Jeblue's Cursed

[~B@MeLiSsA30@B~]

This is a story me and my friend are currently doing.



It's about 2 young woman who are best friends. Elizabeth & Chelsea are going to college together, and while they are studying to get there degree, Students around the campus are mysteriously disappearing. One by one, the numbers drop. All the students are being killed the same way. Than one night, the two friends saw there roommate Serena kill a student. As they investigate, they noticed others within the school that is involved. They have no proof, so they have to find a way to stop the killings before they become the next victim.

[~B@MeLiSsA30@B~]

(Takes place standing outside the college. The sky is blue, no clouds in the sky, & the sun is shining bright. Elizabeth is wearing a white T-Shirt with Green on it & blue jeans. Chelsea is wearing a light pink shirt & a black skirt.)


Elizabeth gets out of her car with her best friend Chelsea. They have been friends since forever. They happened to meet after her mom kicked her out of the house. She packed her bags not knowing where she was gonna go. While looking for an apartment. One of the girls who lived there saw her & told her she needed a roommate & invited Liz to move in. She accepted, & that is how her & Chelsea became best friends. Now, here they are, 6 months later going to the same college. Elizabeth looks at the college, and sees the grass is very green. Flowers surround the walls, and the college is two stories high. Very rich cream color with a hint of brown in it. Arm in arm, they walk up the stairs to go inside.
Today is the first day of college. They check there schedules & sees they don't have class for another hour. So they go check out there Doom Room. They are thrilled when they found out they are roommates. Elizabeth walks back outside with Chelsea & heads to the back of the school. They see a big building which is the same color as the school. They walk to there room & they see a bunk bed to the right of the room. The walls are flowered green with a green carpet. Very beautiful, Liz thought.



Elizabeth giggles & flops onto the top bunk, & Chelsea takes the bottom bunk. Liz leans over the edge to look at her best friend.

"Chelsea, can you believe we are finally here."

Chels smiles & tells her,"Oh, I know. We have been wanting this for awhile. This room is absolutely amazing."

Liz walks to the dresser & starts putting her clothes away. Chelsea jumps off the bed & heads to her closet to put her things away.

Behind them, they heard the sound of a door opening. Liz turns around & sees a young girl. She looks to be around 19yrs old. She has short black hair, green eyes, and a piecing in her upper lip. Te girls walks over to Liz & introduces herself ,"Hi, my name is Serena. I'm your roommate. I hope we can be friends."

Out of politeness Elizabeth smiles & introduces herself. "Nice to meet you Serena. I'm Elizabeth, and this over here is my best friend Chelsea,"Liz looks in her direction. Serena goes & shakes her hand," Hi Chelsea. That is a nice name."

"Thanks."

Chelsea than looks at her watch & notices they have 5 to get to class. "Liz, we need to get to class. We don't want to be late on our first day. College is a bit more stricked with tardiness."

Elizabeth nodded her head to Chelsea & waves good bye to Serena.
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Inside the classroom, the two best friends are sitting in the back row. They study the kids around them. Liz leans towards Chelsea & whispers,"Hey Chels, these students creep me out. I thought College was suppose to be fun. Not be zombie like."

"I know Liz. There isn't any smiles or giggles. They just study the teacher."

In a loud voice, a woman from the intercom speaks,"I call Heather Goodson to my office."

Elizabeth sees a girl with dark chocolate skin, long wavy black hair, big brown eyes stand up and walk out of the classroom. These students here at Jeblue University take their studies seriously. Along with the teachers. As they listen to the Professor, they strug off the bad vibe they are getting. They just figured they were nervous. There is nothing to worry about.

[pipercharmedphreak]

Very interesting. You have my attention for sure! I love the little pictures to go with it. Can't wait to read what's next.

[*Sammi!*]

Yeah! Looks like it could be a very interesting little murder mystery type thing! lol!
Update soon!

[~B@MeLiSsA30@B~]

(Next day, it takes place in there Dorm Room. It's early in the morning, and class wont be starting for another few hours.)

Elizabeth opens her eyes & the sunlight is shining on her face. She closes them again & lets out a big yawn. She rubs her eyes & blinks a few times to adjust to the brightness in the room. She gets up & sees that Chelsea is already awake. Where is she, Liz wonders. She goes ahead & walks to the ladies room where everyone in the building shares. She goes around the corner, & sees a yellow tape in front of the door to the restroom. Usually that means someone died, Liz thought. She goes over to the officer & asked,"What happened here."

