The Return of Prue (Updated: 2/24/06)

[XxP3HalliwellxX]

Hey guys, I recited my speech on Friday and it went pretty well. I will try to get the next chapter up by tonight before I go to bed since I didn't have as much homework as I thought I had! ;D

[XxP3HalliwellxX]

Chapter 10! jeksog, Bannigstan, and Mavic be,ong to me, plese don't steal my characters!!
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The Attic

Ch...chris?? phoebe stuttered. "What are you doing here? Aren't you supposed to be dead?? Paige said quickly. Chris looked down at Piper as tears slid down his face. "No time for questions...hurry...we need to heal her!" Chris snapped as he wiped away his tears. How? I can't heal her, she's dead!" Paige yelled. "We lost her!" Paige cried. "Just do what I say, okay?" Chris said soothingly. Prue looked at Chris with confusion.

Chris knelt down beside Piper and put his hands over Piper's wound. "Paige, hold my hand and try with all your might, please...I can't lose her now...Chris said sadly. Paige held Chris' hand and closed her eyes and thought of all the great memories with Piper. "Please Piper...don't die...we need you...Chris and Wyatt needs you...,"Paige thought. Paige opened her eyes as she saw the light glow come from her and Chris' hands.

Phoebe and Prue's mouths dropped open as they cried with joy. Slowly Piper's wound healed. Prue looked at Chris; "Do I know you?" Prue asked. "maybe...Chris said without taking notice of Prue. Chris looked up and was scared stiff. "Chris are you okay?" Phoebe asked worriedly. Chris thouht back to the pictures his mother used to show him when he was a young boy. pictures of Prue, Phoebe, and his mother. "This can't be...," Chris thought. "Aunt Prue...?" Chris asked. "Ummm...I..I...I don't know...," Prue replied confusingly. Phoebe turned to Prue. "You don't know him?" Phoebe asked. "No...," Prue replied.

"Prue...this is Chris!" Paige snapped. "you mean...baby Chris?" prue asked shocked. "Yep...," Phoebe grinned. "Your the aunt I never knew!" Chris shout out. "I guess so," Prue replied with a smile. "Uhh...guys...Piper is waking up!" Paige whispered. Chris looked down and smiled. "It was nice seeing you Prue..," Chris said. "Are you leaving?" Phoeba asked sadly. "yes, I did what I came here for," Chris said. "Please stay!" Paige insisted. "I'm sorry but I can't," Chris frowned. "Good bye," Chris said as he orbed away.

Piper opened her eyes slowly and looked around. "What happened?" Piper asked confusingly. "Umm...you almost died...," Paige said slowly. "I did?" Piper asked. "yes...but were so happy your okay!" Prue said while giving Piper a hug. "What about the demon?" Piper asked as she started to remember what happened. "He got away...," Phoebe said as she rubbed her badly bruised arm. "Ohh...Phoebe....,"Piper said. "Don't worry about it," Phoebe said slowly. "You need medical attention...badly...," Piper insisted. Don't worry...we'll vanquish the demon's sorry little *ss!" Piper said. "Well, where's Leo?" Piper asked. "He's healed me didn't he?" Piper asked. Phoebe, Prue, and Paige glanced at each other unsure how to tell her that Chris came back from the dead and healed her, and leo never showed when they called him.
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That't it for Chapter 10 you guys. I'm so sorry it was short, but I need to get to bed! I hope you enjoyed it and I'll post chapter 11 later this week!hmm...I wonder where leo is. Also, please post reviews if you want me to continue!! ;D

[TheOracle]

NOoooo....Chris come back
lol

Good update

[XxP3HalliwellxX]

I see I have a new reader. Thanks for the review Oracle. ;)Don't worry we'll see more of him. thanks again!

[prue516]

Hey. I like it a lot but it is just sooooooooooooooo long. good work but it will a while till I finish. I can't read for a long time or I go insane. I'll read more tommorrow and tell you what I think.

[CharmBffy]

TheOracle said:

NOoooo....Chris come back
lol

Good update

and continue with the writing it is very good

[piperhollyamy]

Very good. Sad that Piper didn't see Chris. Is Leo hurt? Great Story. Can't wait for more!!

[XxP3HalliwellxX]

Hey guys, I'm going camping during the weekend so I won't be able to update today because I have to pack and I will be gone saturday and sunday, but I'll try to update on Monday and Tuesday. I had a lot of essay's to write the last couple days. Sorry for the wait! ;D

[PRcharmedfan]

HI i love the chapter it was cool but a little short but still GOOD!!! keep writing and thanks again for letting me know! Peace

[prue516]

This is such an awsome story! It's a heck of a lot better than the actual S7 premiere. XxP3HalliwellxX should have wirtten it months ago and sent it to the network. Oh wait. It wouldn't work cuz of the whole Shannen Doherty thing. Darn it! All well. It's great!

[XxP3HalliwellxX]

Thanks a lot PRcharmedfan and Prue516 for you reviews, I appreciate it that people like my story. I promise I will make the next chapter longer, I have to get this Biology and Writing essays out of the way then I'll wirte the next chapter. My esays are do tuesday morning. So I will try to update tuesday after school. Sorry for the wait guys! Also, My trip was really fun, my troop and I did a 6mile walk in 2 hours! ;D Thanks again! Bye.

[prue516]

Ummmmmmmm....... are we ever gonna get the next chapter? I'm not saying this in a rude way or anything, but it's just kinda been a week since Tuesday.

[XxP3HalliwellxX]

I'm so sorry for the wait...In the last week I've had family emergencies, and my older sister was in the hospital, so I haben't been able to update..sorry ...I'll try my best to have it up tonight....

[prue516]

Cool sounds good. Sorry about the family emergencies.

