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Post by XxP3HalliwellxX on Apr 17, 2005 10:18:33 GMT -5
The Return of Prue Part 2, Chapter 6 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ THE ATTIC
“Prue, your corporeal?!” Paige said with surprise. Piper and Phoebe turned around, afraid of what they were about to see. “Pru.. Prue?” Piper asked starting to cry. “Yes, that’s me!” Prue replied with a grin. “OMG, Prue!” Phoebe replied with astonishment. Piper and Phoebe ran towards Prue and started hugging her. “I missed you so much!” Piper said crying. “I know, and so did I!” Prue replied with a smile. “What took you so long?” Phoebe asked whipping away her tears. “They wouldn’t let me come down, besides I’m here now!” Prue laughed. “You missed so much while you were gone,” Piper said. “I know, and I’m sorry about you and Leo,” Prue said. Piper still hugging Prue. “Prue, why did you leave us?” Piper asked. “I didn’t want too, when I left my body I started floating higher and higher to the ceiling; then all of a sudden I was in a place. It was all white, it was the most beautiful thing I’ve ever seen. When I turned around I saw Grams and mom. At the time I didn’t know where I was. Grams and mom looked at me and they put on a weak smile. I asked them where I was and they didn’t reply. I finally remembered that I was thrown through a wall. I asked; “Am I dead?” And they said yes sweetie. Then I said I have to go back, I can’t be dead, Piper and Phoebe need me. They will be vulnerable without the power of three. Mom said that Leo was able heal Piper, but because I went through the wall first, the minutes that Leo was late were lost to save me. But It wasn’t Leo’s fault, it was the sources’ fault,” Prue finished. Piper started crying again. “Prue, I’m so happy you’re here!” Piper said with joy. Paige was standing on the side listening. Prue glanced up at Paige. Piper let go of prue. “Paige…” Prue whispered. Paige looked up. “Yes,” Paige answered. Prue walked up to Paige and gave her a hug. “Thank you for saving my sisters, without you they never would have held it all together,” Prue said with a smile. Phoebe and Piper were smiling. They walked up to Prue and Paige and they all embraced into a big family hug. "Your truely a Halliwell," Prue said. “Your something you know that; You were able to up conjure those doves…I never was able to do it,” Prue grinned. “Well, thanks; I learned from the best,” Paige smiled. “Prue turned to Piper. “ I never knew you had such anger and sadness when I left, Piper; but I’m glad you let it out, or else I would have come back to an angry Piper,” Prue laughed. “I guess I did, but I would still be happy that you were here, even though I might have chased you around the manor screaming at you,” Piper kidded. “I know what you mean,” Prue replied. “Prue…” Paige trailed off. “The demon,” Paige frowned. Phoebe and Piper looked at Paige with guilt. “I’m sorry that I didn’t believe you Paige,” Piper said. “That’s okay, it would have been hard for me to believe if I was in your shoes,” Paige replied with a light smile. “What were you saying about the demon, Prue?” Phoebe asked with concern. “You guys didn’t vanquish him!” Prue said with a frown. “We didn’t? is that possible? The three of us saw him blow up,” Piper replied. I know, but this particular demon doesn’t die with that kind of spell; and Banningstan would’ve come back when all of you were unprepared and unaware,” Prue said. “I don’t want you three joining me!” Then what do we do, we looked in the book and the only spell in there was the one we used on him,” Phoebe asked. Prue turned to Paige. “Remember I told you there was more?” Prue said slowly. “Yes, but you didn’t get to finish,” Paige said getting annoyed. “Well, the news I’m about to give you is even worse,” Prue said with concern. “What is it?” Piper asked nervously. “Banningstan has a brother,” Prue replied. “That’s not too bad, we can vanquish him also,” Phoebe said. “It is bad, because the only way you can vanquish them is too vanquish them together!” Prue replied. “Oh….that is bad,” Phoebe said getting a little scared. “What do we do?” Paige asked sitting down on the couch. “You need to use a powerful spell using the power of three, but the spell is very dangerous, it contains ingredients that can destroy the manor, including all of you,” Prue replied with a frown. “And— “There’s more?” Phoebe asked. “Yes,” Prue replied. “Well it can be all that bad, we vanquished several demons before,” Piper said. “What you don’t understand is that when their together they are the most powerful demons; more powerful then Shax,” Prue replied with frustration. Getting them together is hard, over the last hundreds of years they gathered powers from witches, demons, and warlocks. When our line encountered him hundreds of years ago they didn’t know he had a brother called; Jeksog. When they used the vanquishing spell on Banningstan it didn’t work, but they didn’t know that, it just appeared that he was vanquished. So Banningstan and Jeksog waited until they had enough powers to destroy the Warren line. But now that they know the prophecy has come true; The most powerful witches of time, the power of three; they want your powers. And if they get your powers the whole world is in danger. Chaos would take over, and evil will rule the world,” Prue frowned. “If we all work together we could vanquish them, we just have to be prepared and ready for this fight, Paige said nervously. “Or we will be dead witches, something we don’t want to happen,” Phoebe said. “Were about to defeat the biggest evil on earth; lets show them that we don’t play around, we are truly The Power of Three,” Piper grinned. "I hope they can pull this off, Wyatt and Chris are going to need their aunts, and their mother; they can't lose their mother at a age like this, their too young. I don't want Piper to repeat what our mother did to us," Prue thought. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Please post reviews if you would like me to continue to Chapter 7, Thanks!