The cop looks at her with a grim face,"A young woman was found murdered here this morning. She had cuts on her wrist & on her throat. Her head has a big gash on it. It had to be someone really strong with a heavy object because it cracked the skull."

Elizabeth felt like she was going to get sick, but she needed to make sure it wasn't her friend Chelsea since she wasn't in her room. She asked the officer one more question,"Who is the victim?"

The officer replied,"Her name is Heather Goodson. Do you know her?"

Elizabeth shakes her head no, but than said,"Well, not really. She was in my class. I've never talked with her."

The officer nodded & went back to work. Elizabeth needs to get away from the crime scene. She runs back to her room & throws on some clothes & heads outside. Once there, she takes a deep breath of fresh air. Her heart is beating rapidly, and she still wonders where her best friend is. She heads to the college & takes a look in the classrooms, the lunchroom, & every other place she can think of. Finally, she decides to head to the the back of the school. There she finds Chelsea on the grass not moving. Elizabeth starts worrying & calls out to her,"Chelsea, Chelsea?"

Chelsea leans up to look at her Liz,"Whats wrong?"

Elizabeth runs to her & gives her a big hug & says,"When I went to go to the ladies room, I got news someone in our classroom died. Her name is Heather Goodson and you weren't in the room & I got scared you got killed too & than I saw you just layin there."

Chelsea smiles & reassured her,"I'm very much alive. Now, you telling me this girl died. I just saw her a hour ago talking to Serena."

Elizabeth thinks about what she just told her. "Serena was the last person to see her as far as we know. We got to talk to her & hope to find out who this murderer is."

Chelsea agrees!

The two friends started there search for Serena. After awhile with so such luck, they realize they had to get to class. While walking to class, Liz tells Chelsea,"Serena is our class. We'll talk to her afterwards. I hoped we could of talked to her before, but, we'll catch up with her afterwards."

The walk into class & head to the back row again. They saw Serena sitting in the front row with dark stains on her shirt. She has a big grin on her face. She looks very pleased. Serena turns around & winks. Chelsea whispers,"She is so creepy."

Elizabeth goes to reply to her when the speaker boomed through the air again. The same woman who asked for Heather yesterday is calling another student to her office.

"I call Tyler Moore to my office."

Tyler is a young boy with long strait red hair, blue eyes, & with lots of frekles. Elizabeth whispers,"When he leaves the room, I'm gonna excuse myself & see where he heads off to."

Once he walked out, Liz raises her hand & the teacher says in a mono tone voice,"Yes, Elizabeth"

She clears her voice & asked,"May I be excused to the ladies room."

The teacher nodded & Elizabeth walks out of the classroom right when Tyler walks around the corner. She runs after him & sees him walking inside a room. She stands outside the door trying to hear what is going on in there when she felt a tap on her shoulder. She turns around & sees Serena standing there.

Serena asked,"What are you doing here. You're not supposed to be standing here."

Elizabeth had to think if a quick reason for being here. She says,"Oh! I thought this was the ladies room."

Serena says,"No, this is an office, and only certain people are allowed inside. Follow me, I'll show you where you need to go."

Even though Elizabeth does not need to go to the ladies room, she felt she had no choice but to follow her.

[Cara Halliwell]

damn! busted by serena! oh i really wanna know what happens now!

[*Sammi!*]

Good update... I wonder what she is going to find!
Please update soon!

[pipercharmedphreak]

Wow! That is crazy. That would be awful, to find out someone has been murdered.

Hmm...that Serena girl does sound kinda creepy. She seems like she's up to something.

Oh and Heather was called to the office and was found dead the next day. Could Tyler be next??

Please update soon!

[~B@MeLiSsA30@B~]

(Later that day, Elizabeth caught up with Chelsea. It's late at night, and you can see the stars very well because there isn't any lights accept the beam of light from their flashlights)

"Liz, what happened to you earlier. You wouldn't tell me when we returned to class. Than you wouldn't tell me in the dorm room. Why did we have to meet here?"

Elizabeth takes a look around and than explains,"I went to see where that boy Tyler went when Serena caught me. She took me to the ladies room, and while we were in there. She pushed me against the corner and told me we better stay out of the way if we want to stay alive around here. She is our roommate, and I don't know if there is any tape recorders in there, so I had to come out here where we can talk in private."

As Chelsea takes in what her friend just explained, a thought crossed her mind,"How come Serena wants us to stay out of the way. Unless she is involved."

Elizabeth thinks about that for a few minutes and says,"I honestly don't know. You could be right, but we don't have any way of knowing unless she admits it."

