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Post by prudencehalliwell on Sept 18, 2018 17:22:14 GMT -5
ESMERALDA: WOW! I can’t believe we’re up to TWENTY pages after only a little over a month! Not that many press releases announcing new episodes to add to this batch, although we have a nice bunch of Deadline press releases courtesy of Pheebs Halliwell. COLTON: I've loved the Deadline press releases. I'm not sure if I missed any new ones, but I might wait until your another of those great update posts you do to see. PRUDENCE: Loving those Deadline press releases. ----------------------------- ESMERALDA: Of course a lot of this is thanks to all of the discussions regarding the Wither Pox virus storyline – about the only problem with introducing the skyscraper method of replying to posts. But that’s okay, since this thread is mainly for brainstorming and the skyscraper method is the best way to do that! COLTON: We have been busy with the discussions on that. But that skyscraper method that was done here, helped make life easier for all to reply. ------------------------- ESMERALDA: I’ve kept the most recent versions of that story arc here, although there’s always possibilities that thanks to all of the discussions, it could change. I did edit my edits of the Season Two cliffies to reflect what others have said. Although the warlocks still tell the Warrens about the how and why the virus and the antivirus potion affect both witches and warlocks (that gives the Warrens a reason to agree to work with them), how the virus is spread is held off until Season Three. COLTON: ------------------------------- ESMERALDA: Also, everyone, keep in mind – even though Summer Reading started this storyline, nothing says that others can’t do press releases for episodes that are part of the storyline. But that’s why I’m glad we had standalones in Season One and Two and am hoping we end up moving this storyline to S3/S4 and continue to use standalones in Season Three – it just gives more members more chances to use their own ideas to write their own episodes for ‘Elemental Charmed’ – the reason why we got 50 episodes in a little over a month, halfway to our goal of 100. But, of course, that’s up to everyone else. COLTON: I think many of us, I know Marlene has admitted she likes standalone episodes to write. Summer and Pheebs seem to do so great at story-arcs. But I actually think that is a great idea because it does allow new people to join if they want and I think they'll feel more comfortable doing a standalone for a first press release try, not a whole story-arc or adding to one. But in saying that, we did plan to do a time travel story in S3, that might be a story arc that is just done in the final episodes of S3. Then it would carry the story-arcs standard into 4 and 5. PRUDENCE: I do agree, that standalones are better for people to feel comfortable to write a press release for an episode for the first time. It reminds me a little of Ghost Whisperer, they did standalones in S1 and S2, with the exception of two-parters and stories carrying over into another season. Then S3 introduced more plots carrying through a whole season from memory. I'm probably wrong? ----------------------------- ESMERALDA: Also as discussed, while I’m working on this, I’m also going to start a new thread that will let the authors of the episode press releases decide who they want to have as writers for their episode. I’m hoping we stick to the ones we’ve chosen so far: Sheryl J. Anderson, the team of Chris Levinson & Zach Estrin and Paul Ruditis, the ones who most fans agree did the best job writing the sisters as sisters. I like to think that if Connie Burge truly got to be the executive producer of a Charmed reboot – not just the creator – that she would choose the ones who wrote the sisters the most like Connie and her own sisters, and from what I’ve read, these are the ones who did – especially in our alternate universe where she no longer has to answer to male chauvinists Brad Kern, Aaron Spelling and E. Duke Vincent, who cared more about how much tit and ass the actresses could reveal over their characters. BUT that’s just my reaction. Many TV shows have just one writer for the entire show; many have many. I think too many is what caused all of the infamous inconsistencies in Classic Charmed with each writer seeing the sisters differently. BUT if you’ve written one or more of press releases for the episodes and think a different TV writer (no Buffy ones or Hercules/Xena ones or Supernatural ones, please – Classic Charmed fans are given enough problems from fans of those shows!) would do a better job, feel free. Just please, don’t use any of the names of Charmed Café members – that’s for a fantasy series, not this one, which we’re trying to keep as real as possible, despite me trying to sneak fantasy stuff into some of Pheebs Halliwell’s Deadline press releases! Just be sure that the ones you choose truly have real TV-writing credits (not movies!) – I’ll be checking and if they don’t have those credits via IMDb, they won’t make it to the next update. COLTON: Good idea. I think not using any writers from those shows is the best idea possible. I look forward to this new thread. PRUDENCE: I like this idea, and look forward to seeing what you guys decide to do. Since I haven't written my own press releases yet, I won't be able to contribute to names. --------------------------------- ESMERALDA: In each case, it’s the person who wrote the original press release who will get to choose – if I post something here with two names, that’s the first name. COLTON: That makes sense. ---------------------------- ESMERALDA: You’ll notice one more addition. I’ve added all of the missing episodes with their Season Number, Episode Number and Airing Date. These dates are a combination of the dates Classic Charmed episodes ran (although unlike them, our two-parters are ran in consecutive weeks rather than the same day) and future calendars. Go ahead and use these to add press releases for new episodes! PRUDENCE: I might take a shot at writing my own. I haven't contributed anything but ideas so far. But I'm not that great at original ideas and plots, but if Sasha can take a dive and come up with something so wonderful. I guess anything is possible. --------------------------- ESMERALDA: Since all of this will probably bring up a lot of discussion, I’m going to go ahead and put it in its own post and then start working on the update and the writers thread. Feel free to add your reaction – just be sure you put your reaction above the line – that will make it clear to others what opinions are mine and what are others. Thanks much!