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Post by CharmBffy on May 1, 2005 0:35:59 GMT -5
i really like it it's real good keep up the great work
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Post by piperhollyamy on May 4, 2005 11:19:38 GMT -5
I like your story. I am anxious for the end please post soon! You are doing a great Job!
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Post by piperhollyamy on May 4, 2005 11:19:58 GMT -5
I like your story. I am anxious for the end please post soon! You are doing a great Job!
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Post by XxP3HalliwellxX on May 4, 2005 15:25:42 GMT -5
Thanks the reviews everyone...I'm sorry I hadn't updated in over two weeks...I promise I'll try and have Chapter 7 by tonight.
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Post by XxP3HalliwellxX on May 4, 2005 21:58:26 GMT -5
OKay everyone here is chapter 7. It might be the shortest chapter I've done but I promise the next one will be longer. It doesn't have much action, but a lot of talking. You'll also find out more about the situation. Hope you enjoy it! ;D
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Post by XxP3HalliwellxX on May 4, 2005 22:01:24 GMT -5
Chapter 7 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ THE ATTIC Phoebe was pacing back in forth in the attic while Piper and Prue were thinking of a plan to vanquish Jeksog and Banningstan. “Phoebe!” Piper snapped. “What?” Phoebe asked. “Can you stop pacing, your giving me a headache; did you think of a vanquishing spell yet?” Piper asked. “No, I can’t think of one, I’m so nervous,” Phoebe, sighed. “That’s okay sweetie, we all are,” Prue said giving phoebe a supporting smile. Paige walked into the attic carrying ingredients. “Okay, here are all the ingredients we have,” Paige said as she walks up to the table and lays them all down. Prue walks up to the table and glances down at all the ingredients. “We might need more, but…we’ll try to make the vanquishing spell with what we have, we don’t have the time to go to the Wicca shop for more,” Prue said with a sigh. Piper walks up to the table with the BOS and lays it down next to the ingredients. “So…what are we using?” Piper asks. “Hmm…. well, we want to make a really strong potion; however, we don’t want to blow up the manor,” Prue says. “Well duh,” Phoebe says putting on a grin. Phoebe kneels down on the floor next to Prue and watches her pick up several different ingredients. Paige was sitting on the sofa in deep thoughts, blocking all sound around her. Piper looked up and turned her head toward Paige. “Paige…what’s wrong?” Piper asks with concern in her voice. Paige did not respond. Prue and Phoebe stood up and walked towards Paige. Prue knelt down and looked Paige in the eyes. “Paige are you okay? Hello…earth to Paige?” Prue said waving her hands in front of her. “What…huh…oh I’m sorry, what were you saying?” Paige asked. “Nothing, I just noticed you went off into your own little world, is something wrong?” Piper asks putting her hand on Paige’s shoulder. “No, I was just thinking about the girl who was murdered in her house the other day,” Paige replied leaning back on the sofa. “What girl?” Prue asked confused. “The one that was on the news, she was murdered in her apartment the other day, she had a symbol burned into her right palm and was stabbed multiple times. “We never really found out if she was killed by a demon, or by a human,” Paige says while brushing some hair out of her face. “Sure we do…Banningstan killed her,” Piper says. “No we don’t Piper; we just assumed he did, we don’t have any real evidence that he did,” Paige says frowning. “Well why don’t we try a séance, to contact the women who was murdered; I know you tried it when you saved that man’s life a few years ago when you were part of a jury,” Prue suggests. “You know about that?” Phoebe asks with astonishment. “Of course, I’ve been watching you guys ever since I died,” Prue replies with a smile. You didn’t watch when me and Leo…you know,” Piper asked mid-sentence. “NOO!! Gross, why would I do that Piper; I don’t invade into your privacy, I don’t even know why you asked that,” Prue said quickly. “Oh; okay,” Piper said with embarrassment. “Hello…can we get back to the subject please?” Paige asked with annoyance. Sorry Paige, we got off track,” Piper says. “Phoebe, you get the six candles, and a white cloth; Piper, you get the cinnamon, and the frankincense; and Paige you get the sandalwood,” Prue says enjoying the leadership role. “Jeez Prue, you’ve only been here an hour and a Half and your already bossing us around?” Piper asks. “Like always,” Prue grins. Piper only joking around, misses being bossed around by her older sister. After a few minutes everything is ready. “Okay everyone; get ready, were going to have a séance,” Prue says confidently. Paige, Phoebe and Piper glance at each other; not sure what their about to summon. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Please post reviews here if you would like me to continue to chapter 8. Give me bad or good comments, it helps me write my stories better. Thanks!
