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Post by Nicholas Halliwell on Jul 17, 2008 9:48:32 GMT -5
 Chapter OneIt was a morning like any other. Phoebe walked downstairs and found Piper cooking, like usual. The boys were sitting at the table. Phoebe kissed each of them gently on their heads and grabbed an apple. Piper gave to plates of pancakes to each of the boys and then Paige orbed in. Paige poured herself a cup of coffee and sat down at the table. Billie finally got control of her new power and astral projected into the kitchen. She grabbed a handful of grapes, ate them, then returned to her dormant body. Billie was probably studying for exams all night and was still upstairs. Leo orbed in and kissed Piper, then sat down and started tickling Wyatt and Chris. The doorbell rang and then Henry came in. He explained he was working a later shift and wanted to take Paige out to breakfast... breakfast in France, and he waved around a couple hundred Euro's. So Paige orbed her a Henry out of the manor. Coop did his cupid-orb thing and he offered to take Phoebe out to breakfast... but only in San Fransico. So Piper was the only sister left. The doorbell rang again, but no one came in so Piper opened the front door. Piper screamed because this hideous demon barged right in and knocked her off her feet. Leo told the boys to orb upstairs and for Wyatt to put on the force field. Then Leo ran to the front door, yelling at the demon that that is no way to treat a lady. Before the demon got to attack Leo, Piper froze him. Piper motioned for Leo to orb her upstairs into the attic where she found Paige and Phoebe. Leo sensed that Paige was still in France and Phoebe was still at Quake eating breakfast, so Piper blew up the imposters. She then started flipping through the Book of Shadows, wondering why demons would impersonate her sisters. The demon broke the attic door down and sent a blast right into Leo, who was shot in the air then landed hard on the ground. Piper raised her hands and blew him up, but then he only reassembled. Piper frantically kept freezing him and blowing him up trying to find a vanquishing spell. And Leo was no help because he was unconscious. At the same time, Wyatt kept the force field around Chris and orbed into Billie's room. She was listening to music with headphones so she didn't notice until he climbed on the bed. "Wyatt?" asked Billie, "What are you doing here?" "Mommy's in trouble" said Wyatt. Then he orbed up. That's when Billie noticed the noise from upstairs and ran to the attic. She didn't want to risk astral projecting in case she missed the attic. Billie used her telekinetic powers and sent him out the window. thankfully, no one saw. Piper and Billie looked out the window and saw him die. "Ok, you need to call Paige" said Piper. "Why can't you?" asked Billie. "Because she's in France and I'm not paying money to call her cell phone while she's in France and since you're her charge all you gotta do is call her name". "Oh. Gotcha. Paige? Paige, can you hear me?" asked Billie. "What is it? I had to sneak away to the bathroom for this and a lady who really has to go is waiting outside the stall!" said Paige after orbing in. Piper pointed at Leo and Paige knealt down to heal him. He woke up and then Paige orbed out. "Thank you for killing my killer!" said a voice from outside. Piper, Leo, and Billie looked out of the broken window and saw a man. "My name is Frontack. And I'm an alchemist. That demon wanted my power to revive the dead but I tricked him and sent him here so the Charmed Ones could finish him off". "So what do you want now?" asked Billie. "It's not what I want. It's what I can give you. Since you saved my life, I will revive a loved one who is deceased". And all Piper could think about was Prue. |
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Post by ~B@MeLiSsA30@B~ on Jul 28, 2008 23:13:19 GMT -5
Wow. I can't believe no one has replied to this yet. This is really good. I was not expecting that ending of this chapter, but I like it. I can see why Piper would think of Prue. I do hope you post more.  |
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Post by ~B@MeLiSsA30@B~ on Jul 29, 2008 11:20:26 GMT -5
Oh no. What a choice. I know how much Piper loves Prue, but that isn't fair to Billie either. Wow!!!! What is gonna happen to Billie now that Piper said Prue.  |
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Post by Nicholas Halliwell on Jul 29, 2008 12:44:42 GMT -5
Chapter Three
"As you wish" said the Alchemist. He poofed away in a puff of smoke. Then in his place puffed in Prue. She was screaming. Then she began to run. She turned around and looked at Piper.
"Why aren't you running?" she asked, "Shax is coming to get us!" Piper began to chuckle.
"I... well, my sisters and I vanquished him, like, 5 years ago, Prue" explained Piper. She looked at Prue, and she was still wearing what she had on May 17, 2001. "Prue-"
"Sisters? There's only Phoebe-"
But then Piper cut her off, "And Paige"
"Paige... who's Paige? Another sister?" asked Prue.
