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Post by prue on Nov 5, 2005 20:51:37 GMT -5
I just read the entire thing from beginning to present and I am so totally hooked! You have a great talent- much better than the so-called writers at Charmed. This is stellar... once you have finished it, you really should submit it for publishing! Can't wait to see what happens next!
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Post by XxP3HalliwellxX on Nov 6, 2005 17:51:43 GMT -5
Thanks for the great reviews everyone, I'm so glad you like it! I'll try to have the next update tomorrow to tuesday. sorry the long wait guys, I've been busy with school work and Driver's ed. But because you guys give me such good reviews I'll try to have the next update sooner then planend.
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Post by peterhalliwell on Nov 7, 2005 17:15:06 GMT -5
I like it too... it inspired me to write one with Prue too, although very different. Check out "A Delicious Blend." And let me know what you think!
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Post by prue on Nov 7, 2005 19:16:21 GMT -5
Yes, peterhalliwell's story is very different from yours, but also good! Really good!
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Post by XxP3HalliwellxX on Nov 13, 2005 10:29:35 GMT -5
Thanks, you guys are great. I'm glad you liked my story. Thanks PeterHalliwell, I'm glad to know my story inspired you to write one also. I'll check it out.
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Post by XxP3HalliwellxX on Nov 16, 2005 14:13:07 GMT -5
Okay...since all of you might be wondering when the next update will be it should be in before this friday. I already started writing it and I'm almost donw with it. Just wanted to let everyone know.
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Post by XxP3HalliwellxX on Dec 5, 2005 16:57:55 GMT -5
Banningstan, Jeksog, Linnea Lotti, and Mavic belong to me only! (Chapter 22) ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ PIPER”S NIGHTMARE
“Wow….,” Prue gasps. “This looks like a maze…”
Prue squint’s her eyes as she tries to look beyond the darkness and fog in front of her.
“Oh…,” Prue gulps. “I sure hope I find them in time!” Prue whispers.
Prue looks at her wrist. “Damn it!” Prue yells. “I forgot my watch!”
A sudden sound of running is heard and doors slamming.
“Oops!” Prue whispers.
“I’m going to find you witch…” The demon yells. “If it’s the last thing I do!”
Prue runs quickly and quietly to the next room and wanders ammishly around, looking for Chris and Piper.
“I wonder if Chris found Piper already,” Prue thinks.
Prue stops in front of a closet door, peaking into the next room in front of her. She then hears whispers coming from the closet.
“Prue…” Chris whispers. “Is that you?”
Prue kneels down in front of the door and peaks into the key hole.
“Yes!” Prue whispers excitedly. “I never thought I would find you two!”
“Thank god!” Piper cries out. Opening the closet door and climbing out along with Chris.
Prue hugs Piper. “Are you okay?”
“Yeah, I’m fine!” Piper replies, looking at her sister with happiness.
“Well,” Chris begins, “We have a problem.”
Prue turns and looks at Chris with confused eyes. “What do you mean we have a problem?”
“There’s a demon in here…and we have no powers!” Piper says slowly.
“Oh...” Prue mutters, “I thought I heard someone else in here….did you try to see if you have any powers?”
“That’s the first thing I tried when I got in here,” Chris replies sadly.
“Hmm…,” Prue thinks. “What time is it?”
“Your not going to like it!” Chris replies. “We have ten minutes until were stuck in here forever!”
“That’s not good!” Prue replies quickly. “We need to hurry and find a way out of here!”
“You think?” Chris adds sarcastically.
Prue ignores him.
“Piper,” Prue says. “Do you know who the demon is that is in here?” Prue asks.
“I think it’s Banningstan, but I’m not really sure,” Piper replies sadly.
“Well, we’ll worry about him later, but we need to get out of here first.
“Okay,” Chris and Piper reply.
Short moments of silence pass and Piper looks intently at her quiet sister.
“Did you think of something, Prue?” Piper asks hopefully.
“I think so…,” Prue begins. “I think it’s worth a shot” “What is it?” Chris demands.
Prue turns to Piper and Chris, then looks into her sister’s eyes.
“What if we somehow did a power of three spell?” Prue asks.
“Well, I don’t know…,” Piper mutters. “Can you explain more?” Piper asks.
“Well, what if you, Paige, and Phoebe do a connection….somehow we can do a spell to reach them by mind and tell them to hold our hands and do a spell together to get us out of here,” Prue explains quickly.
“Oh, I see what your saying…,” Chris mutters. “The power of Three!”
“Yep…,” Prue says excitedly.
“Okay then, we need to hurry and think of one by memory and fast!” Piper demands.
Prue smirks.
“No need….,” Prue says. “I happen to have a pen and paper in my pocket from the spell we were working on earlier!”
“Great!” Piper replies.
“Let’s get to work!” Chris demands.
