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Post by XxP3HalliwellxX on Jun 11, 2005 13:14:30 GMT -5
If I told you where Leo is it would spoil the story. Don't worry, the next chapter will let you know where he is, but the sister's won't know. However, I might not have next chapter up until this friday. I have so much to do, today were decorating for my sisters' graduation party, she's graduating tomorrow, and I have a lot of projects and essays do next week before I get out of school. I'm really sorry for the wait...but don't worry, I'll try to make the next chapter good.
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Post by PRcharmedfan on Jun 13, 2005 22:26:56 GMT -5
i know im just excited, this rocks!
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Post by prue516 on Jun 14, 2005 11:13:12 GMT -5
Yeah!
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Post by XxP3HalliwellxX on Jun 14, 2005 17:36:26 GMT -5
Hey guys, I know you've been waiting for the next chapter. However, I might be able to put the next chapter up later tonight or some time tomorrow. So I hope you guys can wait a little longer, and thanks for the reviews. I loved them.
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Post by XxP3HalliwellxX on Jun 19, 2005 17:52:06 GMT -5
OKay everyone, I apoligize that I haven't posted the new chapter. My mom left for Las Vegas and I've been planning for my exams that are this week, hopefully the news I'm abou to give you will make you all happy. I wrote the new chapter, so I'll put it up tonight. It might be a little short, but hopefully you will all like it. Thanks again for waiting.
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Post by XxP3HalliwellxX on Jun 19, 2005 18:32:01 GMT -5
Banningstan, Mavic, Jeksog, and Linnea Lotti belong to me only. Please don't steal my characters! CHAPTER 15 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ THE ATTIC Phoebe is putting pressure on Paiges' wound aa tears slide down her cheeks. Her face is red from crying and she has scratches covering her from head to toe. "Please Paige, don't die on us now," Phoebe thought. "Where are you, Prue?" Phoebe whispers to herself. Paige slowly opens her eyes and looks at her sister. "Paige...," Phoebe says slowly. "At least Piper wasn't the one who got attacked this time...,"Paige forces a laugh. "Oh Paige, you will be okay...Prue went to get help," Phoebe says as she wipes some of her tears away. Paige coughs. "It hurts so much Phoebe...I can't...,"Paige trails off. "NOO don't talk like that Paige!! your going to live!!" Phoebe shouts as tears flow down her face. At that moment Paige see's orbs in front of her. She stands up and approaches the orbs. The figures form into Prue and Linnea. "What?...," Phoebe questions. "Questions later, Phoebe," Prue states. Linnea approaches Paige and kneels on the floor and starts to heal Paige. "How...I thought she was dead?" Phoebe asks with confusion. "She was..she is...you know what I mean," Prue says with frustration. "Then how...," Phoebe asks as Paige sits up on the sofa. "Paige!" Phoebe shouts with joy as she runs towards Paige and hugs her. "I'm okay," Paige states. "Now can you please tell me what is going on?" Phoebe asks with confusion. Phoebe sits down next to Paige as Linnea stands next to Prue. "Well...when I was "up there" and I got my powers I saw Linnea," Prue states. "She approached me and told me the elders made her a whitelighter," Prue says with a smile. "I see," Phoebe says. "Well as you see before I was murdered I did many things, I helped people...and I was a doctor," Linnea says. "what a small world," Phoebe says. "Phoebe!" Prue says as she stares at her sister. "Sorry...," Phoebe says slowly. "Thanks for saving me," Paige says. "No problem...," Linnea says. "As you can see, my sister's hate the elders," Prue says. "Actually I hated them too...and I still do," Prue says. "It's okay...I understand," Linnea says with a smile. Phoebe winces as she holds her arm in pain. Your still hurt...," Prue says slowly. "It's okay...I'm fine," Phoebe says. Prue looks at Linnea. "If you don't mind, Linnea," Prue says. Linnea nods. "Linnea approaches Phoebe and holds her hands over her and begins to heal her from head to toe. After a few minutes Phoebe is completely healed. "Thanks, I feel much better," Phoebe says wih gratitude. "Now...we never got to ask you why you were murdered," Prue asks Linnea. "Well...," Linnea trails off. "Wait...you can explain to us later, but right now we need Piper. None of this information will help us if we don't have the power of three," Phoebe says. "Chris!" Phoebe shouts out. After a few minutes there still is no answer. "What are we going to do?" Paige asks?" Idon't know...I hope nothing bad happened to them," Prue says with worry. "Wait...can you orb us there?" Phoebe asks Linnea. "I could...but I woudn't be able to sense him," Linnea says slowly. "Hold on this might work...," Phoebe says. Phoebe approaches Linnea and grabs her hand...can you sense him off of me?" Phoebe asks. Linnea nods. After a few moments Linnea opens her eyes. "I found him...but he seem's worried...and scared, " Linnea says with a frown. "Piper...," Prue trails off. " Hurry...orb...orb," Phoebe says quickly. "The sister's grab each other's hands and Phoebe grabs Linneas' hand and they orb out. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I'm sorry it was so short, but I have a lot of studying to do. I'll try to make the next one longer. I hope everyone enjoyed it. Please post reviews if you would like me to continue to Chapter 16!
