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Post by prudencehalliwell on Sept 12, 2018 1:12:05 GMT -5
Feel free to edit, change or do as you please with it. I keep thinking about the Wedding From Hell with that family choosing wealth over beauty. Of course, this plotline is so much different in many ways, and I like that you have a reason to include Piper and Prudence at the engagement gathering.
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Post by prudencehalliwell on Sept 12, 2018 1:22:42 GMT -5
Just because we've gone over a few pages. I'm going to just re-post the most recent press releases that people may have missed, to catch-up. So we can all discuss any changes before we add them to our recap posts. I put together some more over the weekend, and finally had time to post these now. What do you all think? Feel free to edit these or change them, especially since you did a good job with one of my last ones, editing it and the story worked better. I have to admit, re-reading it, I can see why the edits were needed on one of them before. As always feel free to edit, ask questions or make suggestions? Anything our series should announce at Comic-Con, suggest away? As always, edit, ask questions or re-do it? Well done to everyone who contributed to these latest press releases. Such a team effort, be proud!!!
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Post by pheebs on Sept 12, 2018 2:31:14 GMT -5
Yes 'That Old Black Magic' I believe. I agree with Sasha, that really would make a better and cooler title. Summer, what do you think? Looks like Summer has changed it. Yep, it's been changed.
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Post by pheebs on Sept 12, 2018 2:42:09 GMT -5
I haven't got the time right now to reply and comment on all the new press releases - Well done to everyone who has added new stuff.
I'll try and do that later. But just popping in to add new press releases I've been working on.
Since I know Halloween does occur on a Sunday when our fourth season would air, I just went by dates, and we HAVE to do a Halloween themed one for that day. So I put this one together.
I based this upon something real in Salem and felt it fitted well for our Halloween episode of Season 4, which would air exactly on that date.
Since we haven't gotten Shannen and Alyssa appearing in any episodes of S4 so far, maybe they can return in this one. Especially with the veil between worlds thin on Halloween, having them both crossover for this one day would be neat.
I was very tempted to have the third spirit who died on the site being Holly Marie Comb's character, but I went against this idea. Since we're making this as real as possible, and throwing all three stars into one show will just take the attention off our Warren stars. So I didn't even add her to the press release. Maybe for the fantasy casting thread. That would be my way of having all three together for an episode.
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Post by pheebs on Sept 12, 2018 3:09:26 GMT -5
Another Deadline press release. I forgot we don't have our pick-up for EC yet by The CW.
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Post by Esmeralda on Sept 12, 2018 7:25:28 GMT -5
Had to copy this from the Reviewers thread: 48 hours! This is pretty intense, but the perfect spot to end on a cliffhanger. I'm sure the Warren's are going to be so very shocked to learn the truth about Andrea. A quick question though, if Peyton shapeshifted into an older version of herself, Paige knows her daughter is back. But doesn't know she's taken over Andrea unless she lets her know. So unless when she changes back into a witch, she tries to suppress her memories of her bad days or she just has a memory problem. Then again, maybe when she changes back into a witch, Does Peyton quickly cover her tracks by shapeshifting into someone else much like Cole did with the Seer, so they don't find out yet. That's a *very* good question, Sasha, something I hadn't considered when I was doing my edits. Anyone have any ideas on how we can fix this?
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Post by Esmeralda on Sept 12, 2018 8:09:19 GMT -5
WOW! We're already up to Page 15! I never even got a chance to do an update on Page 14! You guys SO rock! I only have a half-hour before I have to get ready to go to work, but I'll try to do all of my editing of the new episodes and an update tonight - I want to be caught up by Friday so we can see how many episodes we have on our one-month anniversary.
But I HAD to do this one, just because I've been imagining how I'd edit it since I read it. A lot of this is Es having fun Es-style. If anyone thinks I've gone too far and it's unrealistic (remember, we want to make this feel like it truly happened - save too much fun for fantasy versions!), don't be afraid to say so.
Also, since we've decided against casting anyone outside of Shannen and Alyssa playing Jenna and Mary Ann, I've decided to number our main actors, so TBC1 is the one playing Prudence, TBC2 is the one playing Patience, etc.
