3 Witches and a Holy Vampire (Part 1)

[jmasonii]

NOMINATE MY STORY FOR THE FAN FIC OF THE MONTH-NOMINATE MY STORY FOR FAN FIC OF THE MONTH-NOMINATE

[jmasonii]

Whoa that last post was my 150th!!!!!!! this would be 151!!!! Slowly but surely, i am getting there!! Thanks everyone for the great feedback!!!! It has been a great help!!!!!!

[darkmage41]

Cant wait for the demonstration of powers, agreed with coment about phoebe, she seems more like how she was in the earlier seasons.


Great work

[jmasonii]

Thanks darkmage41, it is appreciated. The powers are going to be truly amazing! I have triede to bring the kinder Phoebe back, since the ACTUAL Charmed writers have pretty much destroyed what her character used to be like. They need to sit down at a table with some of us Charmed fans and let us give them out ideas for the writing. I can GUARANTEE the ratings would go up up up!!!! I believe that is OUR RIGHT AS FANS since it is the last season that we should have such a say so. And in addition to this, they should have a contest in which they have the fans write out an episode and which ever one wins that fan gets to go oversee the filming of their episode and perhaps even co-star in it!! NOW, THAT WOULD BE TRULY AWESOME!!!!!!! I WISH THAT IT COULD BE ME IF THEY HAD SUCH A CONTEST!!!!

[blueeyedwitch2000]

this story keeps getting better and better, keep up the good work!

[+disenchant zero+]

I love it so much already. It gave me chills, and as i read each part they increased. I'm not sure how much i like the science fiction theme, but you are working with it nicely. I understand how it works because of Raziel. i would have gone for a Satan himself trying to through the balance off, but since Raziel is involved it wouldn't work as well. Any ways awesome writing. Raphael is an profoundly great character that I'm starting to fall deeply in love with. I'm glad you worked Cole in as well. I always love Phoebe and him together. Paige seems to be getting embarrassed a lot, but thats because you are tapping in to the Charmed Ones personalities almost perfectly. Mimicking their actions almost to a tee. It was like i could her them in my head speaking those very words and doing those very same actions. Indeed you are a very gifted writer and i was more than happy and grateful to read what you have so far. I look forward to reading what comes next! I'm sure it was be just as thrilling as what you have so far if not more so.

[jmasonii]

Thank you Lady Pandora, that is the type of feedback I love!!!!!! I truly am moved by everything that you wrote, actually people are probably going to laugh at me but I am almost in tears right now. I guess I am an extra sensitive Scorpio!!! Thank you SO MUCH Lady Pandora for calling me a gifted writer, that in and of itself meant THE WORLD to me!!!

[+disenchant zero+]

You're more than welcome,. Thank you for sharing this with me. I enjoyed it so much. I hope you get the next part up soon but don't rush to much writing is supposed to be fun and it isn't when you're being pressured. *hugs*

[hollypop]

An update!

I love how it's all coming together, jm. Your story is one of my favorites... You already know how much I love your character Raphael and I am really looking forward to seeing more on how you work the science fiction in. But no hurry... good things come to those who wait

The 'visuals' and the characters are excellent, melding together quite nicely. You are a gifted writer indeed

[jmasonii]

Thank you all so much! MERRY CHRISTMAS!!!

[charmedp3]

This is great and you are most definitely a gifted writer. Merry Christmas!

[moniek]

So far this is the best fanfic I've seen.
I hope you don't have any more problems with your pc, because I really want to read the next part!
Keep up the great work

[jmasonii]

Merry Christmas to everyone and thank you all again!! The next part will be posted in a few days, I just need some time to think about this part..battle scenes always need good details!!

[jmasonii]

First of all it truly does not matter to me whether or not I win for the fan fiction of the month. I will still continue to write and finish this fan fiction, I owe that much to myself and to all the fans that I have gathered through this fan fiction. If there is a fan fiction that is better than this then by all means vote for it. I will not vote for mine because to me that is not morally right. Anyways, here it is, Part 6.3!!!


"3 Witches and a Holy Vampire Part 6.3: Let the Sparring Begin
Paige vs. Raziel

Raziel, being half angel and half demon, formed a holy fireball in one hand and a ball of hell fire in the other. To Paige's surprise, Raziel brought them together melding them into one huge grayish ball of what could only simply be called holy hellfire. It was one of the hottest magical fires in existence, only surpassed by Rapheal's Phoenix Holy fire. Raziel smiled at Paige and through the gray fire ball at her.
Paige smiled back and called for the fireball. Raziel's smile quickly dissapated as his own fireball was suddenly flying back toward him. However, he quickly formed another and threw it at the first causing them both to explode in midair. The ensuing magical blast was great indeed, blowing both Raziel and Paige back further from one another.
"I almost forgot your witchly power, Paige. However, how many can you call for at once?" Raziel asked, and two dozen basketball sized holy hell fireballs formed in a circle around their creator.
"Uh...oh" Paige replied, wondering how she was going to defend against Raziel's newest attack. She then remembered she was a goddess, and her witchly powers were highly advanced. She didn't get much time to think as the son of Micheal, sent a dozen of the fireballs speeding toward her.


Sorry, had to leave off with a cliffhanger! I will post more later on, I have some things that I need to get done around the house. I apologize that it is very short. I will write out each individual sparring match, and then it will be a free-for -all to end the training. That is all I can say!! Sorry once again, but I have things that I need to get done today. Happy New Year!!

[hollypop]

great cliffhanger, jm

You do have an amazing way of bringing your characters to 'life'. Looking forward to your next update.

[hydrokinisis]

jmasonii, THANK YOU!!! Both patrs were great as usual, I can't wait to see what Paige does!!! ;D

[Jamison]

oh my gosh....this work is brillant! I just love it!!!!! (Go Paige!)

[jmasonii]

Thank you! An update will be soon!

[hollypop]

I reread your last update and I caught on to what you said about each one having a sparring match. I know that you're in the middle of Paige's (edge of my seat!) but man! I can't wait until you do Piper's!

I can't wait to see what you have her doing and how she does!

[charmedp3]

it's been awhile man are you ever going to post a new section???