3 Witches and a Holy Vampire (Part 1)

[Miss. Hellfire]

You are very creative--I don't think I could have ever thought up something like this. You have taken on a massive task in writing this wonderful story. The one thing I do want to comment on-- I would try to edit before you post, because you don't want grammatical errors to take away from this brilliant story. It makes it harder to read when the sentences don't flow properly. But, anyway, great story. You have a lot of talent!

[slip]

john - the first time i read the story - i think mustve been the first two pages - i thought to myself LOL this is so over the top!! - but somehow i kept coming back for the updates and that is when i realized the enormity of the storyline at hand - so very intricately weaved together with the correct amounts of all the essential elements - gradually it became harder to cease reading. The frame is so larger than life - that at certain points it tends to overwhelm the imagination - i reckon that is a very good thing for fiction. Congratulations. I label this an epic.

[stewie]

You are a great writer, i could feel what they were feeling and see what they could see. I can't wait to see what happens, please do me a favor... never stop writing!

[jmasonii]

Thank you all, I plan to finish this out to the end. There is going to be a HUGE twist at the end, that will probably shock everyone! Be prepared it will be coming May 21st, 2006 a few hours before the Charmed Series finale. Again thank you all.

[jmasonii]

And here is a little teaser....


"3 Witches and a Holy Vampire Part 13.2"
"How to Resurrect The Unseen Servant of God"

Everyone had gathered closer by Paige and stared at the Book of Shadows. Right there it was in the book, How To Resurrect The Unseen Servant of God. It was perhaps the most long and complicated ritual The Charmed Ones had ever seen, but it was possible. Rapheal could be ressurected. Everyone would be needed though. Raphael had obviously forseen this, in fact counted on it, and knew he could trust The Charmed Ones to ressurect him.
And so, everyone stared at one another for a moment, in disbelief until Paige spoke up.
"Come on people, we have a Holy Vampire to ressurect." And to put emphasis on her words she clapped her hands together.
The effect was instantaneous....everyone scattered to gather something that was needed for the ritual....


May 21st...the most major twist within the story will happen....Be prepared...

[♥.·:*¨Kat¨*:·.♥]

I can hardly wait for the finale.

[hollypop]

jmasonii, it's a great story and I really can't wait to find out how you are going to write the finale.

[Faithfully charmed]

I had been waiting for Sunday to get here all week, so I could read the finale. What happened? When will the finale be posted? I can't stand the suspense too much longer.

P.S. This is a great story!!

;D

[jmasonii]

I have enlisted in the Army. I have until June 20 before I go to basic training, so it will be posted before then. I can't right now because I have been up since 4:00 a.m. this morning!! IT WILL BE FINISHED THOUGH BEFORE I LEAVE!!

[jmasonii]

