3 Witches and a Holy Vampire (Part 1)

[jmasonii]

Thanks that mean a lot. Part 6 will be posted soon enough!

[hydrokinisis]

jmasonii said:

Thanks that mean a lot. Part 6 will be posted soon enough!

NOOOOO, how can you do this to me!!! Okay, fine, I'll wait!!!

[jmasonii]

Don't worry it will be here soon enough!!!! LOL

[jmasonii]

Okay, okay before the internet disconnects me I had best write this! This is going to be one of the best parts pf the story in my opinion....besides the battle of course!!! Enough said !

"Three Witches and a Holy Vampire Part 6.1"
"The Power Raising"


The Charmed Ones stood upstairs in the attic, their hand joined together in a circle. In the center was Raphael along with the famous Book of Shadows. Raphael asked them if they had any questions.
Before any of the ladies could ask, Leo did for them.
"Is this goddess power going to go to their head like last time?" The Elder asked concerned, remembering the last time the girls had become Greek goddesses, and what a headache it was to get them, especially Piper to change back.
"No, Leo," Raphael replied looking at all of them, "this is one of the most powerful spells in existence. The power won't go to their heads like last time, in fact they will actually remain quite humble. Now, if that's all I would like to proceed."
Cole responded, "Go ahead, I can't wait to see this."
Raphael looked at the Charmed Ones, who all nodded for him to go ahead. Raphael closed his eyes, concentrating and began to chant. Instantly, his power picked up dramatically.
Leo and Cole watched on amazed at how powerful Raphael truly was.
"Kyrac mor sin do', varu ley fe', dafur ogtin, arus na cada gara!" Raphael chanted, in an ancient language of gods, his eyes opened, and were no longer green. They glowed now, blazing white, as the power of the Holy Spirit was revealed in all of its spendor. Out from the palms of his hands shot that same intense white light, bathing all the room in its glow.
Everyone in the room, with the exception of the Holy vampire, had to shield their eyes. The white light enveloped the girls, elevating their powers to goddesses.
After a few moments the light dissapated, and gradually everyone's vision returned.
Cole was the first to speak. "Now that is power."
Leo looked over to him rubbing his eyes, and replied. "Yeah, and I am glad it's on own side." He continued looking directly at Cole. "I know in the past I was hard on you Cole, but I appreciate what you did for Piper and I, and I appreciate what you are doing for the Earth now."
Cole stood there, truly amazed. The only thing he could say in return was, "No problem...brother-in-law?"
To which Leo and he laughed and then both turned back to the girls, who suprisingly appeared the same.
"Raphael, I think you spell failed." Cole stated, as the girls looked at themselves, feeling their power had risen greatly.
Rapheal merely smiled and commanded, "Piper blow Cole up."
Cole's eyes went wide with shock as Piper gestured. Unlike last time, Cole blew up, not only him, but Leo, along with the entire side of the house they were stading on.
"Whoa..." Paige said.
Phoebe responded in anger, "Raphael, you just had Piper vanquish our husbands!!"
"Give it a second Phoebe, they are not vanquished." Raphael said to calm them down.
After a few seconds tell-tell blue orbs swirled around to form Leo, who appeared fine. Little black beads swirled around right next to Leo, who formed into Cole, who appeared fine as well.
The both of them turned around to look at where the other half of the house should have been.
"Um, Piper," Leo began, "what did you do to our house?"
"Yeah," Cole said, "Raphael I think somebodies going to notice that."
Paige trulying wanting to see how elevated her powers had become responded.
"House." She said and instantly the side of the house that was blown up instantly repaired itself with blue orbs.
"See everyone the spell worked just fine. The reason the ladies appear the same is to have an element of suprise when we take on Qualizato and his minions. I will shield their new power from the half alien demon spawn until the time is right." Raphael explained.
"Now, Phoebe it is your turn to test your powers."
Phoebe looked at Cole, using her empathic powers, and immediately he was bathed in a white glow, as was Leo, her sisters, and Raphael who glowed quite bright. She realized then Cole was truly good. She decided to use her premenitions, she again looked at Cole, but thought to herself later. She then reached out and touched Raphael, who actually appeared suprised since the first time he had arrived. Normally he would have been able to shield himelf from her premenitions, but with her elevated power he could not.
Phoebe saw Raphael from the time he was a little boy, saw his parents killed by a poweful vampire hunter. She saw the angels, Micheal and Gabriel, raising and training Raphael. She saw his battles which ended with the battle with Chaos, in which Raphael had sacrificed himself to save the entire universe. And she also saw Raphael's true love, Asmira, a beautiful young woman indeed. And finally she saw the future. The battle between Qualizato and Raphael, in which Raphael won, but was somehow killed as well.
Phoebe came out of her premenition with tears in her eyes.
Raphael solemnly responded. "I too know my fate, and I accept it, Phoebe."
Piper seeing the tears in her sister's eyes asked, "Phoebe what did you see."
"Nothing that we cannot change." Phoebe responded smiling at Raphael.
"Now with your powers elevated, I must train you how to use them for this battle." Raphael stated. " I will now teleport us to a place where it we can realize your full potential. After all I think you guys want a house to come back to don't you?" Raphael asked.
Everyone again laughed, including Piper, who knew the joke was on her.
"Now everyone hold onto me." The Holy vampire commanded and everyone grabbed a hold of him. And suddenly the attic in the Halliwell manor was empty.
The Book of Shadows glowed white, and flipped itself to a page in the book. It was in the Chapter about Raphael. It said "How To Ressurect The Unseen Servant of God".....


