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[~Andrew~]

Season 3 - Main Characters Piper, Prue, Phoebe, Leo, This thread is set in Season 3.
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Setting- P3

Music is blaring. Punk KIDd is playing with his band. Prue and Phoebe are sitting on a couch in the corner, watching Piper dance with Leo.

"Wow" Prue said. "I don't think I will ever find anyone as special or romantic as Leo".

"What are you talking about, Prue?" Phoebe said. "You are hot, smart, and single. You are gonna get a guy".

Right on cue, a handsome young stranger walks up to Prue and asks to dance.

"Uhh well....see I'm kinda busy.." Prue said hesitantly.

"Oh you jokester" Phoebe said with a forced laugh. "Ofcourse she'll dance with you" Phoebe pushed Prue out of her seat.

Prue smiled at the stranger and took his hand as they walked to
the dance floor. Just then Piper and Leo came to sit down and Piper gave Prue a bemused look as she passed.

"Well it looks like Prue found somebody" Piper said jokingly.

"Yep" Phoebe laughed. "Oh I'm pretty tired" She yawned. "I'm gonna head home".

"You sure?" Piper asked.

"Yea. You two have fun. Oh and watch over Prue" Phoebe smiled and then threw on her coat and left.

"She seems a little distracted" Leo said.

"Oh well thats Phoebe for you" Piper said with a grin.
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Halliwell Manor
Phoebe walks into the manor and closes the door. It's very dark. All of a sudden a clouded shape attacks her.

"Uh- GEt ...of- me!" Phoebe cried kicking the shape straight in the gut. She fumbled with the light switch. Finally the lights come on. The thing that attacked her is wearing a black coat and a mask.

Phoebe flies into the air and delivers a well placed kick to his jaw. The demon cries out and falls. Phoebe grabs a lamp and is about to knock it over the demons head when the demon raises his arm and Phoebe flies into the air and bangs against the wall, falling to the ground unconscious. The demon walks up to her and roughly grabs her by her hair, and shimmers out. A second later Prue, Piper and Leo walk into the house, laughing. Seeing the mess, their smiles faded quickly.

"Phoebe?" Prue called anxiously, stepping over the debris.

"Phoebe, this isn't funny!" Piper yelled, very worried.

"She's not here" Leo said with his eyes closed. "I can't sense her".

"What do you mean she's not here!" Prue yelled, anger in her voice.

"No, No, No!" Piper rushed up the stairs. Leo and Prue could hear her screaming "Phoebe you get your a$$ out here!" All of a sudden Piper let out a high - pitched scream.

Leo and Prue rushed up the stairs. Piper was on the floor with a demon standing over her with a fireball in hand.

"GET AWAY FROM MY SISTER!" Prue flinged her hand and the demon flew threw the room and right out of the window, shimmering away in mid-air.

"Piper are you alright?" Leo stretched out his hand to help her get up.

"Fine" Piper said ignoring his hand.

"Do you think that could be the demon behind Phoebe's dissapearance?" Prue asked.

"It probably is" Leo answered, still looking at piper worriedly. She was fuming with anger but Leo could see the pain and sadness in her eyes.

"We will find her" Leo told Piper soothingly.

Piper looked him in they eye and said"I know". They kissed.

"Okay..uh not wanting to break this up or anything but our sister just got kidnapped by a scary looking demon" Prue said.

Piper and Leo broke up. "Well uh..there is alittle blood of his on the floor maybe we could cast a spell using that blood to find him...and hopefully Phoebe" Piper said.

"It's worth a shot" Leo said.

"All right, let's get to work" Prue said.

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Meanwhile, Phoebe lies deep in the underworld...defenseless and in grave danger.



Part 2 - The plan will be on this thread =] Thanks for reading.

[~Andrew~]

Here comes part 2 of the story.

To all my readers - I would really appreciate it if you would comment on the story after reading it. Also If you liked it I would like if you bless me. Thank you all for reading!

Part 2 - The Plan

Attic

Piper paced around the room impatiently as Prue rotated the hanging crystal around the map. A few seconds passed by in silence.

"Oh for god's sake, this really isn't working" Prue said, and dropped the crystal in frustration.

"Well then what the heck are we supposed to do?" Piper asked her older sister.

Prue stared at her sister in silence. She had absolutely nothing to say. At that moment a swaddle of white orbs flashed and Leo was standing where the lights disappeared. His expression was grim.

"The elders don't know what the masked demon's plan is" He told his charges. "However, they did tell me that many witches have been dissapearing overnight and they are pretty sure this demon is the cause for all the mayhem".

"So how is that supposed to help?" Piper asked.

"Well one of the witches that dissapeared has a husband that has been looking for her. Maybe he can tell us something" Leo responded.

"Alright...there is no time to lose, I'm driving" Prue said in a hurry.