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Post by Esmeralda on Sept 18, 2018 18:37:02 GMT -5
ESMERALDA: Hey, guys, just found out something while working on adding the extra dates - Season 3, Episode 15 will air on SUNDAY, FEBRUARY 14, 2021! We talked about including a Valentine's Day episode and this sounds like the perfect day! Yeah, it's not our series finale (but that's in May...), but can we really resist this?
Yeah, it might be in the midst of a story arc, but like Halloween falling on a Sunday, we really should give this a try, don't you think?
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Post by pheebs on Sept 18, 2018 21:12:22 GMT -5
ESMERALDA: Hey, guys, just found out something while working on adding the extra dates - Season 3, Episode 15 will air on SUNDAY, FEBRUARY 14, 2021! We talked about including a Valentine's Day episode and this sounds like the perfect day! Yeah, it's not our series finale (but that's in May...), but can we really resist this? Yeah, it might be in the midst of a story arc, but like Halloween falling on a Sunday, we really should give this a try, don't you think? PHEEBS: I haven't done any press releases for episodes in a while, just Deadline ones. I'm going to do one now and play around with something. It could be in the midst of a story arc, but we can adjust it later if needed.
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Post by Esmeralda on Sept 18, 2018 21:22:46 GMT -5
ESMERALDA: Hey, guys, just found out something while working on adding the extra dates - Season 3, Episode 15 will air on SUNDAY, FEBRUARY 14, 2021! We talked about including a Valentine's Day episode and this sounds like the perfect day! Yeah, it's not our series finale (but that's in May...), but can we really resist this?
Yeah, it might be in the midst of a story arc, but like Halloween falling on a Sunday, we really should give this a try, don't you think?
PHEEBS: I haven't done any press releases for episodes in a while, just Deadline ones. I'm going to do one now and play around with something. It could be in the midst of a story arc, but we can adjust it later if needed.
ESMERALDA: Fantastic! That's what I was thinking. With all the great minds we have working on this, we'll figure out something...
And I messed up the earlier one. Because our last season is only 12 episodes, it ends on February 16, so we can definitely do a Valentine's Day episode for that one, too. I love the idea of Piper and Matthew getting married in our last episode while the others reminisce about their prior loves. With our series all about family, it just seems like the right way to end this. No, it's not as dramatic as the Wither Pox virus storyline, but it will be what Elemental Charmed has always been all about.
What do you guys think?
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Post by pheebs on Sept 18, 2018 21:56:00 GMT -5
ESMERALDA: Hey, guys, just found out something while working on adding the extra dates - Season 3, Episode 15 will air on SUNDAY, FEBRUARY 14, 2021! We talked about including a Valentine's Day episode and this sounds like the perfect day! Yeah, it's not our series finale (but that's in May...), but can we really resist this?
Yeah, it might be in the midst of a story arc, but like Halloween falling on a Sunday, we really should give this a try, don't you think?
PHEEBS: I haven't done any press releases for episodes in a while, just Deadline ones. I'm going to do one now and play around with something. It could be in the midst of a story arc, but we can adjust it later if needed.
ESMERALDA: Fantastic! That's what I was thinking. With all the great minds we have working on this, we'll figure out something...
And I messed up the earlier one. Because our last season is only 12 episodes, it ends on February 16, so we can definitely do a Valentine's Day episode for that one, too. I love the idea of Piper and Matthew getting married in our last episode while the others reminisce about their prior loves. With our series all about family, it just seems like the right way to end this. No, it's not as dramatic as the Wither Pox virus storyline, but it will be what Elemental Charmed has always been all about.
What do you guys think?
PHEEBS: Exactly! That sounds like a good idea, and if we keep the marriage on Valentine's Day just that, the marriage which is part of a small time jump in the series finale, and let the S3, Episode 15 one be a themed story for the entire episode. We'll have two special ones.
Okay, now to get plotting that episode now...
