The Return of Prue (Updated: 2/24/06)

[Lubbmonkey]

Ooo hurry & post more Brill fanfic but a little hard to see the difference between characters maybe a script set out like suggested before ...?

Piper : ..........

Phoebe : ........

Paige : .......

You get the idea

[XxP3HalliwellxX]

I am so happy!! I got more readers! ;D Thanks everyone who posted reviews, I love them very much, because evryone seems very interested in my fanfic, I will post the next chapter sooner then I had planned.

Lubbmonkey said:

Ooo hurry & post more Brill fanfic but a little hard to see the difference between characters maybe a script set out like suggested before ...?

Piper : ..........

Phoebe : ........

Paige : .......

You get the idea

I know what you mean, I try to make it as clear as possible. The way it is read is the character says something then the character who said it is the name after the quote or line. I hope I made it clear enough. It I get more complaints I will change it to script form.

[prue516]

XxP3HalliwellxX said:

I am so happy!! I got more readers! ;D Thanks everyone who posted reviews, I love them very much, because evryone seems very interested in my fanfic

How could we not be interested.I think that even the people don't like Prue very much would still enjoy this. It's not only that Prue is back, but you're actually doing a great job. I'm serious. You're doing a heck of a lot better than the sctual Charmed writers have been doing the past couple seasons. It's awsome! So suspensful. I love this. You should like........ be a writer for a living or something. Anyways, great work. I can't wait for the next update!

[PRcharmedfan]

I totally agree with prue516. How could people not be interested??? Its great! Keep up the good work.

[XxP3HalliwellxX]

CHAPTER 12
Mavic, Banningstan, and Jeksog belong to me!
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The Manor "The ATTIC"

"Please tell me what the hell is going on?" Piper snapped. "Where is Leo? Where are my boys?" Piper asked her sister's worriedly. Prue looked at Paige and Phoebe and nodded. "Piper...I don't know how to tell you this but when we called Leo he didn't respond to our calls," Prue said slowly. "What do you mean he didn't respond to your calls?" Piper asked confusingly.

"Well...what she's trying to say is he didn't respond when we tried to call him when you were near death...," Phoebe responded slowly. "Then who healed me?" Piper asked confused. There was a long silence between the sister's. "Well...," Piper said with her arms folded across her chest. "Piper, you were technically dead...Phoebe and Prue were trying to keep your heart beating...then all of a sudden we saw orbs...then...we...we...saw...Ch..Chri...Chris...and me and Chris healed you,"Paige said quickly. Piper's jaw dropped and she went into shock.

GOLDEN GATE BRIDGE

Chris orbed onto the top of the bridge and looked across the city. Chris sighs and cracks a smile. "I saved her...and that's what counts...," Chris thought. I really wanted to talk to mom, but if she saw me...who would know what her reaction would be. That day...two and a half months ago they thought I died, but I only went back to my future...so much changed...but I must not think about it now...I need to find dad before it's to late. And the aunt I never knew, it was so cool to see her in person...I hope I will see her again. But right now, I need to find dad, and fast...Chris orbs away.

THE UNDERWORLD

Mavic is sitting in a chair looking upon several demons. "I need a new assistant," Mavic states. And I will select one of you...however, you will need to perform several tasks...which include killing the Charmed Ones," Mavic laughs. "But sir..they are to powerful...," A demon says with fright.

"If you can't face the Charmed Ones then your no use for me!" Mavic yells. Mavic throws a fire ball at the demon and he bursts into flams and he blows up. "That's a warning to all of you...The Charmed Ones no longer exsist; the older sister is dead...The last two sister's remain...the first demon that brings their corps back to me will serve me...and will recieve a great reward...," Mavic states. "Now go!" Mavic yells. Ten demons...maybe more shimmer out. Mavic leans into his chair and grins.

The Manor "THE ATTIC"

"Piper... Piper...PIPER?" Prue yells. "Wake up!" Prue says worriedly and begins to shake her. "C'mon Piper, it's okay..," Paige says beginning to panic. "What's wrong with her?" Phoebe asks. "She must have gone into a state of shock...," Prue says slowly. "The news about Chris must have made her go over the edge," Paige says.

"Help me get her to the sofa," Prue says as she grabs one of Pipers' arm. The sister's slowly lift Piper and carry her to the sofa and they lay her down. "How are we going to wake her?" Phoebe asks. "She might need Chris...that might be the only way to bring her back...," Prue states. "And we need to summon Linnea again...we need to find out who that demon was so he won't come back," Phoebe says. "I'll get the BOS, maybe there's something about him in there," Prue says.

