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Post by Piper3 on Jul 11, 2008 20:35:25 GMT -5
Does anyone write songs?
I have wrote some songs lately and wanted to get feed back on them. I was also wondering if anyone else wrote songs and they wanted feeback.
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alyssa24
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Post by alyssa24 on Jul 21, 2008 8:21:42 GMT -5
well i do sort of can i see one of your songs please...
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Post by Piper3 on Jul 23, 2008 23:55:06 GMT -5
sure...umm this is one that me and my little sister made together.
Follow the voice thats here in my heart.
Follow the voice that lies in my soul.
I'll take you where you want to go.
I'll show you the stars in the nightsky
I'll show you the clouds up there so high
Don't worry about anything
Everything will be alright
If you follow the voice in my heart.
Read the words coming from my mind
I will take you where you want to go
The sky aint the limate
If you follow the voice right here in my heart
If you read the words comming from my mind
I'll show you the stars in the night sky
I 'll show you the clouds up there so high
baby just follow the voice in my heart
Follow the voice that lies in my soul
I'll take you where you want to go
I'll show you the world, yes baby
I promise this, just you and me
Baby please follow my voice and come back
Without you theres something I lack
I need you back in my life
What happened to me being your wife
It'll be alright
if you follow the voice thats here in my heart
if you read the words coming from my mind
I'll show you the stars in the night sky
I'll show you the clouds up there so high
baby baby please
just follow the voice, thats here, in myyyyyy heart
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Post by alyssa24 on Jul 25, 2008 9:42:46 GMT -5
Wow that is good wow wow wow. I also sang it...
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Post by Piper3 on Jul 27, 2008 0:33:20 GMT -5
haha. Thanks so much, you don't know how much it means to me. I just added more to it so here it goes.
Follow The Voice:
Follow the voice thats here in my heart.
Follow the voice that lies in my soul.
I’ll take you where you want to go.
I’ll show you the stars in the nightsky
I’ll show you the clouds up there so high
Don’t worry about anything
Everything will be alright
Let me tell you about the voice
thats here in my heart(my heart)
It wants to come out and speak to the world
Its telling you to come back baby
Theres no way(no way)
we’re over and done
We had something so strong
to strong to let go
we can’t say goodbye to what we had
I’m telling you come back
Its time, for real
for you to follow the voice thats here in my heart.
Read the words coming from my mind
I will take you where you want to go
The sky aint the limate
If you follow the voice right here in my heart
If you read the words comming from my mind
I’ll show you the stars in the night sky
I ‘ll show you the clouds up there so high
baby just follow the voice in my heart
Follow the voice that lies in my soul
I’ll take you where you want to go
I’ll show you the world, yes baby
I promise this, just you and me
Baby please follow my voice and come back
Without you theres something I lack
I need you back in my life
What happened to me being your wife
It’ll be alright
if you follow the voice thats here in my heart
if you read the words coming from my mind
I’ll show you the stars in the night sky
I’ll show you the clouds up there so high
baby baby please
just follow the voice, thats here, in myyyyyy
heart
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Post by alyssa24 on Sept 2, 2008 5:00:11 GMT -5
its very good ill be typing up my songs soon in a couple of days....
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Post by Piper3 on Jan 31, 2009 2:10:36 GMT -5
Thanks and I hope you post them soon
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Post by alyssa24 on Feb 2, 2009 5:28:04 GMT -5
Do you have any other songs?
Sorry I have not had a chance to type up any of my songs due to schoolwork.
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Post by Piper3 on Feb 6, 2009 23:27:37 GMT -5
Yeah I'll have to find them. I haven't wrote in a long time so i will have to look for some.
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Post by alyssa24 on Feb 8, 2009 11:29:16 GMT -5
Okay. Thanks.
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