Yes, I know another cliffhanger....but hey at least I got part 6.1 posted pretty quick!! Hope you enjoy!!! Part 6.2 "Training" coming soon!!!

[hydrokinisis]

jmasonii said:

Okay, okay before the internet disconnects me I had best write this! This is going to be one of the best parts pf the story in my opinion....besides the battle of course!!! Enough said !

"Three Witches and a Holy Vampire Part 6.1"
"The Power Raising"


The Charmed Ones stood upstairs in the attic, their hand joined together in a circle. In the center was Raphael along with the famous Book of Shadows. Raphael asked them if they had any questions.
Before any of the ladies could ask, Leo did for them.
"Is this goddess power going to go to their head like last time?" The Elder asked concerned, remembering the last time the girls had become Greek goddesses, and what a headache it was to get them, especially Piper to change back.
"No, Leo," Raphael replied looking at all of them, "this is one of the most powerful spells in existence. The power won't go to their heads like last time, in fact they will actually remain quite humble. Now, if that's all I would like to proceed."
Cole responded, "Go ahead, I can't wait to see this."
Raphael looked at the Charmed Ones, who all nodded for him to go ahead. Raphael closed his eyes, concentrating and began to chant. Instantly, his power picked up dramatically.
Leo and Cole watched on amazed at how powerful Raphael truly was.
"Kyrac mor sin do', varu ley fe', dafur ogtin, arus na cada gara!" Raphael chanted, in an ancient language of gods, his eyes opened, and were no longer green. They glowed now, blazing white, as the power of the Holy Spirit was revealed in all of its spendor. Out from the palms of his hands shot that same intense white light, bathing all the room in its glow.
Everyone in the room, with the exception of the Holy vampire, had to shield their eyes. The white light enveloped the girls, elevating their powers to goddesses.
After a few moments the light dissapated, and gradually everyone's vision returned.
Cole was the first to speak. "Now that is power."
Leo looked over to him rubbing his eyes, and replied. "Yeah, and I am glad it's on own side." He continued looking directly at Cole. "I know in the past I was hard on you Cole, but I appreciate what you did for Piper and I, and I appreciate what you are doing for the Earth now."
Cole stood there, truly amazed. The only thing he could say in return was, "No problem...brother-in-law?"
To which Leo and he laughed and then both turned back to the girls, who suprisingly appeared the same.
"Raphael, I think you spell failed." Cole stated, as the girls looked at themselves, feeling their power had risen greatly.
Rapheal merely smiled and commanded, "Piper blow Cole up."
Cole's eyes went wide with shock as Piper gestured. Unlike last time, Cole blew up, not only him, but Leo, along with the entire side of the house they were stading on.
"Whoa..." Paige said.
Phoebe responded in anger, "Raphael, you just had Piper vanquish our husbands!!"
"Give it a second Phoebe, they are not vanquished." Raphael said to calm them down.
After a few seconds tell-tell blue orbs swirled around to form Leo, who appeared fine. Little black beads swirled around right next to Leo, who formed into Cole, who appeared fine as well.
The both of them turned around to look at where the other half of the house should have been.
"Um, Piper," Leo began, "what did you do to our house?"
"Yeah," Cole said, "Raphael I think somebodies going to notice that."
Paige trulying wanting to see how elevated her powers had become responded.
"House." She said and instantly the side of the house that was blown up instantly repaired itself with blue orbs.
"See everyone the spell worked just fine. The reason the ladies appear the same is to have an element of suprise when we take on Qualizato and his minions. I will shield their new power from the half alien demon spawn until the time is right." Raphael explained.
"Now, Phoebe it is your turn to test your powers."
Phoebe looked at Cole, using her empathic powers, and immediately he was bathed in a white glow, as was Leo, her sisters, and Raphael who glowed quite bright. She realized then Cole was truly good. She decided to use her premenitions, she again looked at Cole, but thought to herself later. She then reached out and touched Raphael, who actually appeared suprised since the first time he had arrived. Normally he would have been able to shield himelf from her premenitions, but with her elevated power he could not.
Phoebe saw Raphael from the time he was a little boy, saw his parents killed by a poweful vampire hunter. She saw the angels, Micheal and Gabriel, raising and training Raphael. She saw his battles which ended with the battle with Chaos, in which Raphael had sacrificed himself to save the entire universe. And she also saw Raphael's true love, Asmira, a beautiful young woman indeed. And finally she saw the future. The battle between Qualizato and Raphael, in which Raphael won, but was somehow killed as well.
Phoebe came out of her premenition with tears in her eyes.
Raphael solemnly responded. "I too know my fate, and I accept it, Phoebe."
Piper seeing the tears in her sister's eyes asked, "Phoebe what did you see."
"Nothing that we cannot change." Phoebe responded smiling at Raphael.
"Now with your powers elevated, I must train you how to use them for this battle." Raphael stated. " I will now teleport us to a place where it we can realize your full potential. After all I think you guys want a house to come back to don't you?" Raphael asked.
Everyone again laughed, including Piper, who knew the joke was on her.
"Now everyone hold onto me." The Holy vampire commanded and everyone grabbed a hold of him. And suddenly the attic in the Halliwell manor was empty.
The Book of Shadows glowed white, and flipped itself to a page in the book. It was in the Chapter about Raphael. It said "How To Ressurect The Unseen Servant of God".....


