spell then you can have the book
LEO: what spell?
PAIGE: Aha! here it is:
hear these words hear the rhyme heed the hope within my mind take me forth to where i'll find what i wish in place and time
upon saying the last word paige disappears
LEO: Paige! where'd you go?
leo orbs upstairs with the book
LEO: we have i problem
PIPER: worse than prue being missing?
LEO: well only if paige being missing too counts as being worse?
PIPER! what do you mean missing?
LEO: well
PIPER: Leo! spit it out!
LEO: well she said this spell and then just vanished
GRAMS: this is not good prue's missing and now paige
PRISCILLA: i agree this is sooo not good!
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Jun 23, 2005 18:32:30 GMT -5
Post by traci26 on Jun 23, 2005 18:32:30 GMT -5
write more please... Can't wait to read more of this story.
Thanks in advance,
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Missing
Jun 23, 2005 18:40:34 GMT -5
Post by freddyengland on Jun 23, 2005 18:40:34 GMT -5
Part 4
the bay mirror
Phoebe is sat at her computer researching disappearances but unable to find anything
PHOEBE: ARGH! this is not good!
phoebe picks up her phone and dials
SECRETARY: hello?
PHOEBE: hello my name is phoebe halliwell
SECRETARY: phoebe as in Ask Phoebe
PHOEBE: yes i would like to speak to a District Attorney please
SECRETARY: one moment please our DA is a little busy right but she will be with you very shortly
PHOEBE: thanks
Phoebe shudders at the thought of cole at that moment
DA: hi my name is chris how can i help you
PHOEBE: hi chris my name is phoebe as in ask phoebe ans you see my sister is missing and i am unable to find anything useful under disappearances
CHRIS: well what is her name
Phoebe thinks about telling the truth but decides against it
PHOEBE: well you see she has already been reported missing and i was just wondering about findingg some more information
CHRIS: well the only thibng i can suggest is that if she's been reported already is to just wait and know that she'll turn up
PHOEBE: yeah you're right thanks for the help
Phoebe hangs up the phone
PHOEBE: or lack of help more like it. what was i supposed to say "wel you see my sister is missing but she died 3 years ago and we cannot find her spirit" somehow i don't think that would go down very well. ARGH! well i hope piper leo and paige are having better luck
the phone rings
PHOEBE: hello? this is ask phoebe
LEO: phoebe it's leo
PHOEBE: leo tell me you found something
LEO: well...your Great Grams is here and she's called priscilla and piper and grams and priscilla are looking through the book and the can't find anything and...
PHOEBE: leo you're rambling are you even more stressed than i am? wow my great grams is there?
LEO: yeah she's called priscilla and am i stressed? what do you think we can't find prue and paige just cast a spell and well...vanished
PHOEBE: WHAT!!!? i'm coming right home
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Missing
Jun 23, 2005 18:41:57 GMT -5
Post by freddyengland on Jun 23, 2005 18:41:57 GMT -5
I'll post part 5 tomorrow ;D
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Missing
Jun 24, 2005 8:53:22 GMT -5
Post by freddyengland on Jun 24, 2005 8:53:22 GMT -5
Part 5 After disappearing Paige reappears in the exact same place PAIGE: What happened then? that should have worked Looks at the table and sees the book isn’t there and neither is Leo PAIGE: Hmmm. Leo must’ve took the book back to Piper Crash ?: Paige! Help! PAIGE: who was that and how does he know my name? Paige orbs up to the attic to see a guy that is about 20 years old being attacked by a demon ?: Paige good you’re here could you get the potion that you were working on PAIGE: But… Just then the guy orbs out of the way of an oncoming fireball and re-appears behind the demon ?: FIREBALL! The fireball orbs to his hands and he throws it back at the demon and the demon disappears ?: Nevermind PAIGE: what just happened? ?: that was Amon remember? You were working on the vanquishing potion because mum and Phoebe are at work PAIGE: Mum? Wait a minute you’re Wyatt? So where is Chris? WYATT: Yeah I’m Wyatt. What? Did you hit your head or something? PAIGE: Wyatt? Right! So what year is this? WYATT: It’s 11th April 2022! Wow you must’ve really hit your head PAIGE: It’s 2022? Okay so the spell must’ve worked! I thought I had messed it up WYATT: Spell? What spell? PAIGE: There’s no time for secrecy. Okay I’m from the past 2004 to be exact. Anyway I cast a spell because I needed help my sisters and I need. Would you and Chris be able to come back with me? Chris orbs in CHRIS: someone talking about me? PAIGE: CHRIS!!! Okay please can you both come back to the past with me? WYATT AND CHRIS: Why? What’s the problem? PAIGE: Well you see it’s your Aunt WYATT AND CHRIS: What’s up with Phoebe? PAIGE: No not Phoebe. It’s Prue well she died in 2001 and her spirit is Missing and we’ve been told that she has been Missing for 2 years already CHRIS: Missing what is that supposed to mean? PAIGE: Exactly CHRIS AND WYATT: I’ll come
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Missing
Jun 24, 2005 19:19:34 GMT -5
Post by freddyengland on Jun 24, 2005 19:19:34 GMT -5
Part 6
PAIGE: Are you guys ready?
