3 Witches and a Holy Vampire (Part 1)

[hydrokinisis]

charmedp3 said:

it's been awhile man are you ever going to post a new section???

Yes, I am also growing unpatient, lol!!!

[jmasonii]

I am so so so so so so, VERY SORRY about the LONGEST DELAY YET! I have however been going through some very important changes in my life as well as working on my original novel "The Unseen Servant of God". However, I have re-read through all the commments people have made, and I believe all the fans of the story deserve a good long post. Like the rest of the sparring matches at least or most of them! Here we go!!! Enjoy!

"Three Witches and a Holy Vampire Part 7.1"
Piper vs. Micheal

"So, Piper, are you prepared to face me?" Micheal questioned only a a dozen yards in front of her, bouncing an enormous holy fireball up and down in the palm of his hand.
"You must know that the last time I was a goddess I vanquished two of the titans."
"I know, I watched over that. However, I am not them, but enough talk, try to even hit me!" Micheal taunted lauching the huge fireball toward Piper.
Piper already had her hands up gestured and the fireball exploded, but it wasn't destroyed utterly, like the eldest of the Charmed Ones had anticipated it would be. It broke apart into half a dozen smaller holy fireballs, still flying toward her.
Micheal had anticipated that Piper would use her witchly power first, but he became rather impressed when a tranluscent, bluish shield went up around Pipier just as the six fireballs would have slammed home. They hissed and dissapated into nothingness.
"I must say, that was well done Piper, you used one of your many goddess powers instead of your witchly ones. However, I am going to have to turn up the pace a few notches, I must make sure you are properly ready for this battle, after all not only is the fate of the Earth at stake, but quite possibly the fate of the entire universe as well."
"I am more than ready for whatever you got, Micheal." Piper relied cockily, perhaps just a bit much so.
Suddenly, there was no longer one Micheal in front of her, but seven, all identical all making identical movements. And each held enormous holy fireballs in both of their palms.
"Adapt, Piper, remember you are a goddess, your powers are virtually limitless."
Piper willed herself into seven of her to rise to the challenge and formed holy fireballs of her own. She thought to herself, man this is going to get confusing.....

Elsewhere in the Garden of Eden there was yet another sparring match taking place....


Sorry, my left hand is starting to cramp, so i have to break for a little while. At least I have posted an update! More will come soon, and once again I am SO VERY SORRY! I hope you all can find it in your hearts to forgive me for not posting sooner. It is just that this fan fic is getting more complicated than I originally intended for it to get, but I suppose that is part of what makes it good, at least according to all of you! I hope you enjoyed the update, naturally I will make another one as soon as my left wrist allows it. Carpal tunnel, gotta love it! Blessed be!!!

[moniek]

Whoopie! ;D

[hollypop]

I love how you are writing Piper so calm and collected... even against all the seemingly impossible odds. I know this is a 'trail and tribulation' part for the sisters' but still, it almost seems like we're looking into how she's going to handle herself in the Ultimate Battle.

I know you said that this is taking longer than expected but don't give up on it... please!?! It's such an AWESOME story!

[jmasonii]

Hollypop, believe me with all the EXCELLENT and GRATEFUL Compliments I have received from both moderators and users alike, there is not any way I am giving up. Especially, since I have come this far....NEVER SAY DIE!!!! So to speak.... Once again thank you all for you encouragement it means the world. A new update will soon follow, sorry for any delay but planning this story out is taking longer than anticipated. I want it to be the best it possibly can be! Blessed be!

[hydrokinisis]

jmasonii said:

Hollypop, believe me with all the EXCELLENT and GRATEFUL Compliments I have received from both moderators and users alike, there is not any way I am giving up. Especially, since I have come this far....NEVER SAY DIE!!!! So to speak.... Once again thank you all for you encouragement it means the world. A new update will soon follow, sorry for any delay but planning this story out is taking longer than anticipated. I want it to be the best it possibly can be! Blessed be!

;D Yes, you should keep going!!! This is one of the best stories I've ever read!!! When you release your book, I am definately going to buy it!!!

[jmasonii]

Thank you ALL! Blessed Be!!!

[jmasonii]

Here is the newest update, ENJOY!

