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Post by ~:*Destiny*:~ on Mar 9, 2008 13:37:14 GMT -5
;D so awesome! I love it!
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Post by ~.:Alysha:.~ on Mar 10, 2008 0:07:20 GMT -5
Very good chick..I love it!! Please update!! Man there are so many amazing fanfics around at the moment especially yours, sammis and Primose and Es's! Great work
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Post by Esmeralda on Mar 14, 2008 22:28:52 GMT -5
Hey, pipercharmedphreak! Are you going to update this soon?? I'm *very* curious to see how you're going to handle this! And I *LOVE* you letting Prue be part of Forever Charmed!!
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Post by ~B@MeLiSsA30@B~ on Mar 16, 2008 16:06:13 GMT -5
This story is amazing. I love it. You're doing a fantastic job. ;D Looking forward on reading more.
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Post by pipercharmedphreak on Mar 16, 2008 16:47:26 GMT -5
Hey, pipercharmedphreak! Are you going to update this soon?? I'm *very* curious to see how you're going to handle this! And I *LOVE* you letting Prue be part of Forever Charmed!! Sorry, it's been a while since an update. I am totally swamped with work and school right now. I'll get my next part ASAP! Sorry for the wait.
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Post by Esmeralda on Mar 16, 2008 17:23:47 GMT -5
I understand totally! I just wanted to be sure that you hadn't forgotten about this wonderful fic!! I'm SOOO glad to hear that you haven't!
*looking forward to next update*
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Post by pipercharmedphreak on Mar 24, 2008 10:33:01 GMT -5
Thanks for you AMAZING reviews! ;D Here is my next installment, kinda short so I apologize; however I am off from work AND school this week so I can work on this LOTS! So without further ado, happy reading!
Part 4 (Int. Mausoleum)
"Pheebs!" Prue called. No response.
The footsteps of the sisters and Leo echoed throughout the mausoleum. Poorly lit and dank, the mausoeum felt eerily empty. The trio descended down the steps.
Suddenly Piper let out a slight shriek, "Spider!"
Prue let out a breath. "You can fight demons on a weekly basis, but you can't handle a little spider?" Prue lovingly teased her sister.
Piper scrunched her nose at Prue.
"I don't think she's here." Leo spoke
"Damn it!" Prue said under her breath. "What do we do now?"
Piper didn't answer. Her mind was elsewhere, remembering another time when Phoebe had let the family down.
"You think I abandoned you. You think it's my fault that Prue died. You blame me." Phoebe's voice called out in Piper's head. How does she always manage to be off somewhere, when we need her most; when the lives of this family are at stake. -----------------------
To Be Continued
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Post by Primrose_Empath on Mar 24, 2008 10:47:09 GMT -5
Yay! A new update. *grins* And don't worry -- an update's an update, even if it's a short one. And a nice update that was -- it sets us up for what's to come. I look forward to reading more when you get it posted up.
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Post by *Prueforever* on Mar 24, 2008 10:58:44 GMT -5
I love your fanfic Pipercharmedphreak ;D
Great job i cant wait to read more !!!
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Post by *Sammi!* on Mar 24, 2008 12:07:53 GMT -5
Great job! Update soon!
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Post by pipercharmedphreak on Mar 25, 2008 9:47:55 GMT -5
Aww! Thanks guys! *Big hugs* And now, feast your eyes upon my newly added update!!
Part 5
Prue always had a sense for when one of her sisters needed her, she could tell Piper was hurting. Prue grabbed Piper's hands and held them in hers. She looked at the middle Charmed One eye to eye.
"The spell," Prue suddenly thought. "What about the spell that you and Leo used to bring you here?"
Piper's eyes again had a sparkle. She bit her bottom lip.
And that's why your the oldest Prue.
Leo, however, did not look so convinced.
"Are you sure? That spell brought us here from five years in the future. Who knows where it would take us. Using it would be like shooting in the dark." The whitelighter type advice flowed from Leo's lips. He may not have been a whitelighter anymore but that didn't mean he lost the whitelighter mentality.
Piper let go of the comforting hold of Prue and turned to Leo. "If we do this right, it WILL take us to Phoebe. Besides, a shot in the dark is all we've got."
Leo's eyes softened. He didn't want to lose Phoebe or Paige either. He didn't want Piper to lose her sisters or his sons to lose their aunties. Leo knew that taking this risk was one he was at last content with.
Piper reached in her pocket, pulling out Coop's ring. Prue grabbed Piper's hand while Leo rested his hand on her shoulder. Piper leaned into Leo. She took a breath, closed her eyes and thought of Phoebe.
[Flashback (Episode 1.01 - Something Wicca This Way Comes)
Piper: Phoebe's good with a wrench.
Prue: Phoebe lives in New York.
Piper: Not anymore.
Prue: What?
Piper: She left New York. She's moving back in with us.
Prue: You have got to be kidding.
Piper: Well, I could hardly say no. It's her house too. Grams left it to all three of us.
Prue: Yeah, months ago and we haven't seen or spoken to her since.
Piper: Well, you haven't spoken to her.
Prue: No, I haven't. Look, maybe you've forgotten why I'm still mad at her.
Piper: No, of course not but she had nowhere else to go. She lost her job, she's in debt.
Prue: And this is news? How long have you known about this anyway?
Piper: A couple of days, maybe a week-or two.
Prue: Thanks for sharing. When does she arrive?
(The front door opens and Phoebe walks in.)
Phoebe: Surprise! I found the hide-a-key.
Piper: Phoebe, welcome home.