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Post by Esmeralda on Sept 18, 2018 22:06:15 GMT -5
WOW! Looks like you guys must've added some - we're now up to TWENTY-ONE pages!!! Hate to admit it, but I'm BEAT - been working on this since 2 this afternoon! – so I’ll have to get caught up tomorrow. Because I'm so tired, I might have missed a press release or two that I've already edited or maybe put something in the wrong spot. If so, please be sure to point it out to me, so I can edit this and fix it.
Here we go!
As always, feel free to ask questions, make suggestions or add new press releases of your own! Anyone who is a member of Charmed Cafe is more than welcomed to become a member of Team Charmed Cafe! It's definitely the case of the more the merrier!
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Post by pheebs on Sept 18, 2018 22:21:01 GMT -5
Wonderful Es, and I love that we have every episode accounted for, at least in number. Now we'll have a better idea where the blanks are.
Well done, go get yourself some rest Es. I'm working on my own new press release, so I'll have to check back later and go over this properly and check it, and love yet again how far we have come.
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Post by pheebs on Sept 18, 2018 22:32:19 GMT -5
Feel free to edit, change, or ask questions?
I won't be mad if it is changed, I think it needs a little more work.
I haven't decided if it will be a Warlock or Demoness of Obsession. Since a Warlock could create those love potions, or make her a Demoness.
I know that we talked about Matthew as Piper's boyfriend. We still haven't decided where we are starting them as a couple, so this part can be changed easily. I haven't set at what point they are in a relationship, but It made the episode special, in the end, to have one Warren having their special day.
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Post by Sasha on Sept 19, 2018 1:07:34 GMT -5
Great job Es! Look at this. I'm sure you really were tired. A few mistakes I noticed, having reviewed before them, I picked up on them.
Season 2 episode 4 and 5 is in the incorrect order. Since Patience and Prudence would still be in Philadelphia.
I could have sworn I read that Past Imperfect was Season 3 episode 12 in my reviews. But I'm probably wrong? (I just checked my reviews, it was. Not a big deal this one though.)
Also something important to consider. Super Bowl programming. I don't think CBS or The CW would schedule against that. Unless of course it was on CBS as the Super Bowl post show. Which is set to be in 2022 during Season 4 of our series. Now if we did change this. But I'm willing to be proven wrong and admit it, if they have.
I got woken up by some noise outside my house. So responding on my smart phone. Still don't know how I managed to work it. So my own tiredness might have have made mistakes.
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Post by summerreading on Sept 19, 2018 3:58:21 GMT -5
Great job Es! Look at this. I'm sure you really were tired. A few mistakes I noticed, having reviewed before them, I picked up on them. Season 2 episode 4 and 5 is in the incorrect order. Since Patience and Prudence would still be in Philadelphia. I could have sworn I read that Past Imperfect was Season 3 episode 12 in my reviews. But I'm probably wrong? (I just checked my reviews, it was. Not a big deal this one though.) Also something important to consider. Super Bowl programming. I don't think CBS or The CW would schedule against that. Unless of course it was on CBS as the Super Bowl post show. Which is set to be in 2022 during Season 4 of our series. Now if we did change this. But I'm willing to be proven wrong and admit it, if they have. I got woken up by some noise outside my house. So responding on my smart phone. Still don't know how I managed to work it. So my own tiredness might have have made mistakes. I love that we now can see were all places we need to fill with a press release. That really helps! I have to admit Sasha, that I never picked up on those. But since you reviewed the episodes, you would have noticed them. With how busy we all are, I never really observed dates, numbers and such. Just skimming to see that everything wasn't missed like I did last time. I truly appreciate the efforts you have done for us Es, and of course, understand tiredness would get the better of you. I didn't consider the Super Bowl. I don't follow the programming. But if we adjusted, we would find our S3 Valentines Episode would become episode 14 airing on Feb 14.
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Post by summerreading on Sept 19, 2018 4:51:53 GMT -5
Feel free to edit, change, or ask questions? I won't be mad if it is changed, I think it needs a little more work. I haven't decided if it will be a Warlock or Demoness of Obsession. Since a Warlock could create those love potions, or make her a Demoness. I know that we talked about Matthew as Piper's boyfriend. We still haven't decided where we are starting them as a couple, so this part can be changed easily. I haven't set at what point they are in a relationship, but It made the episode special, in the end, to have one Warren having their special day. Maybe we don't even need any villain at all and make this another of the non-magical episodes. Maybe a Wicca store or something had a love potion, or maybe just two witches and one half of the couple wanted to make sure their partner never left them and made the potion, to give to them. Then it backfired and made matters worse. What do you think? We did so well making our Christmas episode non-magical, and Animal Pragmatism was just three animals turned into humans. So why not do the same with our Valentines Day Episode. But as always, these are just suggestions, you can go back to having it the way you set up before.