"3 Witches and a Holy Vampire Part 7.2"
Phoebe vs. Gabriel

Phoebe just stared up into the air as Gabriel flew above her, deciding how to attack first. The angel knew Phoebe's powers of preminition were at their peak with Raphael turning her into a goddess, thus any move the angel made would be anticipated before it even happened. The best method of attack then would then not to even think about it, spontanity.
Yes, Gabriel thought to herself, just let go, something I am not used to, by any means, but it is the only way I will be able to counter Phoebe's enhanced premention power.
Phoebe, typical of a scorpio, was growing impatient.
"So, Gabriel, are we just going to stare at one another, and let the universe go to hell, or are you going to train me to save it?"
"Ah, Phoebe, ever were you the impatient one. I was merely formulating a method of attack, and I just figured it out."
Suddenly, Gabriel was not in the air above Phoebe but directly in front of her. Before Phoebe's clairvoyance could even activate Gabriel had already punched the newly formed goddess in the chest, knocking her through the air twenty yards, to land unceremoniously on her rump. Gabriel knew how to counter Phoebe's enhanced foresight. Traveling at the speed of thought, was the only way to defeat it. And that is exactly what she did. The angel however knew that Phoebe would quickly adapt, and perhaps not even use her premention power at all, after all she was a goddess, that was, but one the many powers she now possessed. Gabriel just hoped that in training Phoebe, the goddess would learn that she too could travel at the speed of thought as well, which would come in handy when used properly.
Phoebe got back up, just as Gabriel expected her to. Good, Phoebe the angel thought to herself, now adapt.
Gabriel found herself suprised as Phoebe moved instantly at the speed of thought in front of her launching her own punch. The angel, barely dodged the glancing blow. Gabriel was impressed.
"Good, Phoebe, you are adapting, that is one of the keys to....." Gabriel didn't get a chance to finish as Phoebe was quite angry, and had launched one of her trademark round houses which Gabriel once again barely dodged. Suddenly, Gabriel knew that she was in for quite a sparring match. That made her happy though because she knew that going up against Qualizato was not by any means going to be a walk in the park, and Phoebe as well as all of them had best better bring their 'A' game going into the real battle.

Across the Garden of Eden explosion after explosion sounded. It was similar to nuclear weapons going off simultaneously. It was Raphael sparring with Uriel, who truly wanted to best the Holy vampire this time after Raphael had already bested him once before. The only one who had ever bested him, in this place, his place the Garden of Eden.


Well, you can well imagine which sparring match will be in the next update. I hope you enjoyed this one. Blessed be!

[hydrokinisis]

Thanks jmasonii for the update!!! The description is so great in these stories, it's really like watching a movie. Can't wait for the next one as usual!!! ;D

[jmasonii]

Thanks again hydrokinisis. I would post again, but alas, my hands are tired! Soon though...very soon!

[hollypop]

yes, it is like watching a movie. You have a great talent for making your characters come to life without taking away from the story itself. This is definately one of my faves here on the Board.... and yes, I know I'm supposed to be impartial but I am only human

Btw, take your time with the updates. You don't want to loose your touch by thinking you have to rush it. But you know that already

[jmasonii]

Here is the latest since I am feeling in the writing mood, sorry for any errors grammatical or spelling, I'll correct those later...

