jmasonii
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Even through the Chaos and scorn, Raphael, like the Phoenix is eternally reborn...
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Post by jmasonii on Feb 24, 2006 11:59:35 GMT -5
geez, I think my computer almost screwed me hopefully that got posted okay!
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hydrokinisis
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Post by hydrokinisis on Feb 24, 2006 12:38:37 GMT -5
Again, I am floored!!! Another great twist, your story never gets boring, NEVER!!! ;D
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jmasonii
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Even through the Chaos and scorn, Raphael, like the Phoenix is eternally reborn...
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Post by jmasonii on Feb 24, 2006 12:43:47 GMT -5
Thanks hydrokinisis! I just wish more people would read and comment. There are a lot of people who have commented in the past, that have not commented in awhile, I wish those people would comment once more just to let me know what they like as well as what they do not like. And NEW FANS are more than welcome as well. No matter what however, I will finish this story. Actually it is about 3/4 of the way done already, now I am in the home strecth, although this is going to be the most difficult by far. Thanks again everyone who has supported, I will not let you down, you will see an ending to this story!!! Blessed Be!!!
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hydrokinisis
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Post by hydrokinisis on Feb 24, 2006 12:46:53 GMT -5
Thanks hydrokinisis! I just wish more people would read and comment. There are a lot of people who have commented in the past, that have not commented in awhile, I wish those people would comment once more just to let me know what they like as well as what they do not like. And NEW FANS are more than welcome as well. No matter what however, I will finish this story. Actually it is about 3/4 of the way done already, now I am in the home strecth, although this is going to be the most difficult by far. Thanks again everyone who has supported, I will not let you down, you will see an ending to this story!!! Blessed Be!!! Like all great writers, they save the best for last!!!
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jmasonii
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Even through the Chaos and scorn, Raphael, like the Phoenix is eternally reborn...
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Post by jmasonii on Feb 24, 2006 12:52:54 GMT -5
Indeed..indeed!
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jmasonii
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Post by jmasonii on Feb 24, 2006 23:01:39 GMT -5
And here it is...
"3 Witches and a Holy Vampire Part 8.3" 'The Art of War'
If someone by some magical mishap just happened to stumble into the Garden of Eden, they would have been in total shock. Either that or thought they had stumbled upon a medieval convention. Everyone was suiting up in extremely ancient, extremely magical armor. And it was quite a sight to behold. Especially when paige had put her enchanted chainmail on backwards, and was struggling against it, which made her situation even worse. Before anyone else noticed, Raziel walked over to her, hiding a chuckle, and twisted it around for her, immediately it fell into place to where it should have been. The half whitelighter/ half witch gave a sheepish look. Raziel merely smiled and spoke quietly, "Do not worry our little secret." Paige her cheecks still red with embarrassment, merely nodded her thanks. Then she looked to Raziel's ancient armor. It was black, with ancient angelic runes of protection carved all over it. "Where did you get that armor, I can feel it's protective power?" Paige asked the half angel /half demon. Raziel paused for a moment unsure that he wanted to explain where the armor had come from, then he decided to do so. "It was my grandfather's before his fall from grace." Paige looked on in shock. "That is Lucifer's armor....wow, so that is why it is black?" Raziel smiled and shook his head in recognition. "Anything else you would like to know, before we go to battle?" "No, and I am done with my armor, what is next?" Paige asked Raziel. Raziel did not get a chance to reply, for the rest of the group fully dressed in their each unique armor came upon them. "Weapons are what is next Paige." Raphael answered. "Obviously, I have Alpha Omega, Raziel possess Excalibur...." Raphael did not get to finish for Piper quickly interrupted when Excalibur was mentioned. "Excalibur, I thought my son, Wyatt was supposed to it's wielder?" Piper asked looking back at Leo, who shrugged, and then she looked to Raphael for an explanation. "Wyatt will recieve Excalibur from Raziel when the time comes." The Holy Vampire explained somewhat mysteriously. "Cryptic, you think that a being of supreme power could give me a straighter answer than that." Piper frustation began to show, as she tugged at the chain mail around her neck. Leo walked over to her, in order to calm her down. "Piper, Raphael is the incarnation of the Holy Spirit, the most powerful force in existence, trust me, he knows exactly what he is talking about." Piper then looked up at Leo and began laughing. Leo expression crinkled, wanting Piper to explain. "Out of all of us you look the most ridiculous. You are not even wearing any armor, you wearing Elder robes. What is up with that?" Before Leo could reply, Cole who had been aiding Phoebe with her own armor stepped up and answered for the elder. Cole formed a medium sized energy ball and threw it at the Elder. As the energy ball came within three feet of Leo it hit some invisible force and dissapated. Piper in shock, was about was to blow Cole up, Phoebe darted in front of him to protect him, but it was Leo who truly calmed Piper down. "All Cole was doing Piper was proving a point. Elder's robes are a from of extremely powerful magical armor. He merely did a quick demonstration." "Oh whatever, " Piper gave up, "so are we ready yet?" Michael and Gabriel approached, their own ancient and ultimately powerful battle armor on. It loked similar to Raziel's armor, except it was nearly translucent, like glass, and it moved as if it were a second skin. Cole joined them, without any armor, to which Phoebe was quite concerned. "Why do you not have an armor on?" She asked truly worried. Cole smirked, and replied, "I do. You just cannot see it." Phoebe paused for a moment as she thought about what her husband had just said. "You mean your armor is invisible?" She asked truly wondering. Cole smiled wider, "From head to toe. From head to toe." "It seems as if we are missing someone. He was her a second ago to talk about weapons." Paige stated. "Yeah" Piper replied sarcastically, "Our leader..."