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Post by CharmBffy on May 5, 2005 22:15:22 GMT -5
i like it i can't wait to see what goin to happen next so keep it up
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Post by PRcharmedfan on May 8, 2005 22:42:11 GMT -5
WOW, Its crazy i can wait to continued reading!
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Post by XxP3HalliwellxX on May 8, 2005 22:53:25 GMT -5
Thanks for the reviews everyone! I was so inspired to keep theis fanfic going! I promise I'll try to have the next chapter by tonight or some time tomorrow! Thanks again!
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Post by XxP3HalliwellxX on May 10, 2005 7:37:38 GMT -5
Here's chapter 8 everyone! I hope you guys enjoy it!! ;D
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Post by XxP3HalliwellxX on May 10, 2005 7:39:14 GMT -5
Chapter 8 :::::::::Jeksog, Banningstan, and Mavic belongs to me only! Please don’t steal my characters!::::::: ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ THE ATTIC
All six candles were in a circle in the middle of the room. You would only see the dim light from each candle and the faces of the sisters. They sat in a row and grabbed each other’s hands. “Okay everyone, recite the spell with feeling towards the person were summoning; since we don’t have a name we will have to use “unknown” in the replace of the person’s name,” Prue said confidently. “Okay,” the other sisters replied together. “Ready?” Prue asked as she looked at her sisters. Piper, Phoebe, and Paige nodded in agreement. All four recited;
“Hear these words Hear our cry Spirit from the other side Come to us we summon thee Cross now the great divide, Beloved spirit that is unknown to us, We seek your guidance, We ask that you commune with us And move among us.” The sisters waited for a response; but did not receive one. “Did something go wrong?” Paige asked with confusion evident in her voice. “Sshhh…just watch,” Prue whispered. “After a few moments of silence a soft breeze swept over the sisters and the candles. The sister’s looked up as white light formed in the middle of the circle. After the figure formed it was of a young girl. She had to be in her early twenties; she had brown shoulder length hair and green eyes. The young girl looked upon the strangers and looked just as shocked as they did. “She looks so young and innocent,” Phoebe thought. “Where am I?” the young girl asked. “The sisters glanced at each other unsure how to tell her that she was dead. “Umm…I sorry to tell you but your dead,” Phoebe said slowly. “Phoebe!” Piper snapped.