"3 Witches and a Holy Vampire Part 7.3"
Raphael vs. Uriel


Uriel quickly swallowed hard his pride, when he got hit by seven balls of Holy fire in a row. Raphael had advanced so much since their last battle, the cherub could hardly keep up. After all, the Unseen Servant had died and was ressurected by the power of God Almighty to become the incarnation of the third part of the Holy Trinity, Holy Spirit, so what if he couldn't keep up. No, Uriel said to himself, Raphael may now have more power than when we first battled over Alpha Omega, but so too have I trained since then. And thus, I have gained power too.
As the cherub, the watcher of the Garden of Eden, found himself in thought, Raphael the Unseen Servant of God detected something. Nothing within the Garden, but out within the cosmos.
....A great portal had been opened by the very fabric of magic itself....a portal.....to the Demonic Wasteland!!!!
"WHAT!!!!" The Holy vampire screamed in frustration, knowing than it could be no other than Qualizato who had done the deed. But how? The Holy vampire was in thought as he got slammed in the chest with a ball of holy fire knocking him backthrough the air considerably.
Uriel was done playing around, he had raised his level of power to exceed even Raphael's, there was no way in any hell, or dimension of existence was he going to be bested this time. He face dropped considerably when the Holy vampire spoke.
"Truce....Uriel" Raphael said recovering from the holy blast.
The expression on the cherub's face was classic. "Huh....what the he..." Uriel spoke suddenly sensing what The Unseen Servant of God sensed. As did everyone else within the Garden of Eden.
The half demon, half alien, known throughout the universe, as Qualizato, had opened a portal to the Demonic Wasteland. Raphael and Cole (who through his experience in the Wasteland) had felt it first, and then the others through their enhanced senses felt it.
Qualizato, had somehow, someway conjured the NEXUS to him and had used it to open a portal to the Wasteland.
Raphael knew immediately that this battle had gotten a hundred times more difficult....
.....For he could feel the evil energy building aboard Qualizato's space ship where the portal had been opened.
....Eager to escape the eternal horrors of the Demonic Wasteland demons were flooding in by the hundreds........
Raphael's mouth dropped as he and he alone sensed another presence, besides the NEXUS in Qual's enormous space ship......and it was the presence of .................CHAOS!!!!
The Unseen Servant of God's mouth dropped instantly...........

[jmasonii]

Come on people comment...what the heck!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I am not writing for NOTHING I NEED SOME FEEDBACK!!!!! GOOD OR NO??

[hollypop]

You know that it's not for nothing.... take it easy, jm.

What a great update.. well, actually it took such a surprising twist that I can't even describe it properly. It's just amazing how your FanFic is progressing.... I'm loving every minute of it.

Now- how long are ya going to leave us hanging?

[Faithfully charmed]

;D Great Story!! Love the twist...What will happen next?? Can't wait for the update!!

[jmasonii]

Alright, here is what everyone has been waiting for, the battle for the fate of the entire universe!!! Here goes nothing...

"3 Witches and A Holy Vampire Part 8.1"
"And The Universe Hangs in the Balance"

The group had soon gathered back together as soon as they felt Qualizato's presence out in the vast reaches of space. Their training was cut short. Raphael had underestimated Qualizato, had greatly underestimated him indeed. Qual possessed both the Nexus and somehow had ressurected Chaos itself! This is bad, really bad, Raphael thought to himself. As the Holy vampire was in thought Paige dared to ask.
"Is that great evil I am feeling Qualizato and his minions?"
Raphael looked up at everyone, "Yes, and he has not only the Nexus, but he has somehow ressurected Chaos, the most powerful evil ever to exist..."
Piper in shock responded, "What do you mean, he has the Nexus, I thought we banished it when we vanquished Zankou!"
Micheal seeing that Raphael was in distress replied for the Unseen Servant.
"You did banish it Piper, Qual must have sensed it and somehow conjured it to him. And now he is using it's unlimited magic to sustain a portal to the demonic wasteland."
"Oh." Piper said, looking at Leo, a worried look across her face. Gabriel then walked over to Raphael and spoke to him quietly.
"Raphael, are you okay?" The angel asked.
"Yes, it just that I know what I am going to have to do, now that Chaos it awakened." The Holy vampire responded, remembering the last time he fought Chaos, he had to die to beat it. The Unseen Servant was vividly lost in those moments, and Gabriel sensed it. Thus, ever the stragetician, she took control of the situation.
"Alright, everyone I think I have an idea." The angel looked at everyone else.
"What is it, Gabriel?" Phoebe asked, truly wondering how good was going to overcome such a great evil this time.
"We still have the advantage, right? I mean Qualizato might suspect that Raphael might go after him, but he does not suspect that we will be coming, and he certainly does not expect The Charmed Ones will be making an appearance, as goddesses no less. That gives us somewhat an element of surprise, I believe. And I think I know how to defeat the Nexus and close the portal to the Demonic Wasteland."
"How?" Leo and Cole asked wanting truly to know how that was going to occur. Before, Gabriel could answer however Raphael still away from the others looked up, eyes blazing white, and answered the question himself. Everyone sensing the dramatic shift in Raphael's power looked at him, and everyone took a step back.
"The Hollow." Raphael replied to everyone, and disappeared, and reappeared almost instantly with a familiar magical box in his hand.
"Is that...?" Paige asked, to which Raphael merely nodded.
Raphael spoke once more through clenched teeth. "We'll be bringing a little care package, aboard Qual's ship with us...."
Gabriel smiled at her pupil's brilliant strategy....
And suddenly the group's demeanor became instantly postive once more...