At that very moment, they hear a bloody scream near where they were standing. It sounds like it's coming from the woods. The girls look at each other with fear in their eyes, but they know what they must do. They turn off their lights and slowly walk into the woods to the crying plea of survival. They see two people in a clear viewing. A single dim light shines upon them. Elizabeth notices that the boy who is on his knees is Tyler Moore. The boy who was called to the office earlier.

Liz looks at Chelsea and asked,"What is going on here?"

"I wish I knew. I wonder what is causing him to cry. It's probably the person he is talking to."

Liz says,"Speaking of, who is this person. All I can see is black hair with a slender body. Looks like a girl. I can't be sure."

They continue to watch when they saw the girl transform into a monster. Now she is 7 foot tall, 8 inch arms, and instead of her creamy white skin, is now a dark green color. The monster growled, and pulled out a large 2 sided sword. When she held it up, the light gleamed onto the blade. One side is very sharp, and the other side is hard and smooth.

The girls see that, and Chelsea goes to run out to help him, but Liz holds a tight grip on her arms. "Chels, don't. There isn't anything we can do unless we want to die ourselves. But, we can figure out who she is so we can save future students."

When they look back, they were just in time to see the sword slice Tyler's neck and see him fall backwards. Than she used the other side and hit him right smacked on the skull. Through the silence of the night, they was able to hear the skull crack in half.

They both pulled away gasping for breath, tears stinging there eyes. Chelsea runs to the road and gagged than got sick. Elizabeth goes to follow her when she notices the monster is transforming back to a young girl. As a horrific this was to see, she needed to know who this girl is. When she goes and stands to the side, Liz got a good view and realizes the monster is Serena herself. Liz continues to watch when another figure came into view. It couldn't be, Elizabeth thought. That can't be our Professor from class.

After a moment, Chelsea returns in time to see the professor picking up Tyler's limp body and lifting him over his shoulder. In a soft husky whisper, he told Serena he was proud of her to kill another student from class. That she was his favorite daughter. Than they disappeared from view.

The two friends lean against the tree to digest what just happened. Chelsea is the first one to speak up. "If that is his daughter, does that mean he can transform into a monster too."

Liz looks at her friend unable to speak. She just nods. They didn't believe in monsters until tonight. For the first time, they are truly terrified. They are in his class. Tomorrow, will they hear there names over the speaker com. Are they gonna be the next ones murdered.

[Cara Halliwell]

oh my god. oh my god! thats freakin crazy!! awesome update!!!!!!

[pipercharmedphreak]

WOW! Oh my gosh! WOW! I did not see that happening! The professor?! Holy cow! I am STILL in shock!

This is SUCH a great story! I am loving every moment of it! Awesome job. ;D

[*Sammi!*]

Oh Lordy! Could you imagine knowing the person who was killing all these people?! I didnt expect it to be the prof! Well written!

What happens next then?! Please update soon!

[*Sammi!*]

Mel! When you updating?

[~B@MeLiSsA30@B~]

Sorry for keeping you all waiting. I have two stories I'm writing.

(Next morning, Liz and Chelsea are in their dorm room and Serena's bed is made. She either made her bed or never returned since they saw her last night.)

The girls huddle with their arms around their knees on the bottom bunk and just stare at the time wondering if they should go to class today, but if they didn't, another kid might be called and killed, and they
would regret it if they don't do something. Liz looks at Chelsea and says,"As scared as I am. We need to go to class. I don't want any other students dying."

Chelsea lowers her eyelids and a tear slides down her cheek. "I know. I can't get what happened to Tyler out of my mind. We need to save anyone else they plan on killing."

Liz asked,"How are we gonna do that. You saw what Serena turned into and we can't talk to the teacher. He is her father and he helped her last night."

"What about the school board?"

Liz replies,"We don't know if she is involved. Every single student she is called has died. A little mysteriously, don't you think?"

Chelsea nods than says,"How about we get a Camcorder and whoever she calls today, we'll follow Serena and tape the whole thing. We have our proof."

Liz frowns,"That won't word."

Chelsea asked,"Why is that?"

Liz whispers in her ear,"First of all, another student would have to die for us to prove she is a killer and if we stop it. We could die and this college would be doomed. Also, I remembered she could be listening in on us. We can't let her know we suspect anything."
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In class, they don't see Serena. Wonder where she is. Liz thought to herself.
The girls just sit their waiting to see who gets called today, afraid they will hear their name over the speaker. They can't look at their professor knowing what they saw last night. They feel if they watch, and he looks at them, he would see fear and can read the depths of their soul. Chelsea looks at the clock and sees their is only 15 minutes left of class. She whispers to Liz,"Maybe no one is getting called today to the office."

