Post by ~Andrew~ on Nov 3, 2008 23:49:29 GMT -5
Hey everybody! This is my brand new Fan-fiction story and it is called the message. I hope everybody will enjoy reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it. Here is Part 1. Please comment and review. Also if you liked it, bless. 
The Message
Our story began with a beautiful Saturday morning. Piper was in the kitchen of the Halliwell Manor, cooking breakfast. She hummed to herself happily as she flipped the omelet in the pan. She then set a plate down and dropped the omelet into the plate neatly, and then she poured a glass of orange juice.
“Leo” She called, “Breakfast is ready!”.
Leo walked into the room with a smile on his face. He walked up to his beautiful wife and kissed her full on the lips. “Good morning” he said with a grin.
“Yes, yes it is” Piper said with a answering smile. This was exactly the kind of life she always hoped for after becoming a witch. A normal life without killing demons on a daily basis.
Although, she had to admit that there were several parts of her old life that she missed. However, she had everything she could hope for: a husband, very loving sisters, two beautiful sons, and a third child on the way. Her stomach already had a tiny bump. Soon I’m gonna be as round as a hippo again Piper thought to herself.
Leo interrupted her thoughts by saying her name. “Piper, something came in the mail”. He had a frown on his face as he read the letter.
Piper took it from his hands. She skimmed through it quickly. There wasn’t much written.
To the Charmed Ones,
This is very urgent so please do not ignore this. I need your Help. This is not a trap. Come to 23rd cardenian street at 8:00 pm on Saturday.
Hope to see you soon.
Piper was baffled. She read the letter again. To the charmed ones… The three of them haven’t been called the Charmed Ones for almost 3 years now. She looked up to see Leo staring at her.
“So what do we do?” She asked him.
“I think you better call your sisters” Leo answered.
***********
Phoebe was sitting at her desk at the Bay Mirror. She had answered almost 20 letters in the past 2 hours. She was on a roll. She read the latest letter from a girl named Elizabeth.
Dear Phoebe,
My boyfriend keeps on berating me about my weight. He always screams at me that I’m to fat and that I have to go on diets. He doesn’t let me eat what I want and he is embarrassed to be in public with me. I wanna make him happy but I’m feeling a lot of pressure. Can you tell me what I should do? Love, Elizabeth
Aw poor girl Phoebe thought. Just as she was about to write a letter telling the girl to dump her boyfriend’s sorry a$$ as fast as possible, the phone rang.
“Hellooo” Phoebe sang into the reciever.
“Oh, hey Piper. Okay. Uh-huh. Yea I’ll be right over”. Phoebe grabbed her coat and purse and hurried out of the office.
“Elise, I will finish my letters at home” Phoebe said as she hurried out.
*****
Paige was lying in bed with henry.
“No I don’t like when you do that!” Paige yelled, laughing as Henry began to tickle her. All of a sudden Paige’s phone began to ring ruining the fun. Paige rolled her eyes as she reached for the dresser to get the phone. However before her hand could reach it, Henry pulled her close and kissed her. The two forgot about the phone as they became lost in their love.
*****
Phoebe hurried into the manor. Piper was sitting in the couch.
“Okay so what is the emergency?” Phoebe asked rushing forward.
Piper stood up and gave Phoebe the letter. She watched as Phoebe read it.
“So what should we do?” she mirrored Piper’s question from earlier.
“I think we should go” Piper said.
Phoebe looked around. “Hey where is Paige?” she asked.
“I don’t know, she wouldn’t answer her phone” Piper said.
“Oh let’s just let her spend some time with henry” Phoebe said with a smile. “Paige being a white lighter and all doesn’t let them spend time with each other to much”.
Piper nodded. “So just the two of us then?” she smiled at Phoebe.
Phoebe shrugged. “I guess I’m stuck with you”.
Piper squinted her eyes at her and the two of them laughed.
*****
Piper looked out of the window of the car.
“Is this the place?” Piper asked surprised. The house was more like a mansion.
“I think it is” Phoebe also stared.
Piper then parked the car and the two sisters walked torwards the house. They climbed the staircase at the front doors and rang the bell. The sound brought a shiver down Phoebe’s spine for some reason. They waited for a few seconds and when they heard nothing Piper knocked loudly. Another few seconds passed by in silence. They exchanged glances.