"Three Witches and a Holy Vampire"
Part 14: Ressurection


The Charmed Ones stood at the three points of the triquetra and Leo, Cole, Micheal, Gabriel, and Raziel stood outside of them at the points of a five pointed star. In the very center was the urn in which Raphaels ashes had gathered. Paige knelt over it and poured the mixed blood of all those gathered inside the urn as the book instructed. She then took out the fruit from the tree of life and knowledge and placed it too within the urn and took her place back at the triquetra, among her sisters.
"All right, now does everyone remember the words to the spell?" She asked looking at everyone, and everyone nodded back at her. "Well then, here goes nothing."
Simultaneously, everyone began to chant the words to the spell from the Book of Shadows.
"Mitu' shendo bashilk, valrus kyrin mor do', ressurectus!"
Instanteously, the Triquetra and the Pentagram lit up with a blazing white light that connected with all those gathered and went inward toward the Charmed Ones. It ripped right through them and straight into the urn. Raphael's ashes, that same dazzling white, shot out of the urn and coelecsed into a material form immediately. The Charmed Ones suddenly felt weaker, they were no longer goddesses. The spell had worked successfully.
Raphael Zazzparass, The Unseen Servant of God, the incarnation of the Holy Spirit had been ressurected.
"Geez, it took you guys long enough." Raphael spoke smiling. Raziel walked over to him and handed him Alpha Omega.
"I believe this belongs to you."
Raphael grasped the pommel of the greatest weapon in all of creation, and once again felt its infinite strength.
"Thanks Raziel. Thank you all."
"I think it is us that shood be thanking you Raphael." Piper said smiling, and to which Leo and everyone else nodded.
"Ah, now without all of your help I could have never done it. We saved the universe together. Now, I must do something that has been granted to me by my master for my services."
Everyone looked at one another puzzled.
Raphael walked over to Paige, dropped down to one knee, produced the most gorgeous ring that ever existed, and asked, "Paige will you marry me?"
Everyone's mouth dropped, except for Phoebe who had forseen this moment when she first became a goddess and used her premention power on the Unseen Servant.
Paige was totally taken back. "Is that even possible, I mean is that allowed?"
Rapheal responded, "Yes, I found love once in the 15th century, and it seems she was reincarnated as you Paige. The Lord Almighty has given me permission to marry you if you'll have me. That is with your sister's permission as well."
Paige looked over at Piper and Phoebe who were both nodding quite emphatically YES!
Paige looked back and Raphael and took the ring and placed it on her finger.
"Yes." She said tears started to well up in her eyes. Raphael stood up and bent forward and kissed her passionately.
Everyone started cheering. It seemed as though the universe was safe at last, and everything was going to fine, and indeed it was, at least for awhile. Everyone back on Earth was safe and sound, and everything was generally quite peaceful. The Charmed Ones had grown stronger as sisters during the whole ordeal as well as everyone else that had joined in the fight. Paige had finally found true love at last in the most surprising way, and everyone was happy for her and Raphael. The wedding day was sure to be the greatest the Earth, nay the entire universe had ever seen. But that is in of itself a story for a different time......................Somewhere in the vast reaches of space a darkness unlike any other began to take form. It formed into Chaos once more who spoke directly to God.
"I almost had your champion that time, O' Almighty One. And I will keep trying for all eternity, for like you I am eternal, timeless."
"You may try as many times as you wish Chaos, but the result will always be the same, the purveyors of what is good will rise to whatever combat you. Raphael, you forget is eternal too, for he is the third part of the Holy Trinity, he is the essence of Holy Spirit, and that Chaos is something you will never defeat or overcome."
"That may be Almighty," Chaos smiled evilly, "But I will forever try. That is my nature."
"And it is Raphael's nature to forever keep destroying you."
Chaos did not make a reply, instead he began to plot of how he would overcome The Unseen Servant. He had time.
He had eternity, but so too did Raphael....


THE END!!!!


I sincerely hope you enjoyed. May you all be blessed in whatever you do. Blessed be!!!!!!!!

[♥.·:*¨Kat¨*:·.♥]

That was brilliant. I wish you all the best for the future.

[jmasonii]

Thank you very much. I plan to make the best of it. I am just glad I finished the story. Anyone who wishes to copy to their sites may, I give you my permission. All I ask is that the story or any of the characters do not get plagiarized. I would appreciate that a lot. Please give credit where credit is due. Thank you. They story itself printed out without the comments is 50 pages or longer, I have it printed out already, just in case someone wanted to print it out. I hope you all enjoyed it, I truly enjoyed writing it. I wish you all the best.

[AjentAnjel :)]

so it took me a long to actually read it, but its amazing, and was totally worth it. I think i reread the beginning 3 times cause i kept losing my place. But GREAT job!

[jmasonii]

Thank you very much. I am GRADUATING BASIC TRAINING TOMORROW!!!! TALK TO YOU ALL LATER!!!!

[jmasonii]

Wow. It has been awhile. This story is probably the best and only one I have really truly finished. I myself am amazed...

[~Andrew~]

Amazing story! It is so great. The whole Rapheal plot is so interesting and complex and plain incredible. Also I love how the charmed ones are so powerful. And Rapheal being stuck with chaos in the end. That was awesome. ;D