Yes, I know another cliffhanger....but hey at least I got part 6.1 posted pretty quick!! Hope you enjoy!!! Part 6.2 "Training" coming soon!!!

Okay, reading this part of the story, I almost cried because it's so AMAZING!!! If there were ever a Charmed movie, I would want it to be this!!! ;D Please keep going!!!

[jmasonii]

Thank you so much! That is perhaps the highest compliment I have ever received!! That is my dream is to write my novel, starring Raphael of course, and get it turned into a HUGE BLOCKBUSTER, like Harry Potter! Thanks again, part 6.2 "Training" coming soon!!

[hollypop]

There's nothing I can say except, I agree.. it is amazing.

It unfolded before me like a movie and I cannot wait until you update again.

[jmasonii]

Thank you all so much. It just inspires me not only to write more, but to make the next mini-chapter better than the last. "The Power Raising" in my opinion has been the best thus far, but I will make it better. I will give all of you Charmed fans out there a fan fiction that you will NEVER forget. Hopefully all of you will end up Raphael's fans as well. Of course, I am his biggest one!!!!! Keep the comments rolling, any suggestions would be GREAT as well. Again thank you hollypop, and hydrokinisis!!! I REALLY DO APPRECIATE IT!!! A movie about this would be awesome wouldn't? As long as I got to play Raphael I would go for it. After all, who knows Raphael better, and would be best to act as him than his creator? After all, he is based upon myself actually. He's a scorpio, I'm a scorpio...His eyes are green, mine are green. Enough said!!!!!

[jmasonii]

I did not want keep the fans I do have waiting so here it is for EVERYONE, new fans as well as old, and any reader whether a fan of mine of not. Enjoy, and keep the feedback coming!!!! And I will keep the story coming!!!!!!

"3 Witches and A Holy Vampire Part 6.2: The Garden of Eden"


