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Post by pheebs on Sept 13, 2018 0:52:00 GMT -5
I haven't got the time right now to reply and comment on all the new press releases - Well done to everyone who has added new stuff. I'll try and do that later. But just popping in to add new press releases I've been working on. Since I know Halloween does occur on a Sunday when our fourth season would air, I just went by dates, and we HAVE to do a Halloween themed one for that day. So I put this one together. I based this upon something real in Salem and felt it fitted well for our Halloween episode of Season 4, which would air exactly on that date. Since we haven't gotten Shannen and Alyssa appearing in any episodes of S4 so far, maybe they can return in this one. Especially with the veil between worlds thin on Halloween, having them both crossover for this one day would be neat. I was very tempted to have the third spirit who died on the site being Holly Marie Comb's character, but I went against this idea. Since we're making this as real as possible, and throwing all three stars into one show will just take the attention off our Warren stars. So I didn't even add her to the press release. Maybe for the fantasy casting thread. That would be my way of having all three together for an episode. Oh, Pheebs! Especially because this really did happen in Salem, it's absolutely fantastic! Although I wish Halloween was closer to a Sunday in a different season because I'm not sure how well it will fit in Season Four with what we have in mind for the finale. But I'm sure we can somehow make it fit. I'm wondering if for these episodes that are actually based on real life (I know there was another one earlier...the one about Bloody Mary) if you could do a Deadline press release telling the story behind them. My only problem is the inclusion of Shannen and Alyssa. I really don't think we want them to appear in more than one episode a season - we want the spotlight to stay on TBC1, TBC2, TBC3, TBC4 and TBC5, not guest stars from Classic Charmed. I thought Mary Ann and Jenna were part of the Season 4/Season 5 ending, although that might just be Season 5 right now. If the're not part of any other S4 episode, this is perfect = as long as they're not the ones who rescue the Warrens - we don't want to turn them into something like Leo, always coming to the rescue, making it seem like the Warrens are helpless without their ancestors, especially when they're played by Classic Charmed actors AND Jenna's supposed to be a warlock! Unless we somehow show how she's changed, we might end up wanting to just have Alyssa guest star, not Shannen. I was under the impression they were in our season premiere story of season 5, and not the season 4 finale. Unless I'm mistaken with ideas others have? Of course, we can easily adjust it for another season, I only placed it here all because October 31st was on a Sunday that year. That would be cool to do a Deadline press release for the story behind those. Maybe we can just have Alyssa guest star and not Shannen, of course maybe the Warren's just summon her for more information on who they are facing, and she doesn't actually come to help them. I'll check out what you did now below. For now, I'll keep them in hopes that this is their only appearance, so here's my edit: Es, I love your take on it. Especially with what you did with Jenna. If this is their only appearance in S4, great, if not, well we will adjust as needed since we do not want them in more than one a season of course. But from how it looks right now, we only have one more in S3 to consider, and with what we had planned with all the time travel, it would make sense they are in that one. Unless we actually want them to have one season where they don't have a huge part and only make a small cameo.
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Post by pheebs on Sept 13, 2018 1:32:26 GMT -5
Back with another press release. Again feel free to edit, change or ask questions, even point out anything you think is missing for our show that we'd want to be known in our seven questions to summarise our show. If you feel, something doesn't fit, let me know?
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Post by marlenewicca on Sept 13, 2018 3:37:48 GMT -5
I really like that Halloween episode. Great job with it.
Looking forward to seeing how many press releases we have on Friday.
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Post by Granny Charmed on Sept 13, 2018 5:11:35 GMT -5
I'm so proud of all the hard work and us gearing up for our one month anniversary. Here's to more months dears!!!
The press releases are so great. I'm a little behind catching up reading on the latest edits. I might wait for Friday and then see all the stuff on our one month anniversary and even share them with my daughter and granddaughter to look over.
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Post by Esmeralda on Sept 13, 2018 7:59:03 GMT -5
My first press release. I hope it turns out okay everyone. Feel free to edit it as much as you like. VERY nice job for your first try, Marlene - hope you keep writing episode press releases! Here's my edit: So? What do you think? I *really* like the idea of non-magicals (I don't call them mortals since the Warrens are mortals, too, just like the Halliwells were - Prue is proof of that!) also being the big bad of the episode! And I see that Marlene has done a second press release, one that's just as good! Here's my edit on that one: So? What do you think? I see Pheebs has come up with another fantastic press release, but I have to start getting read for work, so I'll have to edit that tonight along with any other new press releases before doing our one-month anniversary update. SIXTEEN pages in one month! We SOOOO rock! Everyone who's participated give yourself a HUGE pat on the back!
