Witches of the past

[Joshypoo]

Readers Beware: This is my first attempt at writing a story. I will do my best.


As Paige walks outside, she takes a long deep breath. The air smells as fresh as Water Lilies. It rained earlier that day. In the background, she can hear her sister Piper reading a bedtime story to her son Wyatt, and Phoebe pacing back and forth on trying to finish the deadline for her job. She can't help but smile thinking how lucky she is.

All of a sudden, Paige heard a piercing scream. She ran inside, and notices that Piper is crying. Phoebe has sat down beside her.

Paige asked,"What happened?"

Choking on her words though, Piper managed to answer,"I felt a sharp pain in my heart. I'm so scared something happened to Leo. You know how the Elders have been about him."

"Oh Sweety, they won't do anything to him. He hasn't done anything wrong."

As on cue, Leo orbs down to see his wife crying. He comforts her, and she just bails knowing he is okay.

"Now that I know your okay honey.. What was the cause of that sharp pain in my heart? Like someone I love died."

Leo steps back. His face got very serious.

"We have a huge threat on our hands. I was alert that there is a demon who goes back in time to kill witches. To erase every single innocent they saved. To bring back any demons or warlocks they may have vanquished. They want to take over up here. Just not in the Underworld."

Phoebe says,"We need to hurry. For all we know. We may be next.

[~B@MeLiSsA30@B~]

Very intriging Joshy. I don't think I would of ever though of writing about a demon going into the past to kill witches to destroy everything they ever did. Honey, I do hope you continue to update so you can bring this over to Alternative Charmed. :-)

[Esmeralda]

Joshy, this is great as a first try! You've got the characters down and have me intrigued.

Just like your wife, your main problem is the constant change of tenses, very, very distracting. Choose one, stick to it, and I think you might have yourself a winner here.

[StoryGirl83]

You have an interesting start here, Josh. I am curious to see what will happen next.

[Joshypoo]

Thank you. I am glad you all like it so far.
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In the attic, Piper is flipping through the pages of any demon who can go into the past, but she isn't have any luck. All she can find is demons that they have already vanquished, or low level demons who aren't even worth vanquishing.

Paige just got hit with a memory of a past demon. She says,"Piper, I just got an idea on why you can't find the demon."

"What is your idea Paige? I am opened to any suggestions right now."

Paige walks closer to Piper and tells her. "Do you remember that boyfriend that Phoebe kept saving, and the demon who came from the future to make sure he dies. Well, we couldn't find him in The Book of Shadows either. Because he wasn't in the book yet."

Piper continues that thought,"Since this demon can go into the past. He could be a future demon that hasn't exist in our time line yet. Yes! That is very possible."

They headed downstairs to talk to Phoebe. She needs to write a spell so they can find this demon. He can be anywhere, in any time.

Phoebe was in the kitchen drinking a glass of Coconut Milk while watching the news. The news reporter has mentioned 25 people have died just in the last 15 minutes. In mysterious ways too.

Behind her, Paige says,'It has to be that demon. That last girl I saw on T.v was a witch. She was a charge of mine who didn't know about her powers, and I had to help her accept her destiny."

Piper goes on to fill Phoebe in with what Paige and her discussed.

Five minutes later, Phoebe sits down in the living room. She grabs a pen and Paper, and starts to write a spell.

[Holly Combs]

Very good Josh.I like it I hope you will win and keep wrighting this good story.
Holly

[~B@MeLiSsA30@B~]

Ohh, very interesting Joshy. I love that whole idea you came up with. I can't wait for you to update.

[CharmBffy]

this is a very good story you have done a great job please update soon