Prue stands up and walks toward the stand which the BOS is on and stops in the middle of the room. "Prue, what's wrong?" Phoebe asks with concern. Paige looks at Prue with confusion. "Oh...no...not now," Prue says slowly. Prue starts to fade and she is no longer soild and disappears in a flash of white light. "What happened?" Paige asks with confusion. "I don't know...,"phoebe says with concern as she stares at the spot where Prue was standing seconds ago.
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That's it for this chapter. I hope everyone liked it. Please post reviews if you would like me to continue to chapter 13. Thanks PRcharmedfan, charmedforever24, prue516, Lubbmonkey and everyone else who posted reviews! I really appreciate it!

[TheOracle]

That was a really good chapter and Chris appeared too yeah!!! Hope Prue comes back

[PRcharmedfan]

yeah this chapter was cool!
i hope to hear from chris and prue again ! keep up the good work ! peace! ;D

[prue516]

AHHHHHHHHHH!!!!! They took Prue back! I can't believe it! That's not fair! Will we get to find out why she had to go back? I mean of course we've got to see her again. Th e story is about her coming back, but still Linnea had said tehy needed her back for some reason. Will we get to find out what the reason is? That was really good! Keep up the AWSOME work!

[XxP3HalliwellxX]

;)Don't worry, you will find out what happens. Also, I will try to have the next chapter up by late tonight, it might be shorter then the last one, but you will be less worried about Prue! HEHE. Thanks for the reviews everyone!! I realyl enjoyed them.

[XxP3HalliwellxX]

CHAPTER 13
Banningstan, Jeksog, and Mavic belong to me! Please don't steal my characters!
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The Manor, "THE ATTIC"

"Where did she go?" Paige asked. "I don't know...but remember when Linnea said that they needed her back up there, well i guess since we totally forgot about it they took her, it must be really urgent!" Phoebe replied with a frown. "Do you thnk she is going to come back?" Paige asked. "I don't know...but I hope so...," phoebe replied. Phoebe turned around to face Paige. "We need to find Chris...he might be the only one who can save Piper....again!" Phoebe joked. "I don't think this is a time for jokes!" Paige said quietly. "I know...I'm sorry we had it rough for the last few days...I was just trying to make you feel better," Phoebe sad sadly. Phoebe embraced into a hug with Paige.

"I don't know how were going to get out of this one!" Paige sad sadly. "Don't worry we will," phoebe whispered into her ear. Phoebe closed her eyes then she heard a soft noise in front of her. She quickly opened them and saw approximately 10 demons in front of her. "Oh my god!" Phoebe yelled. "What?" Paige said with worry. She let go of Phoebe and turned around and gasped in horror at the sight in front of her. One demon in the center of the group lifted his right hand and a energy ball formed in his hand. He threw it at Phoebe and Paige. Phoebe pulled Paige to the ground. "Sisterly bond I see...well see it as your last...you will be joining your older sister very soon!" The demon laughed. "What is he talking about?" Paige asked quickly. "They might think Piper died when that demon attacked her; demons are so stupid at times!" Phoebe cracked a laugh. "Phoebe, it's not the time for this now!" Paige whispered.

All of the demons walked toward the sisters. One of the demons at the end threw a energy ball at them and Paige called for it and directed it back at him, causing him to fly back and hit the attic wall. "shouldn't that have blown him to bits?" Paige asked. "It should have, but he must have thrown a lower energy ball at us," phoebe said quickly. "Why?" Paige asked. "I don't know!" Phoebe said softly.

One demon walked toward Phoebe and another walked toward Paige. Phoebe stood up and kicked the demon in the gut. Another demon threw a energy ball at Phoebe; Paige saw it and called for it and threw it back at the demon making him fly into a bookcase. "Why the hell aren't they dying?" Paige yelled. Phoebe turned to Paige and a demon grabbed her by the hair and was about to slice her neck with a dagger. Paige called the dagger and redirected it to him and stabbed him into his chest. The demon screamed and blew up.

"Thanks Paige!" Phoebe yelled. "No problem!" Paige shouted back. Paige noticed that a demon was approacing Piper. "Lamp!" Paige yelled. the lamp smashed onto the demon's head and he fell to the floor unconcious. A demon also noticed Piper on the sofa. "What the hell, she's supposed to be dead!" the demon thought. "How dare he lie to us!" The demon yelled. The demon formed a energy ball in his hands and was about to throw it at Piper but Phoebe punched him in his face.