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Post by Granny Charmed on Sept 13, 2018 15:43:48 GMT -5
Great job Marlene. Do hope you write more dear.
I love the non magical villain. I love how we're coming up with everyday struggles in life without being so #Metoo and in your face. Those are the plots with our innocents I hope we do.
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Post by marlenewicca on Sept 13, 2018 16:30:12 GMT -5
Thanks guys. I'm glad you liked them. Felt like time for a non magical villain.
I love the edits.
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Post by marlenewicca on Sept 13, 2018 17:05:00 GMT -5
Feel free to edit as you wish. If anyone wants to adjust go ahead, I did some digging on African witchcraft and the mob killing 11 people was a report in Kenya in May 2008.
So I thought this story could be interesting like the sisters coming into contact with the Gypsies in The Eyes Have It. Other witch cultures or different traditions.
But I'm hoping to read more to get a better understanding of African witchcraft. I do know it seems they burn witches and not like Salem that have them hung.
I also like Prudence learning about witch doctor healings and possibly a new healing techniques that she didn't think before or learns more accurately.
I also hope we can give the immigrants proper names. But I am not sure what ones? So anyone have suggestions?
Feel free to edit or change or make suggestions? Or correct me?
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Post by Esmeralda on Sept 13, 2018 18:47:56 GMT -5
Back with another press release. As always, Pheebs, you *are* our Deadline's ace reporter! FANTASTIC job with this! About the only thing I didn't like was the addition of a real witch, since it seems to imply that the series will mainly be about other witch cultures while we want our series to be about the Elemental Witches. And since none of us are actually witches, I don't think we'd be able to add actual witchcraft to our story the way the rip-off might want to. Like Classic Charmed, we want ours to be fantasy magic, where we can have them do whatever we want them to do, no matter if a real witch could do it or not. So, Pheebs, I hope you don't mind if I took out that paragraph. If you *really* want it, I'll put it back. Along the same lines, I also took out the bit about honoring the original. That was something that was important for something as different from Classic Charmed as the rip-off, but with Connie producing it and Sheryl, Chris, Zach and Paul writing it, along with the names used, having Connie or any of the stars say they're honoring the original just doesn't feel right to me - it actually sounds conceited. If I'm reading that wrong, go ahead and let me know and I'll put it back. Besides, I like the fact that we now have 5 secrets to honor our five stars! For now, here's my edits: So? What do you think?
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Post by Esmeralda on Sept 13, 2018 19:05:49 GMT -5
Here are my edits.
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Post by marlenewicca on Sept 13, 2018 19:23:30 GMT -5
That sounds much better. Thank you to the great editing. You can word it better than I could.
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Post by pheebs on Sept 13, 2018 20:55:23 GMT -5
Back with another press release. As always, Pheebs, you *are* our Deadline's ace reporter! FANTASTIC job with this! About the only thing I didn't like was the addition of a real witch, since it seems to imply that the series will mainly be about other witch cultures while we want our series to be about the Elemental Witches. And since none of us are actually witches, I don't think we'd be able to add actual witchcraft to our story the way the rip-off might want to. Like Classic Charmed, we want ours to be fantasy magic, where we can have them do whatever we want them to do, no matter if a real witch could do it or not. So, Pheebs, I hope you don't mind if I took out that paragraph. If you *really* want it, I'll put it back. Along the same lines, I also took out the bit about honoring the original. That was something that was important for something as different from Classic Charmed as the rip-off, but with Connie producing it and Sheryl, Chris, Zach and Paul writing it, along with the names used, having Connie or any of the stars say they're honoring the original just doesn't feel right to me - it actually sounds conceited. If I'm reading that wrong, go ahead and let me know and I'll put it back. Besides, I like the fact that we now have 5 secrets to honor our five stars! Thank you. I'm always inspired by what I can find and adopt. Yeah, I can see why adding a Salem Witch would do that now. Before also noticing we have existing former writers on the honoring part. Again why your job as editor is always so valuable. But of course we can pretend our writers Connie and such payed closer attention to being inspired by Salem and researching anything that helps inspire them for ideas. I do want Salem and the actual history of Salem's culture as in the towns woven in with stories as I'm trying with any history or something really happening in Salem, I find that can fit with a story adopted into our series. Unlike Classic Charmed with San Francisco not having justice for their cities history. But maybe I went the wrong way about it by wording it as a Salem witch when I meant the towns history in general and what happens in Salem during festivals and other such stuff. That's the job of Connie and the writers to do with story research and inspiration. I'm fine with that. Especially sincs five secrets actually sounds great to honor our five stars. Keep reining me in to not fall off track Es with something that sounds more ripoff less our series. For now, here's my edits: So? What do you think? Good work Es! I'm fine with these five.
