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Post by Nicholas Halliwell on Jul 24, 2008 13:26:26 GMT -5
I had a dream of this last night and I think I'm going to make it a fan fic. Enjoy!
ONE
Piper told Leo that he was the one she truly loved, not Dan.
Then Piper ran in the front door with Prue and Dr. Griffiths. Prue explained that a demon, Shax, was after him. She told him that he was a healer. Then she got a chill, but so did Piper. Of course, Piper didn't say anything. Then Prue called out for Phoebe. She didn't come and then Shax broke through the window. First he shot Prue through the wall, then herself, then he killed Dr. Griffiths.
Next, Piper was at her funeral. Phoebe had just met Paige, they're half whitelighter/half witch half sister. Piper smiled in her sleep because of all the halves of Paige.
Next, the sisters were in the attic. She was unconsious, but she could see everything like she was watching it on TV.
"Crystals! Circle!" she heard Paige scream. The crystals didn't orb though. Paige got up and the Source flung her across the attic. Phoebe dropped her and picked up the crystals and tossed some at Paige. They then formed a cage around the Source.
"Crystal" he said. It had orbed to him. 'How did he get her power?" thought Piper. The cage was broken and Phoebe and Paige were now together. A fireball formed in the Source's hand, but the "clip" ended.
Piper looked at her stomach and noticed she was pregnant. She was still in the attic. "Oh no" she mumbled to herself. She could now feel the pain of giving birth. She noticed that her stomach was getting smaller. She ran downstairs and then she remembered. There she was giving birth on the table. "I hope I remember to clean that up" mumbled Piper. Leo looked up at the stairs, and Piper ducked. Leo started to walk towards the stairs and before he had a chance to find her, she went somewhere else.
She was eating Jell-O in the hospital room. Phoebe and Paige walked in and found her. After some light talk, the girls disappeared and then Piper was left having a "C" Section to have a baby... Chris! 'Oh god! I did NOT want to relive that' thought Piper. She looked at her shirt and noticed that it was turning red.
Then she was somewhere else. The basement of the attic. Well, actually on the stairs. Zankou was trying to get the Nexus and her and her sisters were chanting a spell. There was a huge explosion, and then the sisters were knocked down. Zankou was vanquished and she disappeared off the steps, and behind the couch in the living room.
She looked up and saw her sisters and herself battling Billie and Christy. Over in the corner, there was another Billie, and Piper. Along with Patty and Grams. The power started to blow up the house. Piper screamed and was woken up by someone shaking her.
"Piper" said the voice, "Piper! Wake up". Piper woke up. "Piper! You were screaming in your sleep! Look, I have a deadline at the museum and I can't concentrate with you screaming". Piper sat up. She looked around. It was the same decor from 8 years ago. She looked to her right and saw Prue sitting beside her with her laptop. Phoebe, on her left, was eating popcorn watching her favourite movie: "Kill It Before It Dies".
"Shh!" shushed Phoebe, with an angry look on her face, then she put on a smile and looked back at the TV. "This is my favourite part".
"Well, I'm sorry we don't all have time more lounging around watching movies" judged Prue, looking over her glasses. Piper felt her hair. It was shoulder length and she had her bangs.
"Oh... my..." stuttered Piper.
"If you're tired, go to bed" said Prue, "It's ok, I'll clean up the dishes". Piper had a terrified look on her face. When Prue noticed she reassured her, "It's ok honey, it was just a dream".
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Post by Cara Halliwell on Jul 24, 2008 15:45:04 GMT -5
omg! piper went back in time!
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Post by Nicholas Halliwell on Jul 25, 2008 9:09:40 GMT -5
TWO
Piper decided to go green for the day. She packed a backpack with her chef stuff (she had an interview today) and then she hopped on her bike to work. She remembered it like i twas yesterday... even though it was today. But she saw it in her dream. She was thinking about that dream, and than suddenly she hit a rock and fell down. A car was then coming straight at her. She hit her head pretty hard, but she fought demons everyday... at least that's what she thought. So she shook it off, took a quick look around (didn't want to expose magic), the raised her hands and gave them a little 'flick'. Nothing happened. The car was honking but it showed no sign of slowing down. This time Piper did it harder. And harder. The car still didn't freeze. She closed her eys because she knew she was going to die. But before she knew it, some man had come out of nowhere and rolled her and himself to the side of the rode. Piper opened her eyes and saw in disbelief her bike get crunched.