Just as Piper finished, Raphael, The Unseen Servant of God, walked around the corner with the most magnificent armor ever donned by anyone. It was the armor of the Phoenix, Raphael's symbol, and companion. It was formely the armor of Raphael the ultimately powerful angel from the order of the Phoenix, an order that even exceeded the seraphim in power. However, the Order of the Phoenix had been wiped out by extremely powerful demons. Raphael, the angel of the Phoenix had been the last member alive. During the time of The Unseen Servant of God's birth, a major demon by the name of Mephistophales attacked hoping to kill the new born babe and greatly shift the balance from good to evil. However the great angel of the Phoenix appeared and used his great power to destroy Mephistophales, but at a cost, Raphael of the Order of the Phoenix too perished, but before he died his essesence became infused with the babe, knowing the babe would one day need the power of the Phoenix to overcome a great evil. Thus, out of respect for what the great angel had done, The Holy Vampire's parents named their son after Raphael. "Now I think we are ready. First I will need to cloak everyone away from Qualizato and Chaos. Please everyone stand in front of me." Raphael asked. Everyone, except Uriel moved in front of the Holy vampire. The Unseen Servant of God extended his palms forth, calling the power that was within himself. "Morraz, yifve todio helkensta, shin mor rec, arus na cada gara, invisititos!" Raphael finished white light emanating from his fingertips strinking everyone in front of him, cloaking them from evil. "It is done. Now about weapons, as I was saying before, I have Alpha Omega, Raziel has Excalibur.." Raphael paused, but Piper just looked on showing a little respect for a superior being. The Holy vampire then continued on. "Micheal and Gabriel have their own ancient blades, Cole prefers to use energy balls and fireballs, which have been amplified through my magic, Leo prefers to use his lightning bolts, which too have been amplified. However, I am in the dark with The Charmed Ones. Would you ladies like a type of weapon?" Simultaneously the ladies answered, "A magical sword." They looked at each other and to the others who smiled and chuckled. Raphael repsonded. "Ask and you shall recieve." "Tu gundar arus na" Instantly a blade appeared in each of the Charmed Ones hands. And each blade was sentient meaning it could communicate with its wielder telepathically. Not to mention these blades were none other than those forged by Raphael himself during times he had worked the forge. Those three blades were extremely powerful magically, and when the girls felt them they knew without a doubt they were. " I think we are ready." Raphael spoke solemnly. He then looked over to Uriel who had been listening to everything that had transpired. The Holy vampire relayed a telepathic message to Uriel. Uriel, you know what to do should we fail. The Cherub responded to the Holy vampire: I will gather the armies of Heaven and prepare them for battle. Uriel the spoke directly to the Charmed Ones with a tear in his eye. "It has been such an honor to have met the legendary Charmed Ones. No matter what happens I will always remember our time together in the Garden." All three walked over to the Cherub, the protector of the Garden of Eden. Piper spoke for all of them, tears forming in all their eyes. "It has been our honor to see The Garden of Eden and most of all it is an honor to have met you Uriel." The girls then hugged the overgrown cherub. Raphael hated to break up the moment, but it was time to go. He could feel the evil continue to build aboard Qualizto's ship. The girls walked back over to the rest of the group, Paige happened to look back at where Uriel just was, but he was gone. "The plan is to get all of you in unnoticed, thus the spell of cloaking. Qual will be expecting me. When I give the symbol, then it is time for battle to begin. Pretty simple I know, but I like to keep it simple. You all must realize that this most likely will get quite chaotic, which obviously Chaos will feed off of. To negate that we are going to be as covert as possible. Beside's Chaos wants me, I am the only being that can stand in his way. If by chance the plan doesn't go as it should I want everyone out and back on earth when I send a telepathic message to do so. Does everone understand?" Raphael asked. Everyone in the group nodded. Raziel held one clawed hand behind his back with his fingers crossed...he wasn''t about to let his best friend not to mention sparring companion die alone. Raphael stood still for a moment sensing.... "Okay follow me, we are going aboard Qualizato's space ship now." Seconds later where everyone had been, there was now nothing there bu empty space. Uriel suddenly appeared where the group had been. "God speed." The Cherub spoked solemnly and he to disappeared....