"Wait, maybe we should think this over a bit" Piper said hesitantly.

"Whats to think over?" Prue asked her sister in a annoyed tone.

"...Well maybe Leo can orb me over there while you stay here and look for more suggestions in the book" Piper said tentavely.

"Split up, I don't think thats the best idea" Prue said.

"Well it will save us plenty of time" Leo added in.

Prue stared from her sister to her brother-in-law.

"Fine" she finally said.

"Alrighty, Leo take it away" Piper said. Leo took her arm and the couple disappeared in brilliant white lights.
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Phoebe tried very hard not to move. If the demon saw that she was awake, who knew what he might do. She was certain that he was waiting for her to wake up.

"You can stop pretending now, witch" The masked demon said. Phoebe was almost certain he had a smirk on his face. However, she still didn't move.

"I SAID STOP PRETENDING!" The demon roared.

Phoebe opened her eyes. She was in a dimly lit room. Definitly the underworld. She was lying on a stone slab. And with horror, she realized that there were many other witches lying around her.

"What the hell do you want from us" Phoebe asked, trying to sound brave. Instead, her voice came much weaker than she expected.

The demon laughed, a shrill, cool, laugh. "What do I want?" "I am after your soul...essence, whatever you like to call it."

"Why did you pick me?" Phoebe asked. "I mean, I am the weakest one out of the three of us".

"Exactly" The demon responded. " You are the weakest one and therefore the easiest to capture. Your sisters would make a much bigger fight".

Phoebe thought about what the demon just said. His logic was different then other demons. Most demons go for the stronger or older ones. He doesn't care. He just wants the witches and whichever come the easiest he will take. This brought another question to her mind.

"What happens when you take our essence? What do you get from it?"

Even though he wore a mask, Phoebe realized he was smiling. "Like all other demons, I am after unlimited power. And, your souls will give me just that". "Now enough of this..it's time complete the next stage of my plan". He shimmered out.

The way he said next stage frightened Phoebe. What was he up to now?
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Attic

Piper and Leo just returned. Prue stood up from the armchair and looked at them eagerly. "Well?" she asked.

"Nothing" Piper said heavily. "He was dead."

Prue's face fell.

"How about you" Leo asked quietly.

"Well I was a bit more successful" Prue announced. "We have some help".

From the corner of the room out of the shadows stepped Cole Turner.

[pipercharmedphreak]

First off, I love the plot! Great start to what seems to be a great story. A few suggestions, I think it would add to your story to describe the setting rather than just saying ‘Setting-P3’. Another thing would be to watch your tenses. You seem to be switching from past tense to present tense. Also I noticed a few minor spelling errors, but nothing too distracting.

With that aside, you seemed to capture the style of the sisters when it came to fighting demons, VERY well! The masked demon has me worried. I wonder what he will be up to. I’m interested to see how Cole can help out. Very nice story and I can’t wait to see what you write next!

[jate88]

Watch my tenses and add more description? Maybe that's why I don't get a lot of people viewing my fan fic ;D

I guess it's alright. I'm not saying your writing skills suck though. It's more of personal taste. After all different people find different things boring.

[~Andrew~]

Thanks for reading guys! I appreciate all comments good and bad cause it helps me learn. Part 3 - "Cole steps in" will be released by tommorow so stay tuned. Thanks again for reading.

;D

[Piper3]

I am with PCP 100% on this one. Great job. I would rate it a 8/10. One thing I would like is to see a little more emotion. I can't wait to see what happens with Cole. Update soon:]

[jate88]

You know something, Julian McMahon has been on Charmed, Nip Tuck, Premonition, The Fantastic Four, and maybe some other ones. Each of his roles in those different films/movies shows a different side of his personality but no matter how good he acts in charmed he can never express himself through piper or any other character. He is only able to express himself through himself. So in order to show more sides of his personality he has to be in as many movies or films as possible.

As a writer though you don't really have that limitation. All the characters in your story can show different sides of personality even the bad guys. In hinduism they believe in one ultimate being like the christians. However unlike the christian God, however Brahman is able to play roles or wear different masks that we as humans are well familiar with.

[~Andrew~]

Hey guys! Thanks for being supportive! All of your comments are great advice. Everybody I hope your enjoying the story. Here is Part 3.

Cole Steps In

"What the hell is he doing here?!" Piper demanded.

"Well...Piper look, I know he is a demon and even though we have our differences we both know he is crazy in love with Phoebe. I don't think he would betray us" Prue tried to convince her sister.

"That's right" Cole added with a smile, and he finally stepped forward. "I have nothing but the desire to save Phoebe from Zahrin".

"Wait..who?" Piper asked, confused.

"The demon that has been kidnapping the witches" Cole answered simply.

"How do you know about him" Leo asked, suspicious.

