Post by Ruth Marie on Jun 9, 2019 17:28:39 GMT -5
ESMERLDA: I *finally* got a chance to start working on editing the unedited EC episodes! Here's my first try.
Ruth Marie
I changed yours quite a bit to make your fantastic plots more exciting. See what you think. Remember, if you don't like what I did with it, I won't be upset if you tell me so, so if I cut out a part you really like, even if I think it takes away from the drama, of course I'll put it back, since it's your story, not mine.
I also changed the titles because the way you wrote them, I can't count either the singer or Quinn as "innocents" due to the singer's desire for talent and fame and the fact that Quinn was able to be possessed means that she was harboring greed in her heart, meaning neither would've become victims if they were truly innocents.
If you disagree, let me know, and I'll change them back.
Ruth Marie
ELEMENTAL CHARMED (TV-14, DLV) (HDTV)
Season 2, Episode 14: ”The Innocents Who Weren't Innocent" (Part One)”
A DEMONIC MUSE? - Phoebe drags Piper and a few friends to see Susie Taylor perform in the first of three concerts at the Salem Civic Center. Although Susie Taylor is good, she’s not as good as Phoebe thought she would be. When Piper mentions how in the past year, Susie Taylor became very popular very quickly, Phoebe can’t help wondering if maybe Susie Taylor has a demonic muse working behind the scenes. When they get home and she mentions this to Piper, Piper thinks her younger sister is nuts-no way could that be the case.
The following morning, Patience is called to the Salem Civic Center parking lot where two women have been murdered. The next day she is called to another scene, again not from the Salem Civic Center.
Meanwhile Phoebe has been receiving strange gifts in the mail and fears that someone is stalking her. This is true, but it’s not quite what it seems.
Patience, Prudence, and Piper put their heads together and discover that Susie Taylor is under the control of the Demoness of Music. She uses talent and fame to mislead and control her victims. They make a pact with her to become both talented and famous, but use their music to send out subliminal messages of evil. These subliminal messages have influenced others to murder.
Piper brews a vanquishing potion ready for the Demoness of Music, while Phoebe writes a spell that will offset the influence of Susie Taylor’s music.
After they use the potion to vanquish the demoness, Patience and Phoebe see Susie Taylor leaving the Salem Civic Center, stopping to talk to some of her fans. Using her spell, Phoebe is able to stop the fans from committing murder while Patience calls the Jessica Lewis, her friend on the police force. Jessica arrives with her fellow officers and they arrest Susie Taylor on suspicion of murder. Susie Taylor tells the cops about the demoness, but, of course, only Jessica believes her, and she stays quiet. The police are certain that Susie Taylor is crazy and will be put into an insane asylum, which the Warrens think is a proper punishment for her.
Later, Jessica arrests Phoebe’s campus stalker and all the Warrens, especially Phoebe, are relieved to hear it.
What they don’t know is that in a nearby apartment building, there’s a little shrine to Piper. Next to the shrine is a note saying the person arrested was done to "to fool them". Yes, the stalker is still very much ll lurking, and she on purpose misdirected the cops to arrest the wrong person, and for stalking the wrong Warren.
Original airdate: Sunday, February 9, 2020, 8:00-9:00 PM ET
CBS-TV
-Ruth Marie
Season 2, Episode 14: ”The Innocents Who Weren't Innocent" (Part One)”
A DEMONIC MUSE? - Phoebe drags Piper and a few friends to see Susie Taylor perform in the first of three concerts at the Salem Civic Center. Although Susie Taylor is good, she’s not as good as Phoebe thought she would be. When Piper mentions how in the past year, Susie Taylor became very popular very quickly, Phoebe can’t help wondering if maybe Susie Taylor has a demonic muse working behind the scenes. When they get home and she mentions this to Piper, Piper thinks her younger sister is nuts-no way could that be the case.
The following morning, Patience is called to the Salem Civic Center parking lot where two women have been murdered. The next day she is called to another scene, again not from the Salem Civic Center.
Meanwhile Phoebe has been receiving strange gifts in the mail and fears that someone is stalking her. This is true, but it’s not quite what it seems.
Patience, Prudence, and Piper put their heads together and discover that Susie Taylor is under the control of the Demoness of Music. She uses talent and fame to mislead and control her victims. They make a pact with her to become both talented and famous, but use their music to send out subliminal messages of evil. These subliminal messages have influenced others to murder.
Piper brews a vanquishing potion ready for the Demoness of Music, while Phoebe writes a spell that will offset the influence of Susie Taylor’s music.
After they use the potion to vanquish the demoness, Patience and Phoebe see Susie Taylor leaving the Salem Civic Center, stopping to talk to some of her fans. Using her spell, Phoebe is able to stop the fans from committing murder while Patience calls the Jessica Lewis, her friend on the police force. Jessica arrives with her fellow officers and they arrest Susie Taylor on suspicion of murder. Susie Taylor tells the cops about the demoness, but, of course, only Jessica believes her, and she stays quiet. The police are certain that Susie Taylor is crazy and will be put into an insane asylum, which the Warrens think is a proper punishment for her.
Later, Jessica arrests Phoebe’s campus stalker and all the Warrens, especially Phoebe, are relieved to hear it.
What they don’t know is that in a nearby apartment building, there’s a little shrine to Piper. Next to the shrine is a note saying the person arrested was done to "to fool them". Yes, the stalker is still very much ll lurking, and she on purpose misdirected the cops to arrest the wrong person, and for stalking the wrong Warren.