Piper and Prue roll their eyes. “Kids….,” Piper whispers, only for Prue to hear. Prue giggles. “Okay,” they reply. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Sorry for the long wait guys, I hope you liked this chapter. Please post reviews if you would like me to continue!
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Post by prue on Dec 5, 2005 19:01:07 GMT -5
love it! can't wait for the next installment!
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Post by *Prueforever* on Dec 7, 2005 14:19:35 GMT -5
this story is so brill u r soooo talented and i cant wait for the next installment the suspence is killing me
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Post by thetriforever on Jan 2, 2006 20:06:06 GMT -5
I'm hooked please make some more and look at my story The New Witch in the alternitive reality ff and give my some suggestions.
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Post by whiteworlock258 on Jan 6, 2006 14:28:45 GMT -5
hey this is a great story.
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Post by XxP3HalliwellxX on Feb 18, 2006 17:16:26 GMT -5
I am so sorry for the very long wait for the next chapter. I've been really busy with my move and now that I'm done I have started writing the next chapter. I should have it done by Friday. Thanks for being so patient!
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Post by hollypop on Feb 18, 2006 19:15:59 GMT -5
I just got recently 'hooked' so your news is very good news
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Post by XxP3HalliwellxX on Feb 24, 2006 12:56:18 GMT -5
Hey everyone!!! I apoligize for the wait and thanks for being such great fans and being patient for me!!!! I finally got this chapter done!! I also think this is the longest chapter I wrote in a long time!!! Thanks for the great reviews everyone! (Chapter 22) ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ PIPER’S NIGHTMARE
“Anything yet?” Chris asks with anticipation.
“If you continue to pace behind us like that we’ll never get anything done!” Piper exclaims, trying to concentrate.
“Please, Chris, if you want to help, try to think of a spell, or else stop bothering us because all you’re doing is wasting time!” Prue demands.
“Okay…okay…, I give up,” Chris replies, looking at his aunt and mother.
Prue turns to Piper. “Anything?” Prue asks.
“I might…but I’m not sure it will work,” Piper responds gravely, looking over the paper once more.
“Well, give it a try!” Prue says, encouraging her little sister.
“Okay…,” Piper exclaims. “Here goes nothing!”
“Connect me to the ones I love, the sisters three, so far, so near, the power of three, let us be in minds,” Piper chants, then closes her eyes.
Prue clasps her hands together with anticipation, hoping that this will work.
“I think I can feel an energy pull,” Piper thinks, taking in a breath.
THE MANOR
“Oh God!” Paige exclaims. “I don’t think they will come out!”
“They have too,” Phoebe answers, giving each other hope.
In a sudden breeze, Phoebe and Paige shudder.
“Did you feel that?” Phoebe asks, looking at her sister.
“A breeze if that’s what you’re asking,” Paige replies, rubbing her arms.
“Did you feel it, Linnea?” Paige asks slowly.
“No, I didn’t,” Linnea answers, turning around and smirking. I know they can do it!
“Well that was weird…,” Phoebe says, walking to the BOS.
Just as Phoebe approaches the book she feels energy shooting through her body.
Phoebe goes into a trance.
“Phoebe?” Paige asks cautiously, waving her hand in front of her face. “Are you okay?”
“Phoebe….can you hear me?” Piper asks. “It’s Piper!”
Piper…,” Phoebe whispers. “Is that you?”
“Oh…thank god!” Piper exclaims happily. “I thought the spell wouldn’t work!”
“Are you okay?” Phoebe asks.
Paige looks at her sister awkwardly.
“What’s going on?” Paige wonders.
“yeah, I’m fine!” Piper answers. “But no time for that…we only have eight minutes until me, Chris and Prue are stuck here forever!”
“What can I do?” Phoebe asks quickly.
“You and Paige need to make a connection to me,” Piper says in a stern, but scared voice.
“How are we going to do that?” Phoebe questions her sister.
“Go to my body and hold my hand…and Paige’s too,” Piper explains quickly. “Then hold onto Chris’s and Prue’s”
“Is there a spell we have to say?” Phoebe asks.
“Yes, you know the one,” Piper replies. “The power of three will set us free!”
“Okay is that it?” Phoebe asks.
A long silence passes.
“Piper?” Phoebe asks worriedly. “Are you there?”
Phoebe comes out of the trance.
“What happened?” Paige asks, looking at her sister.
“Piper contacted me,” Phoebe explains carefully. “She wants us to hold hand and recite the power of three spell.”
“Okay, sounds good to me!” Paige exclaims.
“But we need to hurry…we only have 6 minutes left!” Phoebe says quickly.
Paige and Phoebe run to Piper, Chris, and Prue and they grab their hands.
PIPER’S NIGHTMARE
Piper shivers a bit and opens her eyes.
“Did it work?” Phoebe asks with curiosity.
“Yes,” Piper replies. “I hot hold of Phoebe. She will be doing the spell any minute.”
