3 Witches and a Holy Vampire (Part 1)

[simplypoo83]

WARNING :: May offend some readers, religious tone.


Posted by jmasonii


« Reply #3 on Oct 18, 2005, 8:45pm »

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This story will be a crossover between the novel I am currently writing titled, The Unseen Servant of God, and "Charmed". It will be about how... well, I guess if you want to find out what it will be about just read it.

"3 Witches and a Holy Vampire (Part 1)

Piper, Phoebe, and Paige were surrounded, out numbered, and frankly were going to be quite dead in a few moments.
" Well, it has been nice knowing you guys. I guess I'll see you in the afterlife." Paigw spoke, as the ten upper level demons slowly closed the circle around the infamous "Charmed Ones".
" Paige, we will figure a way out of this, we always do." Piper, ever being the optimistic older sister answered, then looked around for an opening. There wasn't any, the demons had the circle locked tight.
" Piper, just start blowing them up." Phobe commanded, pointing toward the demons.
Before Piper could answer that she had been trying, seven times in fact to blow a demon up, the leader of this particular group of demons Zeahazz answered for her.
"She has been trying Phoebe, seven times now isn't?" Zeahazz cockily gestured to Piper. "The great thing about all of this is that I recruited all upper level demons who are immune to witches powers, ha ha ha!!! There is nothing you can do, any of you. What I don't understand is why a demon didn't think of this before. I guess not all demons can be as smart as me." Zeahazz's last statement drew looks from his other fellow demons.
"Well" an invisible voice spoke, "if you're so smart then you must have heard of me." Raphael Zazzparass, The Unseen Servant of God spoke materializing directly in front of the "Charmed Ones"
"Hello, ladies." Raphael smiled, revealing his vampiric nature, and waving his hnad at the women draping them with a holy shield.
"Who and what are you?" Piper asked as she seen his fangs, but she also had a feeling that he was there to rescue them, even if he was a vampire.
"He is DEAD!!!!" Zeahazz screamed forming an energy ball and throwing it at Raphael, who did not flinch at all. The other demons took this as a cue and formed energy and fire balls and took aim and fired.
Raphael continued to stand unflinching.
Every energy and fire ball passed through him and connected with a demon, vanquishing him. Only a few demons were luck enough to get away, Zehazz included.
Suddenly, the most magnificent looking sword that the demons or the girls ever saw appeared in the holy vampires left hand.
With a swing he vanquished the rest of the demons, except Zeahazz.
"This is the Sword of God, I named it Alpha Omega for The Beginning and the End. Do you wish to know why?" Raphael asked Zeahazz, who was obviously trying to shimmer away, but Raphael's power held him in place.
Zeahazz, against his better judgment answered, "Why?"
Zeahazz exploded in a fiery vanquish. Raphael had swung the sword at the fastest speed possible, even faster than the speed of light, the speed of thought.
"Because it is your end..." Rapheal returned smiling once more.
He then turned around and faced the sisters, whose mouths all three were wide open, and for the first time ever in the history of the Halliwell manor the women within had been silenced by a man, not a man but a vampire, and not a vampire, but a holy vampire, the only one in existence, and the most powerful being to ever walk the face of the Earth besides Jesus Christ Himself, Raphael Zazzparass; The Unseen Servant of God....

[hydrokinisis]

;DI like it!!! A holy vampire....very original!!!!

[wickedamazon]

hmmmmm.....very intersting. keep up the good work

[sweet8]

*I like it! Please update ASAP!

[jmasonii]

First of all I appreciate the compliments, they are GREATLY APPRECIATED. As it is said ask and you shall receive. Here it is ladies and gentlemen part 2


"3 Witches and a Holy Vampire Part Two"