"Leo, Leo, Leo...I am a DEMON. I live in the underworld. I'm bound to hear about him" Cole answered with a cold laugh.

Leo eyed Cole with disgust. Then he turned to Piper. "Even if Cole is evil, I think that this could work. I mean, Cole has quite a reputation in the underworld. He could find Phoebe easily" He reasoned.

"Then that's the plan" Cole said with another smile and he shimmered out.

Prue, Piper, and Leo exchanged grave glances.

Phoebe is still lying in the underworld with the rest of the defenseless witches.

I have to get out of here Phoebe thought. Maybe I can think of a spell, she thought. Then a spell came to mind.

Phoebe chanted: "Let the object of objection become but a dream as I cause the seen to become unseen." Nothing happened. Okay how about this: "To stop the demon from his gain, Release me from these evil chains". The chains glowed red, and then Phoebe felt a great shock as if though she was just struck by lightening. "Ahh!" she screamed in pain.

"Phoebe?" A familiar voice called.

"Cole? What are you doing here?" Phoebe's voice sounded raspy.

"Thank God I found you Phoebe" Cole said. He struggled with the chains.

"They won't come...of!" Cole grunted as he pulled. "I'm going to have to get your sisters for a power of three spell" he added.

Phoebe smiled at him. "Hurry" she whispered. "I promise I will be back soon" Cole stared into her eyes. Then he stepped back and shimmered out. Phoebe layed her head back and sighed with her eyes closed. All of a sudden Zahrin shimmered in.

"It's time" He said with a evil smile.

"Uh maybe you want to, oh you know, get a few more witches or something, to uhh strengthen the spell" Phoebe tried to stall him.

"Oh...no no no, I have just what I need" the demon said. Then he threw his head back and laughed, a deep, chilling, laugh.

Piper sat with her head on Leo's shoulder while Prue flipped through the ancient pages of the book. The attic had a gloomy air about it.

"Ok, what the heck is taking Cole so long?" Piper said annoyed.

Prue continued to absentmindedly flip through the book.

"Uh Prue we already checked the whole book" Leo said.

Prue sighed. "I know, I know. I just feel so helpless" she said in a depressed tone.

"Oh honey it's okay" Piper said in a soothing tone. At that moment Cole shimmered in.

"Oh thank god!" Piper jumped up.

"Okay so what did you find?" Prue said walking forward.

"I found Phoebe. She is deep in the underworld as well as many other witches. However the chains that are trapping them can't be removed by a simple demon like me. That's why we need the power of three to free her" Cole said in a rushed tone.

"Okay so know we have to figure out a good spell to free them and to vanquish the demon" Piper sounded exasperated.

"Don't worry honey we can do it" Prue comforted her.

"Let's hurry" Leo said. "Phoebe can be in great trouble".

And indeed she was...



So that was part three guys. I hope you enjoyed it. I'm going to work on Part 4 a little longer to make it extra better. Comment and Rate!

[jate88]

Hooray your preparing a nice big fishie for Cole to flay.
I like how you actuall built up some character development for your villan instead of just calling him a wimp like they do in rap songs. They also call them some other stuff but I'm not going to try to put that here for censorship reasons. If all your beating is wimps then how can you grow any stronger.

[~Andrew~]

I will be putting up part 4 as soon as I can. I have so much work to do for school it's hart to fit everything in! I can give you a preview though. Cole and the charmed ones begin their attack while Zahrin starts the ritual. Several characters will be returning. Also there will be a special surprise.

[Piper Halliwell]

I really like this, you have started really well with it. I am finding it very interesting to read.

[~Andrew~]

For being so kind and supportive! I really appreciate it everyone. To ALL my readers I hope you are enjoying this. Part 4 coming on Friday.

[~Andrew~]

Okay so here is Part 4! Enjoy it and tell me what you think. ;D


The Attic was very quiet. The two sisters were completely silent as they worked. Prue sat at the desk with the book of shadows, scribbling on a notepad. Her head would whip from the pad, to the book, and back to the pad again. Her brow was furrowed in concentration. At the same time, Piper stood nearby throwing all sorts of ingredients into a pot. She had a frown on her face, and her eyes were glinting with determination.

The next moment, Cole shimmered into the room looking frazzled. "Zahrin is beginning the ritual, we...don't have much time" he said through long breaths.

"What the heck happened to you?" Piper asked, putting down the ginger root.

"I got into a little spat with some other demons" Cole said, his hands on his knees taking long, deep breaths.

"Okay so I think, uh, my spell is done" Pue said stepping forward with a piece of paper.

"My potion is almost done, all it needs is ginger root" Piper said, looking at the pot. She walked to it, picked up the ginger root and threw it in the potion, it exploded in her face.

Prue chuckled.

