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Post by Cara Halliwell on May 29, 2008 19:01:15 GMT -5
hello everyone! i will be posting my newest short story very soon. please come and read. Thank you!
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Post by Cara Halliwell on May 29, 2008 19:12:00 GMT -5
Chapter 1
Piper dug through the mess in the attic. The latest demon attack had left the attic is ruins. What else is new? Piper thought. Why even bother cleaning up? The attic would just get messy again. Piper’s hand brushed a piece of paper on the floor. She picked it up. Dust covered almost all the words. Piper gently rubbed it clean. It was a spell to summon the dead, but it was different from the one in the Book of Shadows. Piper noticed a book lying open. It was one from 1918, and it was written by one of her ancestors. She must not have recorded it in the Book. Piper wondered why. A pang in her heart pulled her out of her reverie. This could bring back Prue, Piper thought. Since Prue died, Piper had been furious because she was not allowed to see Prue, at least not for a long time. Piper stuck the page back in the book and put it back in the box she found it in. It wasn’t like Piper would get to see her if she read the spell. She might as well have given up. As she walked out of the attic, she thought she felt a slight presence behind her.
Chapter 2
Paige walked in to the manor and threw her purse on the couch. “Piper?” she called. “In the kitchen!” Piper called “I’ll be in the attic!” Paige yelled back. She wanted to look at the Book and learn more about her ancestors. As she got to the attic, she wondered if thee were other magical books in the attic. She decided to look through a couple of boxes. To her surprise, she found one. It had a dark brown leather cover. She flipped through a couple of pages and saw a scrap fly out. She picked it up, curious. She scanned down the scrap and gasped. It was a spell to summon the dead! Paige got up and went over to where she and her sisters kept herbs and bowls for their potions. This spell called for a small potion. No big deal. Paige quickly mixed the herbs and grinded it into a pasty liquid, which she put into a potion vile. After clearing a space, she stood with the potion in her hand. In order for the spell to work, you had to visualize who you wanted to summon. Paige knew exactly who she wanted. She chanted the spell: Elementals, hear my call Bring me the ghost to which I call Let them come in spirit form To this spell they will conform Paige tossed the potion at her feet. A white flash appeared. A magic wind blew Paige’s hair in her face. When the light died down, Paige gasped with delight. Perfect, she thought.
Chapter 3
BOOM! Piper heard an explosion from the attic. “Paige! Paige are you okay?” Piper called. No answer. Piper ran up the stairs as fast as she could. When she reached the attic, she was out of breath. “Paige, what are you…” her voiced trailed off. Her mouth went dry, and a cry escaped her throat. Tears sprung to her eyes and she fell to her knees. Paige ran over to her. “Piper?” she asked worriedly. Maybe this hadn’t been a good idea. But Piper was only focused on one thing. The only thing she had ever wanted since four years ago. Paige helped Piper up and walked her over to the couch. Piper sat down and stared. Every second, new tears ran down Piper’s cheeks. Paige hugged Piper and stared with her at the person Paige summoned. And that person was Prue.
Chapter 4
Paige motioned for Prue to come over. Tears filled her own eyes as Prue sat beside Piper to comfort her. Piper held onto Prue and sobbed for what seemed like hours. After Piper calmed down, Prue spoke. “Piper, I’m so glad to see you.” A few more tears trickled down her cheeks. “B-but h-how? How is this possible?” she asked. Her voice was high pitched. Prue smiled, tears running down her own cheeks. “I can’t believe it either. I never thought They would let me come here, at least not for a long time. But I’m here now, and I’m going to spend as much time with you as possible.” Piper half laughed and half sobbed. “Phoebe is never going to believe this.” “Where is Phoebe?” Paige asked. “At work, I guess,” Piper replied. Prue’s eyes widened. “I’m sorry, did you just say Phoebe was at work?” Piper laughed. “You missed a lot.” “Yeah no kidding!” Prue said. “You have two kids, Paige and Phoebe are married, and now Phoebe has a job? It’s amazing. And now you have to be the oldest. Not easy is it?” Prue teased. “No, it’s not,” Piper said. “I can take you to see her if you want,” said Paige. Prue nodded. Paige said the spell to turn Prue corporeal. Then she took Prue to get dressed. Piper sighed and sat there. She remembered when Prue had first died.
Piper sat brushing her hair. Leo walked in. “Piper? We have to go.” Piper ignored him and brushed her hair. “I don’t wanna go,” she said finally. “Why not?” Leo asked. He knelt beside her. “Because if I go, that’ll mean that Prue’s really not coming back. And I don’t think I can handle that.” “We can handle it together,” said Leo. Piper shook her head. She took a shuddery breath. “She’s been there my whole life. I’ve always had a big sister. And I don’t know how to live without one.”