WYATT AND CHRIS: yeah we’re good to go
PAIGE: Okay
Paige grabs Wyatt and Chris’s hands and chants
Hear these words hear the rhyme Heed the hope within my mind Send me back to where I’ll find Where I belong in place and time
Paige Chris and Wyatt reappear in the attic of the manor
PAIGE: Oops we have a visitor?
PIPER: Paige this is our great grams Priscilla
GRAMS: Yep my Mother
PRISCILLA: Paige it’s so good to finally meet you
Piper notices two other guys one of whom she recognises as Chris
PIPER: Chris and…
WYATT: Wyatt. Hi Mum!
PIPER: Wyatt as in…
Piper looks at baby Wyatt
WYATT: Look how sweet I am
PAIGE: So great grams do we…
PRISCILLA: please call me Priscilla
the front door slams and footsteps can be heard running up stairs phoebe enters the attic
PHOEBE: So any idea…
Phoebe notices Paige
PHOEBE: where Paige is? OH! Where’d you go, and Chris what are you doing here and…
PAIGE: That’s Wyatt. I went to the future to get extra help
PHOEBE: I see that.
turns to Priscilla
PHOEBE: so you must be my great grams?
PRISCILLA: Please, enough with the great grams just call me Priscilla
PAIGE: Any ideas on Prue?
LEO: Well we think that she was trying to make contact with you and…
PRISCILLA: Got kidnapped on the way although we don’t know who kidnapped her…
LEO: But we think their magic is blocking ours that’s why we can’t sense her or scry for her
PAIGE: More creepy stuff! So Prue is being held prisoner and we can’t find her by scrying right? What if we have a really strong item to focus the crystal on something that prue loved?
PRISCILLA: That may work but I really doubt it
EVERYONE: GREAT!
PAIGE: Wow 7 of us said “Great” then
GRAMS: well I’m going to go see if I can me anything else out too
LEO AND PRISCILLA: me too
THE SISTERS AND WYATT AND CHRIS: okay bye
Leo, Priscilla and Grams all orb out
PIPER: The attic was getting a little crowded anyway
PAIGE: Wyatt? Chris? Does your future knowledge have anything that can help us?
CHRIS: Well no but at least we have more information now
WYATT: Yeah we’ll find Prue in no time
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Jun 25, 2005 18:53:07 GMT -5
Post by freddyengland on Jun 25, 2005 18:53:07 GMT -5
PART 7
Phoebe finds Prue’s bracelet, and hoping that the bracelet is strong enough top break the magical barrier blocking Prue, she gets the scrying tools out, then picks up the bracelet
PHOEBE: GASPS
Suddenly Phoebe’s head is filled with images
A spirit stands in the corner facing the wall
SPRIRIT: They will come for me. They will come for me.
DEMON: SHUT UP!
a spirit appears behind the demon in a red glow
SPIRIT: WHY DON’T YOU SHUT UP!
with a wave of the hand the demon gets sent flying
just then both spirits look at each other and we notice they are both Prue
PRUE: They will come
ASTRAL PRUE: they will definitely come
just then astral prue vanishes in that same red glow
DEMON: Well your sisters haven’t come yet have they?
just then the images end
PHOEBE: PRUE!!!!!!!!!!!
Phoebe runs up to the attic
PHOEBE: I just saw prue!
PIPER: Was she okay? Where was she?
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Jun 25, 2005 18:54:55 GMT -5
Post by freddyengland on Jun 25, 2005 18:54:55 GMT -5
Part 8
Halliwell Manor Attic
PHOEBE: Prue’s okay she’s been fighting the demon with her astral projection and telekinesis powers. She’s gotten very strong now. She’s even using telekinesis as Astral Prue.
PIPER: Wow really?
PHOEBE: Yep
PAIGE: Any idea where she is?
PHOEBE: Nope sorry I just know she’s in a cave
CHRIS: Any idea about the demon?
PHOEBE: Well he was really huge. I have no idea what kind of powers he has either. He was just telling Prue to “SHUT UP!” after she said “they will come for me” she knows we’ll save her.
WYATT: So the demon was huge? Well that narrows it down. Did you see his face? Maybe he’s in the book?
PHOEBE: I was just about to check
Phoebe walks over to the book and starts searching through it
PHOEBE: He’s not in here!
WYATT: Keep looking
CHRIS: Yeah you’ll find something soon
PAIGE: Want me to do anything?