[PRcharmedfan]

Yeah! cant wait till tonight! ohh and sorry about your sister i hope she gets better soon! Ok

[XxP3HalliwellxX]

Okay you guys here's chapter 11, I'm soo sorry for the wait...but here it is!! It is a little confusing with the timeline, but it will answer more questions about the fanfic, so I hope you enjoy it! ;D also, thanks PRcharmedfan and Prue516 for wanting to read more of my story and waiting so long, I think you giys might like this chapter.

[XxP3HalliwellxX]

Chapter 11, Jeksog, Mavic and banningstan belong to me only!! Please don’t steal my characters! :::::Note::::The story is going to have a scene change, it’s going to take place right before the demon attacked the Charmed Ones, it’s sort of going to take place in the demon’s lair. I hope you enjoy it! And sorry for the wait!!::::
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THE UNDERWORLD

“Come forward!” the demon demanded. A lower level demon slowly walks toward the demon and bends on one knee. “Yes Master Mavic,” the demon said confidently. “Do you have any news for me?” Mavic asked coldly. “Yes master,” the demon replied. “Tell me,” Mavic asked as he sat in the shadows of the dark cave. “Well…my plan has worked,” the demon responded confidently. “And the white lighter?” Mavic questioned. “He is out of the way,” the demon replied. “Good…very good!” Mavic laughed. Mavic waved his hand and a misty cloud appeared and a image of the Charmed Ones attic appeared. He watched as the Charmed Ones were sitting down in a row and a young girl appeared in a circle of candles. “It’s time to set the plan in action…,” Mavic said with a grin.

“What about the sister’s friend?” the demon asked. “Don’t question me!” Mavic yelled. “Yes master…,” the demon replied quickly as he stepped back in fright. “Besides, she doesn’t have any powers, she will be helpless…I will kill her,” Mavic grinned. “Now go! I must prepare,” Mavic yelled. “Yes master,” the demon replied as he walked out of the cave.

"This will be the end of the Charmed Ones…and I will rule the world!” Mavic laughed as he waved his hand and the image of the Charmed Ones disappeared and he shimmered out. The demon stepped out of the shadows and started to laugh. “What a fool! He doesn’t realize I’m a upper-level demon! I’ll wait for the right time and I will kill him and rule the world!” The demon grinned. He waved his hand and the same image of the sister’s appeared. He looked into the misty cloud and watched as the sister’s started to fight Mavic. He watched the middle sibling fight against Mavic. “Hmmm….he is a good fighter, but I am better…,”the demon thought. He watched as a candle tipped over and started the carpet on fire, and looked across and saw their friend on the carpet unconscious. “This is very interesting!” The demon thought.

Finally, after a few more minutes he watched as the youngest sibling stabbed Mavic and he yelled in pain and shimmered out. The demon waved the image away and disappeared in lighting and fire as Mavic shimmered in screaming in pain. Aarrghhh…how dare they try to defeat me!” Mavic screamed. He reaches behind his back and pulls out his dagger as screams of pain echo through the cave. He slouches into his big chair with anger evident on his face. “Banningstan!” Mavic yells. “Yes master,” Banningstan says as he steps out of the darkness. “You have failed me! Your plan didn’t work!” Mavic yells. “But it did master, one of the sister’s is dead! The Power of Three has been broken!” Banningstan said with fright. “I wanted them all dead…for that you will pay!” Mavic yelled. “Please…master…no…,” Banningtan pleaded.

“Don’t worry…I will come back and kill you!” Banningstan thought. Mavic waved his hand and Banningstan’s skin started to boil and his limbs started to turn into ashes from his feet up towards his head and he gave out painful screams as he blew up.
Mavic grinned and stood up and walked into the darkness as he laughed.

“HALLIWELL MANOR” THE ATTIC

Prue, Paige and Phoebe looked upon Piper with weak smiles. “So…,” Piper asked. “Umm…well, Leo healed you and then he got a urgent call from the elders and he had to orb out…,” Phoebe said weakly. “uhh…huhh…and he orbed out that quickly”” Piper asked suspiciously. “Well you were unconscious for a few minutes after he healed you,” Prue said quickly. Piper looked at her sister’s suspiciously and finally gave into their story. “Those d**n elders…I’ve had it up to the last straw with them…why can’t they just leave us the hell alone?” Piper said angrily.

Prue, Phoebe, and Paige gave each other a quick glance unsure how to respond to that question. Piper walked onto the carpet and looked at the burnt carpet. “What the hell happened to the carpet?” Piper asked. “Well, after the demon attacked you Prue was running to help you and the demon grabbed the carpet from underneath her feet and she fell and one of the candles tipped over and lit the carpet on fire. “but don’t worry I handled it!” Paige replied with a smile. Piper finally looked around and noticed that Linnea, the girl they summoned wasn’t there anymore.

“Okay you guys we have to summon her again!” Piper snapped. “Why?” the sister’s asked. “because we need to get answers now!…a demon almost killed me and you guys…we were lucky leo healed me..e…,”Piper said mid-sentence. “Wait, if Leo healed me and he had to go to the elders, then where are my boys?” Piper asked worriedly. Prue, Phoebe, and Paige gave each other worried glances and forgot that Leo took the boys and he never answered when the called him to heal Piper. At that moment they gulped and stared at each other.
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Well, I hope you guys liked it, there was a little suspense I hope. I will try to have chapter 12 by next week or in two weeks, it depends how my schedule unfolds. Thanks again for the reviews! ;D

[PRcharmedfan]

Yeah, you were right i loved it but i hope chris comes back! ;D peace

[XxP3HalliwellxX]

Don't worry, he will come back, we will see more of him. However, I won't tell you when, that would just spoil the story.

[charmedforevr24]

hey, well your story is asome! i wan't to know what happend to leo and what is going to happen next! please update soon!