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Post by Ruth Marie on Sept 19, 2018 6:48:38 GMT -5
PHEEBS: Feel free to edit, change, or ask questions?
I won't be mad if it is changed, I think it needs a little more work.
I haven't decided if it will be a Warlock or Demoness of Obsession. Since a Warlock could create those love potions, or make her a Demoness. I know that we talked about Matthew as Piper's boyfriend. We still haven't decided where we are starting them as a couple, so this part can be changed easily. I haven't set at what point they are in a relationship, but It made the episode special, in the end, to have one Warren having their special day.
SUMMER: Maybe we don't even need any villain at all and make this another of the non-magical episodes. Maybe a Wicca store or something had a love potion, or maybe just two witches and one half of the couple wanted to make sure their partner never left them and made the potion, to give to them. Then it backfired and made matters worse.
What do you think? We did so well making our Christmas episode non-magical, and Animal Pragmatism was just three animals turned into humans. So why not do the same with our Valentines Day Episode.
But as always, these are just suggestions, you can go back to having it the way you set up before.
RUTH: Good story Pheebs. As for needing more work, I think just something more for Patience to add for remembering Victor. Since Prudence has her own story with the woman who knew Allen. But I really liked it.
I like what Paige and Phoebe do for Piper to make sure Matthew can come home for Piper on Valentines. I like the way we're not making the love interests a big part of the story. That he comes into the story, goes and comes back most likely when Piper is on trial or arrested. I gather this is what is considered right?
I'm not opposed to no-magical villains, and just sticking to just two innocents messed up with a love potion. Glad none of the Warrens take one and go love crazy. I like that it is just innocents or other witches needing to be saved.
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Post by Ruth Marie on Sept 19, 2018 7:08:18 GMT -5
ESMERALDA: Hey, guys, just found out something while working on adding the extra dates - Season 3, Episode 15 will air on SUNDAY, FEBRUARY 14, 2021! We talked about including a Valentine's Day episode and this sounds like the perfect day! Yeah, it's not our series finale (but that's in May...), but can we really resist this?
Yeah, it might be in the midst of a story arc, but like Halloween falling on a Sunday, we really should give this a try, don't you think?
PHEEBS: I haven't done any press releases for episodes in a while, just Deadline ones. I'm going to do one now and play around with something. It could be in the midst of a story arc, but we can adjust it later if needed.
ESMERALDA: Fantastic! That's what I was thinking. With all the great minds we have working on this, we'll figure out something...
And I messed up the earlier one. Because our last season is only 12 episodes, it ends on February 16, so we can definitely do a Valentine's Day episode for that one, too. I love the idea of Piper and Matthew getting married in our last episode while the others reminisce about their prior loves. With our series all about family, it just seems like the right way to end this. No, it's not as dramatic as the Wither Pox virus storyline, but it will be what Elemental Charmed has always been all about.
What do you guys think?
PHEEBS: Exactly! That sounds like a good idea, and if we keep the marriage on Valentine's Day just that, the marriage which is part of a small time jump in the series finale, and let the S3, Episode 15 one be a themed story for the entire episode. We'll have two special ones.
Okay, now to get plotting that episode now...
RUTH: I like that ending. I'm perfectly fine ending it with a wedding. With EC being all about family, it feels ideal. I Already checked out your press release Pheebs for it. Good work!
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Post by Ruth Marie on Sept 19, 2018 7:16:36 GMT -5
ESMERALDA: WOW! I can’t believe we’re up to TWENTY pages after only a little over a month! Not that many press releases announcing new episodes to add to this batch, although we have a nice bunch of Deadline press releases courtesy of Pheebs Halliwell. COLTON: I've loved the Deadline press releases. I'm not sure if I missed any new ones, but I might wait until your another of those great update posts you do to see. PRUDENCE: Loving those Deadline press releases. RUTH: Pheebs as always, you are killing those Deadline press releases. ----------------------------- ESMERALDA: Of course a lot of this is thanks to all of the discussions regarding the Wither Pox virus storyline – about the only problem with introducing the skyscraper method of replying to posts. But that’s okay, since this thread is mainly for brainstorming and the skyscraper method is the best way to do that! COLTON: We have been busy with the discussions on that. But that skyscraper method that was done here, helped make life easier for all to reply. RUTH: The skyscraper method is perfect for brainstorming. ------------------------- ESMERALDA: I’ve kept the most recent versions of that story arc here, although there’s always possibilities that thanks to all of the discussions, it could change. I did edit my edits of the Season Two cliffies to reflect what others have said. Although the warlocks still tell the Warrens about the how and why the virus and the antivirus potion affect both witches and warlocks (that gives the Warrens a reason to agree to work with them), how the virus is spread is held off until Season Three. COLTON:
RUTH: That sounds great! ------------------------------- ESMERALDA: Also, everyone, keep in mind – even though Summer Reading started this storyline, nothing says that others can’t do press releases for episodes that are part of the storyline. But that’s why I’m glad we had standalones in Season One and Two and am hoping we end up moving this storyline to S3/S4 and continue to use standalones in Season Three – it just gives more members more chances to use their own ideas to write their own episodes for ‘Elemental Charmed’ – the reason why we got 50 episodes in a little over a month, halfway to our goal of 100. But, of course, that’s up to everyone else. COLTON: I think many of us, I know Marlene has admitted she likes standalone episodes to write. Summer and Pheebs seem to do so great at story-arcs. But I actually think that is a great idea because it does allow new people to join if they want and I think they'll feel more comfortable doing a standalone for a first press release try, not a whole story-arc or adding to one. But in saying that, we did plan to do a time travel story in S3, that might be a story arc that is just done in the final episodes of S3. Then it would carry the story-arcs standard into 4 and 5. PRUDENCE: I do agree, that standalones are better for people to feel comfortable to write a press release for an episode for the first time. It reminds me a little of Ghost Whisperer, they did standalones in S1 and S2, with the exception of two-parters and stories carrying over into another season. Then S3 introduced more plots carrying through a whole season from memory. I'm probably wrong? RUTH: That does seem like a smart decision. ----------------------------- ESMERALDA: Also as discussed, while I’m working on this, I’m also going to start a new thread that will let the authors of the episode press releases decide who they want to have as writers for their episode. I’m hoping we stick to the ones we’ve chosen so far: Sheryl J. Anderson, the team of Chris Levinson & Zach Estrin and Paul Ruditis, the ones who most fans agree did the best job writing the sisters as sisters. I like to think that if Connie Burge truly got to be the executive producer of a Charmed reboot – not just the creator – that she would choose the ones who wrote the sisters the most like Connie and her own sisters, and from what I’ve read, these are the ones who did – especially in our alternate universe where she no longer has to answer to male chauvinists Brad Kern, Aaron Spelling and E. Duke Vincent, who cared more about how much tit and ass the actresses could reveal over their characters. BUT that’s just my reaction. Many TV shows have just one writer for the entire show; many have many. I think too many is what caused all of the infamous inconsistencies in Classic Charmed with each writer seeing the sisters differently. BUT if you’ve written one or more of press releases for the episodes and think a different TV writer (no Buffy ones or Hercules/Xena ones or Supernatural ones, please – Classic Charmed fans are given enough problems from fans of those shows!) would do a better job, feel free. Just please, don’t use any of the names of Charmed Café members – that’s for a fantasy series, not this one, which we’re trying to keep as real as possible, despite me trying to sneak fantasy stuff into some of Pheebs Halliwell’s Deadline press releases! Just be sure that the ones you choose truly have real TV-writing credits (not movies!) – I’ll be checking and if they don’t have those credits via IMDb, they won’t make it to the next update. COLTON: Good idea. I think not using any writers from those shows is the best idea possible. I look forward to this new thread. PRUDENCE: I like this idea, and look forward to seeing what you guys decide to do. Since I haven't written my own press releases yet, I won't be able to contribute to names. RUTH: I look forward to seeing them and what you guys come up with. --------------------------------- ESMERALDA: In each case, it’s the person who wrote the original press release who will get to choose – if I post something here with two names, that’s the first name. COLTON: That makes sense. ---------------------------- ESMERALDA: You’ll notice one more addition. I’ve added all of the missing episodes with their Season Number, Episode Number and Airing Date. These dates are a combination of the dates Classic Charmed episodes ran (although unlike them, our two-parters are ran in consecutive weeks rather than the same day) and future calendars. Go ahead and use these to add press releases for new episodes! PRUDENCE: I might take a shot at writing my own. I haven't contributed anything but ideas so far. But I'm not that great at original ideas and plots, but if Sasha can take a dive and come up with something so wonderful. I guess anything is possible. RUTH: Go got it! --------------------------- ESMERALDA: Since all of this will probably bring up a lot of discussion, I’m going to go ahead and put it in its own post and then start working on the update and the writers thread. Feel free to add your reaction – just be sure you put your reaction above the line – that will make it clear to others what opinions are mine and what are others. Thanks much!
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Post by pheebs on Sept 19, 2018 7:45:08 GMT -5
PHEEBS: Feel free to edit, change, or ask questions?
I won't be mad if it is changed, I think it needs a little more work.
I haven't decided if it will be a Warlock or Demoness of Obsession. Since a Warlock could create those love potions, or make her a Demoness. I know that we talked about Matthew as Piper's boyfriend. We still haven't decided where we are starting them as a couple, so this part can be changed easily. I haven't set at what point they are in a relationship, but It made the episode special, in the end, to have one Warren having their special day.