“Okay step back” Piper said. She raised her hands and the doors burst open. The moment the two of them crossed the threshold, the lights turned on. Nobody was in sight.
“Woah” Phoebe murmured. “Talk about haunted”.
The two then took in the surroundings. The whole place seemed to be made of white marble. A huge chandelier hung from the ceiling, and to the side of the room was a long winding staircase.
“Okay” Piper said. “Now what?”.
“I guess I will search on the second floor, and you look here” Phoebe suggested.
“Split up?” Piper asked tentavely, staring around the spooky house.
“Oh comeon” Phoebe said. “We are just a scream away” She nudged her big sister with a smile.
“Okay so what exactly are we looking for?” Piper said.
“I don’t know something strange I guess” Phoebe said.
“Okay then see you in a bit” Piper said as she headed off.
Phoebe quickly walked to the staircase. The sooner they figured out what was going on the better.
She climbed the stairs to the second floor. There was a huge painting of a beautiful woman covering the wall. Phoebe was mesmerized. She approached the painting and ran a hand over it. At that moment she heard something slam on the 1st floor. She ran to the banisters.
“Piper is that you?” she called. She wasn’t aware that someone was watching her.
****
Piper was in the kitchen looking for god knows what. The kitchen was huge. She walked around and looked under the tables. What the heck was she expecting to find. She guessed a person. Do they have anything to eat? Piper was starving. Probably because of the pregnancy. She opened a cabinet. Nothing there. Piper slammed it shut.
Then she heard Phoebe “Piper is that you?”
She sighed. “Yea Phoebs it’s me don’t worry, keep looking” she answered.
*****
The moment Phoebe heard Piper’s reply, she calmed down alittle. All of a sudden, Phoebe had a forbidden feeling that somebody was behind her. Calm down she told herself. You’re being paranoid.
Then, everything seemed to happen in slow motion. Phoebe heard a noise behind her and she whirled around. The next thing she knew, she was falling over the banisters and rolling down the long, winding staircase. Pain covered every inch of her body as she continued to fall down. Before she could even cry out in pain, everything went black. Phoebe was lying on the floor, motionless and a dark puddle forming under her head……
To be continued
Thanks for reading Part 1 guys! I hope you enjoyed it. If you want to find out what happens to Phoebe stay tuned for Part 2.
The Message
Our story began with a beautiful Saturday morning. Piper was in the kitchen of the Halliwell Manor, cooking breakfast. She hummed to herself happily as she flipped the omelet in the pan. She then set a plate down and dropped the omelet into the plate neatly, and then she poured a glass of orange juice.
“Leo” She called, “Breakfast is ready!”.
Leo walked into the room with a smile on his face. He walked up to his beautiful wife and kissed her full on the lips. “Good morning” he said with a grin.
“Yes, yes it is” Piper said with a answering smile. This was exactly the kind of life she always hoped for after becoming a witch. A normal life without killing demons on a daily basis.
Although, she had to admit that there were several parts of her old life that she missed. However, she had everything she could hope for: a husband, very loving sisters, two beautiful sons, and a third child on the way. Her stomach already had a tiny bump. Soon I’m gonna be as round as a hippo again Piper thought to herself.
Leo interrupted her thoughts by saying her name. “Piper, something came in the mail”. He had a frown on his face as he read the letter.
Piper took it from his hands. She skimmed through it quickly. There wasn’t much written.
To the Charmed Ones,
This is very urgent so please do not ignore this. I need your Help. This is not a trap. Come to 23rd cardenian street at 8:00 pm on Saturday.
Hope to see you soon.
Piper was baffled. She read the letter again. To the charmed ones… The three of them haven’t been called the Charmed Ones for almost 3 years now. She looked up to see Leo staring at her.
“So what do we do?” She asked him.
“I think you better call your sisters” Leo answered.
***********
Phoebe was sitting at her desk at the Bay Mirror. She had answered almost 20 letters in the past 2 hours. She was on a roll. She read the latest letter from a girl named Elizabeth.
Dear Phoebe,
My boyfriend keeps on berating me about my weight. He always screams at me that I’m to fat and that I have to go on diets. He doesn’t let me eat what I want and he is embarrassed to be in public with me. I wanna make him happy but I’m feeling a lot of pressure. Can you tell me what I should do? Love, Elizabeth
Aw poor girl Phoebe thought. Just as she was about to write a letter telling the girl to dump her boyfriend’s sorry a$$ as fast as possible, the phone rang.