So what do you think? I wanted it to sound more like OUR series, not the rip-off.
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Post by summerreading on Sept 12, 2018 9:05:33 GMT -5
WOW! We're already up to Page 15! I never even got a chance to do an update on Page 14! You guys SO rock! I only have a half-hour before I have to get ready to go to work, but I'll try to do all of my editing of the new episodes and an update tonight - I want to be caught up by Friday so we can see how many episodes we have on our one-month anniversary. But I HAD to do this one, just because I've been imagining how I'd edit it since I read it. A lot of this is Es having fun Es-style. If anyone thinks I've gone too far and it's unrealistic (remember, we want to make this feel like it truly happened - save too much fun for fantasy versions!), don't be afraid to say so. Also, since we've decided against casting anyone outside of Shannen and Alyssa playing Jenna and Mary Ann, I've decided to number our main actors, so TBC1 is the one playing Prudence, TBC2 is the one playing Patience, etc. I can't wait to see how many episodes we have. I'll take a crack and guess we have a little over 30. I'd love if we had close to 50, but lets see how many on Friday. Good thinking to label it as TBC1, TBC2 and so on. So what do you think? I wanted it to sound more like OUR series, not the rip-off.[/quote] I love that we want to have it sound like our show. But I'm going to be honest because we do want it to be as real as possible. I do think, you had so much fun with it Es. I think it's perfect, but if we want this to sound real. A few comments do sound a little like an opinion and a tad fantasy and a little too much (not that I disagree - Because I got a kick out of those statements and loved them Es) with unlike reboots that only preach about what's going on today and And by not having a whitelighter or a half-demon, those will be the things that will be most important things in our series, not the romances. Even though I agree with those statements for sure, I feel if our reboot was real, we'd already get some backlash from other reboots coming at us, for that remark about other reboots preaching. But, maybe I'm looking into it too much. What do others think?
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Post by summerreading on Sept 12, 2018 9:56:22 GMT -5
Excellent question Sasha!
A question, I didn't even consider. I'm lost for ideas right now, I'll have to come back after I think this through.
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Post by Esmeralda on Sept 12, 2018 17:58:11 GMT -5
WOW! We're already up to Page 15! I never even got a chance to do an update on Page 14! You guys SO rock! I only have a half-hour before I have to get ready to go to work, but I'll try to do all of my editing of the new episodes and an update tonight - I want to be caught up by Friday so we can see how many episodes we have on our one-month anniversary. But I HAD to do this one, just because I've been imagining how I'd edit it since I read it. A lot of this is Es having fun Es-style. If anyone thinks I've gone too far and it's unrealistic (remember, we want to make this feel like it truly happened - save too much fun for fantasy versions!), don't be afraid to say so. Also, since we've decided against casting anyone outside of Shannen and Alyssa playing Jenna and Mary Ann, I've decided to number our main actors, so TBC1 is the one playing Prudence, TBC2 is the one playing Patience, etc. I can't wait to see how many episodes we have. I'll take a crack and guess we have a little over 30. I'd love if we had close to 50, but lets see how many on Friday. Good thinking to label it as TBC1, TBC2 and so on. So what do you think? I wanted it to sound more like OUR series, not the rip-off. I love that we want to have it sound like our show. But I'm going to be honest because we do want it to be as real as possible. I do think, you had so much fun with it Es. I think it's perfect, but if we want this to sound real. A few comments do sound a little like an opinion and a tad fantasy and a little too much (not that I disagree - Because I got a kick out of those statements and loved them Es) with unlike reboots that only preach about what's going on today and And by not having a whitelighter or a half-demon, those will be the things that will be most important things in our series, not the romances. Even though I agree with those statements for sure, I feel if our reboot was real, we'd already get some backlash from other reboots coming at us, for that remark about other reboots preaching. But, maybe I'm looking into it too much. What do others think? LOL, no one else has commented, but i have a hunch they'd agree with you. Like I said, it was Es having fun, like when I cast Holly as Prudence, Alyssa as Patience and Shannen as Paige. Here's my *real* edit...