Phoebe ran towards Piper and glanced at her. She still didn't respond to anything. "Paige, we can't keep Piper here, she will get hurt!" Phoebe yelled. "What do you want me to do, orb her out? and Leave you here alone? you got to be crazy!" Paige snapped as she continued to orb several other objects at the demons and redirected their energy balls at them. "Oh...Chris..where are you? Piper needs you!" Phoebe thought. "Chris...where ever you are get your *ss down here! I know you can hear me! Piper needs you! Phoebe yells as loud as she could. "What the hell are you doing, Phoebe?" Paige asked confusingly. "Trying to contact Chris...I sure hope he can hear me!" Phoebe said. At that moment Chris orbs in and looks at Phoebe then looks at Piper.

"MOM!" Chris cried. "What's wrong with her?" Chris asked with worry. "Orb now, ask later! It's to dangerous here!" Phoebe said quickly. "To where?" Chris asked. "I don't know...any where!" Phoebe snapped. Chris grabs Pipers' hand and orbs out. Suddenly to many demon's throw energy balls at Paige and one hits her in the gut and sends her flying across the room. "Paige!" Phoebe yells.

THE AFTER WORLD

Prue appears in a white room, several spirits are walking along and speaking to other spirits. She looks in front of her then she notices her mother and grams. "Mom? Grams?" what's going on?" Prue asks confusingly. "Hello my daughter," Patty says sweetly. "Send me back now, Leo is in trouble! we need to find him!" Prue yells. All the spirits in the room looks directly at Prue and everything goes quiet. "Please honey, calm down," grams says. "Why should I calm down?" Prue asks loudly.

"Listen, your sister's are under attack at this very moment...," Patty responds worriedly. "OMG, are they okay?' Prue asks quickly. "Not if you don't help them!" Grams responds. "How am I supposed to help them? I don't have any powers!" Prue yells again. All the spirits leave the room so they don't get into the arguement. "You will, we will give them back to you!" Patty says with a smile. "I thought I wasn't supposed to since I broke the rules and went and saw my sister's?" Prue replied. "I know, and I know you informed us about it...the elders found out you went and saw them!" Patty whispered. "That's why when you tried to use your powers they didn't work," Grams whispered.

"Those d**n elders, they can't stay out of my life even after i'm dead!" Prue said angrily. "We thought that you could only warn your sister's about the situation. However, these demons are too powerful and they can't do it alone!" Grams said. "They need their older sister back!" Patty cracked a smile. At that moment grams and Patty grabbed hands and lifted their hands and Prue was ingulfed in light. After the light faded Prue waved her hand and a flower pot flew into the wall. Prue smiled. "Don't worry, I'll come and save you!" Prue thought.
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I hope you guys liked this chapter, please post reveiws if you want me to continue to chapter 14! Thanks The Oracle, PRcharmedfan, and Prue516 for your reviews!

[prue516]

WOW! Wait, I thought they allways have their powers when even when they're dead. Grams has her's. Why wouldn't Prue? But all well. It's great! That's a good explanation for why she had to leave thow. Keep it up!

[CanadianHalliwell]

Great Updates! Sorry, I took so long to reply but I was away for the weekend! Thank God the Elders are learning. And where the heck is Leo!

[XxP3HalliwellxX]

Well, Prue had her powers, but since she broke the rules to go see her sister's the elder's took them away, but now she has them back. That would explain why she didn't fight when Mavic attacked them. And thanks prue516 and CanadianHalliwell for your reviews.

[CharmBffy]

that was great like it alot keep up the good work

[XxP3HalliwellxX]

CHAPTER 14
Banningstan, Jeksog, and Mavic belong to me! Also Linnea Lotti belongs to me! Please don't steal my characters.
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"THE ATTIC"

"Paige!!" Phoebe yells as she runs toward Paige. "Are you okay?" Phoebe asks as she kneels down next to Paige. "I...I...I'm not sure," Paige stutters. Phoebe glances down at Paiges' gut and it's bleeding, not severe, but it's pretty bad. "Don't worry Paige, your okay, we'll get through this...I promise!" Phoebe puts on a smile. Paige grabs Phoebs's hand and squeeses it. "thanks sis," Paige says softly. "No problem," Phoebe says.

