Post by Charmed4Ever on Nov 7, 2008 20:58:42 GMT -5
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I'm doing a charmed season 9 like thing and heres the first epi, its short but the others are longer.
Characters:
Phoebe's
Jane
Pam
Prudence
Piper's:
Melinda
Chris
Wyatt
Paige's :
Henry Jr.
Patricia
Penelope
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Charmed Pain
Copyright of Nadja ZK, Hayley
Charmed Season 9 Twist
Phoebe Halliwell put on her glasses and opened up her computer. Phoebe was the middle sister of The Charmed Ones ever since her dear older sister, Prue died and her younger half-sister, Paige stepped up. Not long ago had they all found out they were witches with supernatural powers. Actually, It was long ago but it seemed so much less. She remembered that before a short period of time she had her kids and she and her sisters vanquished the Source of All Evil. The world was at peace, hopefully. She sighed. Time flies fast when your vanquishing demons! Phoebe was writing an article about politics for her job at the Bay Mirror. In San Francisco there was a lot of politics going around. Phoebe smiled thinking about why her two other sisters weren’t making much noise at the moment. Phoebe lived with her husband, Coop who was a Cupid in their apartment but she had come to the Manor to be alone and not be bothered by anyone. She was glad there was no noise for the first time ever. “Piper!” Paige yelled. Phoebe shook her hands up in the air and put them back down. Great! I jinxed it she thought.
“Yea?” Piper yelled from the kitchen. Piper was a professional chef. She always tried to keep her hands busy with something, from cleaning to cooking. Paige orbed down in blue shiny lights to where Phoebe was typing.
“Get over here!” Paige said. Piper grudgingly walked over to Paige.
“What?” she asked eager to go back to her cooking.
Phoebe tried typing while ignoring her sibling’s conversation. “Where is Melinda?” asked Paige getting worried. Piper smirked “Daycare” was all she said as she walked away back to her cooking. Paige made a face “Since when does she go to the daycare?” asked Paige in a low voice.
Phoebe couldn’t take it. She came to the Manor to escape from noise not walk straight to it. Phoebe rolled her eyes and grunted. Paige turned to face Phoebe “Oh hey Pheebs! What are you up to?”
Phoebe closed her computer and put it in her bag. “Trying to work! Please orb me to my office.” yelled Phoebe in frustration. Paige decided to make her sister too furious so she orbed her to her office and orbed away. Phoebe sat down at her desk and suddenly her daughter appeared in a pink heart. It was Jane, her daughter. Jane inherited Coop’s powers of being a Cupid. Jane was still a beginner. “Hey Sweetie!” Phoebe said happy to see her daughter. She went over to hug Jane and sit back down. “Whats up?” Phoebe asked.
Jane squinted. “Well….Looks like the Ultimate Battle was definitely not the last.” Jane said as she picked her nails. Phoebe lifted her head up from typing “What! What happened!” Phoebe asked worryingly. Jane looked seriously at her mother “It all started when all of us got together at our hangout. I mentioned that something weird happened to me to my cousins and sisters. Surprisingly, they had encountered the same thing.” Phoebe nodded “What was this weird thing you mentioned?” Phoebe said covering her eyes. She couldn’t believe this was happening. She usually wouldn’t be this surprised but after the Ultimate Battle she was.
Jane sat down on a chair in Phoebe’s office. Phoebe had always loved the way Jane’s light brown hair fell around her face. It always made her look like a model. Phoebe thought back, she couldn’t remember a time when her child did not strike her as graceful. “I can’t explain it really,” Jane started, “First we felt a chill of cold, that just felt, funny. I was standing in the foyer, the door blew open and a tornado blew in but, when it stopped it was a made, well not a man, a demon rather.” Jane saw the worry in her mother’s eyes, “Who was not after me, don’t worry. It stopped it was all blue and had no shirt, it head was always thingy eyed to one side. The voice was deep and raspy.” Phoebe thought hard, “Shax!” She said standing up, “What did he want? Are you ok?” Jane looked at her mother’s face. “Yeah mom, I’m fine, like I said he was not after me, he just said, that the end was coming and he was coming back. It was just another demon mom, he left before I could vanquish him.” Phoebe put her hand on her daughter. “No sweetie, that where you are wrong he is not just another demon, where are you siblings? Are they ok? Does Piper know about this yet?” Phoebe asked flying in panic. Jane worried about her mother. She hugged Phoebe, “What is so horrible about this mom?” Phoebe walked around. “I told you your aunt Prue died right?” Jane nodded. “Well, Shax is the demon that killed Prue. We managed to vanquish him when Paige came along but I cannot believe he is back.” Jane’s eyes panicked. “Anything Else?”
Phoebe asked. Jane nodded “Before the attack I kept getting whispers, warnings if you may. I kept hearing the end is coming and You are done. It was weird because all of us heard it.” Phoebe sat down while drinking water. “How do you know he wasn’t after you?” Jane shrugged I don’t, but I feel he’s after us all.” Piper orbed in with Leo carrying a basket. “Hey Pheebs, just some muffins, are you ok?” Piper’s smile faded as she saw Phoebe’s weary look. “Shax is back.” That was all Phoebe could manage to say. Piper made a serious face. Leo held on to Piper. Her nightmare and enemy, they were all coming back to her. She couldn’t breath or speak. Her mouth got dry. She deeply swallowed and looked at her sister.