“Hellooo” Phoebe sang into the reciever.
“Oh, hey Piper. Okay. Uh-huh. Yea I’ll be right over”. Phoebe grabbed her coat and purse and hurried out of the office.
“Elise, I will finish my letters at home” Phoebe said as she hurried out.
*****
Paige was lying in bed with henry.
“No I don’t like when you do that!” Paige yelled, laughing as Henry began to tickle her. All of a sudden Paige’s phone began to ring ruining the fun. Paige rolled her eyes as she reached for the dresser to get the phone. However before her hand could reach it, Henry pulled her close and kissed her. The two forgot about the phone as they became lost in their love.
*****
Phoebe hurried into the manor. Piper was sitting in the couch.
“Okay so what is the emergency?” Phoebe asked rushing forward.
Piper stood up and gave Phoebe the letter. She watched as Phoebe read it.
“So what should we do?” she mirrored Piper’s question from earlier.
“I think we should go” Piper said.
Phoebe looked around. “Hey where is Paige?” she asked.
“I don’t know, she wouldn’t answer her phone” Piper said.
“Oh let’s just let her spend some time with henry” Phoebe said with a smile. “Paige being a white lighter and all doesn’t let them spend time with each other to much”.
Piper nodded. “So just the two of us then?” she smiled at Phoebe.
Phoebe shrugged. “I guess I’m stuck with you”.
Piper squinted her eyes at her and the two of them laughed.
*****
Piper looked out of the window of the car.
“Is this the place?” Piper asked surprised. The house was more like a mansion.
“I think it is” Phoebe also stared.
Piper then parked the car and the two sisters walked torwards the house. They climbed the staircase at the front doors and rang the bell. The sound brought a shiver down Phoebe’s spine for some reason. They waited for a few seconds and when they heard nothing Piper knocked loudly. Another few seconds passed by in silence. They exchanged glances.
“Okay step back” Piper said. She raised her hands and the doors burst open. The moment the two of them crossed the threshold, the lights turned on. Nobody was in sight.
“Woah” Phoebe murmured. “Talk about haunted”.
The two then took in the surroundings. The whole place seemed to be made of white marble. A huge chandelier hung from the ceiling, and to the side of the room was a long winding staircase.
“Okay” Piper said. “Now what?”.
“I guess I will search on the second floor, and you look here” Phoebe suggested.
“Split up?” Piper asked tentavely, staring around the spooky house.
“Oh comeon” Phoebe said. “We are just a scream away” She nudged her big sister with a smile.
“Okay so what exactly are we looking for?” Piper said.
“I don’t know something strange I guess” Phoebe said.
“Okay then see you in a bit” Piper said as she headed off.
Phoebe quickly walked to the staircase. The sooner they figured out what was going on the better.
She climbed the stairs to the second floor. There was a huge painting of a beautiful woman covering the wall. Phoebe was mesmerized. She approached the painting and ran a hand over it. At that moment she heard something slam on the 1st floor. She ran to the banisters.
“Piper is that you?” she called. She wasn’t aware that someone was watching her.
****
Piper was in the kitchen looking for god knows what. The kitchen was huge. She walked around and looked under the tables. What the heck was she expecting to find. She guessed a person. Do they have anything to eat? Piper was starving. Probably because of the pregnancy. She opened a cabinet. Nothing there. Piper slammed it shut.
Then she heard Phoebe “Piper is that you?”
She sighed. “Yea Phoebs it’s me don’t worry, keep looking” she answered.
*****
The moment Phoebe heard Piper’s reply, she calmed down alittle. All of a sudden, Phoebe had a forbidden feeling that somebody was behind her. Calm down she told herself. You’re being paranoid.
Then, everything seemed to happen in slow motion. Phoebe heard a noise behind her and she whirled around. The next thing she knew, she was falling over the banisters and rolling down the long, winding staircase. Pain covered every inch of her body as she continued to fall down. Before she could even cry out in pain, everything went black. Phoebe was lying on the floor, motionless and a dark puddle forming under her head……
To be continued
Thanks for reading Part 1 guys! I hope you enjoyed it. If you want to find out what happens to Phoebe stay tuned for Part 2.