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Post by CanadianHalliwell on Jun 19, 2005 21:47:21 GMT -5
Silly, silly, silly! Asking us if we want you to continue. You know we wait for your updates. Now good luck on your exams and give us an update when you can.
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Post by XxP3HalliwellxX on Jun 19, 2005 22:11:18 GMT -5
I sure will...I know, but usually I get new readers, so I want them to post too. Thanks for waiting over two weeks for my update your truly a reader. I get out of school this thursday. So I'll post the new chapter around then. Thanks again.
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Post by prue516 on Jun 20, 2005 10:46:45 GMT -5
I love this! Was it really a two week wait? I didn't realize it had been that long. I figured you were gonna say Linnea was a whitelighter. How else could she have helped in that situation? But what ever. This is great! Keep it up! Good lick on exams.
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Post by XxP3HalliwellxX on Jun 20, 2005 20:33:37 GMT -5
Well, in the story I did mention she was a whitelighter, but they didn't go into conversation long enough about it...I'll explain more in detail next chapter.
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Post by prue516 on Jun 20, 2005 20:36:17 GMT -5
ok. yay!
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Post by CharmBffy on Jun 21, 2005 20:45:00 GMT -5
that was a great update i really enjoyin readin it keep it up
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Post by XxP3HalliwellxX on Jun 22, 2005 17:30:20 GMT -5
Banningstan, Mavic, Jeksog, and Linnea Lotti belong to me only. Pleas don't steal my charcters! Also, thanks to CanadianHalliwell for voting for me for the story of the month, your great! And to everyone else for posting reviews, I really appreciate them!! ~Note:: sad chapter~ CHAPTER 16 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Chris was pacing back and forth in an abandoned apartment. He was scared and worried. He took Piper to an abaondoned building since he didn't know where else to take her. All the walls had grafitti on them and wall paper was pealing and all the furniture was destroyed except for the one two seater sofa Piper was on. The apartment had a strong smell of rotting flesh and and garbage in every corner of the room.
Chris stopped pacing and glanced at his mother and leaned on a wall and fell to the floor. He combed his dirty fingers through his hair and laid his head on his knees. He slammed his fist into the wall causing his knuckles to bleed. He screamed and constantly slammed his fists in anger. Just to the entrance of the room Linnea orbed in with Prue, Phoebe, and Paige.
"Chris?!" Phoebe screamed as she ran to his side and stopped his hands from hitting the floor."Oh my god, it smells like rotting flesh in here!" Paige complained as she held her hand to her nose. "I know what you mean...I feel like I'm going to be sick," Phoebe said as she held her hand to her mouth. "Try to concentrate you guys...there's Piper," Prue said. Phoebe glanced at Chris' bloody hands and gave him a sympathetic look. Linnea stood near the entrance as Prue and Paige approached Piper. "Chris what the hell do you think your doing?" Phoebe asked. "She won't wake up!" Chris said worriedly. Phoebe glanced towards Piper and looked at her motionless body. "Umm...Phoebe...Piper isn't just out of it anymore she's unconcious," Prue said with worry. Phoebe gave Chris a; what the hell were you doing the whole time look" and walked towards Piper and sat next to her. Pipers' body was leaning on the back of the chair and one arm was hanging over the arm of the chair. "Piper...Piper...wake up!" Phoebe shouted as she shook her. "It's no use...I tried everything...," Chris said as he stood up. Linnea glanced at Chris' hands and approached him. Chris backed away a few feet. "Who are you?" Chris asked with confusion. I'm a whitelighter...let me heal you...it's the least I can do," Linnea said slowly. Chris nodded and moved his hands toward Linnea. Linnea held her hands over his and they started to glow. After a few short moments Chris' hands were completely healed. "Thanks," Chris said. Linnea nodded and walked towards the sisters.
"What is wrong with her?" Paige asked. "I tried to wake her then she started to violently shake...then she went unconcious," Chris said sadly. "Like how?" Phoebe asked. "Like that!" Chris interrupted. Linnea, Prue, Paige, and Chris looked at Piper as she started to shake, her hands whipped around and Pipers' right hand slapped Phoebe in the face. "Ouch...," Phoebe said as she rubbed her jaw. "Are you okay?" Prue asked. "Yeah...I'm fine," Phoebe replied. Everyone backed away except Prue. "Prue grabbed Pipers' hands and tried to hold her down. "Don't just stand there, help me!" Prue shouted. Chris grabbed Pipers' legs and tried to hold them down. "It looks like she's having a nightmare of some sort," Prue said. Chris glanced at Prue. "I think your right," Chris said.