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Post by Esmeralda on Sept 12, 2018 18:18:09 GMT -5
I'm going to start editing the press releases that were posted on Pages 13-15. I don't *think* there were posted on Page 13 before my most recent update that didn't make the update. If I'm wrong, please re-post it and I'll make sure to edit it and add it to Friday's update - our first-month anniversary update!
And, yes, no more Es-having-fun. With these, I'll try to stay in our alternate universe where we're eagerly awaiting the series premiere of 'Elemental Charmed' on October 14th and not the rip-off, and try to make them sound real. If they don't, please be sure to point it out so I can fix it in time for Friday's update.
In fact, thinking of that, I think I'll just concentrate on edits tonight, then tomorrow, I'll first "edit the edits" and then do an update so it will be ready for you guys to read and enjoy on our one-month anniversary! I also plan on doing a summary showing how many episodes we have written for each season and how many we have left to reach our goal of 100 episodes.
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Post by prudencehalliwell on Sept 12, 2018 19:15:43 GMT -5
Great job! I think the second press release edit Es is great. Definitely alternate universe worthy and sounds more real.
I can't wait to see how many we have on Friday.
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Post by Esmeralda on Sept 12, 2018 19:15:55 GMT -5
So? What do you think?
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Post by prudencehalliwell on Sept 12, 2018 19:22:03 GMT -5
Great job Es! Those were a great read. Really felt real and well done. Thanks Pheebs for putting it together and Es for editing.
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Post by Esmeralda on Sept 12, 2018 20:03:41 GMT -5
I've adjusted my press release with many requests to have the tagline being the episode's title now and made the changes. I’m with the others, Summer – your original tagline really makes a great episode title. Even though Classic Charmed *did* have an episode BASED on the Blair Witch, it didn’t actually include the Blair Witch; instead we had an evil witch, Tuatha. So doing an episode that actually includes the Blair Witch sounds great to me – especially showing what that “witch” truly is. I also really like the 20s one, but there's a problem - unlike Phoebe Halliwell, Prudence Warren only has premonitions; she doesn't see the past, and in order to truly have an everlasting time loop, they have to keep doing the same thing. So see what you think of how I handled it. Here are my edits: So? What do you think? If you like the way Summer solved it better, speak up and I’ll change it back.
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Post by Esmeralda on Sept 12, 2018 21:38:43 GMT -5
As always feel free to edit, ask questions or make suggestions? Anything our series should announce at Comic-Con, suggest away? I think you're doing fantastic doing that yourself, Pheebs! When we figure out more about what we want to do with S2-early S4, I'll bet you'll come up with some fantastic press releases for the other Comic-cons. For now, here's my edit to your other new one: So? What do you think of that edit? Our series has only one executive producer, Connie Burge, unlike the rip-off which has three. That’s why mine has only Connie and the stars at the two ComicCons. I don’t think the writers are usually there. If I’m wrong, let me know and I’ll change it back.
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Post by pheebs on Sept 12, 2018 23:37:31 GMT -5
I've adjusted my press release with many requests to have the tagline being the episode's title now and made the changes. I’m with the others, Summer – your original tagline really makes a great episode title. Even though Classic Charmed *did* have an episode BASED on the Blair Witch, it didn’t actually include the Blair Witch; instead we had an evil witch, Tuatha. So doing an episode that actually includes the Blair Witch sounds great to me – especially showing what that “witch” truly is. I also really like the 20s one, but there's a problem - unlike Phoebe Halliwell, Prudence Warren only has premonitions; she doesn't see the past, and in order to truly have an everlasting time loop, they have to keep doing the same thing. So see what you think of how I handled it. I'm glad you changed it Summer. Great title, and love the addition of the Blair Witch. Here are my edits: So? What do you think? If you like the way Summer solved it better, speak up and I’ll change it back. [/quote] I love these edits Es. And your editing of Summer's is great. As always feel free to edit, ask questions or make suggestions? Anything our series should announce at Comic-Con, suggest away? I think you're doing fantastic doing that yourself, Pheebs! When we figure out more about what we want to do with S2-early S4, I'll bet you'll come up with some fantastic press releases for the other Comic-cons. Thanks, Es. I can't wait for the fun in doing future Comic-Con press releases. Am I excited thinking of the possibilities? For now, here's my edit to your other new one: I love it Es. I did some digging (just to be sure) and they do just have executive producer/s attending. But I guess perhaps my confusion is the terms in some cases. Some panels I've checked up on for reference have producers and the showrunner attending (but that wasn't for a newly released show, but an existing one on its third or fourth season), and others just the executive producer. I'm assuming that showrunner and executive producer is the same term? But since we have just one executive producer, and unless we promote someone at a later stage. Having just Connie present at least at Comic-Con makes sense. I say leave it as we have it.