The girls just stood there, quite dumbfounded, shocked, and frankly quite scared. After all, any single being that could vanquish all those upper level demons with such ease, could easily destroy them as well.
Raphael read their minds and discovered their fear, so he decided the easiest way to prove to the "Charmed Ones" that he was there to help them, as well as ask for their help was through the Book of Shadows. With a mere thought he materialized the extremely powerful book in his hands.
Phoebe got ready to say "Hey!", but Raphael motioned for her to be silent, at least for the time being.
"Allow me to introduce myself, I am The Unseen Servant of God, Raphael Zazzparass. I know that you think just because I can touch the book doesn't make me good, but will you believe what the Book of Shadows has to say about me?"
"Perhaps, I guess we have no choice, considering if you wanted us dead, you would have and could have easily already killed us." Piper spoke looking at her two sisters who nodded their heads in agreement.
With a wave of his hand he opened the Book of Shadows to the very lengthy chapter on himself and hand it over to Piper who sat on the couch with Phoebe and Paige.
After a few paragraphs down, Paige blurted out, "A holy vampire, how is that even possible?"
Raphael merely replied, smiling once again revealing his fangs, "Read on, everything you need to know about me is within the book and if you are still unsure about me, ask Leo."
After about half an hour of reading about the holy vampire and his background, the girls were convinced that he was good.
A moment later, heeding Raphael's silent call, Leo orbed in. Upon seeing Raphael, he bowed before him in pure respect. Seeing Leo offer that respect the girls were convinced beyond any doubt that Raphael was indeed very good, and quite easily the most powerful being they had even encountered, even more powerful than the Titans and the Avatars. Which brought up a very good question, whic Leo tried to ask.
"Raphael, ...what...are you..." Leo was even more stunned than the girls. He had met the holy vampire once before and that was when Raphael had saved Leo from certain death from a particularly nasty dark lighter, when Leo had first become a white lighter. Needless to say the darklighter was utterly vanquished.
Raphael's response truly surprised them all.
"I need your help."

This concludes Part 2 of "3 Witches and a Holy Vampire" Within a few days I will post part 3, I hope you are enjoying the story thus far. I know I am truly enjoying writing it out as I go. I intend for it to only get better. You may be asking yourself why would a being as powerful as Raphael need the "Charmed Ones" help. I guess you will just have to wait and see. All of you must love cliffhangers, I know I do, that's why I finished the way I did!!! Thanks again for the compliments, I would not mind at all some criticism as well, it will only make this story better!! Thanks and I truly hope you enjoyed part 2, although it wasn't exciting as part 1, I can guarantee that the upcoming parts will be!!! Thanks again!!


Sincerely,

John Mason II

[hollypop]

I absolutely love the idea of the Holy vampire. I thought part two was more exciting... it has more insight into his character. You have the girls' down pretty good so far- I say 'so far' because your vampire really won't let them speak much... at least not yet.

I love the visuals that I 'see' in my mind as I read this. Part three will be ready when??

[jmasonii]

Thanks once again for the positive feedback, I really appreciate it. I must apologize though for taking so lon in writing this; it is just that I work and I am currently working on a few novels with Raphael as the main character. Thus, I have very little time, but since everyone seems to be enjoying the story thus far I believe I have plenty of time to post part 3 right now!!! And maybe part 4 a little later or tomorrow, before Charmed, of course!!! Enjoy!!!


"3 Witches and a Holy Vampire Part III"

"Leo, can we trust this guy....vampire?" Piper asked Leo with a serious look on her face. She then looked back to Raphael who was now making himself comfortable on their couch. He smiled at her, once again revealing his fangs, and unnerving Piper even more. She quickly turned her head back to Leo, a pleading look on her face as she waited on an answer. She didn't have to wait long.
"Piper, he is known as the Unseen Servant of God..." Leo began, but was interrupted by Paige.
"Unseen, we can see him just fine." Paige spoke sarcastically and drew a response from Phoebe.
"And so far I like what I see. Come on Piper, at the very least we owe him our thanks, ten minutes ago, if Raphael had not shown up we would have been seeing him in Heaven. And if he is powerful enough to vanquish however many demons there were, then we know he is far beyond our powers." Phoebe said looking at Raphael and giving him a flirtatious smile.
Before Piper could reply Leo interjected.
"Phoebe's right Piper, Rapheal is beyond all of our power, only when you guys became goddesses were you on par with him. He is a being of extreme goodly power. Piper, he is the third part of the holy trinity, he's Holy Sprit incarnated. Just read more of what the Book of Shadows has to say about him. If you don't think you can trust what I say, you know you can trust what it says." Leo finished walking over to Raphael and asked him if he wanted something to drink. Raphael nodded and Leo motioned for Raphael to follow him.
As the holy vampire passed by Piper he handed the Book of Shadows over to her. Reluctantly she took it from him. As soon as Leo and Rapheal left the room and went into the kitchen the girls huddled closer together to read what else it said in the book about their newest visitor. After a few minutes of reading the girls came to the part where it mentioned something about a vanquish. They had encountered unvanquishable demons and other beings before, but they always figured out a way to somehow change that. With Raphael the book said otherwise and Paige read that part aloud to make sure they had read it write.
"It is impossible to vanquish Raphael. There is not any means in existence to vanquish him, to do so would be similar in trying to vanquish the Almighty Himself." Paige's eyes opened wide.
"He is truly the third part of the Holy Trinity, Holy Spirit. No other being we have ever encountered has been this powerful. The closest would have the Titans, the Avatars, or Cole." Phoebe said to Piper and Paige who nodded their heads in agreement.
Suddenly a familar voice sounded. "Did somebody call?"
All three of the girls eyes opened wide. The three turned around in unison to see Cole standing in the hallway!!!