"Remeber Sam?" asked Piper. Prue nodded her head. "Well, Mom & Sam kinda... did it and, well, Paige popped outta Mom 9 months later. But they put her up for adoption. Even the Elder's didn't know it existed".
"Weird" said Prue. Then Paige walked into the room. She had a spoon in her mouth, and a bowl filled with cereal in her hand. In the other hand she was reading the newpaper. She looked up, looked at the paper, then shot her head up. She noticed Prue and her jaw dropped. Along with the spoon, her bowl of cereal, and the newspaper.
"Prue?!" asked an astonished Paige. The cereal from her mouth was spit all over her shirt.
"I'm just guessing. Paige?" asked Prue. Paige nodded her head. Prue looked at Piper. "Where's Phoebe?" But before Piper could answer, Billie came down the stairs.
"What the hell is she doing here?" she asked. Prue ran up to her.
"Phoebe!" she shrieked. She hugged Billie and looked at her. "Whoa. You really went blonde! And did you win the lottery or something? I mean, this plastic surgery must've cost a fortune!" Then Prue gasped, "You didn't use your premonitions... did you?"
"I don't have premonitions" replied Billie, "and, no offense, but you're dead". Then the girls heard a clang. Like somone dropped dishes. Everyone looked and Phoebe was picking up Paige's dishes, but they dropped. Then Leo walked in.
"Oh My God!" they both stammered.
"Ta Da!" anounced Piper.
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Post by ~B@MeLiSsA30@B~ on Jul 29, 2008 12:49:15 GMT -5
I loved Paige' reaction when she saw Prue. So, is this Billie, or did Prue just think it's Phoebe, and no one has corrected her. Anyway, for Prue thinking it's Phoebe, I liked her reaction towards her. This is good so far. Hopefully I'll understand that part soon about Billie & Phoebe. |
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Post by ~B@MeLiSsA30@B~ on Jul 29, 2008 14:46:43 GMT -5
Oh, okay. That is what I thought, but I wanted to make sure.  |
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Post by Nicholas Halliwell on Jul 29, 2008 16:08:47 GMT -5
Chapter Four
"I'm sorry. What the hell were you thinking when bringing her back to life?" asked Phoebe. The sisters where huddling together while Prue waited anxiously in the conservatory. Billie was furious at Piper and was hiding in her room. Well, Phoebe's old room.
"Look. Before I had a chance to think, her name came out!" explained Piper.
"Well, you know Billie is never going to forgive you. This was the one time to bring back Christy. And now she can't" said Paige. Then she looked up at Prue. Prue smiled and Paige smiled back. Then Piper looked up, then Phoebe. Prue started to get a little confused.
"You know what? She is our sister. And Christy wanted to kill us! If we brought her back from the dead, I would have to lose Leo and we would have to kill her again to get him back. So basically that would be a waste of a resurection! SO FORGIVE ME IF I WANTED TO SEE MY SISTER!" said Piper.
"But Pi-" Paige started, but Piper left the group. She walked to Prue in the conservatory and sat down next to her. Prue put her arm around Piper and Piper began to cry.
"Prue I missed you so much. Why did you leave me? Why did you leave when I needed you the most?" asked Piper.
"Piper. I'm so sorry. I didn't want to leave. It just happened so fast. I knew I had to do whatever it took to save Dr. Griffiths-" started Prue.
"Yeah, but he still died" interupted Piper.
"-ok, but it was in my nature to save him" Prue concluded.
"Phoebe & Paige... they didn't want you here!" balled Piper.
"That's not true!" yelled Paige, walking toward the conservatory. Prue rose her hand and pushed Paige right through the room and through the stairwell. Phoebe looked at Paige, then at Prue.
"What the hell do you think you're doing?" asked Phoebe. Prue rose her hand and moved Phoebe as well. Before Phoebe hit the wall, Paige rose a hand.
"Piper's bed!" she yelled, then Phoebe orbed. Prue looked at Piper confused.
"Half whitelighter" Piper explained. Prue stood up to finish off Paige, but Paige rose her hand again.
"Piper! Prue! Front porch!" she yelled, and both girls ended up on the porch. The door slammed shut and Prue got up. She put her hand on the doorknob and the house blasted her back.
"After we killed Christy, we cast a protection spell on the house so no one could come in. The only way in was by good magic" explained Piper. Prue gave her the sternest look ever, implying how stupid that sounded.