Sorry.....you all know how I LOVE those cliffhangers!!! I hope you enjoyed, I will update soon enough, I have to keep you hanging for a little while though, else they would not be called cliffhangers!!!! Blessed be!!!

[hydrokinisis]

jmasonii said:

Alright, here is what everyone has been waiting for, the battle for the fate of the entire universe!!! Here goes nothing...

"3 Witches and A Holy Vampire Part 8.1"
"And The Universe Hangs in the Balance"

The group had soon gathered back together as soon as they felt Qualizato's presence out in the vast reaches of space. Their training was cut short. Raphael had underestimated Qualizato, had greatly underestimated him indeed. Qual possessed both the Nexus and somehow had ressurected Chaos itself! This is bad, really bad, Raphael thought to himself. As the Holy vampire was in thought Paige dared to ask.
"Is that great evil I am feeling Qualizato and his minions?"
Raphael looked up at everyone, "Yes, and he has not only the Nexus, but he has somehow ressurected Chaos, the most powerful evil ever to exist..."
Piper in shock responded, "What do you mean, he has the Nexus, I thought we banished it when we vanquished Zankou!"
Micheal seeing that Raphael was in distress replied for the Unseen Servant.
"You did banish it Piper, Qual must have sensed it and somehow conjured it to him. And now he is using it's unlimited magic to sustain a portal to the demonic wasteland."
"Oh." Piper said, looking at Leo, a worried look across her face. Gabriel then walked over to Raphael and spoke to him quietly.
"Raphael, are you okay?" The angel asked.
"Yes, it just that I know what I am going to have to do, now that Chaos it awakened." The Holy vampire responded, remembering the last time he fought Chaos, he had to die to beat it. The Unseen Servant was vividly lost in those moments, and Gabriel sensed it. Thus, ever the stragetician, she took control of the situation.
"Alright, everyone I think I have an idea." The angel looked at everyone else.
"What is it, Gabriel?" Phoebe asked, truly wondering how good was going to overcome such a great evil this time.
"We still have the advantage, right? I mean Qualizato might suspect that Raphael might go after him, but he does not suspect that we will be coming, and he certainly does not expect The Charmed Ones will be making an appearance, as goddesses no less. That gives us somewhat an element of surprise, I believe. And I think I know how to defeat the Nexus and close the portal to the Demonic Wasteland."
"How?" Leo and Cole asked wanting truly to know how that was going to occur. Before, Gabriel could answer however Raphael still away from the others looked up, eyes blazing white, and answered the question himself. Everyone sensing the dramatic shift in Raphael's power looked at him, and everyone took a step back.
"The Hollow." Raphael replied to everyone, and disappeared, and reappeared almost instantly with a familiar magical box in his hand.
"Is that...?" Paige asked, to which Raphael merely nodded.
Raphael spoke once more through clenched teeth. "We'll be bringing a little care package, aboard Qual's ship with us...."
Gabriel smiled at her pupil's brilliant strategy....
And suddenly the group's demeanor became instantly postive once more...

Sorry.....you all know how I LOVE those cliffhangers!!! I hope you enjoyed, I will update soon enough, I have to keep you hanging for a little while though, else they would not be called cliffhangers!!!! Blessed be!!!

Wow, that was a GREAT cliffhanger, and a nice twist!!! I wonder how the Hollow will play a role in the final battle!!!

[hollypop]

jm, as an impartial member I do have to say that I completely agree with cliffhangers but c'mon dude! You're bringing up alot of great twists and it's getting harder to wait for your updates.

Your FanFic is building up steam and it's getting sooo good- it's AWESOME!! actually.