“What? how else were we supposed to tell her?” Phoebe snapped back. “Please stop,” The young girl asked with kindness. Piper and Phoebe stopped arguing and looked at the young girl in the circle. “It’s okay, there is no need to tell me that I'm dead,” The young girl said. “Why?” Prue asked. “Because I already know I'm dead, and I have accepted my fate,” the young girl says slowly. “You do?” Paige asked with confusion. “Yes,” The young girl says while looking at Prue. Prue looks at the young girl and smiles. “I remember you now,” Prue says confidently. Piper, Phoebe, and Paige look at Prue shockingly. “Do you know her Prue?” Piper asks cautiously. “Well not really, I met her in the after world,” Prue replies. “That is correct,” The young girl says. “What is your name?” Phoebe asks. “Linnea…Linnea Lotti,” The girl replies. “So how long have you known my sister?” Piper asks. “Not long, we were just introduced…wait did you say sister?” Linnea asks cautiously. “Yes…why?” Piper asks nervously. “You wouldn’t happen to be the Charmed Ones, would you?” Linnea asks curiously. The sisters glance at each other. Yes,” the sister’s replied. “Great!” Linnea shouts excitedly. “You know us?” Paige asks. “Well not really, I was told to give you a message,” Linnea says. “Well we summoned to ask you something also,” Prue says. “Did a demon kill you?” Phoebe asks. Linnea looks down. “Yes, and I wasn’t expecting it either,” Linnea replies sadly. “What was the message you wanted to give us?” Paige asks. Linnea looks at Prue. “Your mother needs you back in the afterworld, it’s urgent,” Linnea replies with a frown. “Is it serious?” Prue asks. At that moment a demon appears behind the sisters.
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Post by PRcharmedfan on May 10, 2005 16:23:33 GMT -5
`thanks for telling about the new post. i really liked it i but i stood wanting to read more. notify me when youve finished the next chapter thanks bye bye! ;D
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Post by CharmBffy on May 11, 2005 16:43:52 GMT -5
:Dyes thanks for notifing about the new chapter i like this chapter it was good and plz notify me again when it's up and ready can't wait for more
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Post by XxP3HalliwellxX on May 11, 2005 18:17:22 GMT -5
Okay everyone, here chapter 9! There's a twist to it! So I hope everyone enjoys it as much as I enjoyed writing it!! Also, thanks to everyoen who posted reviews, I really appreciated it!! ;D
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Post by XxP3HalliwellxX on May 11, 2005 18:20:48 GMT -5
Chapter 9! Jeksog, Banningstan, and Mavic belong to me only! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ THE ATTIC “Watch out!” Linnea yelled. “What…where?” Phoebe asked quickly. “Behind you!” Linnea said quickly. Piper was the first one to turn around. “Oh my god! Demon!” Paige yelled. Piper was in a state of shock after seeing a 7 ft demon with sharp teeth, orange and green skin, and wearing all back with a dagger tied around it’s waist with a rope. “Piper! Blow it up!” Phoebe yelled. Piper didn’t respond as the demon moved toward Prue at a fast speed. Piper finally came back to her senses as she saw the demon just a few feet away from Prue. “I’m not going to let her die this time,” Piper thought. Without thinking, Piper pushed Prue out of the way and took the full force of the demon. She went flying across the room and slammed into the wall of the attic unconscious. “Piper!” Paige yelled. Prue was starting to stand up as she looked towards her fallen sister. . Mean while Phoebe already started to attack the demon. Linnea was in the middle of the circle watching in horror as the scene in front of her unfolded. The demon punched Phoebe in the gut after Phoebe throwing a few blows. She fell to the ground with a thud and slowly tried to stand up again but the demon put his foot on her back and grabbed his dagger. Paige yelled; “Dagger!” as it orbed into her hands. Phoebe grabbed the demon’s ankle and pulled him down to the floor. Phoebe stood up and was about to run too Piper but the demon was already on his feet again and he grabbed hold of her hair that threw her onto the floor. Phoebe groaned as she tried to stand up. Paige was about to orb the dagger back to the demon but noticed blood on it. “Phoebe?” are you okay?” Paige asked as began run towards her. “Yes! A few bruises here and there, I’ll live,” Phoebe yelled. The demon kicked phoebe into the gut as she tried to stand once more. Phoebe, sensing Paige wanting to help her she yelled out; “Paige, stay back! He’s to strong!” Phoebe groaned. “Are you sure you’re not hurt? He didn’t stab you?” Paige asked worriedly. “No…why?” Phoebe asked. “Because there’s blood on the dagger!” Paige yelled. The demon turned around and grinned. “Oh…. no…PIPER!” Prue yelled. Prue stood up after regaining from the dizziness and started to run towards Piper. The demon reacted quickly and ran toward her and saw the rug she was running on and grabbed it from under feet. Prue went slamming to the floor. The candles that were lit around in the