The Charmed Ones, Leo, and Cole stood besides a huge tree that had fruit all over it. As soon as they had touched Raphael in the attic they had rematerialized instantly here, where they were exactly they did not know. However the huge fruit-bearing tree gave them some clue.
Naturally Leo being an Elder knew immediately where they were, as did Cole who during his duration being trapped in the netherworld had visited here quite often. It was a magnificent sight that the group saw. However, the girls still were curious as to where they were. All three, seemingly reading each other's minds, asked in unison.
"Where are we at?"
Cole, Leo, and Raphael all looked at them strangely, and then chuckled. When the laughter subsided, Raphael answered them.
"We are in, but you probably have already guessed, The Garden of Eden."
"It is beautiful." Phoebe said in awe. Cole immediately bent over slightly and whispered in her ear.
"Yes it is Phoebe. However, it is not as beautiful as you as you. Nothing is, or in my eyes ever will be."
Phoebe turned to him and kissed him once again, very passionately. The others ignored the reunited husband and wife and studied The Garden of Eden, truly amazed at how vast it was.
An angel then materialized in front of the group, greeting them.
"Hello Raphael, Leo, Cole. Hello Charmed Ones, it is a pleasure to finally meet you. My name is Uriel. I am an angel of the second highest order, a Cherub. However, in this place I have no equal, other than Raphael of course." Uriel smiled at all of them, his great angelic wings folded nicely behind his back. He continued on, "Cole, Leo you have both been here before, and obviously you have as well Unseen Servant. If you don't mind I would like to give the most famous Charmed Ones a tour."
Leo and Cole shook their heads in agreement truly wanting the girls to see the great splendor of God's most famous garden.
Raphael thought for a moment about objecting, but then decided against it. "I have no problem with that Uriel. After all, I believe everyone who visits should be given a tour of this gorgeous place."
Uriel smiled bowed to Raphael in pure respect, and then motioned for the ladies to come with him. "Come along ladies, I have much to show you, and I already know the urgency of your mission, so I make this grand tour of The Garden fast."
The girls then turned and began to follow the great cherub into the Garden of Eden, truly wanting to explore the place for indeed it was magnificent. The guys just waited for their return, sitting by one of the greatest trees in the Garden of Eden, The Tree of Life.
For a moment they were quiet, but Cole began to speak.
"So Raphael you are the only being to ever best Uriel in this place?" He asked, as he had heard that Uriel had never in all time been bested in this, his place. Legend had it that only one had finally bested him. That person, or Holy vampire, was none other than Raphael of course.
"Raphael smiled and gladly answered, humbly however. "Yes that is how I attained Alpha Omega, the greatest weapon in existence. In this place Uriel is god-like, he channels the energy of The Garden of Eden into himself, making him invincible. Why Cole, do you wish to challenge him?"
Leo laughed at Raphael's jest at Cole. Cole suprised them both with his answer.
"Actually yes I do. I want to be trained and tested by him. And I think Leo should too." It was Cole's turn to laugh as Leo grew pale quickly.
"I think you are right. Actually his is the one who will be training the girls as well as you and Leo. I have some others that will be here shortly that I am going to spar with." Raphael explained.
"Who else is coming?" Leo asked hoping it was some of his old friends and allies. Indeed his smile grew when the Unseen Servant answered.
"My two mentors, none other than the Seraphs, Micheal and Gabriel. Along with Micheal's son Raziel, who will be joining us to battle Qualizato."
Cole smiled as well, for hes as well as Leo both knew they had gained another extremely powerful ally on their side. Raziel was the son of Micheal, arguably the greatest angel ever to exist, with the possible exception of a few others, Gabriel included. Not only this, but Raziel was half demon too. His mother was Micheal's true love Lilith, who just happened to be the daughter of none other than Lucifer himself.
Leo spoke, and both Cole and Raphael nodded their heads in agreement. "This justs keeps getting better and better."
All three of the guys smiled even wider when Gabriel, Micheal, and Raziel materialized in front of them a moment later. The greatest and most powerful magical team for the side of good ever assembled, just became much greater.

I hope all of you are truly enjoying this fan fic. I KNOW I AM HAVING A LOT OF FUN WRITING IT!!! The best thing of all is that I am writing it as I go, not prewritten!! That is perhaps why there are some grammatical and other errors. Oh well, I SINCERELY HOPE you are enjoying. Part 7 will be "Training"!!! Just wait until Raphael and Raziel spar!!!! Fans are going to LOVE it!!! Enough said!!

[hydrokinisis]

I can't wait for that battle!!! You know Charmed really could use a great writer like you, jmasonii!!!

[jmasonii]

That would be TRULY AWESOME!!! Thank you!

[charmedcutie]

It is quite brilliant JM! I never thought Charmed and serious religion could work.

[jmasonii]

I try to avoid any single religion, instead I incorporate them a variety of religions without giving any opinions about them. Just facts that the religions have faith and belief in. Nothing more and nothing less.

[hollypop]

That's one of the best ways to write when using religion, I find.

You're story is ever surprising me... I truly love how it's turning out, JM.

[simplypoo83]

I really love how you brought cole back, but i do have to say that phoebe is a bit off in the story. maybe it's because she seems to be human and somewhat likable..don't know but thats my best guess.

It is a very interesting story.

[jmasonii]

Thank you hollypop and simplypoo, it is an honor to have two moderators to give me compliments!!! I just more people would, if you read it post about it, PLEASE!!! It only takes less than 60 seconds of your time!!!!!