PHOEBE: No it’s okay but I think some coffee would be a good idea
PAIGE: Sure I’ll bring the kettle up here for us
PHOEBE: Thanks honey I think we’re gonna need loads
PAIGE: No problem
PIPER: I’ll go make something to eat
PHOEBE: Thanks again. You guys are the best
CHRIS: What about us Phoebe? It seems weird seeing us as children
WYATT: Yeah it does
PHOEBE: Well Piper’s been there with Prue when we all travelled back to the 70s
CHRIS: It’s still weird
PHOBE: THAT’S HIM!!!!!!!!!!
WYATT AND CHRIS: What does it say?
Phoebe reads from the Book Of Shadows
PHOEBE: He’s “The Fire King, Ifrit and is the lover of the Ice Queen Shiva” go figure the Fire King in love with the Ice Queen anyway “one witch cannot vanquish him it takes the combined strength of multiple witches for the spell to work. Approach this demon with care as he may be confused with the demon Amon. Only attempt to vanquish Ifrit once you are sure which demon you are truly after. Confusing the two demons is a critical mistake and you will be very lucky to survive.” Wow, well it is definitely Ifrit who has Prue.
WYATT: You said Ifrit can be confused with Amon? Is there a picture there of Ifrit?
PHOEBE: Yeah why?
Wyatt walks over to the BOS
WYATT: Well that was lucky I thought I was fighting Amon earlier or later whatever when Paige appeared but it was really Ifrit.
Paige and Piper return
PIPER: Find anything?
WYATT: Apart from me and Paige being lucky to be alive?
PAIGE: Huh? Why?
WYATT: Well when you showed up and I was fighting Amon? Well the book says it was really Ifrit and that confusing the two demons a crucial and anyone that does confuse the two demons are lucky to be alive.
PAIGE: Wow! So does that mean Ifrit has Prue?
PHOEBE: Yep!
PIPER: Wait Ifrit? I read about him in the book about 2 months ago isn’t he the ire King who is the lover of the Ice Queen?
PHOEBE: Yep, that’s him
PAIGE: So now what?
PHOEBE: We find him!
PIPER! I have an idea on how to find Ifrit. LEO!
Leo orbs in
PIPER: Leo, honey could you please find someone for me?
LEO: Sure who?
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Jun 27, 2005 12:22:58 GMT -5
Post by traci26 on Jun 27, 2005 12:22:58 GMT -5
You are doing a really good job Freddy.. Keep up the good work and post more... I can't wait to read more of what you have written.
Traci
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Missing
Jun 28, 2005 15:43:35 GMT -5
Post by freddyengland on Jun 28, 2005 15:43:35 GMT -5
PART 9
In the Conservatory
PHOEBE: I hope Leo can find him; otherwise WE need to scry for Ifrit and that could get very dangerous.
PAIGE: DUH! Nothing we do is actually SAFE!
PHOEBE: But we’ve never tried anything like this before
PAIGE: Am I here in case it goes wrong?
PHOEBE: Yes. Look Paige I know it’s dangerous but you can help if it goes wrong we may need your orbing telekinesis and orbing powers.
PAIGE: No Pressure! I just hope we don’t have to go through with this. I’m scared.
PHOEBE: I hope we don’t need to go through with this too, and I’m scared too
In the attic
LEO: I’ve got him! I’ll go get him
PIPER: Bring him back soon
LEO: I will bye
Leo orbs out
PIPER: I’m gonna go tell Phoebe and Paige that Leo has found him, could you please look after the little ones for me?
WYATT AND CHRIS: Sure
CHRIS: I’ve got mini-me
WYATT: I’ve got me too
PIPER: I’ll be down stairs if you need me
WYATT AND CHRIS: Okay
In the Conservatory
Piper walk in
PAIGE: Piper! Did Leo find him?
PIPER: Yeah he went to get him now
PHOEBE: That’s good I really didn’t want to scry even with Paige’s powers
PIPER: Well we are still gonna have to scry
On Golden Gate Road
Leo orbs into the empty road
LEO: Okay here it is 1104 Golden Gate Road
Leo walks up to the front door and rings the door bell
WOMAN: Hello? Can I help you?
LEO: Well, I was told I could find somebody here, see I came here at the request of Paige Matthews
WOMAN: Paige? Is something wrong?
LEO: We just need to borrow your son for a while
WOMAN: Of course, just a minute I’ll go get him
LEO: Okay
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Jul 15, 2005 13:34:30 GMT -5
Post by lebasi on Jul 15, 2005 13:34:30 GMT -5
ok so when are you writing more
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Jul 30, 2005 12:22:18 GMT -5
Post by barmyoncharmed on Jul 30, 2005 12:22:18 GMT -5
Just read it more please
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Aug 1, 2005 23:26:13 GMT -5
Post by ejhoagie on Aug 1, 2005 23:26:13 GMT -5
This is good - keep going.
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