Paige orbed in at Phoebe’s office. She and Prue walked in. Phoebe was talking to another reporter. The whole office was moving around. Phoebe walked across the room and back into her office. “Ok, you ready?” Paige asked Prue. “Yeah.” They walked up to Phoebe’s office and knocked. Phoebe opened the door. “Yeah, what is…oh my god,” Phoebe whispered. Phoebe’s knees started to wobble. Paige recalled what happened to Piper and grabbed Phoebe to hold her up. “Easy, easy.” Paige led Phoebe to the small couch in her office. “H-how? How is this possible?” Phoebe’s voice rose and Paige could see her eyes fill up with tears. “That would be my doing,” said Paige. Phoebe turned to her and half smiled. She looked at Prue. Then she hugged her and didn’t let go. “It was so hard without you! We were so upset, we missed you so much!” Phoebe finally let go and wiped her eyes. Prue looked at Paige. “Thank you for being there for them when I couldn’t be,” she said. Paige felt so happy to hear Prue, the super witch, say that Paige had done a great job.
to be continued....
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Post by ~*Alicia*~ on May 30, 2008 14:04:43 GMT -5
Love it<3 Great story!! I love how you wrote the reactions of "Prue is here" They sound so real to me, I envision the whole story in my head as I read it, keep it coming.
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Post by Cara Halliwell on Jun 18, 2008 22:59:07 GMT -5
WOW! Its been forever since I updated! Well, enjoy!
"The pleasure is all mine," said Paige cheerfully. Phoebe looked at Prue. "But wait, what about the Elders?" Prue shrugged. "I guess they decided it had been long enough without seeing me." Phoebe's office phone rang. Phoebe ran over and picked it up. "Piper, hey! Yeah. Yeah. That sounds great! See you there!" Phoebe hung up. "Let's go meet Piper for lunch." Paige orbed them to the cafe. Piper came and found their table. "Oh, I almost forgot." She pulled out her cell phone and called Leo. "Leo? Come to the Central Cafe." Minutes later, Leo arrived. He took one look at the table and his eyes widened. "Prue!" He said. He hugged her. "I'm so sorry I wasn't able to..." he trailed off. "It's okay," said Prue. Leo sat down and they all ordered lunch. Suddenly a wizzing sound filled Piper's ears. She threw her hands up just in time to freeze the cafe and the energy ball in front of her face. "What the hell?" she asked. They all got up and saw a man in a black trench coat running away. Prue astral projected. "Prue no!" Phoebe yelled. But it was too late. Prue had taken off after him.
Prue chased the guy into a dead end. "You're toast," said Prue. "Dream on, witch," the demon sneered. Suddenly he shimmered behind Prue and grabbed her. Then he shimmered out.
Piper ran as fast as she could with Paige, Phoebe, and Leo right behind her. When they reached the alley, Prue had vanished. Piper called out her name and dug through everything. "No. This can't be happening." Phoebe hugged her and Paige orbed them back to the manor. Piper pased the living room. "Piper it's ok," said Phoebe. "No, it's not! I won't loose her. Not again," said Piper. "Oh sweetie," said Phoebe sympathetically. She hugged Piper. "Don't you worry. We'll find her."
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Post by jenna on Jun 20, 2008 11:24:42 GMT -5
This is really good. Just a quick question about your last section, If Prue astral projected, how was the demon ablt to grab her from behind when she chased him down the alley. I'm not trying to be rude, I just didn't understand that part.
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Post by Cara Halliwell on Jun 21, 2008 15:18:59 GMT -5
well before she chased him, she went back into her own body. and it's ok, ur not being rude at all.
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Post by Cara Halliwell on Jun 24, 2008 13:17:14 GMT -5
Leo orbed in to see the girls sitting on an old couch in the attic. Piper looked up at him. "Well?" she asked. "Well, I can't sense her. Wherever she is, she's heavily protected," said Leo. Piper stood up. "Damn it," she mumbled. She reached for the scrying crystal and map. "Piper, we already tried scrying," said Paige. "I don't care," snapped Piper. Then she sighed and turned around. "Sorry Paige. I'm just worried," siad Piper. Paige walked over and hugged her. "It's ok," she said. "So what do we do?" asked Phoebe. "Did any of you get a good look at the demon?" asked Leo. "Not really. He ran away too fast. But he used energy balls and he shimmered," said Paige. "Well then he's not a warlock," said Leo. "Yeah but that leaves all the other demons out there," said Phoebe. Piper sighed. She hoped whoever had Prue wasn't hurting her.