End Flashback]
"Hear these words, hear this rhyme, we send to you this loving sign, follow our hearts to those we need, in another place, another time."
To Be Continued... ------------------------- Please Review!
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Post by ~.:Alysha:.~ on Mar 25, 2008 19:05:31 GMT -5
Love the update.. Thats typical Leo always worrying lol...hmm will it take them to the right place!! Dum Dum Da!! I hope so! I wish this was how the show actually ended because i would to of seen Prue back in it again!! Really would of been amazing! Stupid Kern lol!! GRRRR haha anyway enough of me babbling!! Cant wait for the next update
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Post by ~:*Destiny*:~ on Mar 25, 2008 19:16:44 GMT -5
Great update pipercharmedphreak! Sorry I haven't been keeping up to date with it but it's really good soo far! ;D
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Post by Primrose_Empath on Mar 26, 2008 9:27:57 GMT -5
You're more than welcome sweetie! *big hug back*
I'll echo Phoebe_Halliwell when I say that I wish that this was how the series had actually ended. It makes so much more sense than what Kernus and Co. came up with. And I love how you've written the relationship between the oldest and the middle, it's very well done. Please keep the updates coming whenever you can, as I'd like to see how all this turns out.
And somebody took the words right outta my mouth! *grins*
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Post by Esmeralda on Mar 26, 2008 11:15:38 GMT -5
OOPS! Sorry, pipercharmedphreak; I'm pulling on you what I pull on Sammi--thinking I've replied to an update and then find out that I didn't so I get behind.
Your first one, although short, was beautifully written. I love all your detail and your sticking with consistency--I can imagine Piper's reaction towards spiders after what happened during "Spin City'! and Prue's line reminded me of what she told Piper when Piper didn't want to stick her finger during "The Witch is Back". Great job!!
Oh, oh, no Phoebe! Where is that girl?? And I loved your flashback which shows how seldom Phoebe is around when she's truly needed.
*off to read next update*
Oh! What a fantastically wonderful update!! I totally adored it!! I loved Prue being there when her sisters needed her, unlike Phoebe. I loved letting Piper understand why Prue's the oldest and why she's done such a rotten job as leader of the Charmed Ones that it's caused the deaths of her sisters. I loved Leo acting the whitelighter I love even if he now a useless mortal out of his own time. And I loved the flashback that she uses to help them find Phoebe. And, oh, do I love how you took the time-travel spell and made it to fit what the sisters want!
OHHH, I hope it works!! And can't wait to find out what happens when/if it does! PLEEEEEEEEEASE update soon!
And for the wonderful updates, here's a blessing!
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Post by pipercharmedphreak on Mar 27, 2008 13:34:52 GMT -5
You guys certainly know how to brighten a writers day! Happy Reading! Part 6(Int. Phoebe's Loft- Late Morning) Piper let go of Prue and Leo's hands. She felt a wave of disappointment rush over her. It didn't work. The sting of tears plagued Piper once again. "Where are we?" Prue asked. "It didn't work." Piper replied dryly, with a lump in her throat. A rustling sound came from the kitchen. Piper raised an eyebrow at Leo, knowing that there was no one here when the two departed. Prue looked at Piper, nearly reading her mind. Having such a strong sisterly bond came with the perk of knowing what each was going to say, or what was being thought. Quietly they walked toward the kitchen. Phoebe stood at the counter pouring a tall glass of orange juice. "I thought you said it didn't work." Prue sniped Piper's eyes wandered until they found a newspaper sitting on the breakfast tray. "2009?" Piper sounded confused. "Prue, it DID work. We're in the future. But Phoebe's ...dead in the future. How..." Piper struggled with saying the word 'dead' following after Phoebe's name. Her voice trailed off. "We came here from 2001, not 2006 so the future would be different. Every action we take changes the future. Do you see Phoebe burning on a pyre?" Leo explained. His whitelighter knowledge seemed to come to good use at one point or another. Piper took a step into kitchen. "I hope you have a plan" Prue said under her breath, following her. Phoebe looked up from cooking breakfast. Her eyes widened as she examined each person standing before her in the kitchen. A look in Phoebe's eyes gave it away that she knew they were not the Piper, Prue and Leo of 2009. Her hand reached for the nearest knife. "Paige!" Phoebe called loudly. Blue orbs began to materialize. To Be Continued ------------------------------
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Post by ~:*Destiny*:~ on Mar 27, 2008 13:38:15 GMT -5
Great update! ;D For this update I will bless you!
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Post by Primrose_Empath on Mar 28, 2008 10:03:21 GMT -5
Did I miss an update? Shame on me! But it's just what I needed to brighten up my rather gloomy Friday. *smiles* Ahh, looks like they found Phoebe and she's alive too, thankfully. But I can't say as I blame Phoebs for being confused about the sudden appearance of three people in her kitchen who are obviously not from this time period. Don't know 'bout you, but that would most definitely freak me out. Please update soon -- I'd like to see what you have up your sleeve next!
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Post by ~.:Alysha:.~ on Apr 2, 2008 19:53:31 GMT -5
Yeah man Fantastic update, i missed it also!! I also understand why Phoebe would be a little on edge i mean Prue's not around anymore in 2009, id be a little freaked out to if i saw my dead sister standing right in front of me.. Cant wait to read more!! This is awesome!!
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Post by ~*Alicia*~ on Apr 3, 2008 18:31:10 GMT -5
Loved it!! Very well written I love the fact that you described Piper and Prue's realtionship. I'll bless you!!
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