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Post by summerreading on Sept 14, 2018 4:15:04 GMT -5
I've adjusted my press release with many requests to have the tagline being the episode's title now and made the changes. I’m with the others, Summer – your original tagline really makes a great episode title. Even though Classic Charmed *did* have an episode BASED on the Blair Witch, it didn’t actually include the Blair Witch; instead we had an evil witch, Tuatha. So doing an episode that actually includes the Blair Witch sounds great to me – especially showing what that “witch” truly is. I also really like the 20s one, but there's a problem - unlike Phoebe Halliwell, Prudence Warren only has premonitions; she doesn't see the past, and in order to truly have an everlasting time loop, they have to keep doing the same thing. So see what you think of how I handled it. Here are my edits: So? What do you think? If you like the way Summer solved it better, speak up and I’ll change it back. I think these are perfect! And yes, I'm glad you all convinced me to change the title. It does sound much better. And thanks Es, for the correction with Prudence's powers.
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Post by summerreading on Sept 14, 2018 4:26:54 GMT -5
Another Deadline press release. I forgot we don't have our pick-up for EC yet by The CW. I think we might have missed this one among our recap posts. Unless it has and I'm just blind to notice. I just wanted to make sure we didn't forget any. Wonderful effort putting that thread together Es for our one-month anniversary. I'm beyond so pleased with our progress, and for the support, this Cafe has given each other. I'm so proud of everyone here.
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Post by summerreading on Sept 14, 2018 4:28:51 GMT -5
I've gone in head first and went and did my own press release. Although, I don't think I'll do too many - much more liking reviewing and following the action (but now I get to see others play reviewer to me now). I thought what the heck, why not try it! So? What do you think? Edit it, rewrite it, change it! Have another idea for a Christmas story. I had an earlier idea of Piper & Phoebe turning into children from a spell that backfires when they want to remember the best Christmas they ever had growing up, which brings forth some ghost as well haunting and needing to learn the true meaning of Christmas to move on. But I didn't know where to go with it. If anyone knows how to work that angle, go for it! WOW, Sasha, you really did dive right in, and at a quick glance, this looks fantastic! Unfortunately I'm BEAT from doing the one-month-day update so I'll give it a better read and edit tomorrow morning. Great first attempt Sasha, Pat yourself on the back, you certainly did dive right in. Es, you have done so very good with that thread. Give yourself a much-deserved sleep, and a pat on the back for being a fantastic editor.
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Post by summerreading on Sept 14, 2018 6:18:21 GMT -5
Let's get that press release count up higher on our one month anniversary. I couldn't resist posting a new press release, one I've been working on all last night. While writing, I didn't even think I'd get a two-hour or two-parter, but when I ended up finishing it, I found I could go on? If you think it doesn't work as a two-parter/two-hour, feel free to change it, if you think it would make a better arc or even for season 2, since didn't we plan this season the time-travel with secrets, it could work as a fun end of season storyline for multiple episodes in S2, make it known? Again feel free to edit, ask questions or re-do?
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Post by Esmeralda on Sept 14, 2018 7:57:01 GMT -5
Another Deadline press release. I forgot we don't have our pick-up for EC yet by The CW. I think we might have missed this one among our recap posts. Unless it has and I'm just blind to notice. I just wanted to make sure we didn't forget any. Wonderful effort putting that thread together Es for our one-month anniversary. I'm beyond so pleased with our progress, and for the support, this Cafe has given each other. I'm so proud of everyone here. Oh, you're so right, Summer - I *did* miss this one. Looks like I missed it on Wednesday when I was getting caught up and never even got a chance to edit it. Since you quoted quotes, it didn't copy here, but I went back and found it: Another Deadline press release. I forgot we don't have our pick-up for EC yet by The CW. SOOOO sorry for missing this one, Pheebs! Although I must admit that this is your first press release that I'm not nuts on. Because you only used a piece of a full article, it comes out sounding very choppy. So I want to bring the whole thing back and change the rip-off parts to ours. Unfortunately after working on the anniversary update last night, I overslept and have to get to work, so I can't do it right now but will when I get home. If you get a chance before I get home and want to redo it, go for it. Quick note that Connie was never the showrunner, that was always Kern, so I'm going to delete that. I also want to take out the bit about female writers since Zach and Paul aren't, and they, along with Sheryl and Chris, are our only writers. The rip-off is making the same mistake as Classic Charmed by having too many writers which is the reason for lots of Classic Charmed's famous inconsistencies. HAPPY ONE-MONTH ANNIVERSARY, EVERYONE! Enjoy the update - and those totals!!! - and be sure to let me know if I missed anything else.