"Hey! Watch it lady!" screamed the man from his car. Piper looked around and when she looked at the man she saved, she noticed a familiar face.
"Leo?!" said Piper, both happy and confused. She then grabbed her head gently and started to kiss him. She relized he wasn't kissing back. "Leo, what's wrong?" she asked him.
"I don't know who you are, and how you know my name, but stay away from me" answered Leo. He jogged back across the street to someone. They held hands and walked down the street.
"That's it!" screamed Piper, sitting up. "I'm going home to the Book of Shadows and I am going to figure something out!" With that, she walked away. The bike just lay there and her cell phone started to ring. She quickly checked the call display and ignored it. It was her possible-future-boss, Chef Moore.
***
Piper opened the door slowly and closed it quietly because she didn't want her sisters to know she was home. She quickly walked up the stairs and went straight to the attic. Like it was 8 years ago, the door was locked. Piper went back downstairs, around back, picked up a brick, and went back upstairs. She spent 10 minutes smashing the brick against the handle, and when that failed, she through the brick against the door.
"This is really hard to break. Demons must be stronger than I thought" she mumbled. Finally, a crack just big enough for her hand to fit through. She put her hand in and unlocked the door from the inside. She walked inside and noticed the book stand. She remembered where Phoebe had found the Book years ago. She opened up the trunk, and there it was. The Triquetra on the front was a good sign. She opened it up and the front read "Book of Recipes. 1683."
Piper just ignored the front and started flipping through the pages. Halliwell Super Choco Cookies? Possum stew? Where was the Book? The real book?
"Piper? Piper are you up there?" asked Phoebe, walking up the stairs.
"No. I'm... at work" she said questioning herself. Phoebe walked into the attic.
"How'd you get in here?" she asked. Then she noticed the brick.
"Phoebe! Something's wrong. Something's utterly wrong!" said Piper, starting to tear up.
***
"You're right, Piper. Something is wrong" said Christy. "And it's not getting any better!"
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Post by Cara Halliwell on Jul 25, 2008 12:49:23 GMT -5
ohmygod! oh my GOD! update!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by Esmeralda on Jul 25, 2008 17:16:33 GMT -5
WOW!! What a dream you must've had! And what a great job of turning it into a fic!
I love Christy somehow trying to make Piper that the whole 8 years of Charmed was just a dream! Especially her seeing Leo with someone else and having Prue alive and her having her bangs back...and, oh, WOW!
The funny thing about it is I would really prefer the fic if all eight years *were* a dream--or at least the last four...let it be Piper in labor and let her have Prudence Melinda rather than Wyatt...that's when the whole thing went whacko..
I'm pretty sure that that's not what's going to happen, but it's fun to think about.
At any rate, I really love this and really want to see what's going to happen next. So PLEEEEEEEEEASE update soon!
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Post by Nicholas Halliwell on Jul 25, 2008 20:06:26 GMT -5
Here is the highly anticipated (well, by Cara Halliwell & Esmeralda) update. Enjoy!
THREE
"Is this leaded?" asked Prue, grabbing a cup of coffee from Piper. Piper had a weird deja vu feeling.
"No" said Piper, her eyes drifting around the kitchen.
"Excuse me?" asked Prue, somewhat offended.
"Prue, we live in a one income household. It is ridiculous to make two pots of coffee" explained Piper. Prue looked at her strangely, then shook her head and started to sip her coffee typing on her laptop. "Prue, do you feel strange today?"
"Yes!" said Prue. Piper got an excited look on her face then Prue continued her statement, "I now know that for the past two years I've been drinking unleaded coffee. It's real strange!" Piper's smile quickly faded away. Then Phoebe walked in and while Prue was looking at Piper, Phoebe grabbed her computer. She minimized the application and started surfing the web. "Hey!" exclaimed Prue, grabbing the computer back. Phoebe also held on. It was like a game of tug-o-war.
"I had this strange dream last night" said Phoebe. I was a psychic and I could have premonitions of the future, and the past! I want to look up psychics".
"Then use the library!" said Prue. She had one final tug and got back her laptop. Phoebe stuck her tongue out at her then walked back upstairs. It clued into Piper that Phoebe had had premonitions for the past 8 years, well, except when Barbas convinced the Tribunal to take all her active powers away. Piper started to think. She grabbed her cup of coffee, grabbed a pad and a pen, then walked into the conservatory.
