season 9 ep 1 - living the normal life

[andrew2kool4u]

Well I just joined up but i just decided to try and write a season 9 episode.
The first episode would be about the charmed ones trying to live a normal life after the ultimate battle, but things aren't going to well. P3 hasn't been as busy as before, phoebe's column is slipping and paige can't find her place in the world without fighting demons. Also billie is still in college and at the same time living in the manor and fighting demons. Meanwhile, phoebe gets her powers back and a special new one (hint - morality bites). We also will see a surprise return character as a villain. the story takes place a year after the final battle.
*** PLEASE TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK! =]

Preview

Chapter 1

setting - a cave underground

A demon shimmers in. He is masked and wears a long black robe. A few more demons shimmer in.

"I welcome you all to this gathering"! the masked demon called.

"What are we hear for anyway?" a female demon said.

"I give you all a offer. I have a plan...a most wonderful plan to destroy the charmed ones!" the demon yelled.

"oh please" another demon replied. "everyone who says that gets vanquished by those d**n witches! I doubt your any different".

"Oh but I am" the demon said menacingly. "Everyone is welcome to join me in my cause to kill those cursed witches!"

Most of the demons shrugged and muttered to each other.

"it's suicide to go up against the witches face to face!" another demon screamed.

"oh I know that" the masked demon replied with a chuckle. " i know that better then anyone...you see, i faced the charmed ones years ago"....


***Please tell me what you think about this and i will post up more.

[~B@MeLiSsA30@B~]

Oh, I love it. I do hope you post more.

[~*Alicia*~]

Hope you post more! It is good!

[andrew2kool4u]

heres part 2 i hope you enjoy! ;D

setting: halliwell manor

piper is is the kitchen cooking breakfast. Billie comes in looking sleepy and grumpy.

good morning Billie" piper said with a smile.

"who says" Billie answered in a drowsy voice.

"Don't feel like going to class huh?" piper asked grinning.

"i'd rather fight a demon" Billie answered with a smile.

Suddenly a burst of white and blue orbs appears and a second later paige and phoebe are standing there.

"beautiful morning huh" phoebe said with a laugh.

"defenitly not" Billie answered. "I better go get dressed". She stood up and left, dragging her feet.

"What is up with her?" Paige asked.

"oh don't ask me" piper answered. "So how was your date last night with henry?"

"It was great, we haven't been able to have a normal conversation, with his job and my whitelighter duties but we really got the chance to sit down and talk" paige answered with a enthusiastic smile.

"Thats all you did right?" Phoebe asked with a smirk.

Piper laughed and Paige shot Phoebe a look.

"Well I better hurry or else Elise is going to go nuts" Phoebe said huredly. "Uhh paige ...a little help -"

"Bay Mirror" paige said waving a hand at phoebe.

Phoebe disapeared in a swirl of orbs.

"I better get going to" Paige said and orbed out.

Setting - Bay Mirror

Phoebe enters the office quickly trying to dodge Elise but no luck!

"Phoebe why the hell are you late AGAIN?" Elise yelled.

"Sorry Elise" Phoebe said apollegiticly. "I had to -

All of a sudden 2 demons shimmer in and throw fireballs at Elise and Phoebe.

"DOWN!" Phoebe yelled shoving Elise to the floor.

As the demons approached Phoebe flew into the air and gave two well placed kicks to their skulls. She fell back down and as the demons approached again something blue shot from Phoebe's hands and immediatly killed them.

"wh- wh- WHAT THE HELL JUST HAPPENED!!!" Elise screamed...

[~B@MeLiSsA30@B~]

I love this update. Excellent! ;D

[~.:Alysha:.~]

yeah its really good, please update again soon!! I wan to know what happens!

[monicaaa]

I agree. Really good ;D

[~*Alicia*~]

Love this update! Really good story!

[andrew2kool4u]

alright guys heres the final part hope you enjoy! by the way i would really appreciate it if you guys could give me charmed points by giving bless. thanks alot! =]

Halliwell Manor

Phoebe enters the manor very shaken.

"Piper, Leo" Phoebe called.

"What is it?" Leo said as he, piper and billie rushed down the stairs.

"Oh my god! Phoebe your hands!" Piper exclaimed.

"What?" Phoebe asked. She looked at her hands. " Oh god" she said.

Phoebe's hands were extremely burned.

"Must have been from shooting electricity" Phoebe said calmly.

"What?!" Billie asked, surprised.

"Never mind that we have to get Paige to heal you" Leo said quickly.

"Paige" Piper called.

A swirl of blue orbs appeared and Paige stood there.

"Wha - Oh my god Phoebe what happened to your hands?" Paige yelped.

"Never mind that, just heal" Piper commanded.