“Thank God!” Phoebe exclaims cheerfully.
Chris looks at his mother and sighs.
“Good, because we only have five minutes left,” Chris announces.
“Don’t worry Chris, it will work,” Piper says. “Now lets grab each others hands and I’ll chant the spell.
Chris, Prue and Piper grab hands.
“The power of three will set us free, the power of three will set us free,” Piper chants, then closes her eyes.
Several seconds pass.
“Why isn’t working?” Chris asks, starting to panic.
“I don’t know…,” Piper says slowly. “Let me try again.
“The power of three will set us free, the power of three will set us free,” Piper chants once again.
“Nothing,” Prue whispers.
“Oh God!” Chris yells. “Were never going to get out of here.”
“Shhh…,” Prue demands. “The demon is going to hear us.”
“I don’t-“ chris begins, but then is interrupted my yells from a demon.
“Look what you did?” Piper replies sternly. “Now were going to get killed.”
In a sudden burst of encouragement, Prue’s face lights up.
“What is it?” Piper asks her sister.
“I think I have an idea.” Prue explains. “Do the connection spell again.”
Piper pulls the sheet of paper out with the spell on it.
“Now when you get in contact with Phoebe again, tell her to say the Power of four will set us free instead the power of three,” Prue explains in depth. “Tell her to say it with Paige.” Prue smiles.
“Okay,” Piper says, reading the spell and going into the trance.
Thirty seconds later Piper comes out of the trance again.
“Did you do it?” Prue asks.
Yes,” Piper replies quickly.
“Okay then, let’s hurry!” Chris replies with frustration,. “Because there’s the demon.”
Piper and Prue glance one hundred feet ahead and see the demon coming towards them.
“I’m going to get you witches!” The demon yells angrily.
Piper, Prue, and Chris grabs hands.
“The power of four will set us free, the power of four will set us free,” Piper chants.
Nothing happens.
“Let me help,” Prue demands. “The power of four will se us free!”
The power of Four will set us free, the power of Four will set us free!” Piper and Prue chant, and then in a sudden whisk of air, they disappear in white light.
“No!!!!” The demon yells angrily. “I lost them!”
THE MANOR “Piper?” Phoebe says, with tears flowing down her cheeks. “Wake up!”
“Oh no…,” Paige whispers. “It’s a minute beyond the time they were supposed to be in there.”
Phoebe leans on Piper’s shoulder and cries over her head, covering her face.
“I can’t breath…,” Piper says slowly, struggling for air.
“Piper!” Phoebe exclaims, getting off of Piper and hugging her. “Your okay!”
Paige jumps in Piper’s lap and gives her a big hug.
“Guys, I didn’t die!” Piper laughs.
“But you almost did!” Phoebe replies, smiling.
“How come their not waking up?” Paige asks, looking at Chris and Prue.
“Don’t worry, they will,” Piper replies with a smile.
Not even a second later Prue and Chris started to groan and open their eyes slowly.
“Damn,” Prue says slowly. “I feel like I was on a Merry go round that was going sixty miles an hour.”
“You feel dizzy, I feel like I was hit in the head,” Chris complains, rubbing his temples.
“Glad to have you back!” Phoebe and Paige exclaim, giving each of them a hug.
Linnea finally steps out of the shadows and smiles.
“yeah, it’s good that your guys are back,” Linnea smiles. “Now we can finally vanquish those demons and find Leo.”
“Yes!” Piper agrees. “I want to find my husband!”
Well then, let’s get to work!” Prue demands, laughing along with Paige and Phoebe.
“I like that idea!” Chris replies. “Let’s hope we can find him.” ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I hoped you all liked it!!! Please leave me feedback and let me know what you thought! Thanks, I really appreciate it!
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Post by HollysFan on Feb 24, 2006 21:30:38 GMT -5
Very cool story. I remember reading this now. I was wondering when you were going to post more.
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Post by hollypop on Feb 25, 2006 16:10:47 GMT -5
I was on the edge of my seat. I absolutley loved it!! The sisters seem so close in your FanFic- makes me long for the good old days *sniffs* Seriously... it's great. Please don't leave us hanging long for another update.
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Post by XxP3HalliwellxX on Feb 25, 2006 17:43:32 GMT -5
Thanks for the reviews!! I'm glad you liked it. I'll try to post the next edition later this week.
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Post by Piper Halliwell on Mar 3, 2006 19:24:28 GMT -5
Wow! XxP3HalliwellxX, you did an excellent job! You should send this story to Brad Kern and make it official
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Post by prue on Mar 26, 2006 18:05:03 GMT -5
Great job! I really am enjoying it!
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Post by rayne on Apr 17, 2006 22:05:41 GMT -5
You are such a brilliant writer, i loved how you made the sisters tight and let them join there powers to get out. Please, by all means continue with this story. I want to see what happens!
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