Post by p3xocharmedonexop3 on Jul 17, 2008 18:58:42 GMT -5
This is the first chapter to my story: Phoebe & Coop (+ One)
This is the first Charmed fan-fic I’ve ever written so I can’t guarantee that it’s good.
So bare with me guys!!!
Anyways here it is!
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Disclaimer: I don’t own anything Charmed. All of these characters belong to Spelling Productions and The WB, now the CW. I also the idea of doing a flashback from Primrose_Empath and Esmeralda's story Our Screwed Up Destiny!
Chapter One:
It was an early two-o-clock morning when Piper arose from bed when she heard the opening of the front door. Curiously Piper went down stairs to find no one other than here crying younger sister, Phoebe Halliwell.
“Not that I’m happy to see you, but why are you here, crying, at two-o-clock in the morning?” Piper asked.
Phoebe softly replied, “Its Coop, we got into another fight.”
“You would think that marrying a Cupid would make marriage easier.” Piper said as she sat down on the couch.
“Well the concept of him leaving me by myself all the time, thinking it’s okay, thinking more about other’s relationships than our own, and making me think he will never want to have children is making it difficult to make things work; besides you don’t have room to talk you married an angel for god’s sake!”
“Well it’s not like me and Leo haven’t been to hell and back with our relationship.”
[Start flashback (Episode 3.3 Once Upon A Time)]
[Cut to outside. The trolls push Piper out the door. She walks towards her car and the trolls trip her. She falls on the ground and all her stuff falls out of her purse.]
Piper: You better run while you can, you little rodents. (She stands up and looks up at the sky.) I bet you guys think this is real funny don't ya? Haven't you taken enough from me? You have to send trolls to kick me while I'm down. (She picks up her stuff and puts them back in her purse.) I had a nice normal life once and you took that from me. You took my boyfriend, you took my life, the least you could do is leave me... (a couple walk past) my freakin' car keys. I am a good person, I am a good witch and d**n it I would've made a great wife. And how dare you take that from me. I deserve... no, you know what? I demand that you send him back to me. You hear me? Right now. I am going to stand in this very spot until you send Leo back to me.
(Nothing happens.)
[End Flashback]
Wow, me and him sure have come a long way, Piper thought to herself as the memory began to fade.
“Hello! Piper, have you listened to a word I’ve said?”
Yes, of course sweetie, let’s go get some nice warm tea and you can tell me about everything.” Piper said as she hugged her sis.
As the two walked to the kitchen Phoebe started to explain her problem to Piper from where they had left off, “I’m just so tired all the time. This marriage seems more like work. I mean ever since Wyatt called Coop, Uncle Coop, I felt more obligated than anything else to marry him.”
[Start Flashback (Episode 8.22 Forever Charmed)]
Coop: (to Piper) Hey. (He spots Phoebe.) Phoebe.
Phoebe: Hi.
Coop: Thanks a lot for telling me she’s alive.
Piper hands Coop’s ring.)
Piper: You’re welcome.
Wyatt: Uncle Coop!
(Chris whacks Wyatt on his arm. Wyatt gasps and covers his mouth.)
Phoebe: Uncle Coop?
(Wyatt groans.)
Piper: What? (Coop shrugs. Phoebe stutters. Piper claps her hands.)
[End Flashback]
“Where are you going with this?” Piper asked.
“I don’t know. Just lately I’ve been starting to question our marriage, and I’ve began to think that it just isn’t meant to be. I mean we’ve been married for 1 year and the first month was good and now all he cares about is work. He also knows how badly I want to have children but every time I bring it up he says, we’ll talk about it later! I’m beginning to think he will never want children and I’m going to have that beautiful daughter I saw, I just don’t think it will be with Coop.”
“Let’s not make any major decisions tonight. Why don’t you sleep on it, and we’ll talk some more about it in the morning.”
“Yeah you’re right. Thank you for listening.” Phoebe says as she gives Piper a big hug.
“You’re welcome honey. Well you can sleep in you’re room here, at the manor tonight.”
“I still have a room here?” Phoebe asked, feeling better, knowing that Piper kept a room for her here.
“You haven’t seen it yet?”
“Nope, the last time I was here you where remodeling upstairs.”
“Oh well anyways, yeah you still have a room here! I don’t think I could ever make you’re room into an exercise room like I did the time you moved to Hong Kong! I mean I figured, well hoped, that some nights you and Paige might end up staying the night over here. This will always be both of you’re house just as much as it is mine.”
[Start Flashback (Episode 6.11 Witchstock)]
Phoebe: Well, if we're gonna hang out, I better go change my clothes. I think I left some here.
Paige: I'll go with you.
[Cut to the laundry. Piper puts the clothes in the washing machine. As she grabs the detergent, the green goo crawls out of the washing machine and into the vent.]
[Cut to the hallway. Phoebe and Paige are walking towards Phoebe's bedroom.]
Phoebe: Well, being born under the year of the ox is a good thing, it means you're a natural born leader. (The walk into Phoebe's room and see all her furniture has been replaced with gym equipment.) What happened to my room?
Paige: Holy. I guess when Piper said she was gonna spread out, she wasn't kidding.
Phoebe: But where's all my stuff? I mean, I have stuff, you know, lots and lots of stuff.
Paige: Well, being an ox, I can take charge of this. You can borrow something from my room until we straighten this out.
[Cut to Paige's room. Paige's furniture has been replaced with Wyatt's furniture. Leo, Chris and Wyatt are there. Phoebe and Paige walk in.]
Phoebe: Oh, hi, baby.
(Phoebe rushes over to Wyatt.)
Paige: This one too?
Phoebe: Yeah, you move, you lose it in this family.