She started to write down all the spells she remembered. Then she had a little Book of Shadows of pages of pad paper. She had the spell to vanquish the Source. To vanquish the Woogyman, the Truth Spell, the Vanishing Spell, and the Multiplication Spell. Then she quickly remembered the power swapping spell.
"What's mine is yours, what's yours is mine. Let our powers cross the line. I offer up my gift to share, switch our powers through the air". Then Piper got this sharp feeling in her hands. 'Oh yes! This is it!' said Piper. She could feel the power. Just then, Prue walked into the room but Piper didn't notice. Piper's hands then started to glow.
"Piper?" questioned Prue. Piper screamed and a huge blast went right into Prue.
"P-P-Prue?" stuttered Piper. She got up and looked around. She noticed a hand under the table. She screamed and found Prue blown against the wall. But Prue just got up and looked at her hand.
"Damn" she said. Then her hand flew back into place. The girls looked to the other hand and noticed Phoebe, squinting her eyes. Piper started to cry and Prue went to give her a hug. Then she had a premonition.
Piper was cooking a turkey in the oven. She opened the door to check on it then a strange looking man popped up into the kitchen. There were shimmers in the place before he arrived. A glowing ball was somehow conjured into his hand and he threw it at Piper. She was thrown and her head landed into the oven. There was a high pitched scream and then the premonition was over
"Piper? Are you making a turkey anytime soon?" asked Prue.
"There's one in the oven right now. Oh, that reminds me..." trailed off Piper. Then she walked into the kitchen. She put on the oven gloves and opened the door. A demon "shimmered" in and a glowing ball popped into his hand. He threw it at Piper and he flew, head first into the oven. A ear piercing scream broke through and the demon "shimmered" away.
"Piper" said Prue walking toward the oven.
"Oh my God" said Phoebe, looking away.
"Go call 911" screamed Prue, in tears.
***
Finally she died!" laughed Christy. She was stirring a pot and watching Piper in it. "Everyone has to die in their alternate reality!"
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Post by Cara Halliwell on Jul 25, 2008 20:39:20 GMT -5
my god! how-how is this possible? Christy doesnt have that much power! i hope Piper is ok!!!!!!!!!
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Post by Nicholas Halliwell on Jul 27, 2008 16:18:40 GMT -5
THREE
"What the hell are you doing?" asked a familiar voice. Christy looked up from the pot and gave a little chuckle. She turned her head back to the pot. "Where's Piper? She's been missing for two days".
"Don't you think I know that? You stupid Whitelighter. I trapped her in an alternate reality. And one by one the sisters will die. Including mine!" said Christy. Then she cackled, still stirring the pot.
"You can't do this. We will stop you" said Leo, sternly. He through a potion and then in a puff of smoke he disappeared.
***
Piper, like usual, was in the kitchen. It was a weekend and Prue had the day off. Like that meant anything to her. Like usual, she was on her laptop. Drinking her coffee she kept telling herself was leaded because she hates unleaded. Piper was buttering a bagel while Phoebe ate her cereal watching cartoons. Piper walked into the living room and joined Phoebe.
"Piper, I have these huge zits on my face" complained Phoebe.
"Pop 'em" answered Piper. Phoebe put up her hands to squish her pimple. "Not here!" shrieked Piper. While Phoebe got up to go to the bathroom Piper grabbed the rolled up newspaper and patted her on the bottom.
Phoebe tossed the mirror at Piper jokingly and chuckled, "Check out your zits too!" Piper opened the mirror and screamed. Her face was all melted. She had no left ear and her cheeks were so far in it's a wonder how she can talk. In to top it off, right on her nose was a huge pimple.
"Piper! Piper!" she heard someone calling. It sounded like Prue.
"Prue?" asked Piper.
"Yeah?" responded Prue, walking into the room. She was sipping her coffee. "What do you need?"
"Piper! Piper! Piper!" She heard the voice getting closer and closer.
"PIPER!" screamed Prue. Piper awoke in the hospital room. She looked and found Prue beside her. Phoebe was crying into a napkin that was black with mascara.
"Piper! Your alive!" cheered Phoebe.
"Dammit!" screamed Christy. "Next time I'll get her. Next time".