Prue couldn't see anything. She was blindfolded and could tell she was tied up. She didn't want to escape until she knew who was after her. She listened for someone, but the place she was in was empty, or so she thought. She heard a faint whimper. "Hello?" she called out. She astral projected again. Her astral self saw a little girl huddled in a corner. She ran over and kneeled down. "Are you okay?" she asked. The girl looked up at her and then at Prue's physical body. "How did you do that? Who are you?" she cried. Prue looked around. "Be quiet, the demon might hear you," said Prue. Prue walked over to her body. If she could fight demons, why couldn't she untie herself? She reached for the ropes, but they shocked her. She pulled her hand away. Now what? she thought.
Paige thought. "Wait, we could use the Call A Lost Sister spell like we did before!" she said. "Actually that might work," said Phoebe. Piper had already flipped to the Call A Lost Witch spell. They gathered around the Book. "Powers of the sisters rise Course unseen across the skies Come to us who call you near Come to us and settle here." Thay all added their blood. "Blood to blood We summon thee Blood to blood Return to me."
Prue felt herself being pulled by a spell. Suddenly she was transported to the attic where Piper, Phoebe, and Paige were standing there waiting. "Prue thank god," said Piper. "Wiat, I'm astral Prue. And we have a new innocent," said Prue.
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Post by Cara Halliwell on Jun 25, 2008 15:51:10 GMT -5
Piper and Phoebe looked at each other. "Who is she?" Paige asked. "I don't know. She looked about 11 years old. She was really filthy too. Her hair was all tangled and she was wearing rags of some sort." Phoebe's eyes widened. "Oh my god," she said. "What?" said Piper with an eyebrow raised. "Piper! Remember when Billie told us she saw her sister in the past? She gaves us the same description! Prue was taken back in time! The demon knew we would never think of that!" said Phoebe. "Can you say very very long shot?" Piper said flatly. "Should I call Billie?" asked Paige. "Might be a good idea," said Piper. "We need to confirm this." "What about me?" Prue asked. "Stay here as long as you can. Then Billie can link up with you and follow you," said Phoebe. "She can astral project?" Prue asked surprisingly. Phoebe nodded. Paige came up to them. "Billie's on her way."
Prue and Billie arrived back at the cave. "Christy!" Billie cried. She teared up. "Oh my god you're alive again!" Billie ran over to her sister and hugged her. "Wait, what do you mean 'again'?" Prue asked. "She was killed as an adult. By me. She was evil," said Billie. "So you want to save her and change that?" asked Prue. Billie nodded. "We can't. It would mess with time and everything. The Triad might even come back," said Prue firmly. Billie got up. "No! I want to save her!" Billie cried. During this, little Christy started to cry. All of this information confused her. "Please! At least let her have a chance to be free from all this!" said Billie. "Well...I guess we've beaten them before, we can beat them again," said Prue. "I'm going back into my body. Will you untie me?" Prue asked. Billie nodded. Prue went back into her body and Billie walked over and untied her. Prue stood up. "Ok, we need to do this right." Prue threw open the door. "Billie, can you project us to your house in this time?" asked Prue. Billie nodded. She grabbed Christy and Prue, then she closed her eyes. When she opened them, she found herself in her room from when she was little.. She placed little Christy on her bed. "I want mommy!" she cried. Billie shushed her. "It's ok. You're home. But you have to wait a minute." Billie projected back to Piper and the others. "Ok we need you guys. We have to vanquish the Triad." "But-" Piper began. Before she could finish, Billie grabbed her and the others. They came back just in time to see the Triad shimmer in. Piper did what she had before. She froze one and Paige orbed him into the other's attack. Then she blew the last two up. They were gone for good. "Well, I gotta say, this has been very interesting," joked Paige. "You bet it has," said Piper. "Well, take us home Billie," said Phoebe.
At the manor, Prue was getting ready to go. She had said goodbye to everyone except Piper. They had been given a few minutes alone. "I'm gonna miss you the most, Piper." said Prue. Piper hugged her. "Me too," she said, tearchoked. Prue went into the middle of the attic. Bright white lights swirled around her, taking her away. Piper felt tears run down her cheeks. "Me too," she said.
THE END
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Post by xoFeliciaFinleyxo on Jul 24, 2008 20:23:42 GMT -5
That was really good. the last story that you wrote that I told you you should write into a book, I wasn't joking. This story was really good. I was also really sad at the end when Prue had to go. I wish she could've just stayed a little while longer. You're a very good writer and your stories are really good. Thats the truth. ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ; ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;DD ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D
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Post by Cara Halliwell on Jul 24, 2008 20:27:14 GMT -5
lol thank you!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by xoFeliciaFinleyxo on Jul 25, 2008 16:21:26 GMT -5
You're very welcome. You're really nice.
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Post by Cara Halliwell on Jul 25, 2008 16:36:34 GMT -5
u too!
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Post by xoFeliciaFinleyxo on Jul 25, 2008 16:39:39 GMT -5
Thanks!
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