SUMMER: Maybe we don't even need any villain at all and make this another of the non-magical episodes. Maybe a Wicca store or something had a love potion, or maybe just two witches and one half of the couple wanted to make sure their partner never left them and made the potion, to give to them. Then it backfired and made matters worse.
What do you think? We did so well making our Christmas episode non-magical, and Animal Pragmatism was just three animals turned into humans. So why not do the same with our Valentines Day Episode.
But as always, these are just suggestions, you can go back to having it the way you set up before.
RUTH: Good story Pheebs. As for needing more work, I think just something more for Patience to add for remembering Victor. Since Prudence has her own story with the woman who knew Allen. But I really liked it.
I like what Paige and Phoebe do for Piper to make sure Matthew can come home for Piper on Valentines. I like the way we're not making the love interests a big part of the story. That he comes into the story, goes and comes back most likely when Piper is on trial or arrested. I gather this is what is considered right?
I'm not opposed to no-magical villains, and just sticking to just two innocents messed up with a love potion. Glad none of the Warrens take one and go love crazy. I like that it is just innocents or other witches needing to be saved.
PHEEBS: Thanks for the feedback. When I was writing, I did get to the end and had to figure out a villain. As for the Patience remembering Victor, yes that would be in it. But since this is a press release, not every single detail would be seen. But we might just need a little part for Patience remembering Victor in it.
We're still working out Piper and Matthew. But I knew since it was Valentines Day, that it felt sweet for one Warren to have something special.
I never considered or wanted any of the Warren's taking a love potion. I liked that that was part of the innocents needing saving.
As for Prudence and her story, I got inspiration from a real-life story I read last year. I wish I could have found it. About a widow who had been wondering who had been leaving flowers on her brothers grave for many years. I decided to do the same with Allen, and Prudence learning a little more about Allen. Of course, if people don't like it, feel free to edit it.
EDIT: I found the article (https://www.huffingtonpost.com.au/2017/11/18/a-mysterious-stranger-has-been-leaving-flowers-at-this-boys-grave-for-decades_a_23281419/)
Now, of course, It is nothing like this. But I got inspired by that for Prudence's story when she and Patience visit Allen and Victor's grave.
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Post by summerreading on Sept 19, 2018 20:01:32 GMT -5
PHEEBS: Feel free to edit, change, or ask questions?
I won't be mad if it is changed, I think it needs a little more work.
I haven't decided if it will be a Warlock or Demoness of Obsession. Since a Warlock could create those love potions, or make her a Demoness. I know that we talked about Matthew as Piper's boyfriend. We still haven't decided where we are starting them as a couple, so this part can be changed easily. I haven't set at what point they are in a relationship, but It made the episode special, in the end, to have one Warren having their special day.
SUMMER: Maybe we don't even need any villain at all and make this another of the non-magical episodes. Maybe a Wicca store or something had a love potion, or maybe just two witches and one half of the couple wanted to make sure their partner never left them and made the potion, to give to them. Then it backfired and made matters worse.
What do you think? We did so well making our Christmas episode non-magical, and Animal Pragmatism was just three animals turned into humans. So why not do the same with our Valentines Day Episode.
But as always, these are just suggestions, you can go back to having it the way you set up before.
RUTH: Good story Pheebs. As for needing more work, I think just something more for Patience to add for remembering Victor. Since Prudence has her own story with the woman who knew Allen. But I really liked it.
PHEEBS: Thanks for the feedback. When I was writing, I did get to the end and had to figure out a villain. As for the Patience remembering Victor, yes that would be in it. But since this is a press release, not every single detail would be seen. But we might just need a little part for Patience remembering Victor in it.
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RUTH: I like what Paige and Phoebe do for Piper to make sure Matthew can come home for Piper on Valentines. I like the way we're not making the love interests a big part of the story. That he comes into the story, goes and comes back most likely when Piper is on trial or arrested. I gather this is what is considered right?
PHEEBS: We're still working out Piper and Matthew. But I knew since it was Valentines Day, that it felt sweet for one Warren to have something special.
SUMMER: That we are, and I liked what you did with Piper's story. Any suggestions anyone on how we'd start Piper meeting Matthew? I don't think we'd want him anywhere near S1 of course? I also think S3 is the best start? But with my Wither Pox arc, he'd have to be introduced after that during episode 6 or 7, or even late S2.
Any ideas guys?
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RUTH: I'm not opposed to no-magical villains, and just sticking to just two innocents messed up with a love potion. Glad none of the Warrens take one and go love crazy. I like that it is just innocents or other witches needing to be saved.
PHEEBS: I never considered or wanted any of the Warren's taking a love potion. I liked that that was part of the innocents needing saving.