[jmasonii]

Thanks hydrokinisis and hollpop, I really appreciate it. I just wish more people would comment when they read it. To speak their feelings. I know some people here at the boards have been complaining about re-hashed story lines in the actual show, in my story I am not re-hashing the stories, only incorporating them into my story, like the Nexus, The Hollow, and actually Cole as well. These characters, or Ultimate Powers have important roles to play in the upcoming battle. Thus I went through the "Charmed" history and have picked out some things that I would like to re-use, not re-hash and I think I have got a pretty original story going on. Originality is the key to greatness...

[jmasonii]

The latest update....hopefully more people comment on it, I see it is getting read, so comment people, what do you like, what don't you like? Believe me, I can take some critisizm (SP?) Anyways, enough griping and on to the story...

"3 Witches and Holy Vampire Part 8.2"
"Universe....Still hanging..."

The group, realizing that Raphael would never intentionally harm them, slowly walked over to him, wondering what he had in mind. Paige, ever the inquistive one, was the first to speak.
"Raphael, how is the Hollow going to help us?" She asked sheepishly, and embarrassed once more.
The Holy vampire sensed this and put his arm on Paige's shoulder to reassure her.
"If you recall from you last encounter with the Hollow it is an ultimate force of anti-magic, it drains all magic away, and if one is powerful enough to control it, they can extact that magic, just as The Source did when he tried to kill you."
Ever getting more and more intrigued as to where The Holy Vampire was going with all of this, Piper spoke up.
"Yes, I think I can remember all of that, as I am sure Paige and Phoebe do as well. But that raises the question. If the Hollow is the ultimate force of anti-magic, then will it not threaten us as well?"
Raphael merely replied, "Not while in my possession. It will recognize me as a being of supreme power and it would not dare turn against me. And it won't attack any of you because you too are beings of supreme power, it however can and will attack the Nexus."
Phoebe quickly asked, "Isn't the Nexus a being of supreme power as well?"
Raphael smiled, once more revealing his gleaming white fangs, and he laughed.
Everyone looked at one another thinking the Unseen Servant had cracked. But that was not the case, not the case at all.
Gabriel was the only one who caught on. She too smiled, once again at her pupils ingenious plan.
The Holy Vampire continued on, knowing that they would have to battle very soon. "You are right Phoebe, the Nexus is a being of ultimate power, but it is that because it is a part of the very fabric of magic itself. The Hollow is the ultimate power of anti-magic. Now do you see?"
Suddenly, everyone realized what Raphael had in mind....
....He was going to unlease the Hollow upon the Nexus, in order to close the portal to the Demonic Wasteland.
Raziel, who had not spoken in awhile, detecting something else in Raphael's plan, decided to. "So, while The Hollow is battling the Nexus, what else to you intend to do?" The half angel/ half demon asked a wide smile on his face, some how knowing how the Unseen Servant was going to answer.
He looked right at his greatest sparring partner and smiled back. "My dear Raziel, have you ever heard of an extremely powerful spell called 'FUSION'?"
Raziel smiled even wider....
Leo looked over to Micheal's son and then to the Holy Vampire and asked. "What do plan to do Raphael?"
Once again, Raphael looked at all the others, smiling wide. "I plan to use the Hollow to weaken the Nexus, which is already in a weakened state do to the sustaining of such a great portal, and I plan to close the portal to the Demonic Wasteland. And after I do that, I plan to fuse togeter, through an extremely powerful spell, both the Nexus and The Hollow. Thus creating the greatest force of pure magic and antimagic in existence."
Everyone's jaw dropped. Cole was the first to respond sensing something else that Raphael was going to explain.
"Isn't that too dangerous, putting two Ultimate powers together like that?"
"Normally yes, but I don't plan to let them roam free for very long. Through the aid of another powerful spell, I plan to absorb them into my being."
Everyone's jaw dropped even more....


Next time on '3 Witches and a Holy Vampire' Raphael gets everyone suited up and ready for the battle, and then he intends to use covert tactics to get the element of true surprise for his plan to succeed....

I hope you enjoy the latest update. The beginning of the battle WILL come next. Blessed be!