Piper coughed as she waved the smoke away, then she squinted her eyes at Prue. "Oh very funny" She said sarcastically.

Prue and Cole burst out laughing. Wow, Piper thought. I would have never thought I would see the day of Cole and Prue laughing together. Then she saw her face in a mirror. It was completely black.

"Uh" She muttered in disgust, and wiped her face with the sleeve of her sweater.

A swaddle of white orbs appeared, and then Leo stood there. By the look on his face, Piper already knew he was bringing bad news.

"Well I consulted with the elders" Leo said.

"And" Piper and Prue said together.

"They say that with all these witches missing, the scale in the battle of good and evil is tipping towards the evil side" Leo said gravely. "Many innocents are dying now that all of these witches are gone. They also told me that we have very little time to rescue them, if it is at all possible" he added.

"Yea well we WILL prove them wrong" Prue said in a shrewd tone. Why do the elders always have to be so dang negative, Prue thought.

"So are we ready" Cole asked clapping his hands together.
Piper carefully poured the potion into a small glass vile. "This should be able to destroy the chains holding Phoebe" she said.

"So we orb in, Cole distracts the demon, we throw the potion at Phoebe, and vanquish the demon. Any questions?" Prue said commandingly.

"No, officer Prue!" Piper said saluting.

Prue shot her a look.

Meanwhile, Zahrin has prepared everything need for the ritual. A huge stone tablet stood in the middle of the room, with a pulsing blue orb on it.

"Now, my dears, you get to experience the magic of your lifetime" Zahrin said smiling.

"You know you won't get away with this" Phoebe said, struggling with the chains.

Zahrin merely smirked. "Thats what they all say". "Now we begin" he said excitedly.

He approached the tablet and raised his hands.

Just as he was about to start chanting, he noticed somebody standing at the other side of the room. "Hi there" Piper said. Piper, Prue and Leo stood side by side facing the demon.

Relief coursed through Phoebe's body. They're here. I'm safe now, she thought.

At that moment, Cole shimmered in next to the Zahrin.

"Belthazor?" Zahrin asked surprised. "What are you doing here?".

"Heard you were doing a little ritual" Cole answered simply. "Wanted to pop in and watch".

"Well that's fine by me" Zahrin said with a cold smile. Then he returned his attention to the 3 visiters.

"How did you find me?" He asked, slight surprise in his voice.

"Let's just say that we have friends in low places" Prue answered back.

Zahrin stood stunned for a moment. Then he turned toward Cole. However Cole was ready. He grabbed him by his neck and threw him into a wall with a grunt. "Now" he yelled.

Piper raised her hand and threw the potion. It sailed threw the air towards Phoebe. Then it began to fall to the ground.

"No!" Prue raised her hand and the potion flew up again and hit Phoebe's chains directly. The chains seemed to sizzle for a few mintues, then grew deep red and disappeared altogether. She sprung up and ran to her sisters.

They exchanged quick hugs.

Just then, the demon sprung at them. He tackled Phoebe to the floor.
Piper tried to freeze him but to no avail.

Prue threw her hand out and Zahrin flew threw the air and fell to the floor.

Just as he got up and conjured a fireball, Leo tackled him. The demon easily knocked him off, seeing as Leo isn't much of a fighter. Cole threw a fireball at Zahrin however he was ready and also threw a fireball. They conmected in midair and a small explosion occured

Quickly, Prue took out the spell she worked on.

"Let's vanquish this demon's sorry a$$ once and for all!" Phoebe said.

Then all three of them chanted:

"Hear our words and our plea
Make this demon forever flee
In this time and this hour,
Vanquish forever this evil power"

Zahrin cried out in pain and then began to swirl around. With a few fireworks, he was gone.

"Well that's that" Piper said happily.

All three sisters embraced eachother and laughed.


Final Part coming tommorow... rate and comment.

[~Andrew~]

Here is a short part to wrap this story up.

Phoebe was lying on her bed. She was snoring slightly. There was a open book on her chest and the glasses on her nose were on the verge of falling.

Quietly, Piper and Prue crept into the room. They smiled at the sight of their sister. It was soo good to have her back at last.

Prue walked forward and removed Phoebe's glasses of her nose and put them on the drawer. Then she picked up the book and put a bookmark in it.

Meanwhile, Piper grabbed a blanket and gently laid it over Phoebe. Prue reached for the lamp and turned of the light. Then the two slowly walked across and out of the room quietly closing the door as Phoebe continued to sleep peacefully. She was safe and at home where people loved her. Things just couldn't be better at the time....

THE END

I hope you liked it guys. I know I have some errors in my writing and the story felt rushed even to me, however I plan to fix all my mistakes in my next fic called The message coming soon.

[jate88]

I can't wait for the next story.

[charmedforever122]

I loved it so much pleas write more please