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Post by Cara Halliwell on Jul 27, 2008 17:00:59 GMT -5
ooooh its getting goood! update!!!!!!
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Post by Cara Halliwell on Jul 27, 2008 17:26:16 GMT -5
cool! it looks great!!!!!!
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Post by Cara Halliwell on Jul 27, 2008 19:03:49 GMT -5
it's prue's. she was putting it around piper the night before piper's wedding. she and phoebe were setting everything up.
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Post by Nicholas Halliwell on Jul 28, 2008 18:43:15 GMT -5
FOUR
Piper woke up and looked in the mirror. She tilted her head to the left and gave a little smile. Phoebe walked in, holding yet another bowl of cereal. She sat down on Piper's bed, put her bowl down on the nightside table and then rolled on her stomach. She rested her chin on her hands and looked up.
"Piper. No matter what you're always beautiful!" she said. Piper looked at her sternly.
"That's a little bias don't you think? I mean, I'm your sister. And you don't need to be kicked out", said Piper smiling. Phoebe wanted to look away because her sister looked horrific, so she did. But she grabbed her cereal bowl so it looked like she had a legit reason. Piper walked over and gave Phoebe a hug, then walked downstairs. Prue was at the table sipping coffee reading the newspaper.
"Hey listen to this. Some guy was shot in an alley. And it was his birthday. His body has not been found yet though" read Prue, not lifting her head from the newspaper.
"Hmm..." mumbled Piper.
"Oh that sounds awful!" responded Phoebe.
"I gotta go. School field trip today at the museum" said Prue, sitting up and walking upstairs.
"You didn't forget... did you?" asked Phoebe. Piper looked very confused. "Oh no! You did! Didn't you?" Finally Piper clued in. It was Prue's birthday coming soon. Piper forgot to give her a gift. "Dammit Piper! I thought I always forgot stuff!" yelled Phoebe, shaking her hands in the air. All the kitchen appliances began to fly around the room.
"Uh, Phoebe" stuttered Piper. Phoebe looked up and put her hands down. The blender, television, juicer, cloths, table, chairs, and microwave all fell on the floor. "PHOEBE! Do you know how much that's going to cost to replace?!?!" Before Phoebe had a chance to answer, the doorbell rang. Phoebe answered the door and then she and a man walked into the room.
"Leo?" asked Piper.
"Look, I just stopped by to check up on you. You fell pretty hard. Then I heard you tripped into a stove" said Leo.
"I'm fine" said Piper looking away. Leo walked up to her, gave Phoebe a 'go-away' look and Phoebe left. Leo put his arm around Piper's waist and turned her around. She looked at him and he looked at her and then they started to kiss. Piper pulled back. "What about your girlfriend?" she asked.
"I broke up with her. She wasn't all that enthusiastic about me saving you. And you seem like my one true love. Like I've known you for eight years".
"Oh, Leo!" said Piper. They began to kiss again, no matter how hideous Piper looked at the moment.
***
"What the hell?" asked Billie. She looked sternly at Christy.
"Welcome, Sis!" said Christy, "Ready to join my side?"
"When hell freezes over!"
"I can make that happen".
"Christy. Just give us back Piper and I won't have to vanquish you" reasoned Billie.
"Ha!" scoffed Christy, "Like you could". Then Billie threw a potion and orbed out. "What the hell? Billie can't orb!"
***
"She's deffinatly not going to give back Piper willingly" said Billie. Then Billie walked into the manor. She looked up and saw herself and quickly closed the door.
"Are you mad?" she asked. Then the fake Billie glamoured back into Paige.
"Sorry. I just had to see how Piper was doing. Christy is still there so she's probably not dead yet" explained Paige. Paige looked at Phoebe and Phoebe looked at Billie.
"Not yet anyway" said Phoebe.
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Post by Cara Halliwell on Jul 29, 2008 18:41:09 GMT -5
update! im so hooked!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by Nicholas Halliwell on Jul 30, 2008 22:57:31 GMT -5
FIVE
Piper woke up from the chirping of birds. Then Phoebe ran into her room and jumped on the bed.
"Piper! Piper!" she yelled, jumping up and down. Piper groaned and pushed Phoebe aside. "Piper! I'm totally freaked! I can still move things without touching them and Prue said she saw the future. Something's definatly not right!" Piper rolled over and looked at Phoebe.