Phoebe stretched out her hands and Paige used her golden healing glow to make them good as new.

"Now spill" Paige demanded.

"Well - I was attacked by demons at the bay mirror" Phoebe said slowly.

"WHAT!" Piper and Billie yelled together. "In public?" Piper asked.

"Yes" phoebe answered. "In front of Elise".

Oh god help us all" Piper said taking a heavy breath.

" They were lower level demons which means they could be working for someone" Phoebe said.

"Too bad you won't find out who"

A demon had shimmered in. He conjured a fireball. Wyatt and Chris who were playing hide and seek ran into the room.

"Mommy?" Wyatt asked.

"Wyatt Chris NO" Piper yelled.

the demon raised his arm to throw the fireball but all of a sudden was engulfed in flames. Wyatt was pointing a finger at him.

"Good boy" leo said proudly.

"Wyatt, take Chris to magic school with you" Piper said.

Wyatt grabbed Chris's hand and orbed off.

"He really is a talented boy" a voice said from behind them.

The masked demon was standing at the stairs.

"Piper blow him up!" Paige yelled.

Piper tried to blow him up but the force of the blast simply threw him into the wall. The blast knocked of his mask.

"Oh my god" Phoebe whispered".

"how is that possible" Paige muttered.

In front of them, lying on the ground was Belthazor!

"you were vanquished years ago" Piper said confidently.

"Well I was separated from my human half and taken to the deepest of hell dimensions but i managed to escape...this time with my own body" Belthazor replied.

Before anyone could reply Paige chanted:

"In this home where we exist, Take this evil from our midst!".

Belthazor laughed and said "That spell wouldn't work on a lower level demon let alone me". See you around".

Phoebe flew toward him but he shimmered out.

Everybody stood shaken.

"How can he be back" Phoebe whispered?

"So much for living the normal life" Piper said anger in her tone.

Attic

Did you find anything?" Phoebe asked, entering the room.

"Well, it says that if demons are powerful enough they can gain the ability to escape from torment" Billie replied, closing the book.

"This is so weird" Phoebe said.

"Was he like the big baddie back in the day?" Billie asked.

"Actually.. he was my boyfriend" Phoebe replied.

"Oh" Billie said, looking confused.

Underground Cave

A demon gathering is taking place.

You said that you wouldn't take on the charmed ones directly" A grimlock yelled.

"Don't worry I knew that they wouldn't kill me" belthazor replied.

"It's not you i'm worried about" the grimlock said grimly.

"Well you shouldn't be worried at all" Belthazor said loudly.

"When the time comes we will be able to truly defeat and destroy the charmed ones" ....

TO BE CONTINUED IN EP. 2

[~*Alicia*~]

Great update! I wonder how could Phoebe throw electricity with her hands? I guess I'll have to wait and find out.

[♥ Frozen Piper ♥]

i simply love it!

[~B@MeLiSsA30@B~]

I love it! ;D

[alyssa08]

Apr 16, 2008 19:59:33 GMT -5 andrew2kool4u said:

Well I just joined up but i just decided to try and write a season 9 episode.
The first episode would be about the charmed ones trying to live a normal life after the ultimate battle, but things aren't going to well. P3 hasn't been as busy as before, phoebe's column is slipping and paige can't find her place in the world without fighting demons. Also billie is still in college and at the same time living in the manor and fighting demons. Meanwhile, phoebe gets her powers back and a special new one (hint - morality bites). We also will see a surprise return character as a villain. the story takes place a year after the final battle.
*** PLEASE TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK! =]

Preview

Chapter 1

setting - a cave underground

A demon shimmers in. He is masked and wears a long black robe. A few more demons shimmer in.

"I welcome you all to this gathering"! the masked demon called.

"What are we hear for anyway?" a female demon said.

"I give you all a offer. I have a plan...a most wonderful plan to destroy the charmed ones!" the demon yelled.

"oh please" another demon replied. "everyone who says that gets vanquished by those d**n witches! I doubt your any different".

"Oh but I am" the demon said menacingly. "Everyone is welcome to join me in my cause to kill those cursed witches!"

Most of the demons shrugged and muttered to each other.

"it's suicide to go up against the witches face to face!" another demon screamed.

"oh I know that" the masked demon replied with a chuckle. " i know that better then anyone...you see, i faced the charmed ones years ago"....


***Please tell me what you think about this and i will post up more.

alyssa08::
i think this is a good storyline but it was a bit dull and boring you could of put a bit in about the charmed ones finding out about this plot and then trying to think of a way to vanquish or defeat this demon. but overall very good.

[~B@MeLiSsA30@B~]

Alyssa, this is Andrew's thread for his story. Make a another thread just for your story. Okay!!!!