"Oh...how sweet, sisterly bonding!" the demon laughes. Phoebe turns around and looks angrily into the demons eyes. "You will pay for what you did to my sister's!" Phoebe yells as she charges at the demon. "Phoebe...no, you can't take him by yourself!" Paige yells as loud as she could as she tries to stand up. Phoebe punches the demon in the face then knockes him to the ground. After the demon falls to the ground she kicks him in the face and breaks his nose in the process.

While the demon is grabbing his nose in pain Phoebe reaches for his dagger and pulls it out. She looks him in the eyes and stabs him in the heart. After a few seconds he blows up and sends Phoebe a few feet in the air. Phoebe lands on the attic floor with a thud and stands up and rubs her back. "Ouch..that hurt!" Phoebe says. "It will hurt even more when I'm done with you, the other demon may have not killed you, but I will...I will not allow you to get away like your other sister did!" The demon shouted out.

Paige staggers over to Phoebe as she grips her gut. "Phoebe, we can't vanquish them all, there are to many, one of us will not make it out alive if we try...we need Piper," Paige states. Phoebe looks at the demons and the other two that regained conciousness and were already up and ready to attack. Just as the demons were about to throw enery balls at the same time Prue appears in the center of the fight. "Wow...I see you guys had a lot in your hands over the last few minutes," Prue states with a grin. Prue waves her hand and sends five demons flying into the attic wall.

"What the hell?" a demon states confusingly. "I thought you had no powers!" another demon yells as he conjures a enery ball in his hand. He throws it at Prue and she waves her hand and sends it back at him and stabs him and he blows up. Another demon stands up and glares at Prue. "I thought you were a friend of theirs?" A demon asks. "Nope...I'm their older sister...back from the dead!" Prue yells as she sends him flying into the wall again. She astral projects her self behind the demon and stabs him with his own dagger that he dropped. "Prue!" Phoebe laughs.

"I thought we lost you again?!" Phoebe asks as she runs toward her. "Never, Grams called me and gave me my powers back," Prue grins. "I thought you had...," Phoebe says. "I'll explain later...you get the demons on the left and I will get the demons on the right," prue interupts.

Phoebe nods and goes after the 5 on the right. She jumps into the air and kicks 2 of the demons in the jaw sending them to the floor. As she stabs both of them one demon grabs her by the neck and begins to chock her. Prue waves her hand and sends him flying into boxes. Paige orbs a vase and hits the demon in the head with it. She falls to the ground and grips her gut in pain and begins to struggle for air.

Phoebe and Prue turn towards Paige. "Paige!" Prue and Phoebe yell. "I...I'm okay, just watch out for the demon behind you!" Paige stutters. Phoebe turns around and punches and kicks a few other demons and stabs the last three of the demons her side. Phoebe runs toward Prue and helps her vanquish two demons. Just as Phoebe was about to vanquish the last one he stands up and glares at the sister's. "You will pay!" The demon yells then he shimmers out. '

"Damn, he got away!" Phoebe says. "At least we got most of them," Prue sighs. Phoebe and Prue run towards Paige and help her to the sofa. "How are we supposed to heal her?" Phoebe asks worriedly. "We don't have Leo, and Chris is watching Piper, and he can't heal her without Paiges' help and she's to weak to heal herself!" Phoebe panicks.

"Phoebe calm down, I have an idea, but you need to stay here and watch Paige...I'll be right back...try to keep her wound clean and keep pressure on it!" Prue says. "Wait..where are you going?" Phoebe asks as she stands up. "Trust me...I'll be right back!" Prue states. Phoebe nodds. Prue takes a few steps back and smiles. "I hope this works...,"Prue thought. At that moment Prue dissapears in a flash of white light leaving a confused Phoebe behind.
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I hope everyone liked this chapter! I know it was a little short and you guys wanted a update soon! So there it was. If you would like me to continue to chapter 15 please post reviews. Also, thanks to everyone who posted reviews, they were great! ;D

[CanadianHalliwell]

Of course, we want you to continue. How can you doubt that! What does Prue have in mind and hopefully she'll get back in time.

[XxP3HalliwellxX]

;DI can't tell you that! You'll have to wait and see what happens like everyone else lol

[prue516]

OOOOOOOO. I think I have an idea of where she's going ! This is awsome ! Keep goin as fast as possible. It's great!

[TheOracle]

Good Update

Where is Leo though

[PRcharmedfan]

weee!!! this is cool, i love it i soo wanna now where's LEO!!!