[hydrokinisis]

;D Ohhhhhh!!!! This is really getting good!!! PART 4, PLEASE!!!

[jmasonii]

"3 Witches and a Holy Vampire and Cole and Leo Part 4.1"



"What the hell are you doing here?!?!" Phobe stood up suddenly, still recovering from the shock of seeing her alledgedly vanquished demonic ex-husband standing directly in front of her, seemingly alive and well.
"Piper, blow him up!" Paige exclaimed in terror, thinking Cole had returned to claim his revenge.
Piper gestured toward Cole, nothing happened. Not even a tiny explosion.
"It is not working." Piper spoke through clenched teeth.
"Of course it's not Piper, I'm am indestructable, after all." Cole relied cockily. "Besides, I am truly good now, just ask Raphael and if you don't believe him then ask Leo." Cole continued. "Besides, Piper, I remember not too long ago I helped you out, or have you forgotten already?"
Phoebe and Paige immediately turned their stares from Cole to their eldest sister, their facial gestures demanding an explanation. When Piper still did not speak, Phoebe turned back to Cole.
"Cole, what are you talking about?" His ex-wife asked, hand on her hips.
As he was about to reply Leo and Raphael walked back into the room.
"Hello Cole, glad to see you show up. You missed the fun, you could have helped me vanquish some upper level demons a little while ago." Raphael said with a laugh, truly gald Cole had finally arrived.
"I figured you could handle them Ralph, they didn't put up too much of a fight did they?" Cole asked, looking back at the sisters, who appeared to be getting very flustered.
Raphael saw this too, but decided to have a little fun at the sister's expense, and at the same time he relayed the message to both Leo and Cole telepathically. Leo and Cole merely smiled.
"No, Cole they did not put up too much a fight, in fact they didn't put up a fight at all. Although, had I not arrived the Charmed Ones would have been no more. And your wife..." Raphael started, but got interruped by Phoebe, which he expected and baited her.
"Okay, okay, lets get something straight right off the back Ralph, (using the tone Cole used earlier) Cole is my EX-HUSBAND, and we would have handled those demons, right ladies?"
When neither Paige nor Piper responded, Phoebe was forced to repeat herself.
"RIGHT LADIES?"

[hydrokinisis]

WOW...this is great!!! I wonder how Cole is back and still invincible......PART 4.2, PLEASE!!! ;D

[jmasonii]

I have one request in the future for all of those readers who have read the fanfiction/short story "3 Witches and a Holy Vampire"...please at least write some kind of comment to allow me to get more insight as to how the story as well as my writing is going. In all honesty, it does not matter whether it is a compliment or just a comment on how to improve the story, or even a question. In fact I would rather have friendly critics and questions rather than compliments, although those ARE GREATLY APPRECIATED as well. I would appreciate if people who read the story thus far would do this. I see the story has been read 85 times, so I know at least 40-50 () people have read the story, yet I only have like 9 comments, INCLUDNG MY OWN!!!! Thanks for your time and consideration, now enough griping everyone onto...

"3 Witches and a Holy Vampire Part 4.2"