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Post by Esmeralda on Sept 14, 2018 8:11:22 GMT -5
HAD to bring this one forward!! It's 11:38 PM here in Minneapolis, so it's a bit early, but I want to wish everyone who's been helping in some way to create 'Elemental Charmed' no matter if you wrote press releases, commented on press releases or even just read press release, a VERY HAPPY ONE-MONTH ANNIVERSARY! I can't believe our baby is already a month old and growing - a lot quicker than I thought she would! Check out my new thread with the latest update AND the season-episode summaries! How many episodes do you think we've written press releases for? I guessed 30...check to see how close I came...or far away I was! Now I've GOTTA RUN! HAPPY ANNIVERSARY,EVERYONE!
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Post by pheebs on Sept 14, 2018 8:17:14 GMT -5
HAD to bring this one forward!! It's 11:38 PM here in Minneapolis, so it's a bit early, but I want to wish everyone who's been helping in some way to create 'Elemental Charmed' no matter if you wrote press releases, commented on press releases or even just read press release, a VERY HAPPY ONE-MONTH ANNIVERSARY! I can't believe our baby is already a month old and growing - a lot quicker than I thought she would! Check out my new thread with the latest update AND the season-episode summaries! How many episodes do you think we've written press releases for? I guessed 30...check to see how close I came...or far away I was! Now I've GOTTA RUN! HAPPY ANNIVERSARY,EVERYONE! HAPPY ONE-MONTH ANNIVERSARY, EVERYONE! Well-done! I can't believe how many press releases we have from reading the thread!
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Post by pheebs on Sept 14, 2018 8:49:57 GMT -5
I think we might have missed this one among our recap posts. Unless it has and I'm just blind to notice. I just wanted to make sure we didn't forget any. Wonderful effort putting that thread together Es for our one-month anniversary. I'm beyond so pleased with our progress, and for the support, this Cafe has given each other. I'm so proud of everyone here. Oh, you're so right, Summer - I *did* miss this one. Looks like I missed it on Wednesday when I was getting caught up and never even got a chance to edit it. Since you quoted quotes, it didn't copy here, but I went back and found it: Another Deadline press release. I forgot we don't have our pick-up for EC yet by The CW. SOOOO sorry for missing this one, Pheebs! Although I must admit that this is your first press release that I'm not nuts on. Because you only used a piece of a full article, it comes out sounding very choppy. So I want to bring the whole thing back and change the rip-off parts to ours. Unfortunately after working on the anniversary update last night, I overslept and have to get to work, so I can't do it right now but will when I get home. If you get a chance before I get home and want to redo it, go for it. Quick note that Connie was never the showrunner, that was always Kern, so I'm going to delete that. I also want to take out the bit about female writers since Zach and Paul aren't, and they, along with Sheryl and Chris, are our only writers. The rip-off is making the same mistake as Classic Charmed by having too many writers which is the reason for lots of Classic Charmed's famous inconsistencies. HAPPY ONE-MONTH ANNIVERSARY, EVERYONE! Enjoy the update - and those totals!!! - and be sure to let me know if I missed anything else. That's okay Es! Here's my re-edited version: What do you think? Feel free to re-edit, change or ask questions?
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Post by coltoncharmed on Sept 14, 2018 9:34:51 GMT -5
I think I've got all the new ones except for Marie Wicca's and that's because of a problem I want to discuss with her privately (Yes, Colton, I'm learning! Thanks for teaching me that lesson!). If I missed any other, be sure to let me know so I can let it be part of the one-month anniversary update! My pleasure, we are all learning here (me included, some things I'm starting to realise too and learn from).
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Post by coltoncharmed on Sept 14, 2018 9:38:04 GMT -5
HAD to bring this one forward!! It's 11:38 PM here in Minneapolis, so it's a bit early, but I want to wish everyone who's been helping in some way to create 'Elemental Charmed' no matter if you wrote press releases, commented on press releases or even just read press release, a VERY HAPPY ONE-MONTH ANNIVERSARY! I can't believe our baby is already a month old and growing - a lot quicker than I thought she would! Check out my new thread with the latest update AND the season-episode summaries! How many episodes do you think we've written press releases for? I guessed 30...check to see how close I came...or far away I was! Now I've GOTTA RUN! HAPPY ANNIVERSARY,EVERYONE! I still cannot believe it has been one month. A BIG HAPPY ONE-MONTH ANNIVERSARY! I'm looking forward to guessing who many we have. My prediction is we have 37? We'll see how right or wrong I am when I look in the thread now.