[End Flashback]
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Please tell me what you guys think of it! Thanks!
This is the first Charmed fan-fic I’ve ever written so I can’t guarantee that it’s good.
So bare with me guys!!!
Anyways here it is!
-----------------------------------------------------------
Disclaimer: I don’t own anything Charmed. All of these characters belong to Spelling Productions and The WB, now the CW. I also the idea of doing a flashback from Primrose_Empath and Esmeralda's story Our Screwed Up Destiny!
Chapter One:
It was an early two-o-clock morning when Piper arose from bed when she heard the opening of the front door. Curiously Piper went down stairs to find no one other than here crying younger sister, Phoebe Halliwell.
“Not that I’m happy to see you, but why are you here, crying, at two-o-clock in the morning?” Piper asked.
Phoebe softly replied, “Its Coop, we got into another fight.”
“You would think that marrying a Cupid would make marriage easier.” Piper said as she sat down on the couch.
“Well the concept of him leaving me by myself all the time, thinking it’s okay, thinking more about other’s relationships than our own, and making me think he will never want to have children is making it difficult to make things work; besides you don’t have room to talk you married an angel for god’s sake!”
“Well it’s not like me and Leo haven’t been to hell and back with our relationship.”
[Start flashback (Episode 3.3 Once Upon A Time)]
[Cut to outside. The trolls push Piper out the door. She walks towards her car and the trolls trip her. She falls on the ground and all her stuff falls out of her purse.]
Piper: You better run while you can, you little rodents. (She stands up and looks up at the sky.) I bet you guys think this is real funny don't ya? Haven't you taken enough from me? You have to send trolls to kick me while I'm down. (She picks up her stuff and puts them back in her purse.) I had a nice normal life once and you took that from me. You took my boyfriend, you took my life, the least you could do is leave me... (a couple walk past) my freakin' car keys. I am a good person, I am a good witch and d**n it I would've made a great wife. And how dare you take that from me. I deserve... no, you know what? I demand that you send him back to me. You hear me? Right now. I am going to stand in this very spot until you send Leo back to me.
(Nothing happens.)
[End Flashback]
Wow, me and him sure have come a long way, Piper thought to herself as the memory began to fade.
“Hello! Piper, have you listened to a word I’ve said?”
Yes, of course sweetie, let’s go get some nice warm tea and you can tell me about everything.” Piper said as she hugged her sis.
As the two walked to the kitchen Phoebe started to explain her problem to Piper from where they had left off, “I’m just so tired all the time. This marriage seems more like work. I mean ever since Wyatt called Coop, Uncle Coop, I felt more obligated than anything else to marry him.”
[Start Flashback (Episode 8.22 Forever Charmed)]
Coop: (to Piper) Hey. (He spots Phoebe.) Phoebe.
Phoebe: Hi.
Coop: Thanks a lot for telling me she’s alive.
Piper hands Coop’s ring.)
Piper: You’re welcome.
Wyatt: Uncle Coop!
(Chris whacks Wyatt on his arm. Wyatt gasps and covers his mouth.)
Phoebe: Uncle Coop?
(Wyatt groans.)
Piper: What? (Coop shrugs. Phoebe stutters. Piper claps her hands.)
[End Flashback]
“Where are you going with this?” Piper asked.
“I don’t know. Just lately I’ve been starting to question our marriage, and I’ve began to think that it just isn’t meant to be. I mean we’ve been married for 1 year and the first month was good and now all he cares about is work. He also knows how badly I want to have children but every time I bring it up he says, we’ll talk about it later! I’m beginning to think he will never want children and I’m going to have that beautiful daughter I saw, I just don’t think it will be with Coop.”
“Let’s not make any major decisions tonight. Why don’t you sleep on it, and we’ll talk some more about it in the morning.”
“Yeah you’re right. Thank you for listening.” Phoebe says as she gives Piper a big hug.
“You’re welcome honey. Well you can sleep in you’re room here, at the manor tonight.”
“I still have a room here?” Phoebe asked, feeling better, knowing that Piper kept a room for her here.
“You haven’t seen it yet?”
“Nope, the last time I was here you where remodeling upstairs.”
“Oh well anyways, yeah you still have a room here! I don’t think I could ever make you’re room into an exercise room like I did the time you moved to Hong Kong! I mean I figured, well hoped, that some nights you and Paige might end up staying the night over here. This will always be both of you’re house just as much as it is mine.”
[Start Flashback (Episode 6.11 Witchstock)]
Phoebe: Well, if we're gonna hang out, I better go change my clothes. I think I left some here.
Paige: I'll go with you.
[Cut to the laundry. Piper puts the clothes in the washing machine. As she grabs the detergent, the green goo crawls out of the washing machine and into the vent.]
[Cut to the hallway. Phoebe and Paige are walking towards Phoebe's bedroom.]
Phoebe: Well, being born under the year of the ox is a good thing, it means you're a natural born leader. (The walk into Phoebe's room and see all her furniture has been replaced with gym equipment.) What happened to my room?
Paige: Holy. I guess when Piper said she was gonna spread out, she wasn't kidding.
Phoebe: But where's all my stuff? I mean, I have stuff, you know, lots and lots of stuff.
Paige: Well, being an ox, I can take charge of this. You can borrow something from my room until we straighten this out.
[Cut to Paige's room. Paige's furniture has been replaced with Wyatt's furniture. Leo, Chris and Wyatt are there. Phoebe and Paige walk in.]
Phoebe: Oh, hi, baby.
(Phoebe rushes over to Wyatt.)
Paige: This one too?
Phoebe: Yeah, you move, you lose it in this family.
[End Flashback]
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Please tell me what you guys think of it! Thanks!