But she spoke too soon, the intercom crackles before the speaker is cleared. "I call Chelsea Andrews to the office."

Chelsea's eyes open wide, she feels glued to her seat and she looks at Liz with fear. Liz grabs her hand and says,"Chelsea, I won't let anything happen to you. I promise."

The professor walks to them and with a sturdy and demanding voice he says,"You've been called to the office Ms. Andrews. Don't keep her waiting."

Chelsea felt a chill down her spine. Before she leaves, she gives her best friend a hug and told her she loved her. She than takes a deep breath and leaves the classroom.

[*Sammi!*]

Chelsea is very brave! I would definately stay away!
I can imagine their shock! Its not as if they can even tell the Head Master or whoever!
What happens next? Do they manage to get it sorted? I hope so!
Great update! Please update as soon as you can!

[Cara Halliwell]

i agree 100% with Sammi

[~B@MeLiSsA30@B~]

After class, Elizabeth rushes out of class hoping to find where her best friend is. She walks down the hallway towards the office where all the students get called to. She grabs the door knob and slightly opens it.

The lights are off and she can't see a thing. Nobody seems to be inside. Liz looks at her watch and sees she that their isn't anymore classes for today. She shuts the door and when she turns around, she bumps into Serena.

Serena has an icy glare. Not that same friendly look they seen when they first arrived here. After a minute or two, Serena left Liz standing outside that door.

I wonder if she knows what I was just doing, Liz wonders. She clears her thoughts and decides to follow Serena. She killed that poor student last night. Maybe she'll lead her to Chelsea.

Up ahead, Serena walks out of the college doors and heads to her car. Liz hides a few feet behind another car. She looks around the corner of the car and sees her talking to the professor, or other words her dad. She can't understand a word they are saying. All she knows is that it's not English. Serena nods her head and grins. Her dad left and Serena got into her car. "Oh No, I'm gonna lose her," Liz says out loud. She gets up and runs over to her car and slides inside. She starts the engine and pulls out of the college parking a lot.

Ahead of her is a red light so she hasn't lost sight of Serena. Liz leans the seat back so Serena doesn't see her if she decides to look back. The light turns green, and Serena turns left. Liz follows her.
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Not having a clue where she is, Chelsea is sitting on a cold concrete floor. Her wrist hurt from the rope being too tight. She is losing circulation in her wrist and they are going numb. She has a really bad headache from getting hit in the head before she passed out from the pain. She opens her eyes and realizes she has a blindfold on.

She can hear footsteps only a few feet away. She wants to panic, but figures she is safe if she stays quiet. At least for now.

"Elizabeth, where you you,"she says only in her thoughts.

[pipercharmedphreak]

Oh my word!! I missed an update. Anyways, I got to read TWO updates, quite a treat for me!

Wow! Poor Chelsea! She is SO brave! I feel for her. I am worried about what is gonna happen. I really, really hope Liz is able to save her. AHH!

[~B@MeLiSsA30@B~]

Elizabeth continues to follow Serena, heading to an area of town she's never been to. It's very deserted. Only a few trees and what looks like someone's barn. Further down the road, she notices that Serena turned right. As she drives, there are more trees, and more houses that are coming into view. Being distracted from looking around her surroundings, she almost missed Serena's car pulling into a garage. Liz parks a few houses away so she can't be seen. She looks around the car trying to find some kind of protection. Under the seat there is nothing. She opens the trunk, and grabs a tire iron.

It's not much, but it's better than nothing, Liz thought as she walked towards the house. Is Chelsea in there? She walks towards the back of the house and sees a window slightly open. She looks around and slowly opens the window, hoping no one hears her enter. The sound of footsteps made her jump, but she realizes its her own feet creaking on the hardwood floor. She tries to look around, but all she see is darkness in front of her. She takes a flashlight pen out of her coat and turns it on. Elizabeth notices a fowl odor in the room, and sees their are blood stains on the floor. She gasps. Almost following down as she hurries out of the room.

She hears voices. Sounds like the Professor & Serena.....
It's coming from behind that door, but also is faint. Is this the basement? She heard a young girl scream in fright. It took all her willpower not to throw open that door and run down there.
She can't afford to get caught. It wont help her, or that girl who she believes is her Best Friend. Looking around, she looks to see if their is anything else in the house that could help save them both. To get them both out of here. Alive.

[~Andrew~]

this story is great! it's so full of suspense. I hope Liz gets Chelsea out safely. Unless something already happened to her! I hope not. Anyways great job.