The Return of Prue (Updated: 2/24/06)

[PRcharmedfan]

well, i hope everything come up alright! and as lebasi said come to a full recover cause we cant wait for the next updated! get well soon!

[XxP3HalliwellxX]

Okay everyone, I hope this sounds like good news. My eye is better...so I can try to post the next update by tomorrow the lastest. Hope everyone has a fun week! Bye!

[XxP3HalliwellxX]

Banningstan, Jeksog, Mavic, and Linnea Lotti belong to me only. Please don't steal my characters!
CHAPTER 18
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"What about that other demon?" Jeksog asked curiously. "What about him?" Banningstan asked. "Aren't you afraid he will interfere with our plans?" Jeksog asked, looking at his brother. "No I don't, he believes he killed me...he doesn't even know who I am...However-
"Won't he find out?" Jeksog interupts. Banningstan turns angrily at his brother. "If you let me finish I will tell you!" Banningstan yells. "Yes..." Jeksog responds. Banningstan walks toward a black cabinet and opens it. After a few short moments he whispers. "Perfect!" Banningstan laughs evily. "What is it, my brother?" Jeksog asks. "This...," Banninstan says slowly. "Very interesting...," Jeksog grins. "That should work perfectly," Jeksog responds, understanding what its' for.

"Mavic will find out sooner or later...However, I want you to pay him a visit," Banningstan says. "Understood, you want me to approach him so we can use him as bait...,"Jeksog reponds, grinning evily at their perfectly well plan. "Yes...your learning fast...however I want him to join us...," Banningstan says. Jeksog was just leaving when his brother grabbed his arm. "Wait...take this...he'll think your me at first, of course you'll have to tell him I'm still alive...but once you tell him of our plan he will certainly join us...it will take some persuading but he will eventually accept...give him that too," Banningstan says. "Yes," Jeksog responds, leaving in lighting and fire. Just as Banningtan is sitting down in his chair a demon appears. Banningstan glares at him. "Did you do what I asked?" Banningstan asks. "Yes sir, but he didn't take it to well when I told him he had to follow your requests. "Okay...where is he then?" Banninstan asks cautiously. "He's coming....," the demon says slowly. After a few short moments dark orbs appear. Banninstan stands up and approaches the figure. "Welcome," Banningstan says. Finally a figure of a man appears. He's wearing all black and his cross bow at his side. "Do you know what your here for?" Banningtan asks. "Yes...to kill the Charmed Ones!" The daek lighter laughs evily. "Good," Banninstan responds. Banninstan turns toward the demon. "You've done well...Banningstan says. "Thank you sir," the demon interupts, a smile across his face. "However I don't need you anymore!" Banningstan says coldly. The smile on the demons face disppears as Banningtan throws a fireball at him, killing him instantly.

THE MANOR

"Are you sure you want to do this?" Phoebe asks, looking at Chris worriedly. Chris nods. "OKay..remember you need to be back in one hour...take this watch...," Prue says. "How's that going to help me?" Chris interupts, looking very confused. "Well, whatever your wearing now will appear once your in Pipers' nightmare. "Ohh...okay," Chris responds. "Don't worry, I know you can do this," Prue says, putting on a warm smile. "Thanks, I hope so...," Chris responds. Okay...read off of this," Paige says, laying the book on the sofa. Chris sits between the book and Piper and grabs Pipers' Left hand and looks at the book. There is a long silence between everyone. Chris swallows. "Intruding in a Nightmare...so dark, so alone. Thee one I hold so tight, to show the person the light. Free the person from such evil as I enter a nightmare so cold," Chris says, lowering his head as he goes unconcious. "Do you think he will be okay?" Paige asks. "I'm sure of it...," Phoebe responds, unsure of herself. Linnea approaches Phoebe, Paige, and Prue. "Don't worry...he will save Piper...it's his mother...he loves her very much, I don't think he will let anything happen to her," Linnea says. "She's right...let's just hope he get's put sooner...we don't want anymore demon attacks," Prue says, worried about the safety of her sister and her nephew.
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I hope everyone liked it. Chapter 19 will come soon! Please post reviews! Thanks to everyone who did!