I hope you enjoyed, that was quite long I think, but at least you know for sure the BATTLE IS NEXT!!!!! I hope you all enjoyed!!! Blessed be!!!!!!!
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jmasonii
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Even through the Chaos and scorn, Raphael, like the Phoenix is eternally reborn...
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Post by jmasonii on Feb 25, 2006 11:40:41 GMT -5
Is anyone out there going to comment. Please someone besides Hydrokinisis and Hollypop? I know it is being read, I can see by the "read count". So, please comment and let me know what you think good or bad, truly it does not matter! Thank you very much! Blessed be!
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~Empath~
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Post by ~Empath~ on Feb 25, 2006 11:51:59 GMT -5
I really like it!!! I would love to read more when you post!!! PLEASE Post MORE, sorry I didn't leave comments before, I was to busy writing my fan-fic "The End Power of Three Part One" But I love it and I can't wait until you write more!!!
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jmasonii
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Even through the Chaos and scorn, Raphael, like the Phoenix is eternally reborn...
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Post by jmasonii on Feb 25, 2006 11:58:51 GMT -5
Thank you very much *[Soul of the Empath]* that is greatly appreciated more than you know. Now if I could just get others to comment who have before then I would be doing good! It builds confindence that way..you as a writer can understand! Well, gotta go do some research for this fan fiction and my novel! Blessed be!
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~Empath~
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Post by ~Empath~ on Feb 25, 2006 12:01:50 GMT -5
I know, I've been trying to get people to read mine cause if they don't I don't know if I'll post the rest...I want to finish for everyone who likes it, but only two people have posted that they like it. So yeah...I undestand. Good Luck with the research and your novel!!!
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jmasonii
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Even through the Chaos and scorn, Raphael, like the Phoenix is eternally reborn...
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Post by jmasonii on Feb 25, 2006 12:04:18 GMT -5
It is nice to know someone feels the way I do, but I really have to go you can pm me if you want. Later!
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jmasonii
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Even through the Chaos and scorn, Raphael, like the Phoenix is eternally reborn...
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Post by jmasonii on Feb 25, 2006 12:07:17 GMT -5
Another update will be coming soon, within a few days or sooner!!! I need some research however before I proceed! Blessed be!
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jmasonii
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Even through the Chaos and scorn, Raphael, like the Phoenix is eternally reborn...
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Post by jmasonii on Feb 25, 2006 17:42:58 GMT -5
To the fans here is a little teaser...
The fight will soon begin. The fate of the entire universe hangs in the balance. Can Raphael and The Charmed Ones overcome such great odds and vanquish Qualizato, before he takes the last remaining essesnce of Chaos into himself..... ...To be continued......
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jmasonii
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Even through the Chaos and scorn, Raphael, like the Phoenix is eternally reborn...
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Post by jmasonii on Feb 25, 2006 23:17:07 GMT -5
To all those who are wondering I have posted a poll, obviously in the poll section. Please vote, it coudl determine the outcome of the story!!!!! My next update may be based upon the poll, SO IT IS IMPORTANT!!!!!
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jmasonii
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Even through the Chaos and scorn, Raphael, like the Phoenix is eternally reborn...
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Post by jmasonii on Feb 26, 2006 0:31:50 GMT -5
Some body has voted, but I have no Idea, which is alright. Keep it up! I believe I am going to write another fan fiction write now. I am in the writing mood. However it is not going to be an update of this one sorry!!! An update will occur soon enough!!! I PROMISE!!!!
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~Empath~
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Post by ~Empath~ on Feb 26, 2006 0:33:42 GMT -5
I voted, but I didn't leave a message...sorry, I was writng Act 4 of "TheEnd Power of Three, Part One!!!", there's a big twist ar the end, I wa working on!
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jmasonii
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Even through the Chaos and scorn, Raphael, like the Phoenix is eternally reborn...
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Post by jmasonii on Feb 26, 2006 0:34:49 GMT -5
Hey that is cool, at least you voted, HOPEFULLY MORE WILL FOLLOW!
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Post by blueeyedwitch2000 on Feb 26, 2006 2:06:34 GMT -5
wow!,this fan-fic is great,i can't wait for the next part!
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~Empath~
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One of my favorite powers...Astral Projection! GO PRUE!!!
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Post by ~Empath~ on Feb 26, 2006 11:32:40 GMT -5
WHOA!!! All I can say is, I just got done reading the whole thing and I am really impressed!!! This is a work of art. PLEASE POST SOON!!!
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Post by hollypop on Feb 26, 2006 17:22:17 GMT -5
jm... I've been a fan of this FanFic for awhile. It's probably the most original one that I've read. A vampire, an alien.. who would've thought, right? Just let me say that I know it can get frustrating at times when no one comments but please don't let it become the deciding factor on whether or not your FanFic gets finished. I'm a little worried about you 'moving on' to do another one- as long as you promise to finish this one, I won't move it on ya
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