Original airdate: Sunday, February 9, 2020, 8:00-9:00 PM ET
CBS-TV
-Ruth Marie
ELEMENTAL CHARMED (TV-14, DLV) (HDTV)
Season 2, Episode 15: ”The Innocents Who Weren't Innocent (Part Two)”
WILL THE STALKER WIN? - Near sunrise all the Warrens are sleeping, we see the stalker lurking inside her car, looking at a notepad: "Piper awakens earlier than the others by at least one hour, especially on Mondays, delivery day for her restaurant. This will make the perfect opportunity."
So, a little later when Piper is putting the trash inside the bin, just as she is about to close the lid, the stalker comes up behind her and knocks her out cold with a pot paint. She picks Piper up, carries her to her car and drives off.
Later that morning, the Warrens go about their day as per normal, since it’s Monday, so of course Piper went to her restaurant early to handle the delivery. Paige tends to an ongoing case at SSS; Phoebe is in class, Patience finishes processing photos in her dark room at the station, and Prudence tends to some odds and ends around the Manor.
Jessica Lewis, Patience’s friend on the force, comes running into the dark room, telling her she has a match for the fingerprints for the stalker and it’s not who they thought it was, but Jacinta Gomez, Prudence's former co-workers. Hearing this, Patience is sure that Jacinta did that on purpose in order to throw the Warrens off her trail.
Patience goes to the hospital with Jessica and they open Jacinta's locker to find pictures of Piper, Piper's favorite perfume and notes on Piper's movements. Patience remembers that a few months ago Prudence let Piper and Phoebe volunteer at the hospital when they were trying to keep a young innocent safe. She sure that that’s when Jacinta’s obsession with Piper began.
Patience calls Piper's restaurant and is shocked to discover that Piper never showed up for work. She gets permission from Jessica to bring on of the pictures of Piper home to the Manor. When her mother touches one of the pictures, she gets a premonition of Piper tied to a chair with Jacinta hovering over her.
Meanwhile, five hours after her capture, Piper finally awakens. She recognizes Jacinta from her volunteering stint at the hospital, but she is dressed to look just like Piper. Piper realizes Jacinta is obsessed with her and wants to be her. Even as she tries talking with Jacinta, trying to convince her that being Piper isn’t all it’s cracked up to be, she manages to untie herself and tries to make a run for it with Jacinta chasing her and firing a gun at her. Jacinta yells that once Piper is dead, Jacinta will become Piper and no one will notice the difference. Now Piper is really scared as she realizes she’s trapped with a woman who is criminally insane.
As Paige and Phoebe use a scrying crystal to find where Piper is located at, Prudence touches one of the photos and gets a vision of Jacinta shooting Piper in the abandoned factory. Paige transports them to the factory, but will they get there in time to save Piper, and how do they save her without Jacinta finding out that they are witches?
Original airdate: Sunday, February 16, 2020, 8:00-9:00 PM ET
CBS-TV
-Ruth Marie
Season 2, Episode 15: ”The Innocents Who Weren't Innocent (Part Two)”
WILL THE STALKER WIN? - Near sunrise all the Warrens are sleeping, we see the stalker lurking inside her car, looking at a notepad: "Piper awakens earlier than the others by at least one hour, especially on Mondays, delivery day for her restaurant. This will make the perfect opportunity."
So, a little later when Piper is putting the trash inside the bin, just as she is about to close the lid, the stalker comes up behind her and knocks her out cold with a pot paint. She picks Piper up, carries her to her car and drives off.
Later that morning, the Warrens go about their day as per normal, since it’s Monday, so of course Piper went to her restaurant early to handle the delivery. Paige tends to an ongoing case at SSS; Phoebe is in class, Patience finishes processing photos in her dark room at the station, and Prudence tends to some odds and ends around the Manor.
Jessica Lewis, Patience’s friend on the force, comes running into the dark room, telling her she has a match for the fingerprints for the stalker and it’s not who they thought it was, but Jacinta Gomez, Prudence's former co-workers. Hearing this, Patience is sure that Jacinta did that on purpose in order to throw the Warrens off her trail.
Patience goes to the hospital with Jessica and they open Jacinta's locker to find pictures of Piper, Piper's favorite perfume and notes on Piper's movements. Patience remembers that a few months ago Prudence let Piper and Phoebe volunteer at the hospital when they were trying to keep a young innocent safe. She sure that that’s when Jacinta’s obsession with Piper began.
Patience calls Piper's restaurant and is shocked to discover that Piper never showed up for work. She gets permission from Jessica to bring on of the pictures of Piper home to the Manor. When her mother touches one of the pictures, she gets a premonition of Piper tied to a chair with Jacinta hovering over her.
Meanwhile, five hours after her capture, Piper finally awakens. She recognizes Jacinta from her volunteering stint at the hospital, but she is dressed to look just like Piper. Piper realizes Jacinta is obsessed with her and wants to be her. Even as she tries talking with Jacinta, trying to convince her that being Piper isn’t all it’s cracked up to be, she manages to untie herself and tries to make a run for it with Jacinta chasing her and firing a gun at her. Jacinta yells that once Piper is dead, Jacinta will become Piper and no one will notice the difference. Now Piper is really scared as she realizes she’s trapped with a woman who is criminally insane.
As Paige and Phoebe use a scrying crystal to find where Piper is located at, Prudence touches one of the photos and gets a vision of Jacinta shooting Piper in the abandoned factory. Paige transports them to the factory, but will they get there in time to save Piper, and how do they save her without Jacinta finding out that they are witches?
Original airdate: Sunday, February 16, 2020, 8:00-9:00 PM ET
CBS-TV
-Ruth Marie
RUTH: Es, I LOVE IT! Love the title too. Good job!