[ejhoagie]

Ok. I just sat down and read your entire story to-date, and I'm officially hooked.

You're writing is GREAT!!

We, sorry, I, may be impatient, but it's worth the wait.

[XxP3HalliwellxX]

Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed my story. I will try to have chapter 19 soon. Maybe by sunday or monday.

[XxP3HalliwellxX]

I know this might be off topic on my own thread. But does anyone know what happened to Prue516. I looked back at all the posts she made on my thread and they say all guest. I know before she was a member. If anyone knows can someone tell me? I really would appreciate it.

[lebasi]

xxp3 you are right even her own threads say guest... i wonder what happened by the way great post and how is your eye

[XxP3HalliwellxX]

It's good, I have to have a follow up on Monday. Thanks for asking. I'm starting to work on the next chapter.

[CharmBffy]

i'm glad it is good and hope everything goes right on you next check up and this is a great update

[PRcharmedfan]

wow im hooked! this is great! thank God your eye is ok. i cant wait for the next chapter.

[belthazor123]

thisis one of th best stories i have ever read post soon plese i must know what hapens

[lebasi]

hey so what did the doc say about your eye i hope its better

[XxP3HalliwellxX]

Well my doctor said my eye is okay. And I have to go back in 2 months. Which will be sept. 23. He said it healed great. So I'm glad about that. Thanks for asking. You guys are great. thanks Belthazor123, I'm glad you liked my story. I'm getting so many readers now. I'm very excited. Sorry for the long wait for the next chapter. I started writing it but I'm not done with it yet. I'll try to have it up as soon as possible.

[CharmBffy]

that is good noew about your eye and don't worried about the story cuz we will all be here waitin cuz it is that good

[lebasi]

i am glad your doing so well dont worry im sitting here waiting for you ...no hurry its a great story well worth the wait

[CharmBffy]

yup yup

[XxP3HalliwellxX]

Banningstan, Jeksog, Mavic, and Linnea Lotti belong to me only, or any other demons that appear in this fan fic. PLease don't steal my characters!
(CHAPTER 19)
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Chris appears in a dark, musty room.

"Where an I?" Chris asks him self. "This must be Pipers'..." Chris says slowly, then is interupted by the sound of doors' slamming.

"Where are you Witch!" the demon shouts angrily.

Chris see's a big, soldier like statue and runs behind it.

The demon passes Chris and continues to search for Piper.

Chris eyes the demon cautiously, careful not to make any sound.

After a few minutes the demon dissapears down a long corridor and the faint sound of door's slamming could still be heard.

Chris quietly steps from behind the statue and walks toward another room. He squints into the dark room to see if he see's any sign of Piper.

"Where is she?" Chris says quietly, continuing his search. "I can't call out for her or the demon will hear me...wait, I can try to sense her..."

Chris closes his eyes. After a few short moments confusion becomes evident on his face. He finally opens his eyes. Chris then tries to orb.

"What the hell, my powers aren't working!" Chris yells, then stops him self, realizing there was a demon still around, or more.

Chris presses the glow button on his watch. He squints at the time. Fifteen mminutes has passed since he entered Pipers' nightmare and no sign of Piper was found.

"What am I going to do!" Chris says slowly, starting to get nervous. "If I can't find Piper then we'll be stuck in here forever and I have no powers to get out of here."

THE UNDERWORLD

Mavic is pacing around a big cave, type room.

"I'm going to kill the rest of the Charmed Ones...then I'll be the source of all evil!" Mavic says evily.

Jeksog appears in front of Maivic then he grins.

"What the hell..." Mavic says slowly, to shocked to do anything.

Jeksog approaches Mavic.

"Good evening Mavic," Jeksog says, holding out his hand toward Mavic.