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Post by coltoncharmed on Sept 14, 2018 10:00:57 GMT -5
Let's get that press release count up higher on our one month anniversary. I couldn't resist posting a new press release, one I've been working on all last night. You now gave us more which is always good for the count. WOW! just WOW! I love this Summer so much! I'm already on the edge of my seat wondering how they get back to the manor (since we have no whitelighters and Paige is not an option due to the virus) and what happened to Prudence and Phoebe, did they get infected too. So many possibilities. Nope, it deserves more than one episode. I really liked it, if you have more to add to expand it beyond two episodes. I actually wonder now, if it should be part of our second season arc? Actually, that would make an even better second season cliffhanger Summer, since I was on the edge of my seat wondering what will happen next or how they get back to the manor, and what happened to Prudence and Phoebe. That's how I'd love to see Season 2 end, with the plotline possibly resolved in a two-hour opener of Season Three. Of course, It changes the timeline of our series, since that is during or near the end of Summer. But I know we've had Charmed seasons end in August and start in October. So nothing we can't adjust. I hope you keep writing. I'm dying to know what happens next.
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Post by Ruth Marie on Sept 14, 2018 15:46:08 GMT -5
Let's get that press release count up higher on our one month anniversary. I couldn't resist posting a new press release, one I've been working on all last night. You now gave us more which is always good for the count. WOW! just WOW! I love this Summer so much! I'm already on the edge of my seat wondering how they get back to the manor (since we have no whitelighters and Paige is not an option due to the virus) and what happened to Prudence and Phoebe, did they get infected too. So many possibilities. Nope, it deserves more than one episode. I really liked it, if you have more to add to expand it beyond two episodes. I actually wonder now, if it should be part of our second season arc? Actually, that would make an even better second season cliffhanger Summer, since I was on the edge of my seat wondering what will happen next or how they get back to the manor, and what happened to Prudence and Phoebe. That's how I'd love to see Season 2 end, with the plotline possibly resolved in a two-hour opener of Season Three. Of course, It changes the timeline of our series, since that is during or near the end of Summer. But I know we've had Charmed seasons end in August and start in October. So nothing we can't adjust. I hope you keep writing. I'm dying to know what happens next. I'm with Colton. Keep writing! I do think that would be a great cliffhanger to Season 2 that resolves in S3 or an arc in S2 or one from S3 into S4. Lot's of choices. Unlike Classic Charmed's door closing. Maybe all seasons have a cliffhanger ending that carried a story into the next.
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Post by Ruth Marie on Sept 14, 2018 15:47:31 GMT -5
HAD to bring this one forward!! Now I've GOTTA RUN! HAPPY ANNIVERSARY,EVERYONE! I still cannot believe it has been one month. A BIG HAPPY ONE-MONTH ANNIVERSARY! I'm looking forward to guessing who many we have. My prediction is we have 37? We'll see how right or wrong I am when I look in the thread now. HAPPY ANNIVERSARY TEAM CHARMED CAFE! I'll guess 32? Let's see if I'm close or so far off.
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Post by marlenewicca on Sept 14, 2018 19:57:44 GMT -5
You now gave us more which is always good for the count. WOW! just WOW! I love this Summer so much! I'm already on the edge of my seat wondering how they get back to the manor (since we have no whitelighters and Paige is not an option due to the virus) and what happened to Prudence and Phoebe, did they get infected too. So many possibilities. Nope, it deserves more than one episode. I really liked it, if you have more to add to expand it beyond two episodes. I actually wonder now, if it should be part of our second season arc? Actually, that would make an even better second season cliffhanger Summer, since I was on the edge of my seat wondering what will happen next or how they get back to the manor, and what happened to Prudence and Phoebe. That's how I'd love to see Season 2 end, with the plotline possibly resolved in a two-hour opener of Season Three. Of course, It changes the timeline of our series, since that is during or near the end of Summer. But I know we've had Charmed seasons end in August and start in October. So nothing we can't adjust. I hope you keep writing. I'm dying to know what happens next. I'm with Colton. Keep writing! I do think that would be a great cliffhanger to Season 2 that resolves in S3 or an arc in S2 or one from S3 into S4. Lot's of choices. Unlike Classic Charmed's door closing. Maybe all seasons have a cliffhanger ending that carried a story into the next. Having read it. I completely agree. It makes a great arc for EC. Actually what if Peyton wanted to wipe out all witches forever in the last episode. This could be how a Warren might die in the series finale. But I don't want to take away from other finale plots. This one just has potential to be longer. I'm enjoying it Summer!
