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Post by PRcharmedfan on Jun 28, 2005 0:27:59 GMT -5
yeah!!! its veryy veryyy goooddd!!! keep the good work like always!
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Post by XxP3HalliwellxX on Jun 28, 2005 9:20:25 GMT -5
I'm sorry for the wait guys! But I won't have the next chapter up until after of forth of July. I have a summer job and I don't back from work until after 9 pm. So I go to bed. Sorry again for the wait. I promise the next chapter will be good.  |
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Post by prue516 on Jun 28, 2005 9:50:59 GMT -5
It's alright. What's your job?
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Post by XxP3HalliwellxX on Jul 7, 2005 20:12:30 GMT -5
apoligize that I haven't e-mailed in a long time. I was working at a fair. Now that it's done I started on the next chapter. It's almost finished, so I should have it up by tomorrow night. Sorry again for the wait. I hope everyone had a wonderful holiday week. |
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Post by CharmBffy on Jul 7, 2005 23:15:23 GMT -5
its ok i had a very good holiday i had my friends and family with me and i hope that you had a great one too
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Post by lebasi on Jul 8, 2005 12:30:01 GMT -5
wow this is great when is the next update?  |
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Post by XxP3HalliwellxX on Jul 8, 2005 14:00:48 GMT -5
Hey, I have a new reader!! Awsome! I will try to have the next update up by late tonight. Thanks for all the reviews! |
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Post by XxP3HalliwellxX on Jul 10, 2005 22:52:37 GMT -5
Mavic, Jeksog, Banningstan, and Linnea Lotti belong to me only! Please don't steal my characters! ~Sorry that I haven't posted my update on Friday.~ Someone hacked into my account so I had to call AOL and have a new password put in my name.~
CHAPTER 17
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THE MANOR "Attic"
Chris orbed into the attic with Piper. He layed her on the sofa and walked to the stand where the BOS rested. Seconds later everyone else orbed in and joined Chris at the Book. Chris flipped through pages of the book. "Does anyone need anything?" Paige asked, glancing at everyone. "No...I'm fine," Phoebe responded. After a few moments Chris didn't find anything in the book. "Damn!" Chris shouted. Prue approached Chris. "Let he help," Prue said. "Can you?" Chris asked, worried expressions evident on his face. "Yes, I'm positive," Prue assured, moving in front of the book and placing her hands over the book. After a few short moments the books' pages started to flip. Chis, Phoebe, and Paiges' had shocked expressions on their faces as they stared in aww. Linnea looked at Prue and smiled. Just as it began the pages' stopped on a page. "Okay, we got some thing!" Prue shouted with joy. Everyone looked over Prues' shoulder as she read aloud.
"It says here; Intruding into a Nightmare. The person or persons' that are entering someone's nightmare must read aloud the spell below while holding the persons' hand," Prue finished. "That's pretty simple," Paige said. "Hold on, theres' a warning at the bottom of the paragraph...," Prue said quickly. "What kind of warning?" Chris asked with worry. Prue swallowed. It says that the person only has 1 hour to be in the persons' nightmare or they will be stuck in there forever leaving their body in a vegtable like state. "Okay, that is bad!" Chris said, pacing back and forth with worry.
THE UNDERWORLD
"Hello my brother!" Jeksog says' as he approaches Bannningstan. "Long time no see, Jeksog," Banningstan said with a smile. "Did you do what I asked?" Banningstan asked as he stood up. "Yes," Jeksog said quickly. A demon shimmers in and approaches Banningstan. "Master!" The demon interupts quickly, fear evident and sweat sliding down his forehead. "What is it?" Banningstan shouts angrily, a fireball appearing in his left hand. "Please don't!" The demon pleaded. "I have something very important to tell you!" The demon said, shaking with fear. "Tell me!" Banningstan demanded. "The eldest Charmed One...she's not...dea..dead," the demon said slowly. "What?" Banningstan yelled. "I saw her...when the other demon's and I went to kill the rest...she was alive and it appeared that she was taken from a whitelighter," The demon said. "
"Damn it!" Bannningstan yelled. Banningstan glared at his brother. "I thought you had their whitelighter?? Banningstan asked. "I do have him...they must have had help from another whiteligther," Jeksog responded. Banningstan turned towards the demon and glared into his eyes. "You helped me, for that I will spare your life...however you need to go get a darklighter for me and tell him to report to me...," Banningstan said with a grin. "Yes sir," the demon responded. "No go!" Banningstan yelled. "Also, the sister appeared to be out of it, in a daze sort of," the demon said, shimmering out after saying his last sentence. "Thats' good...very good," Banningstan laughed. "What shhould I tell the whitelighter?" Jeksog asked. "Don't tell him anything, let him suffer!" Banningstan grinned. Go find an army of demons, were going to go kill the Charmed Ones," Banningstan said evily. After a few seconds of silence the two brothers disappeared in lighting and fire.
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I hope everyone liked it! Chapter 18 coming soon! Thanks for the reviews everyone!
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Post by lebasi on Jul 11, 2005 10:11:30 GMT -5
i am officially addicted to this story thanks it is truly cool too bad charmed doesnt have writers like you |
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Post by XxP3HalliwellxX on Jul 11, 2005 16:01:37 GMT -5
Thanks, your so sweet! That is a bless for you! |
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Post by lebasi on Jul 11, 2005 20:01:15 GMT -5
;Danytime i meant what i said
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Post by CharmBffy on Jul 12, 2005 0:54:38 GMT -5
i am officially addicted to this story thanks it is truly cool too bad charmed doesnt have writers like you the same goes for me too |
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Post by prue516 on Jul 13, 2005 21:32:58 GMT -5
Yeah, I discovered a while back how easy it is to become addicted to this. It's just awsome! Good work. I can't wait for chapter 18!
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Post by PRcharmedfan on Jul 14, 2005 11:45:38 GMT -5
Hi , well i been here almost since the begining and i still addicted to this im soo waiting for the next chapter. ohh and yes she is a great writer!!!! Keep up the good work! |
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Post by Wyatt Matthew Halliwell on Jul 14, 2005 14:56:23 GMT -5
OMG i love that! Im so a fan of you! Im trying to write one but its really hard so congrats on your work and plz write some more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by lebasi on Jul 15, 2005 7:37:37 GMT -5
i know you updated 5 days ago but i am having some withdrawal here  please tell me, when are you going to be able to update again? |
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Post by lebasi on Jul 18, 2005 10:23:46 GMT -5
just posting so you stay on the first page
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Post by XxP3HalliwellxX on Jul 18, 2005 12:10:48 GMT -5
Thanks for the reviews everyone. You guys are the best. Thanks Wyatt Matthew Halliwell, I enjoy new readers. Sorry guys, but I won't be posting for a while. I just had surgery on my right eye today. So I'll try to write the next update late tonight when I can take off my patch. I can't look at the screen for so long. Thanks again. I love you guys. Thanks to all my fans! lol |
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Post by CanadianHalliwell on Jul 18, 2005 15:31:03 GMT -5
Well don't woory about us then. Take the time to fully recover and then you can give us a really good update.
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Post by lebasi on Jul 18, 2005 20:45:42 GMT -5
i truly hope you are feeling well and have a full recovery fell better we can wait for the post
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please tell me, when are you going to be able to update again?