I'm doing a charmed season 9 like thing and heres the first epi, its short but the others are longer.
Characters:
Phoebe's
Jane
Pam
Prudence
Piper's:
Melinda
Chris
Wyatt
Paige's :
Henry Jr.
Patricia
Penelope
------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Charmed Pain
Copyright of Nadja ZK, Hayley
Charmed Season 9 Twist
Phoebe Halliwell put on her glasses and opened up her computer. Phoebe was the middle sister of The Charmed Ones ever since her dear older sister, Prue died and her younger half-sister, Paige stepped up. Not long ago had they all found out they were witches with supernatural powers. Actually, It was long ago but it seemed so much less. She remembered that before a short period of time she had her kids and she and her sisters vanquished the Source of All Evil. The world was at peace, hopefully. She sighed. Time flies fast when your vanquishing demons! Phoebe was writing an article about politics for her job at the Bay Mirror. In San Francisco there was a lot of politics going around. Phoebe smiled thinking about why her two other sisters weren’t making much noise at the moment. Phoebe lived with her husband, Coop who was a Cupid in their apartment but she had come to the Manor to be alone and not be bothered by anyone. She was glad there was no noise for the first time ever. “Piper!” Paige yelled. Phoebe shook her hands up in the air and put them back down. Great! I jinxed it she thought.
“Yea?” Piper yelled from the kitchen. Piper was a professional chef. She always tried to keep her hands busy with something, from cleaning to cooking. Paige orbed down in blue shiny lights to where Phoebe was typing.
“Get over here!” Paige said. Piper grudgingly walked over to Paige.
“What?” she asked eager to go back to her cooking.
Phoebe tried typing while ignoring her sibling’s conversation. “Where is Melinda?” asked Paige getting worried. Piper smirked “Daycare” was all she said as she walked away back to her cooking. Paige made a face “Since when does she go to the daycare?” asked Paige in a low voice.
Phoebe couldn’t take it. She came to the Manor to escape from noise not walk straight to it. Phoebe rolled her eyes and grunted. Paige turned to face Phoebe “Oh hey Pheebs! What are you up to?”
Phoebe closed her computer and put it in her bag. “Trying to work! Please orb me to my office.” yelled Phoebe in frustration. Paige decided to make her sister too furious so she orbed her to her office and orbed away. Phoebe sat down at her desk and suddenly her daughter appeared in a pink heart. It was Jane, her daughter. Jane inherited Coop’s powers of being a Cupid. Jane was still a beginner. “Hey Sweetie!” Phoebe said happy to see her daughter. She went over to hug Jane and sit back down. “Whats up?” Phoebe asked.
Jane squinted. “Well….Looks like the Ultimate Battle was definitely not the last.” Jane said as she picked her nails. Phoebe lifted her head up from typing “What! What happened!” Phoebe asked worryingly. Jane looked seriously at her mother “It all started when all of us got together at our hangout. I mentioned that something weird happened to me to my cousins and sisters. Surprisingly, they had encountered the same thing.” Phoebe nodded “What was this weird thing you mentioned?” Phoebe said covering her eyes. She couldn’t believe this was happening. She usually wouldn’t be this surprised but after the Ultimate Battle she was.
Jane sat down on a chair in Phoebe’s office. Phoebe had always loved the way Jane’s light brown hair fell around her face. It always made her look like a model. Phoebe thought back, she couldn’t remember a time when her child did not strike her as graceful. “I can’t explain it really,” Jane started, “First we felt a chill of cold, that just felt, funny. I was standing in the foyer, the door blew open and a tornado blew in but, when it stopped it was a made, well not a man, a demon rather.” Jane saw the worry in her mother’s eyes, “Who was not after me, don’t worry. It stopped it was all blue and had no shirt, it head was always thingy eyed to one side. The voice was deep and raspy.” Phoebe thought hard, “Shax!” She said standing up, “What did he want? Are you ok?” Jane looked at her mother’s face. “Yeah mom, I’m fine, like I said he was not after me, he just said, that the end was coming and he was coming back. It was just another demon mom, he left before I could vanquish him.” Phoebe put her hand on her daughter. “No sweetie, that where you are wrong he is not just another demon, where are you siblings? Are they ok? Does Piper know about this yet?” Phoebe asked flying in panic. Jane worried about her mother. She hugged Phoebe, “What is so horrible about this mom?” Phoebe walked around. “I told you your aunt Prue died right?” Jane nodded. “Well, Shax is the demon that killed Prue. We managed to vanquish him when Paige came along but I cannot believe he is back.” Jane’s eyes panicked. “Anything Else?”
Phoebe asked. Jane nodded “Before the attack I kept getting whispers, warnings if you may. I kept hearing the end is coming and You are done. It was weird because all of us heard it.” Phoebe sat down while drinking water. “How do you know he wasn’t after you?” Jane shrugged I don’t, but I feel he’s after us all.” Piper orbed in with Leo carrying a basket. “Hey Pheebs, just some muffins, are you ok?” Piper’s smile faded as she saw Phoebe’s weary look. “Shax is back.” That was all Phoebe could manage to say. Piper made a serious face. Leo held on to Piper. Her nightmare and enemy, they were all coming back to her. She couldn’t breath or speak. Her mouth got dry. She deeply swallowed and looked at her sister.