"Honestly Phoebe I don't think we could have handled those demons," Piper said in all truthfulness, "and you may want to sit down because Cole is telling the truth about him being good. I have something to tell you and Paige both that will prove it."
"Thank you Piper I appre..." Cole began, but Phoebe shot him a glare cold that he decided to be silent and let Piper have the floor.
"Remember a little while back when Leo got lost and I nearly died by that poison thorn thingy. Well, Cole was the one that helped me out of the netherworld and got Leo and I back together, and the most important part was he did not have any ulterior motive. Also Phoebe he helped me in order to help you be reassured that you will find love again because weren't you starting to fall for that one guy that was a demon, but became human?" Piper finished and looked at Phoebe who actually had tears in her eyes.
"Wow," Paige said, "Cole I never really did like you much and trusted you even less, but you already knew that, but if Holy Spirit over there trusts you and says you are good, as well as Leo and Piper and apparently Phoebe now, then I guess I'll say let bygones be bygones. Oh yeah, I am sorry for getting inside your body and trying to vanquish you that one time."
"No need for an apology Paige, I deserved not to be trusted back then, but now I assure you I can be." Cole stated as he walked over to Phoebe and made a hankerchief materialize in his hand and he handed it over to her.
To everyone's (except Raphael's because of his ability to see the future) including Cole's ultimate suprise Phoebe wiped away her tears stood up and kissed Cole so passionately, it was like the first time again!
Everyone was in complete shock, even Leo who could also partially see into the future was also very suprised. When Phoebe and Cole finally came apart they looked around the room and everyone was smiling, even Paige, which meant a lot to Phoebe and even more so to Cole.
"What are you guys smiling at? I am an empath remember? I detect nothing but pure good from my husband!!!" Phoebe spoke looking up at Cole, and it was his turn to be in shock!
"Huh....what did you...just...call...me?" Cole stuttered.
"Come on dude," Paige spoke, "you've been wanting to hear that come from Phoebe mouth for almost the past four years. Don't be suprised. But hey, now that you truly are good, I am all for letting you guys hook back up."
"I hate to interrupt this moment of pure joy ladies and gentlemen, but I brought back Cole for the same reason I came to you." Raphael began to explain.
"Why?" All three sisters asked in unbison.
"Let me guess," Paige started, "the world is being threatened by some huge powerful demon and you need not only Cole and Leo's help to vanquish it, but the aid of the all=powerful Charmed Ones as well."
"Well, Paige you are half right. The world is being threatened by a huge powerful creature that as the Earth's defender I must defend the world against it." Raphael continued on in his explanation.
"Why did you say I was half-right, and why did you say creature instead of demon. What is it an alien?" Paige asked jokingly then saw the looks on Cole and Leo's face, and she along with Piper and Phoebe stopped laughing.
Not since they had met him had they hear Raphael speak in so serious a tone.
"That is exactly what it is Paige a half demon half alien creature of extreme power, not to mention an army of millions of aliens, as well as a few demons all upper level." Raphael spoke, and the sisters sat down to listen as one. Suddenly, the mood in the room went from happy to scared, and it was well deserved. Not since Raphael had fought and defeated (not to mentioned DIED and was ressurrected!!!) the titantic supreme god-like power of Chaos ITSELF, had Earth experienced such a threat. The sisters had every right to be scarred. If they fought and lost Earth was truly doomed. However, as Raphael continued deeper into his explanation each of the sisters grew more and more determined to vanquish this creature that threatened the Earth as they had done with every other demon, warlock, ghost, titan, etc. that had stood in their way. As Raphael explained the sisters listened more intently than they ever had in their lives. After all the fate of not only the Earth, but quite possibly the very universe depended upon it. Forntuneataly, for the Earth it had the most powerful magical team to exist ever already planning to destroy the threat. Now only if it were to be as easy as the planning....

[jmasonii]

Just to let everyone know, Part V will be posted within a few days, so I hope you enjoy Part 4.2!!! Thanks everyone, especially to the administrators and the site creators, without them this would not have been possible, a special THANKS TO ALL OF THOSE LADIES AND GENTS!!!!!!!!!! Remember ALL READERS PLEASE GIVE SOME KIND OF FEEDBACK!!!!! THANKS A LOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Sincerely,

John Mason II

[hydrokinisis]

;D Phoebe kissing Cole again!!! New form of creature!!! Great story, can't wait for PART 5!!!!

[jmasonii]

Well, for the few fans I have out there here is part V.1!

"3 Witches and a Holy Vampire Part 5.1"


The Charmed Ones, along with Leo and Cole sat quietly around the kitchen table as Raphael explained everything he knew about this new threat to Earth.
"How exactly does a demon have a kid with an alien anyways?" Paige asked interrupting Rapheal's explanation.
Raphael took it all in good stride however and issued the reply, "Probably the same way a whitelighter and a witch have a child, Paige."
Paige, embarressed merely blushed in response.
"May I continue?" Raphael asked quietly.
"By all means." Leo replied
"What I know is that this half demon half alien spawn is out to conqueor not just the Earth, but the entire universe as well. His name is Qualizato, he takes it after his mother the alien's side. She is the Queen of the Xar empire, a race of vicious aliens who have been known to start wars for the pure joy of it. His father, obviously was the demon by the name of Durar, who happened to be The Source before The Source you vanquished vanquished him to take his place in the hierarchy." Raphael paused for a moment letting the sisters soak it all in. He then continued. "I know it is a lot to absorb..."
"Your telling me," Phoebe said, "it sounds kind of like Star Wars."
Cole merely smiled at her, truly thrilled that he was finally able to prove himself good to her once and for all.
"Yes," Raphael, spoke, "and that's exactly what it is going to turn into unless we stop it. My plan is to raise all of your powers to a higher level so that you can keep Qual's minions off of me while I dispatch Qualizato. Of course, this will all be taking place in outer space, on Qualizato's gargantuan space ship."
"What!" Piper replied, "we are going to have to go into outer space?!?!"
Paige looked at Piper and smiled, "What, are you deaf that's what holy spirit over here just said."
Piper glared back at Paige, but couldn't help but smile and laugh when she looked at Raphael, who was staring directly at Paige mouth wide open in embarrassment.
"Paige, I...have a...name...you know." Raphael replied, to which Paige smiled and spoke in return.
"Well I am just trying to lighten the mood Raphael, geez you think a guy as powerful as you could take a joke from a little ol' witch like me."
"Indeed, I guess I deserve the jest in light of what I commented earlier about witches and whitelighters." responded Raphael.
"Well," Paige continued, "I am sure you what they call paybacks now don't you?"
Everyone laughed, even Raphael, even though he knew how serious his mission to vanquish Qualizato was he allowed everyone to have a heartfelt moment at his expense. Soon it would be time to elevate the sister's powers and then teleport them to Qualizato's space ship for the fight.
Ahhh, Raphael sighed to himself as the others carried on, the joy of being human and carefree. If only he could enjoy such a luxury...