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Post by marlenewicca on Sept 14, 2018 19:59:12 GMT -5
HAD to bring this one forward!! It's 11:38 PM here in Minneapolis, so it's a bit early, but I want to wish everyone who's been helping in some way to create 'Elemental Charmed' no matter if you wrote press releases, commented on press releases or even just read press release, a VERY HAPPY ONE-MONTH ANNIVERSARY! I can't believe our baby is already a month old and growing - a lot quicker than I thought she would! Check out my new thread with the latest update AND the season-episode summaries! How many episodes do you think we've written press releases for? I guessed 30...check to see how close I came...or far away I was! Now I've GOTTA RUN! HAPPY ANNIVERSARY,EVERYONE! HAPPY ANNIVERSARY!!! This series has come so far in such a short time.
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Post by pheebs on Sept 14, 2018 23:47:48 GMT -5
Like others suggested. That might work well as a story-arc.
I do like that setup for S2's last episodes and resolving it at the start of S3. We haven't solved S3 yet maybe the threat they are up against in our time travel season of secrets has a third party secretly looking for this virus and finds it that sits a little to our third season finale and a plot that carries and resolves at the start of S4. Letting Season 1 and 2 stay stand-alone seasons.
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Post by summerreading on Sept 15, 2018 2:14:33 GMT -5
Thanks guys. I wasn't sure what to expect. Lot's of suggestions. I might re-edit my press releases and take into account all that has been suggested.
If anyone else wants to edit mine or has other ideas. Go for it!
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Post by summerreading on Sept 15, 2018 2:22:45 GMT -5
Like others suggested. That might work well as a story-arc. I do like that setup for S2's last episodes and resolving it at the start of S3. We haven't solved S3 yet maybe the threat they are up against in our time travel season of secrets has a third party secretly looking for this virus and finds it that sits a little to our third season finale and a plot that carries and resolves at the start of S4. Letting Season 1 and 2 stay stand-alone seasons. I'm thinking more and more this should be a little longer. Great suggestion Pheebs. I never would of thought of that. Also I agree making the first season or even second standalone might be good. But if we find we have plenty of story for S3 with the time travel, I might put it into the end of S2/start of S3. I'll have to go back to the drawing board and see if I can work more and re-edit my press releases or just continue where I left off over the weekend.
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Post by summerreading on Sept 15, 2018 2:24:07 GMT -5
HAD to bring this one forward!! Now I've GOTTA RUN! HAPPY ANNIVERSARY,EVERYONE! HAPPY ONE-MONTH ANNIVERSARY, EVERYONE! Well-done! I can't believe how many press releases we have from reading the thread! I'm so very happy. Much more press releases than I thought we would have.
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Post by summerreading on Sept 15, 2018 2:39:33 GMT -5
I've gone in head first and went and did my own press release. Although, I don't think I'll do too many - much more liking reviewing and following the action (but now I get to see others play reviewer to me now). I thought what the heck, why not try it! So? What do you think? Edit it, rewrite it, change it! Have another idea for a Christmas story. I had an earlier idea of Piper & Phoebe turning into children from a spell that backfires when they want to remember the best Christmas they ever had growing up, which brings forth some ghost as well haunting and needing to learn the true meaning of Christmas to move on. But I didn't know where to go with it. If anyone knows how to work that angle, go for it! I forgot to ask Sasha. What did you consider for that other idea. The thought of no villains period in this episode but a young Piper and Phoebe who still have powers but causing trouble for everyone instead of that little spoiled girl is interesting. Especially if it had some meaning in it for them to want to celebrate Christmas in the end. I like the idea you went with too. Since I like Piper and Phoebe returning home learning a lesson and them sitting and watching the family video. The best way to do our version of the ending of 'Thank You for Not Morphing'. That makes this Christmas episode a highlight and why I totally love the episode.
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