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Post by Sasha on Sept 13, 2018 22:07:16 GMT -5
Had to copy this from the Reviewers thread: 48 hours! This is pretty intense, but the perfect spot to end on a cliffhanger. I'm sure the Warren's are going to be so very shocked to learn the truth about Andrea. A quick question though, if Peyton shapeshifted into an older version of herself, Paige knows her daughter is back. But doesn't know she's taken over Andrea unless she lets her know. So unless when she changes back into a witch, she tries to suppress her memories of her bad days or she just has a memory problem. Then again, maybe when she changes back into a witch, Does Peyton quickly cover her tracks by shapeshifting into someone else much like Cole did with the Seer, so they don't find out yet. That's a *very* good question, Sasha, something I hadn't considered when I was doing my edits. Anyone have any ideas on how we can fix this? Thanks for bringing this across. I see most are still trying to figure it out. I have my own suggestion if that will be of use to you guys. 1) Paige knows that Peyton is inside Andrea, but the pair keeps up appearances with Peyton continuing to be Andrea around the other Warrens and act like regular old Andrea. Although I guess if she uses the Peyton adult shapeshift form, would her family recognize that she looks like an older version of Paige's daughter they think died? Maybe they are too busy to notice or figure out right away. 2) They do find out about Peyton and she does keep appearing as adult Peyton all the time, but just don't know she's taken the possession of Andrea. So Prudence is worried that Andrea isn't returning her calls, and they eventually put the two and two together. Maybe the question of Peyton can't be saved comes into question, but once they learn that she's inside Andrea, does that give Peyton a reason to escape and get out of dodge for a while, they can't bring themselves to kill her because if they did Andrea dies too.
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Post by Sasha on Sept 13, 2018 22:11:01 GMT -5
I'm going to wait until the big one-month anniversary to comment on S5 and all the new press releases that need reviewing. But I wanted to comment on this one.
Well-done Pheebs for putting the press release together and Es for editing.
I like that we have five secrets!
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Post by Sasha on Sept 13, 2018 22:19:37 GMT -5
As always, Pheebs, you *are* our Deadline's ace reporter! FANTASTIC job with this! About the only thing I didn't like was the addition of a real witch, since it seems to imply that the series will mainly be about other witch cultures while we want our series to be about the Elemental Witches. And since none of us are actually witches, I don't think we'd be able to add actual witchcraft to our story the way the rip-off might want to. Like Classic Charmed, we want ours to be fantasy magic, where we can have them do whatever we want them to do, no matter if a real witch could do it or not. So, Pheebs, I hope you don't mind if I took out that paragraph. If you *really* want it, I'll put it back. Along the same lines, I also took out the bit about honoring the original. That was something that was important for something as different from Classic Charmed as the rip-off, but with Connie producing it and Sheryl, Chris, Zach and Paul writing it, along with the names used, having Connie or any of the stars say they're honoring the original just doesn't feel right to me - it actually sounds conceited. If I'm reading that wrong, go ahead and let me know and I'll put it back. Besides, I like the fact that we now have 5 secrets to honor our five stars! Thank you. I'm always inspired by what I can find and adopt. Yeah, I can see why adding a Salem Witch would do that now. Before also noticing we have existing former writers on the honoring part. Again why your job as editor is always so valuable. But of course, we can pretend our writers Connie and such paid closer attention to being inspired by Salem and researching anything that helps inspire them for ideas. I do want Salem and the actual history of Salem's culture as in the towns woven in with stories as I'm trying with any history or something really happening in Salem, I find that can fit with a story adopted into our series. Unlike Classic Charmed with San Francisco not having justice for their cities history. But maybe I went the wrong way about it by wording it as a Salem witch when I meant the town's history in general and what happens in Salem during festivals and other such stuff. That's the job of Connie and the writers to do with story research and inspiration. I'm fine with that. Especially since five secrets actually sounds great to honor our five stars. Keep reining me in to not fall off track Es with something that sounds more ripoff less our series. Well, I'm glad you are incorporating some things that actually happened in Salem. We know Classic Charmed did not much with San Francisco. That I do like, I just don't think as Es said not going deep into witchcraft and more fantasy magic, and the Elemental Witches. But if you just like to keep on digging into archives and basing real events from Salem for the EC stories. That I do like and will make this series feel real and Salem much more a central part of EC than CC ever did use San Francisco. That's the parts I do get picky about when I watch television shows and movies. Like witches being burned not hung in Salem, no snow in a state that does snow just stuff like that. So Pheebs keep being inspired by anything you read about Salem that might fit for EC, an event (that can tie into the villain of the week) or even location in Salem that might work for your stories or press releases.