circle tipped over and one of them lit the carpet on fire. “I’m sorry I couldn’t be of any help,” Linnea said sadly as she faded away. “Oh my god! Fire!” Phoebe yelled from the floor. Paige spun around and saw the fire spreading towards Prue. “Extinguisher!” Paige yelled. An extinguisher orbed into Paige’s hands and she sprayed it all over the carpet letting out the fire. Phoebe stood up slowly and kicked his feet from underneath him. He fell to the ground and was about to get up again. “Paige, help Piper! I think she’s bleeding!” Phoebe yelled. Phoebe looked down at the demon as he shimmered out. “What the hell?” Phoebe said confusingly. A second later the demon shimmered behind her and grabbed her by the neck and slammed her into the attic wall holding her up in the air with his hands and started choking her. “Pai…Paige….the…the Dagg….dagger,” Phoebe chocked. Paige turned around and threw the dagger at the demon’s back and stabbed him. Phoebe fell to the ground and began to rub her neck. The demon screamed in pain and shimmered out leaving an echo of his screams behind. “Are you okay?” Paige asked worridly. Yes, just help Piper! I’ll get Prue!” Phoebe said in a scratchy voice as she tried to stand up. Paige ran towards Piper as she noticed a trail of blood on the floor. “Piper!” Paige cried out as knelt down beside her. Paige felt for Piper’s pulse but it was very faint. “No, please, please don’t die on me Piper!” Paige cried. Paige put pressure on her wound but the blood just seeped through her hands. Paige grabbed Piper and hugged her tightly. Phoebe crawled to Prue and shook her to wake her up. Prue stirred and opened her eyes. “What happened?” Prue asked. “A demon attacked us…and,” Phoebe said. “OMG look at you Phoebe, your badly hurt,” Prue said as she stood up to help Phoebe. Prue turned to Piper, and Paige and screamed. Prue, and Phoebe walked as fast as they could to Piper and knelt down beside her. “Leo!” Paige yelled as she cried. Piper don’t die on us!” Phoebe said sadly. “Oh Piper, it’s not your time!” Prue said. “Where is he?” Phoebe yelled. “LEO!!!” Phoebe yelled again. Phoebe slammed her left fist on the attic floor as she cried. “She’s not breathing!” Phoebe cried out. After a few seconds orbs could be seen two feet away. Prue was keeping pressure on Piper’s wound as Phoebe tried to revive Piper. “Leo, where were you?” Paige asked without looking up. When she didn’t hear a response she looked up and her jaw dropped. “Prue…Phoebe?” Paige said slowly. “Not right now Paige, I need to keep her heart beating, we still might get a chance to save her…you go call 911,” Phoebe cried as she wiped her tears from her face leaving a smear of blood on her cheeks. “No, look!” Paige snapped. Prue and Phoebe looked up and standing in front of them was Chris himself. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I hope I ddin't leave anyone hanging! ;D anyway, please post reviews if you would like me to conitnue to chapter 10!!! also, this chapter was a lot longer then the last one!
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Post by PRcharmedfan on May 12, 2005 19:32:57 GMT -5
wow this is incredible i stuck to your chapters and i want to keep reading every time more. You Rule! continue with the writing cause is very good!
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Post by XxP3HalliwellxX on May 12, 2005 21:31:01 GMT -5
Thanks PRcharmedfan, I love your reviews, it makes me keeping writing this fanfic. Also, I know I have been updating every day to two days but I won't have chapter 10 up until sunday or monday. I am running for Vice-President and I have to say a speech tomorrow, so I'm really nervous, I also have a lot of homework to do over the weekend. But keep posting revies until then, it might inspire me to write the next chapter soon! Thanks everyone! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ since it will be a while until the next chapter, I will leave questions for you guys to think about! ???Who was the demon that attacked the Charmed Ones? Was it Banningstan or his brother?? And why was Chris back, wasn't he supposed to be dead? What made him come back? Who is Linnea anyway> And why did Prue's mother send Linnea a message to tell prue she needed to come back? Will Piper be saved? What happened to Leo?? ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~:::::::Note:::::::I was planning to only have 5 more chapters, but I enjoy writing this fanfic so much and I get a lot of reviews from it, ;Dso I'm planning to make it a lot longer, maybe 15 more, who knows? Let's see how it unfolds, enjoy!!
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Post by CanadianHalliwell on May 12, 2005 22:33:14 GMT -5
Great Updates! Thanks for letting me know about them. Good Luck on your speech.
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Post by CharmBffy on May 13, 2005 0:26:12 GMT -5
wow this is incredible i stuck to your chapters and i want to keep reading every time more. You Rule! continue with the writing cause is very good! i agree it is very good so keep it up
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