SUMMER: We could have gone down that path. But with the plots we have, it would have had to be Phoebe or Paige, and I like it being an innocents too instead.
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PHEEBS: As for Prudence and her story, I got inspiration from a real-life story I read last year. I wish I could have found it. About a widow who had been wondering who had been leaving flowers on her brothers grave for many years. I decided to do the same with Allen, and Prudence learning a little more about Allen. Of course, if people don't like it, feel free to edit it.
EDIT: I found the article (https://www.huffingtonpost.com.au/2017/11/18/a-mysterious-stranger-has-been-leaving-flowers-at-this-boys-grave-for-decades_a_23281419/)
PHEEBS: Now, of course, It is nothing like this. But I got inspired by that for Prudence's story when she and Patience visit Allen and Victor's grave.
SUMMER: Very interesting story in general. I like how you always keep getting inspired by what you find. Which any good writer does.
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Post by Granny Charmed on Sept 19, 2018 21:58:05 GMT -5
PHEEBS: Feel free to edit, change, or ask questions? I won't be mad if it is changed, I think it needs a little more work. I haven't decided if it will be a Warlock or Demoness of Obsession. Since a Warlock could create those love potions, or make her a Demoness. I know that we talked about Matthew as Piper's boyfriend. We still haven't decided where we are starting them as a couple, so this part can be changed easily. I haven't set at what point they are in a relationship, but It made the episode special, in the end, to have one Warren having their special day. SUMMER: Maybe we don't even need any villain at all and make this another of the non-magical episodes. Maybe a Wicca store or something had a love potion, or maybe just two witches and one half of the couple wanted to make sure their partner never left them and made the potion, to give to them. Then it backfired and made matters worse. What do you think? We did so well making our Christmas episode non-magical, and Animal Pragmatism was just three animals turned into humans. So why not do the same with our Valentines Day Episode. But as always, these are just suggestions, you can go back to having it the way you set up before. RUTH: Good story Pheebs. As for needing more work, I think just something more for Patience to add for remembering Victor. Since Prudence has her own story with the woman who knew Allen. But I really liked it. PHEEBS: Thanks for the feedback. When I was writing, I did get to the end and had to figure out a villain. As for the Patience remembering Victor, yes that would be in it. But since this is a press release, not every single detail would be seen. But we might just need a little part for Patience remembering Victor in it. ------------------------------------- RUTH: I like what Paige and Phoebe do for Piper to make sure Matthew can come home for Piper on Valentines. I like the way we're not making the love interests a big part of the story. That he comes into the story, goes and comes back most likely when Piper is on trial or arrested. I gather this is what is considered right? PHEEBS: We're still working out Piper and Matthew. But I knew since it was Valentines Day, that it felt sweet for one Warren to have something special. SUMMER: That we are, and I liked what you did with Piper's story. Any suggestions anyone on how we'd start Piper meeting Matthew? I don't think we'd want him anywhere near S1 of course? I also think S3 is the best start? But with my Wither Pox arc, he'd have to be introduced after that during episode 6 or 7, or even late S2. Any ideas guys? GRANNY: Well we know he'll return when Piper is arrested on trial in S4. But I do love dear that this means he won't take attetion off our five stars, the way Leo, Cole and Chris did. -------------------------------------RUTH: I'm not opposed to no-magical villains, and just sticking to just two innocents messed up with a love potion. Glad none of the Warrens take one and go love crazy. I like that it is just innocents or other witches needing to be saved. PHEEBS: I never considered or wanted any of the Warren's taking a love potion. I liked that that was part of the innocents needing saving. SUMMER: We could have gone down that path. But with the plots we have, it would have had to be Phoebe or Paige, and I like it being an innocents too instead. GRANNY: I agree on that dears. ------------------------------------- PHEEBS: As for Prudence and her story, I got inspiration from a real-life story I read last year. I wish I could have found it. About a widow who had been wondering who had been leaving flowers on her brothers grave for many years. I decided to do the same with Allen, and Prudence learning a little more about Allen. Of course, if people don't like it, feel free to edit it. EDIT: I found the article (https://www.huffingtonpost.com.au/2017/11/18/a-mysterious-stranger-has-been-leaving-flowers-at-this-boys-grave-for-decades_a_23281419/) PHEEBS: Now, of course, It is nothing like this. But I got inspired by that for Prudence's story when she and Patience visit Allen and Victor's grave. SUMMER: Very interesting story in general. I like how you always keep getting inspired by what you find. Which any good writer does. GRANNY: I remember this story dears last year, I was interested to find out if that second mystery got solved. Great job dear being inspired by real life events too to help with your writing.