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Post by ~B@MeLiSsA30@B~ on Jul 29, 2008 16:13:18 GMT -5
Wow. I loved how you wrote everybody's reaction to Prue being back. Very good writing, and it's keeping me interested. When I read this, it just broke my heart. I can feel Piper's pain.  |
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Post by Cara Halliwell on Jul 29, 2008 22:05:00 GMT -5
love it! and very creative!
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Post by Nicholas Halliwell on Jul 29, 2008 22:17:57 GMT -5
Chapter Five
Prue followed Piper into P3. She looked around looking very confused.
"You renovated?" she asked. Piper looked at her, then around the club.
"Well, it's been 5 years..." Piper trailed off. Just then, the night manager walked in. He noticed Prue and dropped the boxes of beer he was carrying. Luckily, Piper froze him before the booze hit the ground. She walked over and picked up a box, then placed it on the ground. She did the same for the other box. She walked back beside Prue and looked at her. "Well, go hide! I'm not explaining this!" she said. Prue smirked at Piper then ran and hided in the office. Just when the door closed, the manager tripped a little, then looked at Piper.
"Weird. The boxes landed perfectly on the ground" he said to Piper, not knowing she had done that. "I thought I just saw your sister. Prue?"
"What?" she asked sarcastically. Then she added, "She died 5 years ago. No Prue here!" Then she walked into the office. "Prue, what are we going to do? No one is alowed to see you! You've been dead for 5 years!"
"I know. I know" said Prue, "Are you up to any suggestions?". Prue smirked a little.
"I'm listening"
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Billie was in the attic reading from the Book. Leo walked in and noticed her.
"Have you ever thought about starting your own Book?" he asked. Billie gave it a minute.
"I can do that?" she asked.
"Sure! You can copy some of the more 'basic' spells from the sisters' Book, but after that it's easy" Leo ecplained.
"Good idea! But not right now. I'm looking for a way to bring back Christy. Either a spell to go back in time, or a spell to summon an Alchemist. Anything" said Billie. Leo could tell how upset she was getting. "No offense, but your wife seriously needs to think before she speaks. Even Phoebe and Paige agree with me. bringing back Prue was a bad idea".
"Well, if you desperatly need Christy, you don't need a spell to bring you back into the past. I mean, you have your projection power and you did it before and-" said Leo. He noticed the look on Billie's face. "And I just opened my big fat mouth. Good job Leo!" Leo walked out of the attic, still lecturing himself. Billie sat cross-legged on the floor and began to project.
"Alchemist. Alchemist. Alchemist" she just repeated over and over again. Billie opened her eyes to realize she was downstairs on the living room couch.
"You! Upstairs. You. Conservatory" Billie heard Phoebe say from the kitchen. When Billie heard footsteps, she ducked, but couldn't resist peaking. It was her, earlier this morning. She saw herself walk right past the couch and straight upstairs.
"Is that really what my hair looks like from behind?" she whispered to herself. Her past self, halfway up the stairs looked at where Billie was. Thankfully, she ducked in time. Next, Piper walked right through the living room into the conservatory. Billie gasped, but covered her mouth so no sound would come out. Piper was in too much of a rush to notice anyway. Billie got up and hid behind a wall, listening to Piper talk to the Alchemist.
"So... what'll it be? Prue or Christy?" he asked. Piper paused and before she could speak, Billie ran into the room.
"CHRISTY! CHRISTY! WE WANT CHRISTY!" she yelled at the top of her lungs.
"Billie?!?! What the hell?" Piper asked, She then turned to Frontack and corrected Billie, "No. We want Prue. Please".
"Sorry Lady. She called the name first". And with that, and a puff of smoke, he was gone.
"Look at what you did!" exclaimed Piper. In Frontack's spot, came Christy in a puff of smoke.
"Welcome back, Sis!" said Billie, walking toward Christy. The sisters held hands, and Billie through a potion. Both the girls were gone.
"Oh my God!" shrieked Piper. She covered her face with her hands and looked up when she heard a voice.
"Not quite". It was the Angel of Destiny. She somehow brought Leo to her side and looked apologetic to Piper. "I'm sorry, but you cannot have Leo until the Ultimate Threat has been defeated. Then she went away, with Leo.
Piper stood there. She shook her head and had her hands on her hips. "Two witches are going to die tonight" she raged with anger.
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Post by Cara Halliwell on Jul 29, 2008 22:29:28 GMT -5
whoa! im kinda glad that Chirsty came back. but what will happen to Prue?!
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