Hope you all enjoy, SO SORRY it took so long to post!! Hopefully 5.2 "The Power Raising" won't take as long...



Sincerely,


John Mason II

[Jamison]

OMG THIS STORY IS GENSIS! I love it!

[jmasonii]

Thank you "The Wyatt Halliwell" I appreciate the compliment. Earlier I posted part 5.2 "The Power Raising" but my internet connection disconnected me before I got a chance to send it, luckily I remember 95% of how I wrote 5.2 out so I will probably re-wrote it tomorrow for the few fans I do have! Thanks once again!

Sincerely,

John Mason II

[hydrokinisis]

;D Very good, PART 5.2 PLEASE!!!

[hollypop]

I had gotten caught up on your story and this is a very ambitious undertaking... holy cow! Where you get your ideas from, I don't know but I'm very anxious to see how this story comes out.

Witches, a vampire and now aliens? Who would've thought!? It's a pretty good story, though- don't keep us waiting too long

[jmasonii]

Thank you hollypop. I suppose I have kept everyone waiting long enough...so here it is as long as I don't get disconnected everything will be alright.

"3 Witches and a Holy Vampire: Part V. II"


The Charmed Ones, Leo, Cole, and Raphael all sat around the kitchen table as the Holy Vampire discussed all he knew about Qualizato and his minions.
"So I guess that's everything I need to tell you. Do any of you have any questions?" Raphael asked looking at all of them.
"I just have one," Paige stated, "if you are the most powerful being in the universe, then why do you need our help?"
"Paige..." Piper started, Raphael held his hand up he wanted to answer.
"Thanks Piper, but I will answer that. My master told me that if I wanted to successfully overcome this new threat to Earth that I would need the help of the three most powerful witches in the world. I knew that he was speaking of the Charmed Ones, after all your feats are legendary." Raphael continued on. "Is that good enough for an answer, Paige?"
"Yeah, I just wanted to know that." Paige said gazing into Raphael's bright green eyes, and thinking to herself that those were pretty orbs. Then she studied the Unseen Servant more throughly and thought to herself, he is beautiful.
Raphael because of his powers had read her every thought as if she had spoken them aloud and before he could catch himself he replied.
"Yes Paige, I always get compliments on how amazing my eyes are. Thank you though for the compliment."
Everyone else around the table quickly realized what had just transpired and they all shared another heartfelt laugh. Raphael felt however that he had embarrassed Paige enough and quickly changed the subject.
"I knew I would need all of your help including Leo's, and I knew Cole would be up for proving himself truly good to all of you, especially to Phoebe once and for all."
"That's my hubby for you, always trying to be a do-gooder." Phoebe smiled at Cole who returned the smile.
"Well if there are not anymore questions let's go upstairs so I can elevate your powers for this battle." Raphael spoke wanting to get on with his quest.
"Elevate our powers? Just how powerful do you intend to make us?" Piper asked looking at Leo and then to the holy vampire, who was smiling wide at the question.
"Do you remember the time all of you became Greek goddesses?" He asked.....

Sorry guys I had to leave off with a bit of a cliffhanger, the next part will be "The Power Raising" I swear. Hope you enjoy! Don't worry I will post it soon enough...

[hollypop]

I was just seriously getting into the story.... don't let the hiatus last too long- it's really starting to get interesting.

Your story has so many elements, that I felt as confused as the sisters' -lol.. but now I can understand and grasp more what's going on.

You're still writing very vivid characters and staying true to them and that's a big plus in my book.

Great job!