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Post by pheebs on Sept 20, 2018 0:15:15 GMT -5
Again me having a little bit of fun too. But coming across articles for the Blu Ray I had to do a press release for it. I made it a two-day event on purpose, just so some actors or writers could appear on one day and others on another. Being realistic, that perhaps not all of them could do two days. I wanted to keep it strictly season 1 cast and crew. Feel free to edit, change or ask questions?
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Post by summerreading on Sept 20, 2018 7:28:22 GMT -5
Again me having a little bit of fun too. But coming across articles for the Blu Ray I had to do a press release for it. I made it a two-day event on purpose, just so some actors or writers could appear on one day and others on another. Being realistic, that perhaps not all of them could do two days. I wanted to keep it strictly season 1 cast and crew. Feel free to edit, change or ask questions? SUMMER: Great job Pheebs! Don't I wish this was real! (edited a small part, I guess the real author of the article you took pieces from said some things wrong)
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Post by marlenewicca on Sept 20, 2018 7:44:07 GMT -5
PHEEBS: Feel free to edit, change, or ask questions? I won't be mad if it is changed, I think it needs a little more work. I haven't decided if it will be a Warlock or Demoness of Obsession. Since a Warlock could create those love potions, or make her a Demoness. I know that we talked about Matthew as Piper's boyfriend. We still haven't decided where we are starting them as a couple, so this part can be changed easily. I haven't set at what point they are in a relationship, but It made the episode special, in the end, to have one Warren having their special day. SUMMER: Maybe we don't even need any villain at all and make this another of the non-magical episodes. Maybe a Wicca store or something had a love potion, or maybe just two witches and one half of the couple wanted to make sure their partner never left them and made the potion, to give to them. Then it backfired and made matters worse. What do you think? We did so well making our Christmas episode non-magical, and Animal Pragmatism was just three animals turned into humans. So why not do the same with our Valentines Day Episode. But as always, these are just suggestions, you can go back to having it the way you set up before. RUTH: Good story Pheebs. As for needing more work, I think just something more for Patience to add for remembering Victor. Since Prudence has her own story with the woman who knew Allen. But I really liked it. PHEEBS: Thanks for the feedback. When I was writing, I did get to the end and had to figure out a villain. As for the Patience remembering Victor, yes that would be in it. But since this is a press release, not every single detail would be seen. But we might just need a little part for Patience remembering Victor in it. ------------------------------------- RUTH: I like what Paige and Phoebe do for Piper to make sure Matthew can come home for Piper on Valentines. I like the way we're not making the love interests a big part of the story. That he comes into the story, goes and comes back most likely when Piper is on trial or arrested. I gather this is what is considered right? PHEEBS: We're still working out Piper and Matthew. But I knew since it was Valentines Day, that it felt sweet for one Warren to have something special. SUMMER: That we are, and I liked what you did with Piper's story. Any suggestions anyone on how we'd start Piper meeting Matthew? I don't think we'd want him anywhere near S1 of course? I also think S3 is the best start? But with my Wither Pox arc, he'd have to be introduced after that during episode 6 or 7, or even late S2. Any ideas guys? GRANNY: Well we know he'll return when Piper is arrested on trial in S4. But I do love dear that this means he won't take attention off our five stars, the way Leo, Cole and Chris did. MARLENE: Maybe he is an innocent who turns into a possible love interest, I don't see him showing up in S1, maybe in S3 sometime early in the season but after the Wither Pox arc. -------------------------------------RUTH: I'm not opposed to no-magical villains, and just sticking to just two innocents messed up with a love potion. Glad none of the Warrens take one and go love crazy. I like that it is just innocents or other witches needing to be saved. PHEEBS: I never considered or wanted any of the Warren's taking a love potion. I liked that that was part of the innocents needing saving. SUMMER: We could have gone down that path. But with the plots we have, it would have had to be Phoebe or Paige, and I like it being an innocents too instead. GRANNY: I agree on that dears. MARLENE: That does make a good story. ------------------------------------- PHEEBS: As for Prudence and her story, I got inspiration from a real-life story I read last year. I wish I could have found it. About a widow who had been wondering who had been leaving flowers on her brothers grave for many years. I decided to do the same with Allen, and Prudence learning a little more about Allen. Of course, if people don't like it, feel free to edit it. EDIT: I found the article (https://www.huffingtonpost.com.au/2017/11/18/a-mysterious-stranger-has-been-leaving-flowers-at-this-boys-grave-for-decades_a_23281419/) PHEEBS: Now, of course, It is nothing like this. But I got inspired by that for Prudence's story when she and Patience visit Allen and Victor's grave. SUMMER: Very interesting story in general. I like how you always keep getting inspired by what you find. Which any good writer does. GRANNY: I remember this story dears last year, I was interested to find out if that second mystery got solved. Great job dear being inspired by real life events too to help with your writing.
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