Holly Combs
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Post by Holly Combs on Dec 6, 2008 16:22:47 GMT -5
paige was walked in the attic looking for the book.she faced the door ready to walk out..then she heard a voice
"who are you what are you doing in my attic"said prue.paige turned around and saw prue.
"........prue?"said paige
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thats all i have for right know but more to come.
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Post by ~Andrew~ on Dec 7, 2008 0:02:37 GMT -5
Well i can't really say anything about this story cause it's not a story yet. Was this the beginning of the fic or some sort of preview about whats to come?
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Holly Combs
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Post by Holly Combs on Dec 7, 2008 16:25:33 GMT -5
Well i can't really say anything about this story cause it's not a story yet. Was this the beginning of the fic or some sort of preview about whats to come? yes it is |
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Post by ~B@MeLiSsA30@B~ on Dec 7, 2008 22:08:30 GMT -5
Well i can't really say anything about this story cause it's not a story yet. Was this the beginning of the fic or some sort of preview about whats to come? yes it is Holly Combs.........stories usually have 6 paragraphs or longer to be a story. This is more like RPGing.  |
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Holly Combs
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Michael Jackson a legend that will live forever! I love you Michael
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Post by Holly Combs on Dec 12, 2008 18:28:58 GMT -5
Holly Combs.........stories usually have 6 paragraphs or longer to be a story. This is more like RPGing. more is coming now....."yea who are you?"saide prue. "p..p..paige"said paig withe a shocked voice. "what are you doing hear?"said prue. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------- im coming withe more dont worrie |
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Post by Cara Halliwell on Dec 12, 2008 18:58:37 GMT -5
she means your posts should be longer. you're writing two to three sentences. usually parts to a story are four to five paragraphs.
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Holly Combs
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Post by Holly Combs on Dec 12, 2008 19:36:54 GMT -5
she means your posts should be longer. you're writing two to three sentences. usually parts to a story are four to five paragraphs. ok |
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Holly Combs
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Michael Jackson a legend that will live forever! I love you Michael
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Post by Holly Combs on Jan 11, 2009 12:15:21 GMT -5
"I live hear."said paige
"No you dont...I can see through myself."said prue
"Thats because your a gost... your dead."said pagie
piper was down staris and she heard talking.
"Paige who are you talking to."said piper
piper went up stares and saw pure
"prue?"said piper
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Holly Combs
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Michael Jackson a legend that will live forever! I love you Michael
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Post by Holly Combs on Feb 18, 2009 20:00:38 GMT -5
"Yea im prue,Its like you haven't seen me in a long time."Said Prue confused
*I will make more soon
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Holly Combs
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Michael Jackson a legend that will live forever! I love you Michael
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Post by Holly Combs on Feb 20, 2009 21:35:35 GMT -5
"I haven't seen you sence you died,Prue."Piper said crying
"Who is this?"Prue asked
"Thats our younger sister,Paige"Piper said wipeing her tears away.
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