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Post by pheebs on Sept 13, 2018 0:00:37 GMT -5
I put together some more over the weekend, and finally had time to post these now. What do you all think? Very good job, Colton! Here's my edit: So, how’s that? Gotta admit I really like this one – just wish we could figure out what warlock powers are…Anyone have any ideas? Great job Es! I LOVE your new addition with Stacey telling Piper to drink the potion, that is the best addition to make this episode so much more exciting. I like these episodes. Gotta admit since our show is on The CW to start, having an episode or two based in College and on Phoebe does fit their target market before we move to CBS. As for the warlock powers, I'd love to not go too basic with blinking and ones Classic Charmed did. I'd go for something more creative. What about Invisibility - that could be different?. We've used mind control and power of persuasion for warlocks, would these be common powers? I'm not sure, I quite like that we give warlocks different powers?
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Post by Esmeralda on Sept 13, 2018 0:07:17 GMT -5
I haven't got the time right now to reply and comment on all the new press releases - Well done to everyone who has added new stuff. I'll try and do that later. But just popping in to add new press releases I've been working on. Since I know Halloween does occur on a Sunday when our fourth season would air, I just went by dates, and we HAVE to do a Halloween themed one for that day. So I put this one together. I based this upon something real in Salem and felt it fitted well for our Halloween episode of Season 4, which would air exactly on that date. Since we haven't gotten Shannen and Alyssa appearing in any episodes of S4 so far, maybe they can return in this one. Especially with the veil between worlds thin on Halloween, having them both crossover for this one day would be neat. I was very tempted to have the third spirit who died on the site being Holly Marie Comb's character, but I went against this idea. Since we're making this as real as possible, and throwing all three stars into one show will just take the attention off our Warren stars. So I didn't even add her to the press release. Maybe for the fantasy casting thread. That would be my way of having all three together for an episode. Oh, Pheebs! Especially because this really did happen in Salem, it's absolutely fantastic! Although I wish Halloween was closer to a Sunday in a different season because I'm not sure how well it will fit in Season Four with what we have in mind for the finale. But I'm sure we can somehow make it fit. I'm wondering if for these episodes that are actually based on real life (I know there was another one earlier...the one about Bloody Mary) if you could do a Deadline press release telling the story behind them. My only problem is the inclusion of Shannen and Alyssa. I really don't think we want them to appear in more than one episode a season - we want the spotlight to stay on TBC1, TBC2, TBC3, TBC4 and TBC5, not guest stars from Classic Charmed. I thought Mary Ann and Jenna were part of the Season 4/Season 5 ending, although that might just be Season 5 right now. If the're not part of any other S4 episode, this is perfect = as long as they're not the ones who rescue the Warrens - we don't want to turn them into something like Leo, always coming to the rescue, making it seem like the Warrens are helpless without their ancestors, especially when they're played by Classic Charmed actors AND Jenna's supposed to be a warlock! Unless we somehow show how she's changed, we might end up wanting to just have Alyssa guest star, not Shannen. For now, I'll keep them in in hopes that this is their only appearance, so here's my edit: So? What do you think?
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Post by Esmeralda on Sept 13, 2018 0:27:17 GMT -5
I think I've got all the new ones except for Marie Wicca's and that's because of a problem I want to discuss with her privately (Yes, Colton, I'm learning! Thanks for teaching me that lesson!). If I missed any other, be sure to let me know so I can let it be part of the one-month anniversary update!
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