"Something is wrong. I have my power. I can freeze things and blow things up. And Prue is supposed to have telekinesis. And you can see the future. Oh, and you can levitate".
"Really?" asked Phoebe, "I think I can do something else..."
"What?" asked Piper. Then Phoebe's astral self went back to her dormant body. The real Phoebe came running in the room.
"Prue looked it up! She said it's called 'astral...', well, I can't remember the rest".
"Astral Projection" said Piper. She got up and looked in the mirror. She was so astonished she screamed. "I'm... beautiful!" she shrieked, jumping up and down around her room.
"What are you talking about?" asked Phoebe.
***
"What Piper doesn't know won't hurt her" said Christy, looking in the pot. Then, Paige ended up beside her for some reason.
"Why am I here? Send me back up there!" Paige demanded, pointing up. Christy just laughed.
"Yeah. Right!", then she took a step back and Paige looked in the pot. She saw Piper, but she looked different.
"Pipeeeeeeeeerrrrrrrrrrrrr!" yelled Paige while she fell through the watery-like substance of the pot. It felt like she was falling forever even though the pot was only a couple feet deep. Then she ended up in what looked like a closet
***
Paige opened up the door a little and noticed Phoebe and Piper dancing around Piper's room. Paige closed the door and took a deep breath.
"They can't find our I'm here!" she stated.
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Post by Cara Halliwell on Jul 31, 2008 12:02:02 GMT -5
omg update!
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Post by charm1d on Jul 31, 2008 13:47:26 GMT -5
I've been meaning to read this fanfic since you first posted, but now that i finially got the time WOW!!! great great fantastic story. I'm hooked you captured all the characters probable thoughts and actions perfectly Update soon Poor paige
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Post by Cara Halliwell on Jul 31, 2008 18:53:15 GMT -5
please update!
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Post by Nicholas Halliwell on Jul 31, 2008 21:25:32 GMT -5
SIX
"Piper please. You're rambling!" said Prue calmly. Piper was all hyper.
"Prue. You don't understand. We were witches. You had died. We had met Paige. And... and..."
"And... you're crazy!" finished Phoebe.
"No. I'm not" said Piper. She had an irrated look in her eye. "Can't you just believe me?"
"But Piper. I'm a 28-year-old woman. I'm not going to die for, like, 50 years!"
"Prue I'm telling you. This was more than just a dream!"
"Piper. I'm telling you. Your psychotic!" yelled Prue. She pushed Piper off her lap and Piper fell on the floor. Prue got off the couch and walked upstairs into her bedroom. Piper looked at Phoebe.
"Couldn't you do anything?" asked Piper. Phoebe shrugged and walked away. She walked into the kitchen and when she walked past the basement door, she got the chills.
***
Prue lay in her bed. She rolled over and pulled the covers tighter around her. What Piper said had given her the chills. She was destined to die in 3 years? That's not right. Prue had some other thoughts, but then slowly drifted to sleep.
What felt like 3 hours later, she opened her eyes and sat up. In the chair at the window of her bedroom was a girl she had never seen before. She had medium-long brown hair and it was up in a ponytail. She sorta looked like her mom. The girl just sat and stared out the window. Prue accidently let out what she thought sounded like a squeak and the girl looked over. She noticed Prue was awake and she ran for the doorway. Prue got up and ran to the door, blocking the girl
"Who are you? What are you doing here? This is my bedroom!" asked Prue. The girl wouldn't open her mouth. Suddenly, Prue had a poem come into her mind. She didn't know what it meant, but there was a sudden urge to say the rhyme then and there. "For those who want the truth revealed. Opened hearts and secrets unsealed. From now until it's now again. After which the memory ends. Those who now are in this house will hear the truth from others mouths".
The girl struggled, but it was like her mouth was being forced open. She stood there with her mouth open looking like an idiot for about five seconds and she could no longer hold her voice in. "Matthews. Paige Matthews", the girl said. Prue now looked like an idiot with her mouth open, then Paige orbed out of Prue's bedroom.
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Post by heybethann9 on Aug 1, 2008 0:55:52 GMT -5
This is awesome I can just picture it all happening
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Post by charm1d on Aug 1, 2008 8:45:43 GMT -5
Wow, Paige enters the dream this is Great!! I'm on the edge of my seat update soon
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