PIPERS' NIGHTMARE
"Leave me alone!" Piper screamed as she shook her head. "You know I'm right...no one is here anymore...your family left you...they are all dead...,"the demon grinned. "No they aren't, they are here!" Piper shouted. Piper flicked her hands and the demon still didn't blow up. "Why aren't you dying?" Piper asked with confusion. "Because your powers died when your sisters' died," the demon said. "I told you they aren't dead!" Piper screamed. Piper held her arm that the demon skinned. "Don't worry, you'll join them very soon!" the demon laughed as he held a knife in front of his face. Piper forced her self to stand up and run towards another room.
Back to reality, "Abandoned apartment"
"I have an idea!' Prue said with a smile. "What is it?" Paige asked. "What if we used a spell from the Book of Shadows to get into her nightmare," Prue suggested. "It might work...but who will do it?" Phoebe asked. Prue glances at Chris. "What?" Chris asked. "Your doing it, your the one who got her into this!" Prue said. "I'm not the one who told her!" Chris complained. "She would have eventually found out," Prue said. "How?" Chris asked. "You know Phoebe can't keep secrets for long," Prue said with a smile. Phoebe winked at Chris then smiled. "Fine, it might work, I don't want her to be like this forever,"Chris said. Piper finally stopped shaking and slowly settled down again. "Okay then, let's orb back to the manor," Prue said. "Is it safe there?" Chris asked. "Yeah...we killed all the demons, well most of them at least," Phoebe said. Chris picked up Piper and orbed out and Paige grabbed Phoebes' hand and Linnea grabbed Prues' hand and they all orbed out.
AN UNKNOWN PLACE
"You can't keep me here forever!" Leo screamed. "But see, we can," the figure said. "Let me go!!" Leo shouted. "If I did then my plan won't work," The figure said. "What is your stupid plan any way?" Leo questioned the figure. "Well, as you can see your stuck here, with no way of getting to your wife or your sister-in-laws," The figure said. Leo glared at the hooded figure. "You better not hurt them!" Leo shouted with anger. "Oh...poor elder...you can't sense your charges...so I guess you didn't sense it when we killed your wife!" The figure laughed.
"Your lying!" Leo shouted out. "Am I?" The figure laughed. The figure waved his hands and the image of the charmed ones appeared. The same one when Piper went flying into the wall, then the trail of blood flowed out of Pipers' wound. The figure waved his hand and the image disappeared. "NO!!!" Leo screamed as he pulled on the chains that held him captive to the wall. The figure started to laugh and approached Leo and punched him in the face. "Yes!" the figure said as he wiped Leo's blood off of his hand. Leo wiped his bloody face on his shirt and spat on the figures' face. "I swear when I get out of here I will kill you!" Leo said angrily. "I would like to see you try!" The figure grinned.
Leo lifted his head and glared into his eyes. "What did you mean by "we"," Leo asked angrily. "My brother and I," the figure said with an evil laugh. The figure turned around and walked out of the dark, musty room. Leo lowered his head and began to cry. "Oh...Piper...I'm so sorry...I wasn't there to protect...you," Leo said sadly as he wiped his face on his shirt. "Bud don't worry I'll avenge your death," Leo thought. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Poor leo, he doesn't realize Piper is alive...in a state of shock..wonder what he'll do when he finds out Chris is back! Well as you can tell he is pretty angry. Well, I hope everyone enjoyed this chapter. Post reviews please. Chapter 17 coming soon!! ;D
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Post by charmedforevr24 on Jun 22, 2005 21:54:34 GMT -5
THAT WAS SOOO GOOOD! we finaly know what happened to leo! Please continue!
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Post by prue516 on Jun 23, 2005 9:05:27 GMT -5
This is soooooooo great! I just have one question. I have been wondering about it from the start. What season is this taking place in?
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Post by XxP3HalliwellxX on Jun 23, 2005 9:45:35 GMT -5
Well if you see in the first chapter right before the chapter starts it says it takes place in season 7, so intially it's the first episode of season 7, However, it's not just the first episode. This story surrounds season 7. Becauses if you remember the first chapter piper and phoebe were talking about Gideon and Chris.
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Post by prue516 on Jun 23, 2005 11:22:55 GMT -5
Right! I completely forgot about that.
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Post by XxP3HalliwellxX on Jun 23, 2005 13:51:00 GMT -5
That's okay! I forgive you! lol
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Post by CharmBffy on Jun 23, 2005 18:58:14 GMT -5
that is very good keep it up
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Post by prue516 on Jun 26, 2005 18:52:08 GMT -5
I'm not trying to nag with this post I'm just preventing it from moving to page 2.
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