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Post by Sasha on Sept 13, 2018 22:59:44 GMT -5
I've gone in head first and went and did my own press release. Although, I don't think I'll do too many - much more liking reviewing and following the action (but now I get to see others play reviewer to me now). I thought what the heck, why not try it! So? What do you think? Edit it, rewrite it, change it! Have another idea for a Christmas story. I had an earlier idea of Piper & Phoebe turning into children from a spell that backfires when they want to remember the best Christmas they ever had growing up, which brings forth some ghost as well haunting and needing to learn the true meaning of Christmas to move on. But I didn't know where to go with it. If anyone knows how to work that angle, go for it!
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Post by Esmeralda on Sept 13, 2018 23:41:44 GMT -5
It's 11:38 PM here in Minneapolis, so it's a bit early, but I want to wish everyone who's been helping in some way to create 'Elemental Charmed' no matter if you wrote press releases, commented on press releases or even just read press release, a VERY HAPPY ONE-MONTH ANNIVERSARY! I can't believe our baby is already a month old and growing - a lot quicker than I thought she would!
Check out my new thread with the latest update AND the season-episode summaries! How many episodes do you think we've written press releases for? I guessed 30...check to see how close I came...or far away I was!
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Post by Esmeralda on Sept 13, 2018 23:46:19 GMT -5
Thank you. I'm always inspired by what I can find and adopt. Yeah, I can see why adding a Salem Witch would do that now. Before also noticing we have existing former writers on the honoring part. Again why your job as editor is always so valuable. But of course, we can pretend our writers Connie and such paid closer attention to being inspired by Salem and researching anything that helps inspire them for ideas. I do want Salem and the actual history of Salem's culture as in the towns woven in with stories as I'm trying with any history or something really happening in Salem, I find that can fit with a story adopted into our series. Unlike Classic Charmed with San Francisco not having justice for their cities history. But maybe I went the wrong way about it by wording it as a Salem witch when I meant the town's history in general and what happens in Salem during festivals and other such stuff. That's the job of Connie and the writers to do with story research and inspiration. I'm fine with that. Especially since five secrets actually sounds great to honor our five stars. Keep reining me in to not fall off track Es with something that sounds more ripoff less our series. Well, I'm glad you are incorporating some things that actually happened in Salem. We know Classic Charmed did not much with San Francisco. That I do like, I just don't think as Es said not going deep into witchcraft and more fantasy magic, and the Elemental Witches. But if you just like to keep on digging into archives and basing real events from Salem for the EC stories. That I do like and will make this series feel real and Salem much more a central part of EC than CC ever did use San Francisco. That's the parts I do get picky about when I watch television shows and movies. Like witches being burned not hung in Salem, no snow in a state that does snow just stuff like that. So Pheebs keep being inspired by anything you read about Salem that might fit for EC, an event (that can tie into the villain of the week) or even location in Salem that might work for your stories or press releases. I agree totally, Sasha! Keep up the fantastic job, Pheebs -I love the idea of Connie checking into the history of Salem and telling more than just the Witch Trials, no matter how important they are to our story.
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Post by Esmeralda on Sept 13, 2018 23:47:54 GMT -5
I've gone in head first and went and did my own press release. Although, I don't think I'll do too many - much more liking reviewing and following the action (but now I get to see others play reviewer to me now). I thought what the heck, why not try it! So? What do you think? Edit it, rewrite it, change it! Have another idea for a Christmas story. I had an earlier idea of Piper & Phoebe turning into children from a spell that backfires when they want to remember the best Christmas they ever had growing up, which brings forth some ghost as well haunting and needing to learn the true meaning of Christmas to move on. But I didn't know where to go with it. If anyone knows how to work that angle, go for it! WOW, Sasha, you really did dive right in, and at a quick glance, this looks fantastic! Unfortunately I'm BEAT from doing the one-month-day update so I'll give it a better read and edit tomorrow morning.
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Post by prudencehalliwell on Sept 14, 2018 0:41:03 GMT -5
VERY HAPPY ONE-MONTH ANNIVERSARY EVERYONE!
I'm so very proud of what we have done.
Wow! At the press releases count. My guesses are way off.
I can't wait to re-read these all soon.
Such a feat in just one month. By Christmas time, I can't begin to wonder how much we might have achieved.
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