"I thought I killed you!" Mavic yells, not accepting the warm gesture Jeksog gave him.

Jeksog shakes his head slowly.

"No you didn't, you must be mistaken, that was my brother...we look very much alike," Jeksog says.

Mavic looks at him cautiously.

"What are you doing here?"Mavic asks, a fire ball appearing in his right hand.

"Interesting...however, I wouldn't do that if I were you," Jeksog says, a smirk plastered on his face.

"Don't tell me what I can't or can't do!" Mavic yells, throwing the fire ball at Jeksog.

Jeksog catches the fire ball quickly in his right hand then closes his hand extinguishing it in the process. Then charges at Mavic and puts his hand around Mavics' neck, slamming him into the cave wall.

"I told you not to do that, now didn't I?" Jeksog asks angrily, choking him harder.

Mavic struggles for breath, but doesn't do anything else.

"Didn't I?" Jeksog asks' again, glaring into Mavics' eyes which were beginning to role to the back of his head.

Mavic finally nods slowly.

Jeksog releases his hand from Mavic's throat and pulls out a round, golden rock.

Mavic rubs his throat.

"What is...is that?" Mavic asks, stilling rubbing his throat.

"Oh...this," Jeksog asks, looking at the rock. "It's a deathius."

"What the hell is a deathius?" Mavic asks confusingly.

"Never heard of it...well, it can kill a mortal or any other being instantly...it will leave the corpse of a mortal, but will incinerate a demon or warlock," Jeksog says with a smirk.

"Your...Your not...," Mavic asks, then is interupted by Jeksog.

"Going to use it on you?" Jeksog says, injoying the mere torture. "No, it would be a waste...I thought I would use it on something better."

"Ohh...okay," Mavic says, relieved. "What were you going to use it on?" Mavic asks curiously.

"Well, I thought I would use it on one of the Charmed Ones," Jeksog said evily, then looks at Mavic, knowing exactly what he would say next.

"Well that should be easy, I already destroyed the Charmed Ones," Mavic said, happy with his remark.

"Actually, you didn't," Jeksog says, rolling the rock in his left hand.

"what do you mean I didn't?" Mavic asks, enraged that he would say something like that.

"Well, you were so stupid that you didn'twatch the rest of the image, the eldest Charmed One survived," Jeksog said, disapointed that she was still alive.

Mavic was speechless.

"However, she went into a state of shock and is very vulnerable," Jeksogs says, laughing evily.

"Oh, I see, and why did you come to me and tell me this when you could have easily took the victory over the death of the Charmed Ones?" Mavic asked cautiously.

"Well, you see, her sisters' will be there to protect her, and will be expecting a demon to attack at any moment," Jeksog said. "And I wanted your help to distract them," Jeksog said, grinning.

"Why would I help you?" Mavic asked, glaring into Jeksogs' black eyes.

"Because, then you would get this deathius to use it on any Charmed One of your choice," Jeksog said, continuing to roll the rock in his hand. "But if you don't want it...," Jeksog says slowly, placing the deathius back in his pocket.

"Wait...," Mavic shouts, looking at Jeksog.

"Did you change your mind?" Jeksog asked, pulling the deathius out of his pocket again. "Also, I must have forgotten to tell you, my brother is still alive...," Jeksog says, pulling out a letter out of his coat pocket. "He wanted me to give you this."

jeksog hands the letter to Mavic.

"Banningstan explains everything in there, and if you decide to join us come to our lair," Jeksog says, turning around to leave.

"What about the deathius?" Mavic asked, looking at the rock.

"When you join us," Jeksog says with a grin.

Jeksog turns around once again.

"And don't get any ideas...there is no way you can kill us," Jeksog says, then dissapears in lighting and fire.
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I hope everyone liked it. Plese post reviews. Chapter 19 coming soon.

[lebasi]

;D bravo. it gets better all the time

[CharmBffy]

that is really good keep up the great work and update soon

[PRcharmedfan]

yeahhh!!! cool