[charmedp3]

This is an amazing story so far! keep up the great work! Post soon.

[hydrokinisis]

Still waiting for update!!!

[moniek]

The story is very good, I would love to read a new update of the story, keep it up

[jmasonii]

FIRST OF ALL I WOULD LIKE TO HUMBLY APOLOGIZE TO ALL THE READERS FOR NOT POSTING AN UPDATE SOONER, BUT IN ALL HONESTY I WAS HAVING COMPUTER PROBLEMS FOR ABOUT A WEEK AND MY COMPUTER WOULD NOT LET ME GET ON THE INTERNET FOR LONG AMOUNTS OF TIME. HOWEVER, I COULD HAVE POSTED SOONER, PLEASE EVERYONE ACCEPT MY APOLOGY, I TURLY MEAN IT AND TO PROVE IT, HERE IS THE NEWEST UPDATE!!!!!!!!! FINALLY!!!! I JUST HOPE I DO NOT HAVE ANY COMPUTER PROBLEMS!! I WILL TRY THOUGH!!! ENJOY!!


"3 Witches and a Holy Vampire Part 6.2: Training the Beginning"

Shortly after what seemed to be an hour or so (time doesn't exist in The Garden of Eden), Uriel returned with the girls who had been awestruck by the pure majectic beauty of Eden. They came back wide smiles on their faces, and Uriel was smiling happily too. After all, as one could imagine he did not recieve too many visitors, especially when Raphael bested him and claimed Alpha Omega as his own. That, after all, was the main reason why anyone ever came, that and to attempt to steal fruit from both the Tree of Knowledge and The Tree of Life. Which Paige had successful accomplished as Phoebe had distracted Uriel from her view. She had taken tree pieces of fruit from each tree, after all she figured it may come in handy for them.
As Raphael got ready to ask the ladies about what they liked best about Eden, three forms materialized in.
The girls, slighty skittish, formed big holy fireballs, but they puffed them out as Uriel held his hand up to do so. He quickly explained why there was no need to be scared as the three forms quickly developed into two more angels, one male, one female, and the third being what apppeared to be half angel and half demon.
"Evil beings cannot enter The Garden of Eden. It has an extremely powerful protection spell put in place, along with other wards and magical alarms. Greetings, Micheal, Gabriel, Raziel it is always a pleasure." Urile continued bowing in respect to his two superiors, and to Michael's son Raziel.
Paige raised her hand and then pointed to Raziel, who knew at once what she was going to ask and responded kindly (after all he had grown quite used to it).
"I believe you ladies arethe legendary Charmed Ones, correct?" Raziel asked, to which the girls nodded their heads. "And you must be Paige." Paige nodded in reply once more. "I already know your question, and the answer is yes I am half angel and half demon. My father is Micheal, and my mother is his wife and the daughter of Lucifer the Queen of the Succubus's Lilith. However, she is not as evil at all, and obviously neither is my father. And neither am I obviously so too. So Paige does that satisfy your curiousity concerning my history?"
Paige in complete embarrassment once yet again, just continued nodding. Everyone, including herself shared a heartfelt laugh. Raphael, knew that the laugh was needed, but also knew that they should continue on in their quest, which meant the girls needed to be properly trained in the use of their new found power.
"I would like The Charmed Ones to pick someone they would like to spar with. Actually, I will pair you off and then we will rotate that way everyone gets to know one another better, that will be extremely important when it comes to the time to do battle with Qualizato and his vast number of minions. So, Paige you will be with Raziel to start, Phoebe with Gabriel, and Piper you will be with Micheal. Cole, Leo you too already have a good handle on your powers, but if you wish to spar with one another then by all means do so. I will be sparring with Uriel to start off. And, don't worry about holding back so you don't damage Eden, it magically repairs any and all damage caused to it pretty much instantly. Well, good luck with the sparring and training. I don''t want anybody go easy on anyone, because Qual is not going to be merciful to any of us. Good luck, now go train!" Raphael finished smiling and sent a telepathic message to Michael, Gabriel, and Raziel, telling them to not show the girls any mercy whatsoever because Qual definitely would not.
And so each of the Charmed Ones went off into a different part of Eden ready to spar and train with their partner and to learn their powers, and some wisdom in the art of war, from much older much more experienced warriors of good.


I hope everyone enjoyed, I cannot promise because my computer is unreliable, BUT I will TRY to POST PART 6.3 Training Let The Sparring Begin within a couple days. However, my computer may act up again, so I cannot be for sure. I hope I can though. Again I apologize for not updating sooner, please forgive me!!!!